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[Pre-Dice]My Dragonic Hybrid Revamp
Topic Started: Jul 23 2009, 01:49 AM (135 Views)
Shadow Dragon
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Well anyways I felt I had to fix this for I originally did it on a cellphone, and I had to update the background to fit better with My current character. You will find some differnces in the traits, but they are all nothing more than fodder and dont really do anything for their effects. Just want people to clarify that they have not changed in the whole, but some names have been modified to fit better with their effects.

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Name: Dragonic Hybrid

Appearance:
For the most part a human being that has become a Hybrid can pass of as any other normal person, but there are a few things that can make them stand out if one were to notice. First being the eyes unless covered they can stand out lot and pretty much anyone will take notice. Seeing the iris glows bright purple, and I am talking about being able to see them clearly in a pitch black room. Then if you were to look past the glowing purple eyes, you would notice the serpent like slits in place of pupils. Aside from that one mite notice their eye teeth to be a little sharper than normal.

However, once they unleash their full power they happen to change drastically. The eyes instead of the above description will expand to every visible part of the eye and lose some of the glow. Their eye teeth would grow to resemble fangs than anything, their fingernails become claws, and above it all is a black aura that surrounds them. Then probably most impressive of all is their ability to sprout wings from their backs under certain conditions, and with mastery when ever they want.

Personality:
In many ways a Hybrid becomes a person with two minds, one is their own and then there is a separate entity that emerges. Quite literally in fact as the Hybrid can actually see them in a sort of ghost form, and this being has a personality all to his own. AT first the being would resemble a dragon for the summon materia infused within the being capable of summoning forth a incredibly powerful dragon (Not Bahumut.) Eventually the being would probably reveal the ancient human in which it became in the life stream. The being is for the most part resembling Noble Knight to the core, willing to die for his honor, and quite Chivalrous.

However, while the human personality can vary it is very common for some of the beings personality traits to transfer to the Human. Giving them some sort of honor code, or chivalrous, perhaps willing to die for something they stood for. But for the most part it can vary.

Background:
An odd materia was found that bore abnormally high Mako levels, and many experiments were ran. They found its structure to be along the lines of some Summon materia, yet they were never able to successfully summon anything, in fact it was eventually classed in a level all to its own. However, they did find that the energy capable of strengthening many materials, but the end result for most was a pile of ash as it destroyed the bonds that held its very molecular structure together. However, they found it had almost zero effect on materials like crystal, and diamond; pushing their density and strength to near indestructible levels.

After awhile even human experiments were done with its energy, and while it gave the users a great boos in speed and strength it often left them in a coma like state. A year or so later many of the scientists that were researching it felt as if they were reaching the materia’s limits, and were finding its powers to be useless for the most part to be useless. However, a scientist by the name of Charles Syncreed came up with a hypothesis about infusing it within something still in its highly adaptive fetal stages. Giving the being time to adjust to the energy, but he was knocked down every time he brought it up.

However, this didn’t stop him in the least, he had taken several samples a week or so before they shut the project down. He then took the samples and injected them into his unborn twins, passing it off to his wife as simple cycle tests and so his horrible experiment began. Once his wife gave birth one child was under developed, an was forced to stay hospitalized while his other went home. Almost instantly he noticed oddities within the under developed child as it seemed to pulled through almost overnight, leaving the doctors lost for words.

Though the father took the child and presented it to the board, while they were displeased by his deeds they overlooked them for the results he brought. For the latter of his two twins bore the same energies as the materia, and for the most part the experiment continued heavily classified; passing it off to his wife that their child’s twin had passed away. For the most part the experiment went along unnoticed to all but a few, and Charles promotions went unexplained.

But 14 years later as the little girls powers grew so did her mind, and Shinra’s interest faded as their expectations for the experiment came up extremely short. As the child clamed to start hallucinating dragons, and showing signs of losing its mind. Then one day the child just seemed to vanish, and was eventually classified as dead. Therefore, with one half of the experiment dead, and the other half showing no signs of change the experiment was lost to time.

Traits
Dragonic Aura
Description:
Once a Hybrid is pushed to their limits, or wills their inner powers outward and upon their powers full release their bodies go through a drastic change. Their appearance changes to take on a more dragon like appearance, and there physical abilities reach new levels. However, with these boosts comes a powerful downside.
Requirements: Dragonic Hybrid Experiment..
Effect: To initiate the user uses a great amount of magic to summon the power from deep within, and upon initiation the user heals by 50% of their HP. During this time the users Strength, and Speed are raised by 30%, and The user can also expel fire from there hands and mouth using their magic, (Magic/4= the power and distance in feet.) However, this comes at a great cost as it quickly causes the body to deteriorate lowering the HP by 20 every post until stopped of the user passes out.
Cost: The cost to activate this ability is 20% of the users MPs, and every post active lowers the users HP by 20. The each fire blast costs 10 MPs.

Dragon's Wings
Description: Caused the user to sprout two dragon like wings from either shoulder when using a Limit break and fade the post after.
Requirements: Dragonic Hybrid Experiment.
Effect: Causes two dragon like wings from either shoulder and allows flight during limit breaks.
Cost: None.

Dragonic Enchantment
Description: Part of the original discoveries was the energy's unique ability to strengthen other materials and these traits have passed on to the experiment. During this the said weapon will take one a black flame like aura.
Requirements: Being a Dragonic Hybrid Experiment, Weapon Degradation.
Effect: Using magic the user can strengthen any materials Strength and Durability by the users magic stat/2, and also surrounds the weapon in a black fire like aura.
Cost: 5 MP per post active.

