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Serah; Serah
Topic Started: Dec 12 2009, 02:00 AM (37 Views)
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Name: Serah
Alias: None
Race: Human
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Hometown: Midgar
Personality: Serah hates to fight and is shy, but in a harsh situation she will lash out and theres no stopping her, she loves all her friends to bits and would avenge one of their deaths if she had to
Appearance: Avatar ;)

Details
Alignment: 55%
Rank: ???
Gil: 100

HP: Determined by total stats
MP: Equal to Magic Stat + Intelligence


Stats (Lowest a stat can be is 5)

Intelligence: 10
Strength: 55
Spirit: 10
Endurance: 25
Magic: 5
Speed: 25
Agility: 25

Skills

Weapon Skill 1: Large blade/Claymores
Weapon Skill 2: Shurikan
Hand to Hand:
Casting: 0
Machine Operation 0

Limit Breaks
None

Techniques
None

Abilities (List abilities and Unique Abilities here. Max of 5 at all times)
Mechanic
Item Lore


Traits (List the Traits of your race)
Human

Weapons (May have up to a value of 1,000. See rules for details)

Weapon Name: Classic Claymore
Description: [Hands:] 2 Handed Blade, LIke The Buster Blade But More Aerodynamic
Strength/Durability: Medium
Materia Slots: 0
Material: Steel?
Weight: 10

Armor (May have up to a value of 250. See rules for details)

Weapon Name: None
Description: [Hands:]
Strength/Durability:
Materia Slots:
Material:
Weight:

Accessories
None

Materia
None

Items

Cell Phone
Description: A black flip phone, small and compact, has a very long batterylife but no camera/soundrecording
Weight: 5
Effect: Lone Life Battery?
Cost: None


Anything needs changing please edit it for me
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dragonbountyhunter
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ok where to start

your appearnce needs to be written out images are fine but we like text to go along with it

your hp should be 155

your mp should be 15

your stats add up fine but change the following

Weapon Skill 1: Large blade/Claymores
Weapon Skill 2: Shurikan

to look like this

Claymores: 0
Shurikan: 0


you need to edit you abilities so that the ful description is present rather then just the name just copy and paste from teh ability page in rules

same goes for your racial traits copy and paste the full description don't just put human

as far as the weapon goes you are beyond max weight of the weapon as for 10 weight it would have a strenght of 40 max for steel is only 24 which is also beyond the starting gil for a weapon

you have no history you need to add one
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Takeru
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Sorry, but we will not be editing for you. I will, however, tell you what needs to be changed and then you can go in and do it yourself.

Personality and Appearance both need to be at least two decent paragraphs of roughly five sentences each. Likes and dislikes, examples of how she would react to certain situations, and specific quirks or traits should be included in Personality. For Appearance, you need to describe her body type, hair and eyes, as well as her clothing and general grooming. Any scars or notable birthmarks? Mention it there.

You are allowed to calculate your HP and MP.

HP equals the sum of all stats (not skills) * 1.3 (since you are a Human and have the Trait Full of Life).

MP equals Magic stat plus Intelligence stat.

For your skills, put the name of the weapon (Shuriken/Claymore) where it says Weapon Skill 1 and 2, and where you have put the names of the weapons now, place zeroes (or whatever stat amount you would like, keeping in mind your 155 point limit).

For Abilities and Traits, please copy-paste the entire thing, not just the name.

With Weapons and Armor, you need to follow the format found here.

Please use the standard format for the Cell Phone.

And you left off the History section, which is a requirement. Two to three good-sized paragraphs, more if you so choose.

Finally, you did not use the coding provided (bolding, underlining, etc.). Please put the coding back in at your leisure.
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Fare thee well Children of Crisis, we will miss you
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