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[Pre-Dice]Kai's Request; Rebirthing a Legend
Topic Started: Sep 16 2009, 12:44 AM (201 Views)
Grey
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
Pending Abilities

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Aura of Dread
Description: Vampires are described as agents of darkness, fear incarnate. In the legends of old, an experienced vampire could create a cloud of mist to signal their arrival. Those trapped in the mist would be struck with the utmost dread and know that their end was neigh.
Requirements: 40 Magic, Vampire
Effect: Creates a thick mist that covers 20% of Spirit in feet. Anyone caught in the mist with less Spirit than Kai’s Magic is inflected with Paralyze Status until they can escape.
Cost: 5 MP per post

Lightning Breaker
Description: They did something to my arm. They gave it more strength, more power. Ever since that day I’ve heard a voice coming from this arm of mine, always repeating the same thing over and over. “Power. Give me more power!”
Requirements: Thunder Materia, 30 Casting, Magika
Effect: Kai can create a demonic looking arm and hand made of electric energy. The size of this arm depends on the level of Thunder Spell casted, 2x bigger than Kai’s own arm for Thunder, 5x as big for Thundara, and 10x as big for Thundaga. This arm has Spell Damage in Strength and Intelligence in Speed. The arm copies the movements or Kai’s right arm and will do the same actions.
Cost: Cost of Spell


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Edited by Grey, Jan 4 2010, 07:54 PM.
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Grey
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Did you know that L's love donuts?
Let the feedback begin. :D
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Drathmar
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The only problem I see, is that you have this set up more as a new race than a failed experiment.

Especially with the wings thing. I could be wrong but dun think Shinra was around, and certainly not conducting human experiments 1500+ years ago.
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Skyes
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Also, 10% hp recovery is pretty high for no cost.

Why not 10 - amount of turns since feeding %?

That way, the longer its been since you've fed, the more sluggish you are in recovery?
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Galileo
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Getting too old for this shit.
10% per turn recovery has been approved before at least twice and both times were my own requests. The healing trait for this one has a definite downside to it. Both Tak and I have already created Limit Breaks that do Holy Damage.
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Yes, as Gal said there are holy attacks. And all healing Materia is considered to be holy aligned. As for his FE status, technically Kai isn't an experiment. He comes from an alternate universe from the one here. Foxy Wolf has a character with a similar origin Sonoske Minamato
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I'm thinking it needs at least one more downside, but that may just be me not liking Vampires. 1/2 approved for all of them.
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Drathmar
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Im sorry but In my opinion, you need to explain how this is a failed experiment and not a new race.

Also, bloodlust needs to be less as 10 threads even for the heavy RPers take quite a while. I would suggest 5.

Wings of Darkness should be changed to being able to use in LB only, UNTIL he gets an ability to do so otherwise, just like ever other wing trait on the site (SEE: All clones) or have disadvantages and not be able to use for traveling without another ability (SEE: Moogles).

Vampiric Strength, In Darkest Night, and Magicka will have my 1/4 once you explain how this is a FE and not a new race. The reason I don't see how this is a FE is because you mentioned he has to be over 1500 years old for the wings which means either he was around before Shinra... or wouldn't get them till after everyone is dead. That and being from another world, and everything as such. As far as I know, FE HAVE to be made as people Shinra experimented on that failed.

Outside of that as far as I know, you can't make new races.

Edited by Drathmar, Sep 16 2009, 10:28 AM.
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[-Angeles-]
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Perhaps you could do something similar to what happened to Jenova, that he was put into a stasis and then discovered by Shinra and then became a FE.
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Skyes
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Just curious, but does the 10% per turn have a cost? This doesn't, so pitting it up against accepted things is kinda not something you can do, since this time it's for free.
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Getting too old for this shit.
Both of my healing customs come at no costs. One was a trait for Frank and the other is an ability for Moe that has two ability requirements.
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Skyes
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Ah, okay then.
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Grey
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Updated. Traits re-worked and rewritten:

Positives: + 30 stats, Enhanced Senses, 1 free Materia, 10% health Regen

Negatives: x3 damage from Holy, x2 damage from Silver, Can't use any other Materia than the one gained at creation, must drink blood once every 5 threads.

Neutral: Can fly with high Endurance and Strength.
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Vampiric Weakness (0/5)
Description: Along with the strength of a vampire there also comes the weaknesses of one. Vampires have a natural allergy to silver which will weaken even the strongest elder. They also have an incredible thirst.
Requirements: Vampire
Effect: Silver weapons do x2 damage to Kai. In addition Kai must drink blood from at least 1 PC at least once every 5 threads. If he cannot his stats and skills will be locked until he’s had this drink.


In addition to silver, put Mythril, since stated by J.R.R Tolkien (whome I believe came up with idea for mythril) stated that mythril was silver, just worked differently. That way you have a weakness to an actual weapon/armor material, in addition to the silver bullets. Otherwise you would only have a weakness to the silver bulletes (the only actual silver item that can deal damage)

Quoting for geek purposes:

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“For here alone in the world was found Moria-silver, or true silver as some have called it: mithril is the elvish name.”
- Gandalf the Grey, The Fellowship of the Ring by J.R.R. Tolkien
Edited by Angeles, Sep 18 2009, 10:58 AM.
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Added and updated.
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All traits and abilities are 1/2 approved.
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Approved
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Grey
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Thanks. Um, does that go for the abilities too Gin?
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Yes, like Angeles did. I didn't specify because I was lazy and figured she did it for me :P
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lol, thanks ^^
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New requests!

First a Field Technique.

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Aura of Dread
Description: Vampires are described as agents of darkness, fear incarnate. In the legends of old, an experienced vampire could create a cloud of mist to signal their arrival. Those trapped in the mist would be struck with the utmost dread and know that their end was neigh.
Requirements: 40 Magic, Vampire
Effect: Creates a thick mist that covers 20% of Spirit in feet. Anyone caught in the mist with less Spirit than Kai’s Magic is inflected with Paralyze Status until they can escape.
Cost: 5 MP per post


and second, a new technique

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Lightning Breaker
Description: They did something to my arm. They gave it more strength, more power. Ever since that day I’ve heard a voice coming from this arm of mine, always repeating the same thing over and over. “Power. Give me more power!”
Requirements: Thunder Materia, 30 Casting, Magika
Effect: Kai can create a demonic looking arm and hand made of electric energy. The size of this arm depends on the level of Thunder Spell casted, 2x bigger than Kai’s own arm for Thunder, 5x as big for Thundara, and 10x as big for Thundaga. This arm has Spell Damage in Strength and Intelligence in Speed. The arm copies the movements or Kai’s right arm and will do the same actions.
Cost: Cost of Spell
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Takeru
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Aura of Dread: is that in a dome, or does it hang toward the ground like a fog?

Lightning Breaker: is the Cost a one time thing or per turn?
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Aura of Dread just covers a general area like a fog would

and for Lightning Breaker the cost is per summoning of the hand. If he were to say send it away and then summon it back then he'd have to pay the cost again.
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Wait, so it's like a projectile? Because I was envisioning it more like an aura of sorts that would surround the arm like an armor, kinda.
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Um...have you ever seen Nero from DMC 4? Think of his Devil Bringer.
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