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The Green Arrow; Oliver Queen
Topic Started: Feb 8 2009, 04:36 PM (307 Views)
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<b><i>Name:</i></b>
Oliver 'Ollie' Thomas Queen
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<b><i>Alias:</i></b>
Green Arrow
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<b><i>Race:</i></b>
Human
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<b><i>Gender:</i></b>
Male
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<b><i>Age:</i></b>
28
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<b><i>Height:</i></b>
6ft 2in
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<b><i>Weight:</i></b>
210lbs
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<b><i>Hair:</i></b>
Dirty Blonde
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<b><i>Eyes:</i></b>
Brown
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<b><i>Alignment:</i></b>
Chaotic Good
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<b><i>Personality:</i></b>
Ollie is a good natured man at heart, although it is harder to see when he is in costume as Green Arrow. He will always help his friends if they need it and counts his best friends as close as family.
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<b><i>Team:</i></b>
None
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<b><i>Secret Origin:</i></b>
Trained - Fighting and Knowledge Skills x0.95, Powers and IoPs x1.05
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<b><i>Experience Points Left To Use:</i></b>
192
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<b><i>Experience Points Used:</i></b>
7158
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<b><i>Strength:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Agility:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Accuracy:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Durability:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Will Power:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>IoP - Composite Bow & Arrows: lvl 1:</i></b>
When he decided to become a crime fighter, Ollie knew that he would have to have equipment, to make him as effective as the old Heroes. For this purpose, he designed and had a composite bow and special arrows built by a separate contractor. The arrows are essentially regular arrows, painted green with lightweight, strong shafts, designed to be easily carried but strong enough to penetrate steel plates of certain thicknesses. - Replaceable: 200xp <u>once</u>, Piercing: 180xp/lvl, Force Blast (Metal): 250xp/lvl (212xp/lvl), One Target Only: -100xp/lvl - 292xp/lvl - 200xp <u>Once</u>
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<b><i>Hand Crossbow: lvl 1:</i></b>
Ollie recognises that not everyone is guilty but his cover must be maintained. For this reason, he carries a prototype hand crossbow. The small, single handed crossbow can fire a sedating dart at high power accurately over a distance of up to one hundred metres. It reloads itself using the kinetic energy, reducing the need for Ollie to use two hands when using it, and can fire ten darts in five seconds. The Crossbow also, however, doubles as a grapnel gun to help Ollie get to hard to reach places. This is especially useful in metropolis where the landscape necessitates a mechanism for moving vertically. - Force Blast (Poison-Sleep): 250xp/lvl (212xp/lvl), Replaceable: 200xp <u>once</u>, Piercing: 180xp/lvl, Slinging: 75xp/lvl (64xp/lvl), One Power Only: -50xp (Pheromones&Slinging), One Target Only: -100xp - 306xp/lvl - 200xp <u>Once</u>
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<b><i>I.Q: lvl 7:</i></b>
Oliver Queen is an extremely intelligent man, breaching genius level intellect. He might not be the most intelligent man on the planet but he comes quite close. - 100xp/lvl
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<b><i>Wealth: lvl 10:</i></b>
Ollie owns Queen Industries, a global company with offices in London, Paris, New York, Gotham and Metropolis, his home city. Under his leadership, the company has thrived and he is one of the richest men in the world, by far, giving him some very influential friends. - 200xp/lvl
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<b><i>High School Graduate:</i></b>
Ollie graduated from Excelsior Academy in Metropolis with all the knowledge that the first class foundation could give him. - 142xp
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<b><i>Fighting Skill: lvl 1:</i></b>
Oliver has trained himself under martial arts masters to achieve physical prowess and to master a series of disciplines. He knows that to fight crime he has to be extremely experienced in hand to hand combat, despite the fact that he hopes to keep criminals further off. - 190xp/lvl
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<b><i>Piloting: lvl 1:</i></b>
Millionaire Playboys always like to have their hobbies, for Ollie that happens to be primarily archery, but on the side, he enjoys flying. Primarily this involves his company jet which serves as a base of operations when he leaves metropolis, although he has learnt to fly other craft besides. - 190xp/lvl
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<b><i>Stealth: lvl 4:</i></b>
As Green Arrow, Ollie observes that people rarely notice what they don't expect, so if he stands in the shadows then they are likely not to notice him until it is too late. But 'likely' isn't 'definitely' so Ollie has studied ways of blending into his surroundings. He knows how to move silently and blend into the shadows properly, as well as which guard to take out so that the other one won't notice. - 142xp/lvl
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<b><i>Targeting, non powered: lvl 10:</i></b>
Having first learnt how to string a bow and hunt with it on the desert island, Ollie has mastered the skill of archery and can hit a specific country on the Daily Planet Globe from his balcony on Queen tower. He uses the skill now to hunt criminals and to try to track down the men who ordered the hit on his parents. - Any Weapon - 237xp/lvl
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<b><i>Only Human:</i></b>
Ollie is by no means anything other than pure red blooded human. His skills are honed and produced only by rigorous training on his own behalf. He trains every day to maintain his physical peak and uses trademark arrows to fight crime, but by no means is he bullet proof. - 1500xp
