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Jon's Updates LIMITED; Read the original post before posting
Topic Started: Feb 2 2009, 07:51 PM (326 Views)
Jon
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First of all, I will need you to understand one thing: Only post in this thread if you have asked me and gotten permission for it. It is basically for updates that I will want to take care of, for one reason or another. <br>
Alright? <br>
Updates placed here without my prior approval will not be done. <br>
Secondly, I will need you to fill out this form for your update: <p>
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<u>Character Name</u>: (the character's name)
<br><u>Profile Link</u>: (a link to the character's profile)
<br><u>Kind of update</u>: (group, solo, arena, pay, so on.)
<br><u>Thread Link</u>: (a link to the thread)
<br><u>Other</u>: Such as how you wish to spend the gained XP or pay.
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LordX1095
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<u>Character Name</u>: Dex-Star
<br><u>Profile Link</u>: THE RAGE CAT
<br><u>Kind of update</u>: Secret Origin
<br><u>Thread Link</u>: Meow
<br><u>Other</u>:
<br> 1687 words/3 = 562 xp gained
<br> 562 + 40 (that was on bio) = 602xp
<br>
<br> <u> Buying</u>:
<br> +3 levels of energy bolts > Cost 600xp (200xp/lvl)
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<br> xp spent: 600
<br> xp remaining: 2



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Jon
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Done
 
EnlightenedInsanity
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Your update thread seemed lonely over here

Spending the xp from WW's origin post to buy two IoP's

IOP – Bracers of the Aegis (540/lvl): Bracers formed from the mighty Aegis, forged by the great Hephaestus, given to Diana as a birthday present from the Lord Zeus, these braces help Diana to defend herself– lvl 1
- Defensive (300/lvl)
- Bullet Proof (240/lvl)

IOP – Lasso (40/lvl + 300): An unbreakable Lasso that forces anyone in its grasp to speak nothing but the truth – lvl 1
- Unbreakable (300)
- Truth Seeking Empathy w/ alter mood (40/lvl)
- One Target Only

So that is going to cost me 880 xp, leaving me with 560 on my bio
Link: http://z13.invisionfree.com/JusticeRPG/ind...p?showtopic=192
Thanks man!
 
Henuki
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<u>Character Name</u>: Hal Jordan
<br><u>Profile Link</u>: http://z13.invisionfree.com/JusticeRPG/ind...p?showtopic=133
<br><u>Kind of update</u>: Secret Origin
<br><u>Thread Link</u>: http://z13.invisionfree.com/JusticeRPG/ind...15&#entry539016
<br><u>Other</u>: Ok with a Total of 1480 on my bio I would like to by +2 Lv of Force Blast, +1 Lv of Force Field, +1 Lv of energy Constuct and +1 Lv of Flight leaving me with 30Xp Thank you!
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Jon
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Abusse
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<u>Character Name</u>: Spark Point
<br><u>Profile Link</u>: Spark Point
<br><u>Kind of update</u>: Secret Origin cash in, and a Solo-RP
<br><u>Thread Link</u>: Secret Origin, James Kim, Solo
<br><u>Other</u>: 2042 words, /2.75= 743 XP for secret origin thread. 4543 XP for solo /5 = 909 XP
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909+743= 1652 with my existing 462 gives me 2114 to play with.
<br><br>
Increasing Forcefield a level, mastery of electricity a level, acrobatics and targetting 3 levels. That makes 1623 spent total, which should leave Spark Point with 491 to spare.

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Jon
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The Secret Origins thread gives words /3, not words /2.75

Done
 
LordX1095
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Bio Link: http://z13.invisionfree.com/JusticeRPG/ind...=170&st=0&#last


Ok the fix on Cyborg's bio b/c I didn't know that the cybernetic parts gained a discount as well (and that cybernetic legs could count as both legs)... anyways the changes:


Removed Left Cybernetic leg +200xp to xp left to use / -200xp from used xp

Renamed Right Cybernetic leg to Cybernetic legs and edited discription.


XP from the discounts on each cybernetic part:

Head = 5% of 300 = 15xp
-Biocomputing: 5% of 450 = 23xp (power cost: 427)

Eye = 5% of 100 = 5xp
-Vision Enhanced: 5% of 263xp = 13xp (power cost: 250)

Body = 5% of 300= 15xp
-Robotic: 5% of 600xp = 30xp (Power cost: 570)

R.Arm = 5% of 200 = 10xp
-Sonic Cannon: 5% of 563xp = 28xp (Power cost: 535)
-Cybermorphics: 5% of 200xp = 10xp (Power cost: 190)


L.Arm = 200 - 5% = 10xp
<br>~Enhanced Cybernetic Strength: 5% of 800xp = 40xp (powe cost: 760xp)


total: 199 xp to xp left to use / -199 from used xp


The Lv.0 power I have on his left arm would now cost the following:

Self-Controled Rockets: 825xp - 5% = 784xp/lvl



and thus the bio should now look like the below:

(pretty much it was 399 added to xp left to use & 399 subtracted from xp used)


