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[Pre-Dice]Max's Requests
Topic Started: Jul 21 2009, 11:09 PM (178 Views)
Max
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God of the Fourth Graders
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-Techniques-
Mind of a Fighter
Description: After spending a lot of time fighting, one begins to notice patterns, and can tell what kind of attack is going to happen before it happens. Allowing one to begin his dodge earlier and have an easier chance.
Requirements: 50 Weapon Skill and 50 Intelligence.
Effect: Adds Josh’s Intelligence to his Dodge formula. So it becomes (Speed+Agility+Intelligence)/2
Cost: None

-Items-
Name: Super Pimpin’ Loud Air Transport
Alias: S.P.L.A.T
Total Cost: 1150
Base Stats

HP: 60
Fuel: 4/4
Engine Rank: D

Weight Limit: 7/10

Machine Material Information

Material: Iron
Durability/Strength: 4
Weight: 1
Materia Slots: None
Cost: 150

Machine Stats

Intelligence: 5
Strength: 15
Endurance: 5
Magic: 5
Speed: 10
Agility: Y

Parts:

Basic Parts
Name [Base]
Description: [Able to hold 10 Weight in total] This is the base of a machine. Machines can't function without a base.
Stat Bonus: +20 HP; +10 to Weight Limit.
Requirements: 10 Machine Operation
Effect: Every 1 added to Weight Limit requires the same amount in Machine Operation.
Cost: 150

Name [Steam Engine]
Description: A basic Steam Engine, water is the fuel source. There must be exausts for steam to shoot out from.
Stat Bonus: +10 Strength
Requirements: 10 Machine Operation
Effect: Rank D for Fuel Use
Cost: 200 Gil

Name [Small Tank]
Description: [Can hold up to 4 Gallons] A Small-sized fuel tank.
Requirements: None
Effect: Holds 4 Gallons
Cost: 200 Gil

Important Add Ons
Propeller
Description:
Stat Bonus: +5 to Speed
Requirements: 20 Machine Operation
Effect: Allows your machine to travel in the air. Every 1 added to this X Bonus, costs 10 extra Gil.
Cost: 450 Gil

Extras - None

Boosters - None



Weaponry, Items and Armour:

N/A

-Abilities-

-Limit Breaks-

-Traits-


Accepted
-Techniques-

-Items-

-Abilities-
The Fair One
Description: Your actions are so fair and reality based that you return the area around you to normal, eliminating any strange lights.
Requirements: 50% Alignment
Effect: Halves all Holy and Dark Element Damage
Cost: None

-Limit Breaks-
Healing of the Beast [Limit Break Level 1]
Description: As a fight drags on, the beast locked inside J’Kar’s mind is slowly released, doubly so when he is hurt. When enough of the beast is hurt, J’Kar is healed completely, his wounds knitting themselves together.
Effect: J’Kar’s HP is healed by 25% of his max health.
Requirements: Limit Break Level 1 Access
Cost: none

-Traits-
Mako Boost
Description: Those in Soldier are enhanced physically and can do things normal people can't. Because of this a lot of normal humans class them as monsters. However, Max went under an extended version to make a super SOLDIER. At least that was the intention.
Requirements: Mako Induced Experiment
Effect: +15 to Strength, Endurance, Speed, and Agility. As a side effect, 30% of all damage is blocked instead of 10%
Cost: None

The Warrior’s Plight
Description: One of the reasons the experiment was deemed a failure was because it completely eradicated Max’s connection to the Life Stream, making him unable to use Magic.
Requirements: Mako Induced Experiment
Effect: Max’s MP is at a constant 0, as well as his Magic stat is gone.
Cost: None

Materia Weakness
Description: The other reason the experiment was deemed a failure was because it made Max weaker to attacks from a Materia.
Requirements: Mako Induced Experiment
Effect: The effects of Materia on Max is increased by 25%, both beneficial and damaging effects.
Cost: None
Edited by Max, Aug 4 2009, 10:58 PM.
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Bag o Bones
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Meteorain (Lv3)
Discussed it with Tak. This limit break is APPROVED!
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Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
Forgive me but I honestly can't let this one pass. Level 1 Limits need 30% of ones health to be depleted to be used, this heals 50% for 30% which in turn means 100% heal for 60% damage. This here limit alone is game breaking as it would be even as a level 2 LB.

