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[Mission] Number 10
Topic Started: Sep 29 2009, 05:40 PM (39 Views)
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Thoughts in Chaos
Name: Jackie
Character Sheet: Jackie
Thread Type: Mission
Actions: Neutral
Link to Thread: [Mission]Number 10
Stats Used

Speed

Materia In Thread

None

Items Used

None

Items Other PCs Used

None

Things Learned/Obtained

Bought:
Demon's Eye
Description: A genetically engineered eye with Four Pupil; The main pupil, and three smaller pupil that surround the main pupil. The eye's Iris is red. Equipping and unequiping this accessory requires the user to under go surgery.
Weight: 0
Effect: +15% Accuracy
Cost: 2300

Rank Change - 3rd class to 2nd Class.

Replaces - Sharp Shooter
Smart Shot
Description: Sometimes, you know just where to shoot.
Requirements: 50 Gun skill, 100 Intelligence
Effect: Add Intelligence to Damage when using a gun.
Cost: None
Edited by Tada!, Sep 29 2009, 05:42 PM.
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Grendel
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Waterkick (Lv2)
Effort/Length 9
Story/Character Development 7
Grammar/Spelling 3
Max Grade: 19

820 gil
Promoted to Second Class
Ability and Item Granted

There are some places where you have commas where you need semi-colons. Keep that in mind in the future.

Now that I have said that, there are some points where you need commas but don't have any.

'Jackie put another bullet into her gun and shot the sword and broke it.' When you have multiple ideas in the same sentence, you can use a comma to separate them. However, if they're two different sentences together (or two incomplete ones) use a semi-colon.
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Thoughts in Chaos
I'll keep that in mind. All into speed please.
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Ikorose, Shinsou
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Fare thee well Children of Crisis, we will miss you
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