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|LordX1095|
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|Theme Music|
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Theme - Track - Artist
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Theme - Track - Artist
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|Personal Information|
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<b><i>Name:</i></b>
Victor Stone
<br>
<b><i>Alias:</i></b>
Cyborg
<br>
<b><i>Race:</i></b>
Human-Cyborg
<br>
<b><i>Gender:</i></b>
Male
<br>
<b><i>Age:</i></b>
16
<br>
<b><i>Height:</i></b>
6ft 6'
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<b><i>Weight:</i></b>
385lbs
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<b><i>Hair:</i></b>
Black
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<b><i>Eyes:</i></b>
Brown
<br>
<b><i>Alignment:</i></b>
Netural-Good
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<b><i>Personality:</i></b>
Despite everything, Victor tries to keep a good attitude about his life and towards others; However, he can get angry at times and often depressed about his situation (It's not easy being mostly machine)
<br>
<b><i>Team:</i></b>
Teen Titans
<br>
<b><i>Secret Origin:</i></b>
Technology (5% discount to IOP & Power Armour powers / can't gain natural powers)
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|Statistics|
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<b><i>Total Experience Gained:</i></b>
0
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<b><i>Experience Points Left To Use:</i></b>
399
<br>
<b><i>Experience Points Used:</i></b>
5901

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<b><i>Strength:</i></b>
4
<br>
<b><i>Agility:</i></b>
3
<br>
<b><i>Accuracy:</i></b>
3
<br>
<b><i>Durability:</i></b>
4
<br>
<b><i>Will Power:</i></b>
1
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<U>Armour Statistics</U>

<br>Experience Points put into armor: 524
<br>Experience Points bought for armor: 0
<BR>Experience Points for armor: 629
<BR>Experience points left to use: 49
<BR>Experience Points used: 580

<br><br>
<U>Armour Stats</U>
<br><b><I>A.I.: 1 </I></b>

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|Powers|
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<U>Enhancements</U>
<br><br>

<b><i>Head - 285xp:</i></b>
<br>~Power: Biocomputing (427xp)
<br>~Info: : The cybernetic parts installed in Cyborg's head/mind allows his brain to work like a computer.
<br><br>

<b><i>Eyes - 95xp:</i></b>
<br>~Power: Vision Enhanced (+250xp)
<br><font color=000000>___________</font>~Options: Darkness (+56xp), Infrared (+56xp), X-Ray (+150xp)
<br>~Info: Cyborg's left eye is cybernetic and it grants him various kinds of vision.
<br><br>

<b><i>Body - 285xp:</i></b>
<br>~Power: Robotic (570xp)
<br>~Info: Cyborg's body has been replaced with a lot of cybernetic parts and thus has made him a lot more robotic then human. Though he still feels pain, he is immunue to telepathy & the telepathic element (Technopathy is a worry), he is immune to poison, he can not die via blood loss, and he is not affected by Pressure Points.
<br><br>

<b><i>Right Arm - 190xp:</i></b>
<br>~Power: Sonic Cannon (sonic element, Aftershock, Armour piercing) - Lv.1 - 563xp/lvl (535xp)
<br>~Cybermorphics(+190xp)
<br>~Info: Cyborg's right arm was fitted with a Sonic Cannon that can fire out a powerful blast of sonic waves that can punch a hole through most things and has an aftershock effect.
<br><br>

<b><i>Left arm - 190xp:</i></b>
<br>~Power: Self-Controled Rockets (fire element, Area effect of 20 feet, Aftershock, Armour Piercing, Control) - Lv.0 - 784xp/lvl (0xp)
<br>~Enhanced Cybernetic Strength (+1 to strength/durability)(760xp)
<br>~Info: Cyborg's left arm is fitted with a rocket launhing weapon can can fire specialized rockets that Cyborg can control when he fires them out. These rockets explode on contact, dealing fire damage in an area of up to 20 feet with an aftershock effect. They are powerful enough to pierce through most substances.
<br><br>

<b><i>Legs - 190xp:</i></b>
<br>~Power: N/A
<br>~Info: These are Cyborg's two cybernetic legs; as of right now they has no special powers.
<br><br>

<B><I>Molybdenum-steel laced Bones (600xp): </I></B>
<br>~Info: Cyborg's bones, the actual ones that remain, have been reinforced with molybdenum-steel, making them almost impossible to break.
<BR><BR>


<b><i>Bionic Self-Repair - Lv.0 - 250xp/lvl (0xp):</i></b>
<br>~Info: Cyborg's cybernetics are able to repair themselves.
<br><br>

<U>Power Armour Powers</U><br><br>

Armour Information: Complete with his cybernetic parts, an armour was crafted onto Cyborg as well.
<br><br>

<b><i>Minimal - 380xp:</i></b>
Vic's power armour does not provide him with any real physical advantages (stats). It was not needed because of his cybernetic parts does that for him.
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<b><i>Power Coming soon:</i></b>
<br>~Info: N/A
<br><br>

<b><i>Power Coming Soon:</i></b>
<br>~Info: N/A
<br><br>

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|Skills|
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<b><i>I.Q. - Lv.8 - 100xp/lvl (800xp):</i></b>
<br>~Info: Vic has an extremly high IQ (most of this is due to the amount of cybernetics that was placed into his mind).
<br><br>

<b><i>Fighting Skills - Lv.0 - 200xp/lvl (0xp):</i></b>
<br>~Info: Being a member of the Teen Titans, Cyborg will be trained to fight.