Lini has a level 2 Limit Break that heals him for his Strength X 1.8. Now, he has ~200 Strength meaning it heals him for 360 HP, less then half as is since he had ~900 HP with HP+. This here is a level 1, that is easier to obtain then a level 2, and would heal 450 HP should J'Kar have 900 HP. That being said I think this should be changed to;

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Limit Break
Healing of the Beast [Limit Break Level 1-1]
Description: As a fight drags on, the beast locked inside J’Kar’s mind is slowly released, doubly so when he is hurt. When enough of the beast is hurt, J’Kar is healed completely, his wounds knitting themselves together.
Effect: J’Kar’s HP is healed by 25% of his max health.
Requirements: Limit Break Level 1 Access
Cost: none


Cutting its power by half and still being, in my opinion, pretty amazing in general.
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Takeru
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The White Mage
True...okay, yeah. I rescind my approval until such point that it is edited.
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Max
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God of the Fourth Graders
There you go...edited as per Gin's request.
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Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
Fully Approved, sorry
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Max
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God of the Fourth Graders
It's alright...I don't get the whole Limit Break thing, so I'm glad ya corrected it...Thank you!
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Max
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God of the Fourth Graders
New Traits and an ability...
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Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
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The Fair One
Description: Your actions are so fair and reality based that you return the area around you to normal, eliminating any strange lights.
Requirements: 50% Alignment
Effect: Halves all Holy and Dark Element Damage
Cost: None


Approved
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Max
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God of the Fourth Graders
For the traits...they were approved before, I just made a slight adjustment, I took out the no materia, and made the physical damage reduction weaker I believe.

It used to be all physical damage was x.75. Now it's 30% of endurance is how much blocks instead of 10%...I am more than willing to lower that if need be.
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Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
I don't know if one can change traits after their character has been approved, only reason I didn't do anything to them.
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Max
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God of the Fourth Graders
Oh see I don't plan to use them for the same character...I was going to have Max scrapped and start afresh with it.
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Gin
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Ikorose, Shinsou
Approved unless anyone has some concerns
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Takeru
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The White Mage
Hmm...Warrior's Plight means that that character cannot be used in the CoC version of the replacement system, since a connection to the Lifestream would be necessary to be converted into a Materia or whatnot.

Also, calculations for your end where it's something like ((Intelligence + Magic)/2) would for you just be (Intelligence/2), which is a pretty heavy downside. So I guess they're okay.

*Stamps with Approval, just to be thorough*
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Max
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God of the Fourth Graders
Do we need to request Machines? If so...it's in the first post...if not...well ignore this... :D Or tell me if it's done right if you are bored.
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Monco
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You can't kill the Metal
Alright Max, there are a few things that need to be changed on the machine.

First off you should only have 6/6 for fuel instead of the 10/10 you have.

Next the weight should be 7/10, the plus twenty from the base counts for the weight.

All the stats are a little off as well, you didn't add the bonus from the material of the machine. Stat*(Machine durability/10) are what the stats should be. Besides speed, which should only be 10 not the 15 you have.

So the revised stats should be:

Intelligence: 5 (2) = 7<-- parens is the boost to be added.
Strength: 20 (8) = 28
Endurance: 5 (2) = 7
Magic: 5 (2) = 7
Speed: 10 (4) = 14


I may not be an expert, but I think that should be correct. Everything else checks out.
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KurisuMurei
Doesn't particularly like the Art of Fighting, but definitely wants to be the King of Fighters.
Not quite: The number in the parentheses is the stat you go by when using it where any calculations are called for, meaning that this thing goes slower than a crawl and has no damage reduction whatsoever. Not something you'd want to ride, but probably something that can be remote controlled.
Edited by KurisuMurei, Jul 28 2009, 01:51 PM.
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Max
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I didn't see any minimum requirements for a transport...this is meant only to get over the ocean...so it doesn't need anything. It also doesn't need a fast speed since it won't be used in a thread really. So why would I need plating? Or to make it faster?
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Takeru
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The White Mage
[Brought to you by Reid who designed the dice system] NO DICE!
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Fare thee well Children of Crisis, we will miss you
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