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| [Pre-Dice]Kai's Request; Rebirthing a Legend | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Sep 16 2009, 12:44 AM (199 Views) | |
| Grey | Sep 16 2009, 12:44 AM Post #1 |
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
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Pending Abilities Pending Techniques Aura of Dread Description: Vampires are described as agents of darkness, fear incarnate. In the legends of old, an experienced vampire could create a cloud of mist to signal their arrival. Those trapped in the mist would be struck with the utmost dread and know that their end was neigh. Requirements: 40 Magic, Vampire Effect: Creates a thick mist that covers 20% of Spirit in feet. Anyone caught in the mist with less Spirit than Kai’s Magic is inflected with Paralyze Status until they can escape. Cost: 5 MP per post Lightning Breaker Description: They did something to my arm. They gave it more strength, more power. Ever since that day I’ve heard a voice coming from this arm of mine, always repeating the same thing over and over. “Power. Give me more power!” Requirements: Thunder Materia, 30 Casting, Magika Effect: Kai can create a demonic looking arm and hand made of electric energy. The size of this arm depends on the level of Thunder Spell casted, 2x bigger than Kai’s own arm for Thunder, 5x as big for Thundara, and 10x as big for Thundaga. This arm has Spell Damage in Strength and Intelligence in Speed. The arm copies the movements or Kai’s right arm and will do the same actions. Cost: Cost of Spell -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Approved Abilities Spoiler: click to toggle Race Information Spoiler: click to toggle Edited by Grey, Jan 4 2010, 07:54 PM.
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| Grey | Sep 16 2009, 12:44 AM Post #2 |
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
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Let the feedback begin. :D |
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| Drathmar | Sep 16 2009, 05:23 AM Post #3 |
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Vampiric Bitch
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The only problem I see, is that you have this set up more as a new race than a failed experiment. Especially with the wings thing. I could be wrong but dun think Shinra was around, and certainly not conducting human experiments 1500+ years ago. |
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| Skyes | Sep 16 2009, 07:25 AM Post #4 |
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Rush Assualt
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Also, 10% hp recovery is pretty high for no cost. Why not 10 - amount of turns since feeding %? That way, the longer its been since you've fed, the more sluggish you are in recovery? |
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| Galileo | Sep 16 2009, 07:57 AM Post #5 |
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Getting too old for this shit.
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10% per turn recovery has been approved before at least twice and both times were my own requests. The healing trait for this one has a definite downside to it. Both Tak and I have already created Limit Breaks that do Holy Damage. |
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| Grey | Sep 16 2009, 08:41 AM Post #6 |
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Yes, as Gal said there are holy attacks. And all healing Materia is considered to be holy aligned. As for his FE status, technically Kai isn't an experiment. He comes from an alternate universe from the one here. Foxy Wolf has a character with a similar origin Sonoske Minamato |
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| [-Angeles-] | Sep 16 2009, 09:55 AM Post #7 |
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I'm thinking it needs at least one more downside, but that may just be me not liking Vampires. 1/2 approved for all of them. |
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| Drathmar | Sep 16 2009, 10:19 AM Post #8 |
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Vampiric Bitch
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Im sorry but In my opinion, you need to explain how this is a failed experiment and not a new race. Also, bloodlust needs to be less as 10 threads even for the heavy RPers take quite a while. I would suggest 5. Wings of Darkness should be changed to being able to use in LB only, UNTIL he gets an ability to do so otherwise, just like ever other wing trait on the site (SEE: All clones) or have disadvantages and not be able to use for traveling without another ability (SEE: Moogles). Vampiric Strength, In Darkest Night, and Magicka will have my 1/4 once you explain how this is a FE and not a new race. The reason I don't see how this is a FE is because you mentioned he has to be over 1500 years old for the wings which means either he was around before Shinra... or wouldn't get them till after everyone is dead. That and being from another world, and everything as such. As far as I know, FE HAVE to be made as people Shinra experimented on that failed. Outside of that as far as I know, you can't make new races. Edited by Drathmar, Sep 16 2009, 10:28 AM.
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| [-Angeles-] | Sep 16 2009, 10:45 AM Post #9 |
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Perhaps you could do something similar to what happened to Jenova, that he was put into a stasis and then discovered by Shinra and then became a FE. |
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| Skyes | Sep 16 2009, 11:48 AM Post #10 |
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Rush Assualt
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Just curious, but does the 10% per turn have a cost? This doesn't, so pitting it up against accepted things is kinda not something you can do, since this time it's for free. |
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| Galileo | Sep 16 2009, 01:12 PM Post #11 |
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Getting too old for this shit.
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Both of my healing customs come at no costs. One was a trait for Frank and the other is an ability for Moe that has two ability requirements. |
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| Skyes | Sep 16 2009, 01:12 PM Post #12 |
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Rush Assualt
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Ah, okay then. |
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| Grey | Sep 18 2009, 09:36 AM Post #13 |
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Updated. Traits re-worked and rewritten: Positives: + 30 stats, Enhanced Senses, 1 free Materia, 10% health Regen Negatives: x3 damage from Holy, x2 damage from Silver, Can't use any other Materia than the one gained at creation, must drink blood once every 5 threads. Neutral: Can fly with high Endurance and Strength. |
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| [-Angeles-] | Sep 18 2009, 10:37 AM Post #14 |
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Ex-Turk
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In addition to silver, put Mythril, since stated by J.R.R Tolkien (whome I believe came up with idea for mythril) stated that mythril was silver, just worked differently. That way you have a weakness to an actual weapon/armor material, in addition to the silver bullets. Otherwise you would only have a weakness to the silver bulletes (the only actual silver item that can deal damage) Quoting for geek purposes: - Gandalf the Grey, The Fellowship of the Ring by J.R.R. Tolkien Edited by Angeles, Sep 18 2009, 10:58 AM.
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| Grey | Sep 18 2009, 11:59 AM Post #15 |
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Added and updated. |
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| [-Angeles-] | Sep 18 2009, 12:25 PM Post #16 |
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Ex-Turk
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All traits and abilities are 1/2 approved. |
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| Gin | Sep 18 2009, 12:33 PM Post #17 |
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Ikorose, Shinsou
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Approved |
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| Grey | Sep 18 2009, 12:42 PM Post #18 |
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Thanks. Um, does that go for the abilities too Gin? |
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| Gin | Sep 18 2009, 12:46 PM Post #19 |
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Ikorose, Shinsou
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Yes, like Angeles did. I didn't specify because I was lazy and figured she did it for me :P |
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| Grey | Sep 18 2009, 12:54 PM Post #20 |
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lol, thanks ^^ |
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| Grey | Jan 4 2010, 07:52 PM Post #21 |
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New requests! First a Field Technique.
and second, a new technique
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| Takeru | Jan 4 2010, 08:00 PM Post #22 |
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The White Mage
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Aura of Dread: is that in a dome, or does it hang toward the ground like a fog? Lightning Breaker: is the Cost a one time thing or per turn? |
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| Grey | Jan 4 2010, 08:52 PM Post #23 |
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Aura of Dread just covers a general area like a fog would and for Lightning Breaker the cost is per summoning of the hand. If he were to say send it away and then summon it back then he'd have to pay the cost again. |
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| Takeru | Jan 4 2010, 08:55 PM Post #24 |
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The White Mage
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Wait, so it's like a projectile? Because I was envisioning it more like an aura of sorts that would surround the arm like an armor, kinda. |
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| Grey | Jan 4 2010, 09:36 PM Post #25 |
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Um...have you ever seen Nero from DMC 4? Think of his Devil Bringer. |
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