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| Yoshida, Byakuya; The Raven | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Dec 8 2009, 09:31 AM (71 Views) | |
| Shin Draven | Dec 8 2009, 09:31 AM Post #1 |
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The People's Champion
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Name: Yoshida, Byakuya Alias: Raven #305 Race: Raven Age: 21 Gender: Male Hometown: Wutai Personality: Byakuya was by most parts a trouble maker, though he likes to think of himself as a "go-getter" or "spontaneous individual." Byakuya is only scared of losing what he holds dear, but has yet to learn how to fight for it. This fear is manifests as an empty feeling that grows within his chest whenever he thinks about it. Since his brother left him to proceed with his own life, he only has his mother and father, both of which are old and rarely around. Because of this fear, he tries to remain close to them, but does everything wrong when trying to get them to pay attention to him. Byakuya has a habit of over thinking things a lot. Since he likes to react, he rarely thinks of the consequences. Only when he is serious, does he react with purpose and calculated steps. Like his brother, Byakuya has a very cynical attitude. Around strangers, Byakuya likes to keep quiet. He watches people talk and will generate his own opinions of them. This usually requires him to be quiet for most of the time during his first meetings with strangers. Besides that, Byakuya likes to watch those that he doesn’t know to determine whether they are friendly or not. The only people that Byakuya likes is his family, but around people that he likes besides them, Byakuya is a funny guy. He likes to joke around a lot which makes those that know him think that he is a real jokester. Sometimes he has been known for taking things too lightly and it is hurtful for others. Byakuya has yet to know love or to fall in love. But when he does, on occasion, he is skeptical to those that he really likes. He appears to remain cool and calm on the surface but beneath…there is a storm of confusion and pain. But after his conversion to a Raven, all that was before was last, he became extremely quiet, no matter the situation, even when he was enjoying the thrill of the hunt and/or the kill. Appearance: Byakuya the Raven(credit to RGM501) Being a member of the ninja community of Wutai, Byakuya wears a black tight muscle and loose-fitting cargo pants that allow him to remain agile when necessary. Byakuya is a spinning equal of his brother in most physical regards. He has a mess of black hair. And no matter what he does, it will always be like that. Most of the time, his hair holds true to its upward form, which makes Byakuya look like he does not groom himself. Though that is true to an extent, the shine of his hair as well as the strength of each clump of hair makes it seem as if he spends hours maintaining it. Byakuya's face is rather scrawny, and it's probably due to some mal-nourishment as a younger child. Either way, the boy has rather high cheek bones and rather narrow face. Though ironically, his cheeks are quite full and have some fat on them. His eyes are now a hollow white, with no iris. But that only remains before he receives the order to kill. Once that is achieved, his whole eyes resort to black. He now has an attire based on that of a ninja. Details Alignment: 45% Rank: Raven Gil: 205 HP: 170/170 MP: 50/50 Stats Intelligence: (35) Locked Strength: 20 Spirit: (35) Locked Endurance: 15 Magic: 15 Speed: 25 Agility: 25 Skills: Handgun Skill: 0 Hand to Hand: 20 Casting: 10 Machine Operation 0 Limit Breaks: None Techniques: None Abilities: Enhanced Hearing Description: Hearing the footsteps of your opponent as they sneak up behind you is not an easy task for normal people. With this ability, you wont be among those normal people. Hearing a person's quite steps becomes part of your everyday norm. Although your hearing is not enhanced to be super-human, but it is enhanced enough to notice things others would have never heard. Requirements: 10 Spirit Effect: Hearing is increased, able to hear things one normally could not. Cost: None Enhanced Sight Description: Seeing the arrow as if it moved slightly slower could give you a unique advantage. Normally they are not able to be seen, but you are not normal... now are you? Things seem to travel several meters per second slower than they did before. This doesn't help you dodge them, but would give you a nice heads up on peoples movements and seeing things coming before it gets out of hand. Requirements: 10 Spirit Effect: Sight is increased, able to see things normal people could not. Cost: None Last Haste Description: Desperate... again? Well, desperation is a powerful thing as we know. The TRULY desperate can gain an even sharper edge in a fight if they are in need of it. Use that desperation to get the results you're looking for. Requirements: 120 HP Effect: Increase Speed by 20% if HP drops below half Cost: None Reflex Description: Desperation is a mighty thing, when the desperate are hurt and need power to call upon, they may find that they just might get the boost they need to escape certain death. Requirements: 120 HP Effect: Agility is increased by 30% when HP drops below half Cost: None [Location:] Traits: No Mind of Their Own Description: Raven's with a low will have no control of their own thoughts or personality. They cannot help but laugh about the thrill of the fight and enjoying the kill. The most intelligent thing some Raven's can say is, "Death to Shin-Ra." Because of this, Raven's are easily manipulated. But Raven's are not something one should trust as they are also quick to turn on a person if they no longer think them to be in command. Requirements: Raven Effect: Raven's Intelligence and Spirit Stat are locked after approved. They cannot get any boosts to their Spirit or Intelligence stat from Grades. One also cannot buy from any shop outside of Wutai. Cost: None Regeneration Description: Due to their unique physique, Raven's tend to be able to regenerate wounds, even fatal ones. This can be quite a problem when trying to defeat one as they may spring back up after receiving