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| Climate | Dec 12 2009, 02:00 AM Post #1 |
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Braver
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Name: Serah Alias: None Race: Human Age: 17 Gender: Female Hometown: Midgar Personality: Serah hates to fight and is shy, but in a harsh situation she will lash out and theres no stopping her, she loves all her friends to bits and would avenge one of their deaths if she had to Appearance: Avatar ;) Details Alignment: 55% Rank: ??? Gil: 100 HP: Determined by total stats MP: Equal to Magic Stat + Intelligence Stats (Lowest a stat can be is 5) Intelligence: 10 Strength: 55 Spirit: 10 Endurance: 25 Magic: 5 Speed: 25 Agility: 25 Skills Weapon Skill 1: Large blade/Claymores Weapon Skill 2: Shurikan Hand to Hand: Casting: 0 Machine Operation 0 Limit Breaks None Techniques None Abilities (List abilities and Unique Abilities here. Max of 5 at all times) Mechanic Item Lore Traits (List the Traits of your race) Human Weapons (May have up to a value of 1,000. See rules for details) Weapon Name: Classic Claymore Description: [Hands:] 2 Handed Blade, LIke The Buster Blade But More Aerodynamic Strength/Durability: Medium Materia Slots: 0 Material: Steel? Weight: 10 Armor (May have up to a value of 250. See rules for details) Weapon Name: None Description: [Hands:] Strength/Durability: Materia Slots: Material: Weight: Accessories None Materia None Items Cell Phone Description: A black flip phone, small and compact, has a very long batterylife but no camera/soundrecording Weight: 5 Effect: Lone Life Battery? Cost: None Anything needs changing please edit it for me |
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| dragonbountyhunter | Dec 12 2009, 10:55 AM Post #2 |
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lost in thought call search and rescue
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ok where to start your appearnce needs to be written out images are fine but we like text to go along with it your hp should be 155 your mp should be 15 your stats add up fine but change the following Weapon Skill 1: Large blade/Claymores Weapon Skill 2: Shurikan to look like this Claymores: 0 Shurikan: 0 you need to edit you abilities so that the ful description is present rather then just the name just copy and paste from teh ability page in rules same goes for your racial traits copy and paste the full description don't just put human as far as the weapon goes you are beyond max weight of the weapon as for 10 weight it would have a strenght of 40 max for steel is only 24 which is also beyond the starting gil for a weapon you have no history you need to add one |
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| Takeru | Dec 12 2009, 10:55 AM Post #3 |
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The White Mage
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Sorry, but we will not be editing for you. I will, however, tell you what needs to be changed and then you can go in and do it yourself. Personality and Appearance both need to be at least two decent paragraphs of roughly five sentences each. Likes and dislikes, examples of how she would react to certain situations, and specific quirks or traits should be included in Personality. For Appearance, you need to describe her body type, hair and eyes, as well as her clothing and general grooming. Any scars or notable birthmarks? Mention it there. You are allowed to calculate your HP and MP. HP equals the sum of all stats (not skills) * 1.3 (since you are a Human and have the Trait Full of Life). MP equals Magic stat plus Intelligence stat. For your skills, put the name of the weapon (Shuriken/Claymore) where it says Weapon Skill 1 and 2, and where you have put the names of the weapons now, place zeroes (or whatever stat amount you would like, keeping in mind your 155 point limit). For Abilities and Traits, please copy-paste the entire thing, not just the name. With Weapons and Armor, you need to follow the format found here. Please use the standard format for the Cell Phone. And you left off the History section, which is a requirement. Two to three good-sized paragraphs, more if you so choose. Finally, you did not use the coding provided (bolding, underlining, etc.). Please put the coding back in at your leisure. |
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| [-Angeles-] | May 12 2011, 02:15 PM Post #4 |
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Ex-Turk
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Fare thee well Children of Crisis, we will miss you |
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