Weapon Degradation
Description: With the Dragonic energies strengthening powers comes its dark downside. As materials aside from crystal and diamond degrade quickly under its influence.
Requirements: Dragonic Hybrid Experiment, Dragon strength.
Effect: Causes any material under the influence of Dragonic strength aside from crystal and diamond to degrade by the users magic stat per post permanently.
Cost: None.

Dragonic Curse
Description: An unforeseen result of the experiment takes a heavy toll on the human body. As it altars the energies the human body creates limiting its uses as the human can no longer use any form of materia. Not to mention any fire that they conjure from their powers takes on shades of black blue and purple, instead of their normal blends of red, yellow, and orange.
Requirements: Dragonic Hybrid Experiment.
Effects: Dragonic Hybrid Experiments can not use any form of materia.
Edited by Shadow Dragon, Aug 31 2009, 06:01 PM.
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Haine
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+1/4
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Monco
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You can't kill the Metal
+1/4 from me as well.
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Shadow Dragon
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Thanks giys ^ ^ that makes 1/2 approval
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Galileo
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Getting too old for this shit.
Traits
Dragonic Aura
Description:
Once a Hybrid is pushed to their limits, or wills their inner powers outward and upon their powers full release their bodies go through a drastic change. Their appearance changes to take on a more dragon like appearance, and there physical abilities reach new levels. However, with these boosts comes a powerful downside.
Requirements: Dragonic Hybrid Experiment..
Effect: To initiate the user uses a great amount of magic to summon the power from deep within, and upon initiation the user heals by 50% of their HP. During this time the users Strength, and Speed are raised by 30%, and The user can also expel fire from there hands and mouth using their magic, (Magic/4= the power and distance in feet.) However, this comes at a great cost as it quickly causes the body to deteriorate lowering the HP by 20 every post until stopped of the user passes out.
Cost: The cost to activate this ability is 20% of the users MPs, and every post active lowers the users HP by 20. The each fire blast costs 10 MPs.

Overpowered, you can use this during the entirety of an average thread if your character has 200+ HP providing they don’t get hit and I cannot imagined someone with stats boosted that high getting hit very often.

Dragonic Enchantment
Description: Part of the original discoveries was the energy's unique ability to strengthen other materials and these traits have passed on to the experiment. During this the said weapon will take one a black flame like aura.
Requirements: Being a Dragonic Hybrid Experiment, Weapon Degradation.
Effect: Using magic the user can strengthen any materials Strength and Durability by the users magic stat/2, and also surrounds the weapon in a black fire like aura.
Cost: 5 MP per post active.

Again, overpowered. If you had 100 magic, you could make the most powerful weapon on the board with the possibility of it only growing stronger.

Dragonic Curse
Description: An unforeseen result of the experiment takes a heavy toll on the human body. As it altars the energies the human body creates limiting its uses as the human can no longer use any form of materia. Not to mention any fire that they conjure from their powers takes on shades of black blue and purple, instead of their normal blends of red, yellow, and orange.
Requirements: Dragonic Hybrid Experiment.
Effects: Dragonic Hybrid Experiments can not use any form of materia.

Something with the traits you listed wouldn’t really have a use for materia would they? All their MP is being used up for godly powers. Not much of a drawback.

Weapon Degradation
Description: With the Dragonic energies strengthening powers comes its dark downside. As materials aside from crystal and diamond degrade quickly under its influence.
Requirements: Dragonic Hybrid Experiment, Dragon strength.
Effect: Causes any material under the influence of Dragonic strength aside from crystal and diamond to degrade by the users magic stat per post permanently.
Cost: None.

I don't consider this a weakness at all considering your weapon boost. Just buy yourself a nice cheap 600 Gil crystal weapon and you're all set!
Edited by Galileo, Jul 25 2009, 04:31 PM.
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KurisuMurei
Doesn't particularly like the Art of Fighting, but definitely wants to be the King of Fighters.
"Any form" of Materia includes Command and Support Materia, so it's not just the fact that he only has his innate abilities to actually use MP, but he's locked out of the 'free' accuracy boosting and damage boosting from Assault Twister and Jump respectively, and also of the HP and MP boosting Materia, as examples.

Oh, and we've approved bigger power boosts than that for not much more:
Takeru's approved technique
 
Hinotana's Revenge
Description: The user of this technique calls upon the power of the Fire Materia to aid their physical and armed combat. When on the offensive, they can tap into this power to strengthen their blows by the heat of the flames.
Requirements: Fire Materia, 40 Magic, 40 Intelligence, 40 Weapon Skill
Effect: Adds the power of the spell to an attack's power.
Cost: Spell Cost (6 MP)


Whereas this ability you claim overpowered adds half the boost for 5 MP. Then again, we could just increase the MP usage if that will make you happy.

Maybe for the other one, we could set a fixed time limit for it, maybe 5 turns, and after then, he either faints from exhaustion or takes stat penalties equal to or greater than the original boosts for the remainder of the thread. This solves the problems of both the potential of having someone with a Restore Materia backing the user up, or eventually gaining enough HP to last over ten turns, both of which would render HP drain (Whether increased from this amount or changed to a proportion) over time a non-factor.
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Hold up. Hinotana's Revenge is not near the same as what he's doing.

He's going for something that increases Weapon Strength/Durability. Hinotana's Revenge is essentially a dual-attack...physical and then casting a spell at the same moment of impact. What he's doing is more like my Level 1 Limit Break, which temporarily boosts the strength of my weapon by my Magic stat.

So yeah, just clarifying that. His tech =/= mine.
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umm first off these were already approved by in and bones <.<
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[Brought to you by Reid who designed the dice system] NO DICE!
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Fare thee well Children of Crisis, we will miss you
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