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| Ike Haw | Oct 5 2009, 01:09 AM Post #1 |
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Yes, in hind sight of things I'm actually asking for feedback. One would have to be under a rock to not notice my recent long term bout of inactivity. I'm not here to get into that however. The actual reason is to get feedback on Ran, if you can't remember who she is I don't blame you. I'm not even going to try, and explain it for the reason of time. The basic idea is for you guys to go over the old profile, and tell me what you think. When I say look over it, I mean pick the damn thing to pieces. Tell me what you like about her, don't like about her. Things you think that need to be changed etc. The last thing I'll give is a link to her old profile, which I believe is version 1.3. Ran Ain Profile <---- click to be brought to old profile. Edited by Ike Haw, Oct 5 2009, 08:06 AM.
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| Tada! | Oct 5 2009, 01:28 AM Post #2 |
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Thoughts in Chaos
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Whoa, who is Ran ain? |
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| Drathmar | Oct 5 2009, 05:21 AM Post #3 |
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Ike... it's not other peoples character. She is your character. Which means what YOU like about her and what YOU don't like about her, should be the only things that matter. Asking someone to help make her better is one thing, asking the whole board for their opinion is another. |
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| Ike Haw | Oct 5 2009, 08:05 AM Post #4 |
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Okay so in hind sight opinion was a bad choice word. Its feed back Drath. Normally to get feedback you need a decent to large group of people. I'm ranting a bit. My point is that I've done probably every thing I can think of to vamp and revamp Ran. Just look at my request topic, its full of just trying to get traits approved and the revamping of said traits. That's two out of three pages just working on her traits, and redoing them. In short feedback is my only option left. |
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| Drathmar | Oct 5 2009, 08:07 AM Post #5 |
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Vampiric Bitch
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Okay then, first thing first, to give proper feedback, what do YOU want out of the character so we can give you feedback to help achieve that. |
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| Ike Haw | Oct 5 2009, 04:27 PM Post #6 |
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Hmm lets see what do I want. I guess the best place would be what I do have a clue about. In order to make this more readable I'm just going to place it in sections. Skills: Guess this would be a good of place, as any to start. Ran from her background is a thief type of character, but is also based on the background of the selkie from Final Fantasy Crystal Chronicles. The selkie are long range users that oddly use rackets, as their main weapon. As a thief though she would be inclined to use knives, daggers. Then you toss in she is technically part Raven meaning she has a basic understanding of Avalanches arsenal. I'm unsure of what weapon class she would actually specialise in. Right now she uses a short sword, but the skill itself is classified as swords. I beleave how its classified is against the rules, since its a rather vauge term. Combat: While there is no combat section. I've often seen Ran more with a Rider (fate/stay night) type of style. I've also seen her more as a Fatima, Ceicelle from Luminous Arc when it comes to actual materia useage. Traits: I would actually like to have a balance here of what shin-ra did to her, and what the Ravens actualy are, so finding the right balance is rather tricky. Abilites: I wouldactually like a combination of thief and darkness abilites, but also abilites that sort of build on each other. Stats: Again I would like these to represent her background as a whole, so a combination of the Ravens stats, a thief, and something else. Mostly I'm guessing she would be agile. In her history she also manages to keep her humanity for a good period of time, so my guess is a high intelligence and spirit as well. Apperance: I'm not trying to go for the evil female look. I mean she is evil, but she doesn't look it. The best way I can describe it is vilaness from shows like sailor moon. Where there evil, but they don't look like they'll rip your head off. This is all I can think up of now, or pull out of memory storage. I'll leave you with the above, and get back to you people later. |
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| Lucifer | Oct 5 2009, 05:25 PM Post #7 |
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I'll be the asshole Ike, even though I like you. You've RPed even less than I have here at CoC. This is what you need to figure out. |
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| [-Angeles-] | May 12 2011, 02:01 PM Post #8 |
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Fare thee well Children of Crisis, we will miss you |
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