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| Tweet Topic Started: Sep 29 2009, 05:40 PM (39 Views) | |
| Tada! | Sep 29 2009, 05:40 PM Post #1 |
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Thoughts in Chaos
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Name: Jackie Character Sheet: Jackie Thread Type: Mission Actions: Neutral Link to Thread: [Mission]Number 10 Stats Used Speed Materia In Thread None Items Used None Items Other PCs Used None Things Learned/Obtained Bought: Demon's Eye Description: A genetically engineered eye with Four Pupil; The main pupil, and three smaller pupil that surround the main pupil. The eye's Iris is red. Equipping and unequiping this accessory requires the user to under go surgery. Weight: 0 Effect: +15% Accuracy Cost: 2300 Rank Change - 3rd class to 2nd Class. Replaces - Sharp Shooter Smart Shot Description: Sometimes, you know just where to shoot. Requirements: 50 Gun skill, 100 Intelligence Effect: Add Intelligence to Damage when using a gun. Cost: None Edited by Tada!, Sep 29 2009, 05:42 PM.
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| Grendel | Oct 1 2009, 06:16 PM Post #2 |
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Waterkick (Lv2)
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Effort/Length 9 Story/Character Development 7 Grammar/Spelling 3 Max Grade: 19 820 gil Promoted to Second Class Ability and Item Granted There are some places where you have commas where you need semi-colons. Keep that in mind in the future. Now that I have said that, there are some points where you need commas but don't have any. 'Jackie put another bullet into her gun and shot the sword and broke it.' When you have multiple ideas in the same sentence, you can use a comma to separate them. However, if they're two different sentences together (or two incomplete ones) use a semi-colon. |
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| Tada! | Oct 1 2009, 09:15 PM Post #3 |
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Thoughts in Chaos
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I'll keep that in mind. All into speed please. |
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| Gin | Oct 1 2009, 09:36 PM Post #4 |
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Ikorose, Shinsou
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added [Topic Moved with MC Mover Auto-Tool] Presented in glorious Dolby DHS, and brought to you by Cloud's Beanie. He never washes that thing, and now it has a life of its own. Gross. -LIES!! I washed it the other day. :D |
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| [-Angeles-] | May 12 2011, 02:22 PM Post #5 |
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Ex-Turk
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Fare thee well Children of Crisis, we will miss you |
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