a fatal wound. Killing one is possible if you can figure out how to do it. Requirements: Raven Effect: If Knocked out, Raven's automatically recover from KO status after four posts of being knocked out. This puts their HP at 10% of their max and sets their Limit Break Gauge to 0% Cost: None Enhanced Physique. Description: One of the big challenges Raven's posses is their enhanced physique. They may not be the brightest or most charismatic creatures, but their skill in combat keeps any warrior, even SOLDIER on their toes. Requirements: Be a Raven Effect: Due to the unique Physique, Raven's get a +15 to Strength, +20 to Speed and +10 to Weapon Skill or Hand to Hand. Cost: None Weapons: None Armor: Ninja Clothes Description: [Location:Torso] Leather is a beautiful thing. Especially as part of a ninja's attire. Each joint is enforced with leather. Strength: 10 Durability: 10% Materia Slots: None Material: Leather Weight: 2 Dragon Fighter Gloves Description: [Location:L/R Arms] Two gloves that slide across the top of the wrist. Underneath each guard is a black cloth that covers the arm and straps the plate to it. The cloth continues down to the hand, covering the fingers. The gloves are insulated with bronze which gives a slight boost when used with Thunder attacks (+10% damage). Strength: 16 Durability: 16% Materia Slots: O O Material: Bronze Weight: 4 Accessories: None Materia: None Items: Samsung Trance Description: A Cell Phone of some of the most advanced qualities. The phone has many capabilities including Email, Camera, Voice Recorder and even a Video recorder. Sadly the memory isn't that great so the Video Recorder can only hold five minutes. Weight: 0 Effect: For all your Cell Phone needs Cost: None History: For many years, Byakuya followed in the foot steps of his brother. He trained with him in martial arts, but never excelled any more than he had to. In the many years of his life, he fell into a life of mediocrity. Alcohol and drugs lifted the depression he would find himself in early and often. Now at the age of eighteen, Byakuya has finally pissed off his father. Seeing him as a freeloader, he is forcing the boy to take job after job until he can find a way to support himself. Though most in Wutai hate Shin-Ra, on multiple occasions, his father has told him that they have plenty of job opportunities and he should pick up one like his brother did in SOLDIER. Seeing this as an insult more than a suggestion, the boy has decided to work with the Wutai police department. Though they usually have little crime in the area, Byakuya was enlisted as a detective, the youngest ever in the town. With this current employment, Byakuya steps forward into the world, investigating small arms trafficking and drug deals. Ironically enough, his own drug problems increase as he confiscates more and more contraband. Due to the ninja heritage of the resort town of Wutai, Byakuya trained in Judo and other martial arts. He is opposed to using guns and finds those that do repulsive. In the three years that followed his enlistment into law enforcement, Byakuya decided that he would join a sect of Wutai's R&D program. Unbeknown to him, that program was in reality a front for AVALANCHE scientists. Those scientist corrupted Byakuya's DNA and transformed him into something behind the constructs of normal humans. His true personality remains trapped deep within, and all that remains is an almost-robotic killing machine. Edited by Shin Draven, Dec 9 2009, 11:12 PM.
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| Gin | Dec 9 2009, 01:13 PM Post #2 |
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Ikorose, Shinsou
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Starting Character have 155 stats to start with, Ravens get an extra +45 (+15 Strength, +20 Speed, +10 WS or H2H) and you have 190 points used. This being said you get 10 more points to add because 155 + 45 = 200 and not 190. That being said everything else is good. |
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| Shin Draven | Dec 9 2009, 01:24 PM Post #3 |
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Done...I think. >_> |
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| Gin | Dec 9 2009, 09:14 PM Post #4 |
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Ikorose, Shinsou
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Your starting Gil should be 205 Gil and you need to select the parts of the body your armor protects. |
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| Shin Draven | Dec 9 2009, 10:18 PM Post #5 |
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Done good sir. |
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| Gin | Dec 9 2009, 10:58 PM Post #6 |
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Ikorose, Shinsou
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Everything is in order but before I approve it I wanted to point out two things. First I edited your post to give it a face lift and make it prettier since I was bothered before. Second is that you have 2 abilities though you have room for 3 more with a total of 5. You don't need all 5 abilities but I just want to remind you that you can start with that many. |
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| Shin Draven | Dec 9 2009, 11:13 PM Post #7 |
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I added 2 just for general purpose....but I'm done. |
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| Gin | Dec 9 2009, 11:25 PM Post #8 |
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Ikorose, Shinsou
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I'm going to assume that means you accept my beautification edits along with only wanting those 2 abilities, as such by the powers invested in me I declare you man and character. You may post your first topic. [APPROVED] -Brought to you by Candle Jack. He isn't rea.... |
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| [-Angeles-] | May 12 2011, 02:09 PM Post #9 |
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Ex-Turk
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Fare thee well Children of Crisis, we will miss you |
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