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|Challenges|
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<b><i>Cyborg (+400xp):</i></b>
Cyborg is a cyborg and thus is often looked apon as a freak by society.
<br><br>

<b><i>Special Vulnerability to Magnetism (+600xp):</i></b>
Since he's made of a hell of a lot of metal, Cyborg is greatly effected by magnetic attacks.
<br><br>

<b><i>No secret identity (+500xp):</i></b>
Being a member of the Teen Titans, Cyborg is often in the spot light and does not have any kind of secret identity to keep him or his family/friends safe.
<br><br>

<b><i>Vulnerable Loved Ones (+400xp):</i></b>
Though his parents are protected by Lex Corp, Cyborgs activities as a member of the Teen Titans can still cause them trouble.
<br><br>

<b><i>Needs charging (Chronic Condition)(+400xp):</i></b>
When Cyborg is using the powers of his cybernetics or from his power armor it drains him of his energy. If he is fully drained he needs to be recharged or he will die after a period of time.

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|Inventory|
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<b><i>Occupation:</i></b>
Drummer
<br>
<b><i>Money:</i></b>
0
<br>
<b><i>Items:</i></b>
0
<br>
<b><i>Weapons:</i></b>
only from his cybernetic parts
<br>
<b><i>Armour:</i></b>
His Cyborg Armour
<br>
<b><i>Transport:</i></b>
0
<br>
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|Origin|
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Victor Stone was once your average teenager. He would hang out with his friends, play basketball after school, try to get a date with the girl he had his eyes on, and overall dreamed of great success in the future. Though not everything in life goes as planned and for Victor, his life would come shattering down in a thousand pieces. Victor lived in a nearby small town with his uncle... His parents did not want him to be exposed to the city life; however, Victor would often go into the city every few weeks to visit his parents. They worked at one of LexCorp's technological facilities and their busy work schedule was what fored them to live in the city. Well on one faithful trip to visit his parents, Victor was involved in a very brutal car accident. The accident had left most of his body shattered, deformed, and pure out mutilated. His parents though did not want to see their son die like this. Thus they begged Lex Luthor to help save their son. It was agreed, but the deal involved Victor becoming much more then just a boy with Cybernetic parts... He would become a "heroic weapon..." For six long months they worked on Victor, equiping him with the best of the best cybernetic parts and a specialized power armour to keep his body in check. <br><br> Once Victor was ready to go back into the public again, he was given the name of Cyborg and was given a place on the new band/Super hero group known as the Teen Titans. He is the heavy hitter, he is the Cyborg, and he can rock out on the drums!

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EnlightenedInsanity
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hey dude, already told you about my weekend, so im a bit late in asking for my manager pay from last week. if you wouldnt mind taking all 600 from my loan, i would be grateful

loan link: http://z13.invisionfree.com/JusticeRPG/ind...p?showtopic=175
Bio Link: http://z13.invisionfree.com/JusticeRPG/ind...p?showtopic=195
 
Jon
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Done
 
{Zaya Ayame}
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Character Name: Starfire
Profile Link: 'http://z13.invisionfree.com/JusticeRPG/index.php?showtopic=178'
Kind of update: [url=Secret Origins]http://z13.invisionfree.com/JusticeRPG/index.php?showtopic=202&st=15[/URL]
Other: +1,000 XP to Starfire's Gained XP

Character Name: Deathstroke
Profile Link: 'http://z13.invisionfree.com/JusticeRPG/index.php?showtopic=227'
Kind of update: http://z13.invisionfree.com/JusticeRPG/ind...wtopic=260'
Other: +400 to Slade's Money xD

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Now, onto XP usage ^^:

Zaya: -300 XP to increase Prescience to Lvl 3
-225 to increase Acrobatics to Lvl 8
Totals XP used: 525 - 1,105 = 580 XP left

Deathstroke: -400 to increase Enhanced Healing Factor to Lvl 2
-300 to increase Prescience to Lvl 2
Totals XP Used: 700 - 1,005 = 315 XP left

(I'll do starfire later after you get her XP in ^^)

Thanks, Jon! You're awesome! -Hugs- =D
 
Jon
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umm... Zaya... one thing... you've done it in the wrong order with the Links and Text that links... the first you enter should be the site, while the second should be the text... so, the code for Starfire's profile should look like this:

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[URL=http://z13.invisionfree.com/JusticeRPG/index.php?showtopic=178]Starfire[/URL]


Which makes it appear like this:

Starfire

So, please fix that in your post ^^
 
Jon
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Done

Just remember to do the links like that next time... and to link to all the profiles you want me to do something on (including Zaya's :P)
 
LordX1095
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GFX needing rating Here


Money to go into paying off loan Here

(missed a few weeks on loan payments, but will be doing Lobo job posts tonight for weeks I missed when pc was down and net was crappy)
 
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