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Can't think of a witty title here.
Topic Started: Oct 2 2009, 05:05 PM (47 Views)
KurisuMurei
Doesn't particularly like the Art of Fighting, but definitely wants to be the King of Fighters.
Name: Chris Murray
Character Sheet: Here we go, Sig Machine!
Thread Type: Mission
Actions: Neutral
Link to Thread: Blue Sun of...I don't know who!

Stats Used

Magic
Strength
Hand-to-Hand

Materia In Thread

Fire [Fire, Fira and Firaga: 1448 AP] Level 3
Description: [500 AP Level 2: 1,000 AP Level 3] By harnessing the knowledge inside the Materia, one can utilize fire by sending a scorching flame at the opponent. At higher levels it is more severe and larger. It is meant only for a single target.
Requirements: 10 Casting for Fire; Level 2 and 50 Casting for Fira; Level 3 and 100 Casting for Firaga.
Effect: Magic Damage If impacted for Fire; Magic Damage X 1.5 for Fira; Magic Damage X 2 for Firaga.
Cost: 6 MP for Fire; 12 MP for Fira; 24 MP for Firaga.

Earth [Fissure, Fissara, Fissaga: 420 AP] Level 1
Description: [500 AP Level 2: 1,000 AP Level 3] By harnessing the knowledge inside the Materia, one can utilize Earth by creating a split in the ground along with jagged shards of earth protruding. At higher levels it is more severe and larger. It is meant only for a single target.
Requirements: 10 Casting for Fissure; Level 2 and 50 Casting for Fissara; Level 3 and 100 Casting for Fissaga.
Effect: Magic Damage if Impacted for Fissure; Magic Damage X 1.5 for Fissara; Magic Damage X 2 for Fissaga.
Cost: 6 MP for Fissure; 12 MP for Fissara; 24 MP for Fissaga

Restore [Cure, Cura, Regen and Curaga: 1180 AP] Level 3
Description: [500 AP Level 2: 1,000 AP Level 3: 1,500 AP to Level 4] By harnessing the knowledge inside the Materia, one can utilize a healing magic that cures battle wounds and restores health.
Requirements: 10 Casting for level 1; 50 Casting for Level 2; 100 Casting for Level 3; 130 Casting for Level 4.
Effect: Restore Magic stat to target for Cure; Restore Magic X 1.5 to target for Cura; Restore Magic Stat X 0.5 for Regen each post, Restore Magic Stat X2.2 for Curaga.
Cost: 6 MP for Cure; 12 MP for Cura; 24 MP for Regen; 30 MP for Curaga.

Aero [Aero, Aerora, Aeroga: 228 AP] Level 1
Description: [500 AP Level 2: 1,000 AP Level 3] By harnessing the knowledge inside the Materia, one can utilize the powers of wind and send a spinning blade of wind at the target. At higher levels the spinning blade looks similar to a tornado but not quite as large.
Requirements: 10 Casting for Aero; Level 2 and 50 Casting for Aerora; Level 3 and 100 Casting for Aeroga.
Effect: Magic Damage If impacted for Aero; Magic Damage X 1.5 for Aerora; Magic Damage X 2 for Aeroga.
Cost: 6 MP for Aero; 12 MP for Aerora; 24 MP for Aeroga.

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Things Learned/Obtained

Gil
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Effort/Length: 6
Story/Character Development: 7
Grammar/Spelling: 2
Max Grade: 15

60 AP

495 gil
Edited by Angeles, Oct 4 2009, 03:07 PM.
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KurisuMurei
Doesn't particularly like the Art of Fighting, but definitely wants to be the King of Fighters.
Did I make THAT many syntax errors?

+7 Magic
+7 Strength
+1 Hand-to-Hand

Should be 495 Gil, due to True Nature bonus.

I'll wait for you to tell me why the Grammar/Spelling score is so low...or to get a second opinion.
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Chris was going to the next area that needed resupply when he heard some gunfire below him.


Re-supply.

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Chris responded, then gave a chuckle before diving down at very close to ground level, requiring some evasion action from the terrorists in his path for them to avoid getting clotheslined by the machine's wing.


'clotheslined' isn't a word.

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With all three prone, the SOLDIER gave the cue for a final beatdown.


'Beat down' is two words.

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Chris nodded, then landed his machine, then pulled out a jumping attack and landed, butt-first, into the pile, resulting in an audiable crack of the spine of the guy he landed on being broken.


Audible, not audiable.

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"Double Giant Spin Collider! Grab the last guy so we can do this!"


'Collider' isn't a word, but as this is an attack name I can let this slide I guess.

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Looks like there was a bit of a mixup in the commands, as the SOLDIER threw his man up into the air.


'Mix up' is two words.

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After the introductions, and a mispronounciation of Chris's name, Bakemono mentioned that he didn't exactly remember when the last time they met was.


Mispronunciation.

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Now...let's see if anyone is still concious enough for us to get some information from them."


Conscious.

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Instead, I will use you as either a training dummy, beating you to an inch of conciousness, healing you, and repeating until either I get bored or I run out of heals..."


Consciousness.
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KurisuMurei
Doesn't particularly like the Art of Fighting, but definitely wants to be the King of Fighters.
The list of mistakes became almost tl;dr, but the only one I'll contest is 'Collider', as:
-It actually IS a word, and it's been- used as in Large Hadron Collider.
-It's in dialogue, so it's probably something made up in-character.
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Which is why I said I could let it slide.
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Effort/Length: 6
Story/Character Development: 7
Grammar/Spelling: 3
Max Grade: 16

64 AP

506 gil
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KurisuMurei
Doesn't particularly like the Art of Fighting, but definitely wants to be the King of Fighters.
Okay so same as last time, except one more to H2H.

So:
+7 Strength
+7 Magic
+2 Hand-to-Hand

I'll get this.

(Jeeze, all this frustration I've caused for one point.)

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Fare thee well Children of Crisis, we will miss you
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