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| PathToTheDusk | May 18 2007, 07:28 PM Post #61 |
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fal'Cie Omega
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What the i just get into the story again and now you're rewriting the beginning chapters yet another time?,Dude seriously maybe you should start a new thread with the new and improved chapters. All you need do is copy/paste them from this thread and post them in the new one and this way you can add the rest of the chapters to them and it'll be less confusing. Don't worry about closing or removing the old thread, once you've established the new thread and no longer require this one for reference then i'll move it to the archives. Of course you could always just stick with this thread, but i sure i'm not the only one who'll have a tough time keeping the story straight, what with you remaking the chapters you've already wrote on a regular basis. |
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| Bob 121 | May 18 2007, 10:27 PM Post #62 |
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I know and I apologize...
I didn't rewrite any of the chapters, I just added onto them. The original chapters I'd written were just bumped back a number. Sorry for the confusion. What did you think of it though?
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| Specialist290 | May 19 2007, 09:51 AM Post #63 |
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Actually, according to my grammar schoolbook, going back, rewriting, and editing your stuff is recommended as a way to improve your writing, and you should never just go w/ your initial draft. I've written "brilliant" first drafts that contained a multitude of grammar mistakes when I went back and looked over them, so I can't fault you there, Bob. Still, it would be less confusing if, when you get this thing finished, you did go back and post it all in one thread in the right order
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| Bob 121 | May 19 2007, 12:28 PM Post #64 |
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Well I did go back and adjust the chapter numbers but I know what you mean. For those who are completely affected by it I suggest you read it on my DA site cause I'll have it all in order there. |
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| PathToTheDusk | May 19 2007, 05:16 PM Post #65 |
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fal'Cie Omega
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I knew it wasn't just me. And your story is great Bob, just hard for me to follow along with it being in the order it's in on here is all. |
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| Bob 121 | May 19 2007, 05:44 PM Post #66 |
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I apologize... How's about I make a separate thread for the story while discussion stays here? |
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| Bob 121 | May 19 2007, 06:01 PM Post #67 |
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Shit, everythings all messed up.. I'll post the most recent in the new proditio thread in a bit. I sincerely apologize to everyone for this stupidity...
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I didn't rewrite any of the chapters, I just added onto them. The original chapters I'd written were just bumped back a number. Sorry for the confusion.
What did you think of it though?



10:51 AM Jul 11