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[Pre-Dice]Keeda's Requests.
Topic Started: Jul 23 2009, 06:25 PM (106 Views)
Haine
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Serpent body
Description: Orochi have the muscles of serpents. These muscles can contract and as such they are more powerful than muscles of the same size might be otherwise and also increase ones flexibility as well……..however you are also a bit more snake like yourself. You tire easily in cold weather and grow weak when eating anything other than meat.
Requirements:Be an Orochi
Effect: +20 to Strength, Speed and Agility, Lowers strength by one fourth when in a cold climate and doubled damage from ice attacks.


Venom’s bite
Description:Orochi ,like snakes have a venomous bite. The venom is secreted from their fangs and causes incredible pain that usually debilitates their victims without causing any real permanent physical damage. It can be taken from there fangs and used to coat a weapon as well. However they are not immune to the venom themselves.
Requirements: Be an Orochi
Effect: if bitten or cut by a weapon coated in venom the victims agility is reduced by 25% per hit unless they’re endurance is at least two times Keeda’s spirit stat.






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Edited by Haine, Jul 23 2009, 08:00 PM.
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Haine
Jul 23 2009, 06:25 PM
Serpent body
Description: Orochi have the muscles of serpents. These muscles can contract and as such they ar more powerful than muscles of the same size might be otherwise and also increase ones flexibility as well……..however you are also a bit more snake like yourself. You tire easily in cold weather and grow weak when eating anything other than meat.
Requirements:Be an Orochi
Effect: +30 to Strength, Speed and Agility, Lowers strength by one fourth when in a cold climate.


Venom’s bite
Description:Orochi ,like snakes have a venomous bite. The venom is secreted from there fangs and causes incredible pain that usually debilitates her victims without causing any real permanent physical damage. It can be taken from there fangs and used to coat a weapon as well.
Requirements: Be an Orochi
Effect: if bitten or cut by a weapon coated in venom the victims agility is reduced by one fourth per hit unless they’re endurance is at least two times Keeda’s spirit stat.
They seem a little over powered.
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Jul 23 2009, 06:34 PM
Haine
Jul 23 2009, 06:25 PM
Serpent body
Description: Orochi have the muscles of serpents. These muscles can contract and as such they ar more powerful than muscles of the same size might be otherwise and also increase ones flexibility as well……..however you are also a bit more snake like yourself. You tire easily in cold weather and grow weak when eating anything other than meat.
Requirements:Be an Orochi
Effect: +30 to Strength, Speed and Agility, Lowers strength by one fourth when in a cold climate.


Venom’s bite
Description:Orochi ,like snakes have a venomous bite. The venom is secreted from there fangs and causes incredible pain that usually debilitates her victims without causing any real permanent physical damage. It can be taken from there fangs and used to coat a weapon as well.
Requirements: Be an Orochi
Effect: if bitten or cut by a weapon coated in venom the victims agility is reduced by one fourth per hit unless they’re endurance is at least two times Keeda’s spirit stat.
They seem a little over powered.
ok first off, the first ability makes it so that if anyone has the Winter Chill ability i lose 1/4 my strength.

Then the second ability only works at all if i manage to land a hit.
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Serpent Body...no. That's a +90 boost right there, which is about 30 more than anything else I've seen. Waaay OP. Cut it back to 20 each, then we'll talk.

As for Venom's Bite...it seems okay, but needs to be cleaned up. Double-check the spelling and such.
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Haine
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edited.
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Takeru
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On second thought, change the wording for Venom's Bite to "Lowers Agility by 25% with each hit."

If you do that, it allows fights to go on longer while still causing damage to your opponent. If they have 100 Agility, it would be:

100 (0 hits)
75 (1 hit)
56 (2 hits)
42 (3 hits)
32 (4 hits)
etc.

As opposed to...

100
75
50
25
0

Seems a bit drastic. I prefer the gradual approach.
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Haine
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Yeah , I meant to do it that way. Edited.
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Quote:
 
Serpentine Physiology
Description: Orochi have the muscles of serpents. These muscles can contract and as such they are more powerful than muscles of the same size might be otherwise. They also increase one's flexibility as well, however you are also a bit more snake-like in other ways as well. You tire easily in cold weather and grow weak when eating anything other than meat.
Requirements: Be an Orochi
Effect: +20 to Strength, Speed and Agility, Lowers Strength by 25% when in a cold climate (Icicle Continent, Winter's Chill, etc.) and damage from Ice attacks is doubled.

Corrosive Venom
Description: Orochi, like snakes, have a venomous bite. The venom is secreted from their fangs and causes incredible pain that usually debilitates their victims without causing any permanent physical damage. It can be taken from their fangs and used to coat a weapon as well, but they must be careful. The venom of an Orochi can use used to the same effect on themselves as well.
Requirements: Be an Orochi
Effect: If bitten or cut by a weapon coated in venom, the victim's Agility is reduced by 25% per hit unless their Endurance is at least two times Keeda’s Spirit. If the victim's Endurance is more than the user's (Spirit * 2), the venom has no effect.


These are the approved versions. I took the liberty of cleaning them up and fixing the spelling and such...please use them as they are above. Have fun. ^_^
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