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[Pre-Dice]KiZA's Requests; I name it, you okay it! <3
Topic Started: Aug 7 2009, 12:08 AM (113 Views)
Kiza!!!
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Pending Abilities

Pending Techniques

Pending Limit Breaks

Pending Items

Pending Traits

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Approved Abilities
Name: Wings of Steel
Description: Normally, a Moogle's wings cannot support the weight of a beautiful girl's 111 lbs. However, after much training, straining, and endurance, the feat is easily accomplished!
Requirements: 30 Strength, 20 Agility
Effect: Ability to fly in Human form.
Cost: None.

Approved Techniques

Approved Limit Breaks

Approved Items
Name: Robotic Eye [upgradeable]
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Description: Given to KiZA as a farewell and apologetic gift from an admiring scientist, this eye looks like a regular eye, save for the purple color correction lens that is placed over the camera-type lens. Currently, it serves no known purpose but to replace the dissolved eye of a failed experiment.
Effect: None, but must be removed in Moogle form.
Cost: None.

Approved Traits
Inner Moogle
Description: Due to being part moogle Kiza has her wings even while in her natural human form. That being the case she is also very technically savvy like that of a normal moogle. The best of both worlds if you ask me!
Requirements: Kiza
Effect: +30 to Machine Operation and the ability to fly in Moogle form.
Cost: None

Outer Moogle
Description: Kiza on occasion turns into a Moogle. That being said she is able to use armor and weapons of which a Moogle would be able to use. Who says size matters?
Requirements: Kiza
Effect: Kiza is able to use gear only Moogles can use in Moogle form.
Cost: None

Name: Amnesia
Description: Because of the drastic changes her body endures while undergoing her Moogle transformation, KiZA's brain goes into shock and resets itself as her body is restored to it's human form.
Requirements: None.
Effect: Loss of all abilities every 30 threads.
Cost: None.

Name: Cyloss
Description: Due to the small body size of Moogles, cyborg parts do not fit KiZA during her transformed state.
Requirements: Moogle Form
Effect: Inability to wear human-cyborg parts while in Moogle form.
Cost: None.
Edited by Kiza!!!, Aug 7 2009, 09:58 PM.
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Galileo
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Getting too old for this shit.
The weakness is fiine, but what about her advantages?
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Kiza!!!
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:Bump
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Grey
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
A Failed Experiment can have up to 5 traits. I dealistically you want 2 positive, 2 negative, and 1 balanced; at least that's the way most people do them. You have 3 negative traits. I would suggest making 2 really positive ones to balance it out or re-work and re-word your current traits to give you something useful. For example

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Name: Heavy Weight
Description: Too...heavy...for...wings! D:
Requirements: Human form
Effect: Mog wings are not strong enough to carry KiZA in human form.
Cost: None.


You might take this trait and make it so that KiZA can fly once she gets a certain amount of strength.

On another note I think you'll have to ask Cloud about forgetting all abilities, its one of those rule defying traits that he needs to approve. :D
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Okay! I took Heavy Weight off of Traits and made it into an ability. =]

Now that I think of it, I probably don't need Cyloss...because its obvious that human cyborg parts won't fit a Moogle...
Edited by Kiza!!!, Aug 7 2009, 09:33 AM.
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I don't wanna wait for Cloud to come back D:
He's not gonna be back for a while since his computer is broken! T_T
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Ikorose, Shinsou
I REALLY tried to avoid this since I didn't want to be a meanie but first off lets start with the traits. This is sorta a good thing but still kinda mean.

The three traits you have....I see all negatives and no positives to them at all. This is rather odd seeing as how all your traits hurt you and you get nothing in return from them which is something that should happen. I would suggest creating at least two more traits that give positive buffs to Kiza, probably traits that involve what her Waremoogle transformations actually does to her since it's not really described.

The last is the ability Wings of Steel, which I re-read while posting since I didn't realize it wasn't actual wings of steel, I give them an approval unless another staff begs to differ.
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Double post because I'm that awesome

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Inner Moogle
Description: Due to being part moogle Kiza has her wings even while in her natural human form. That being the case she is also very technically savvy like that of a normal moogle. The best of both worlds if you ask me!
Requirements: Kiza
Effect: +30 to Machine Operation and the ability to fly in Moogle form.
Cost: None

Outer Moogle
Description: Kiza on occasion turns into a Moogle. That being said she is able to use armor and weapons of which a Moogle would be able to use. Who says size matters?
Requirements: Kiza
Effect: Kiza is able to use gear only Moogles can use in Moogle form.
Cost: None


Possible traits for you
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Kiza!!!
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Love them! =]
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Ikorose, Shinsou
Everything is currently approved pending another mod doesn't disagree
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[Brought to you by Reid who designed the dice system] NO DICE!
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Fare thee well Children of Crisis, we will miss you
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