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My Fanfic; ..Well it doesn't fit with books.
Topic Started: Jun 18 2006, 12:17 PM (285 Views)
Rinoa
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...Is this the right place to be putting this? The only user-creation forum thing I can find is for graphics, and this isn't graphics...And I don't think it's spam either...*embarassed*

Here's a fanfic I wrote. It's basically a combination of Rocky Horror Picture Show and Final Fantasy. It's got characters from Final Fantasy VII and VIII in it. Please read?
...An enemy that is pure evil? Right and wrong are not what separate us and our enemies. It's our different standpoints, our perspectives that separate us. Both sides blame one another. There's no good or bad side. Just 2 sides holding different views.

~Squall Leonhart
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Bob 121
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Interesting choice in a crossover. Hmmm...... Well, I've never seen the Rocky Horror Picture Show and I have a limited knowledge on the subject of Final Fantasy so I doubt that I'm the best person to review this type of story but it seemed pretty good and based off the reviews you got it seemed that people really liked it so you must've done pretty good. As a fellow author I can say that from a grammar and content standpoint you did pretty well and I know how much us writers like reviews. I'd say you wrote it pretty well. Sorry I couldn't have been of more help.
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I liked it Imagining Squall Singing was priceless :banana:
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Rinoa
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Jun 22 2006, 02:00 AM
Interesting choice in a crossover. Hmmm...... Well, I've never seen the Rocky Horror Picture Show and I have a limited knowledge on the subject of Final Fantasy so I doubt that I'm the best person to review this type of story but it seemed pretty good and based off the reviews you got it seemed that people really liked it so you must've done pretty good. As a fellow author I can say that from a grammar and content standpoint you did pretty well and I know how much us writers like reviews. I'd say you wrote it pretty well. Sorry I couldn't have been of more help.

:D Thanks. I tried to do my best with grammar. I hate opening up what looks like it'll be a good fanfic, and never being able to understand a word of it.
...An enemy that is pure evil? Right and wrong are not what separate us and our enemies. It's our different standpoints, our perspectives that separate us. Both sides blame one another. There's no good or bad side. Just 2 sides holding different views.

~Squall Leonhart
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Rinoa
Jun 22 2006, 12:37 PM
Bob 121
Jun 22 2006, 02:00 AM
Interesting choice in a crossover. Hmmm...... Well, I've never seen the Rocky Horror Picture Show and I have a limited knowledge on the subject of Final Fantasy so I doubt that I'm the best person to review this type of story but it seemed pretty good and based off the reviews you got it seemed that people really liked it so you must've done pretty good. As a fellow author I can say that from a grammar and content standpoint you did pretty well and I know how much us writers like reviews. I'd say you wrote it pretty well. Sorry I couldn't have been of more help.

:D Thanks. I tried to do my best with grammar. I hate opening up what looks like it'll be a good fanfic, and never being able to understand a word of it.

I know that's the worst nothing ruins a fanfic more then not being able to understand it due to bad grammar and they seem to misspell the easiest words.
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Yeah, it kinda grates on my nerves when people misspell really easy words.
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I liked it, can't wait to see more of your work. :clap:
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Rinoa
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Thanks. Speaking of which, I've started two new stories...

Premonitions and The Highway Man. They're both FFVIII fics, and I've got an update schedule on my profile on the website.
...An enemy that is pure evil? Right and wrong are not what separate us and our enemies. It's our different standpoints, our perspectives that separate us. Both sides blame one another. There's no good or bad side. Just 2 sides holding different views.

~Squall Leonhart
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Cool, gotta check em' out sometime. :)
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