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Is pictar.
Topic Started: Dec 16 2008, 01:19 AM (327 Views)
Thunder
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¿lolqué?
I had a project in digital art where we basically had to take bajillions of pictures. I didn't have a particularly good turnout on this project, but I managed to take some shots that I likeddd.
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Posted Image -was too lazy to photoshop herself out of this one- <_<;;
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Posted Image Yeah, I made my friend tie a scarf around her head and jump around my house with a Mexiblanket out of sheer lack of better ideas. '___'

Critique is greatly appreciated. 8D Except on the last one. I just like that one. -Shot-
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Robin
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Epic Failure
The star = awesome.

As for the last one...


xDDDD

Brilliant!
Where can your lipstick bring us?
Show me your magic,
Cool Guy.


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Hunni
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Critique: if it were at nighttime, with lights, the blur on the pagoda would look neat. As it is, it just looks a little amateurish. Try to hold the camera a little more still or put it on a faster shutter speed [altho it looks kinda cloudy, so a faster shutter speed prolly woulda made it kinda dark, huh?]
Also, the star is blurry too. Was it moving? Maybe wait until it is holding still next time. xD
The landscape lacks interest because there is nothing in the foreground. If you had moved up to that tree in the midground and shot the picture through its branches or something, or crouched down low and gotten a flower or some blades of grass in the shot, it would have been more visually stimulating.

BEYOND THAT.
I less than three them all. Except the landscape because it really is a little boring. ^^; Altho it is the Big GG, so it gets super ++ points from me anyways, which puts it back up there with the best of them. BD
do you choose the plastic? or the real?
man i choose the plastic.

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Thunder
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¿lolqué?
Ooh, I didn't notice the blur on the pagoda before. =x -Hopes she won't get marked down for it-
And as for the star, I think it was the lens I was using. xD I reaaally wanted to experiment with a macro lens, but I was only borrowing that camera and didnt really have time to. =(

But thanks you guys! <3
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Hunni
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You're welcome. =3333 What was that star-thing, anyways? A bead or something?
do you choose the plastic? or the real?
man i choose the plastic.

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Thunder
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¿lolqué?
It's this little glass ornament. -Collects crystals/glass things-
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Hunni
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I see. Yea, my mom gave me a ton of glass animals when I was little, so you could say that I collect them [except I don', really. Cuz I dun buy them for myself. xD].
do you choose the plastic? or the real?
man i choose the plastic.

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Protothor
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Basically, yeah. What Nat said.

With the stay, either focus on the front or the back so that the rest of the star unfocuses uniformly; the center-focus makes it seem like you just took pictars for pictars. Also, either cut off more of it, or capture the whole ornament, because with only that one bit off the frame it looks like you missed it on accident.

/superphotocritique. D:


That christmas ornament one absolutely stunning, though I would suggest not using flash, unless the room was darker than it looks like it is. Because the objects in the picture are emitting light, flash will often overwash the frame. :]

Otherthenthat, stunning.
Edited by Protothor, Dec 21 2008, 05:00 PM.

Why so serious, son.
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