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<b><i>Major Haunted Past:</i></b>
Ollie's parents were murdered in front of his eyes on their private yacht by the captain of the vessel and Ollie was forced to jump overboard to avoid a similar fate. He was washed up on a desert island were he was forced to fight for his survival. He will never forget the horror of waking up every day to the burning sun on that god forsaken island to the memory that his parents were dead and that he was very likely not to survive. But he did, and now the memory drives him to search for the man who ordered the hit on Ollie's parents. - 600xp
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<b><i>Outlaw:</i></b>
The Green Arrow's actions have been condemned by the Metropolis Police Department although he has proven fairly effective at clearing the streets of crime. - 350xp
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<b><i>Major Deadly Enemies:</i></b>
Ollie has been working against the Mob, in the understanding that of all the people in Metropolis, they are the most likely to have ordered the hit, they had the resources to do so, and the incentive. He has pissed off some very high up people and intends to keep doing so until an arrow can coax them to give him a name. - 600xp
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<b><i>Guilty Conscience:</i></b>
During his first few months as the Green Arrow, Ollie's arrows didn't always fly to only incapacitating targets. He killed three men before realising that killing didn't help and that eventually he'd only lose himself. So now he aims at hands or feet, to disarm or incapacitate, unless he faces someone who would kill him first without a second thought, and he has no other option. - 300xp
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<b><i>Occupation:</i></b>
CEO of Queen Industries
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<b><i>Money:</i></b>
0$
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<b><i>Items:</i></b>
None
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<b><i>Weapons:</i></b>
None
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<b><i>Armour:</i></b>
Green Arrow Leather Costume
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<b><i>Transport:</i></b>
None
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Oliver Queen was born to Patrick and Kirsten Queen at their apartment at Queen Tower. He attended the best education facilities available to his parents and made friends quickly, a friendly, kind boy who had no problem with doing favours for people. His parents were immensely proud of him and he thrived with their love. As he grew up, he saw the good life, but at the same time was observant of Metropolis's underworld, watching the news often and seeing the crime which the city experienced. He began to attend Excelsior Academy and met several faces who would become prominent business men in the future. He took several extra curricular courses such as archery and survival skills which would eventually prove to be excellent foresight.
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<b>Death and Survival</b>
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During a cruise aboard the Queen yacht, when he was nineteen, Ollie was enjoying the company of his parents as they sat below during a storm, playing a game of Risk. His father was winning when suddenly the captain of the yacht, who was part bodyguard and part lifeguard at the same time, appeared in the doorway and shot Patrick in the back of the head. Ollie's mother screamed and they both ducked as the man fired again. She screamed at him to run and, too frightened to do anything else, Ollie obeyed. He careened out the door as another shot sounded, stopping his mother's screams. Ollie leapt overboard in terror, and struck out strongly
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After swimming until the boat was out of sight, Ollie found himself out of his depth, the storm sapped his energy and washed him this way and that, until he finally lost consciousness.
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He woke on a beach, and was initially confused until he realised what had happened. He must have wept for hours before he decided to get up and try to at least save himself. Using some of the skills he had from school, he made a rough shelter and a fire to be seen by ships. Making a bow by using a pen knife from his pocket, he also managed to shoot some of the wildlife, giving himself food to eat as he wasn't sure which plants were edible.
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<b>Discovery and Freedom</b>
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Ollie was finally rescued, after three months on the island, and was hailed as the CEO of Queen industries. His father had taught him everything he needed to know and now he managed the company efficiently, even providing expansion. He never forgot his parents' murder and tracked down the man who killed them, only to find him dead. Ollie knew that someone must have paid him for the hit, and knew that the police wouldn't do anything about it. So he took it upon himself to find the culprit by fighting the crime in Metropolis and the surrounding cities to find who paid for the hit on his parents. He became a vigilante named the Green Arrow, and honed his skills to fight crime and stop the event from ever repeating itself.
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I must admit, I'm tempted to not allow the character, simply because you use the Smallville pics for him... I really would prefer if you used the normal look... just beacuse it's that much more awesome.

Powers

Composite Bow And Arrows: You're forgetting the 5% increase to the once costs... also, you wouldn't add Piercing to the IoP, but to the Force Blast, seeing as how its the arrows and not the bow that's piercing...

Hand Crossbow: Same as above.

Skills

Fighting Skills: The description makes no sense at this level.

Targeting: Given the height of the globe above the ground... that's a pretty impressive shot for someone without any special strength.

Wealth: Level 10 Wealth? You do realize how INSANELY rich that is, right? Never saw Green Arrow as being THAT rich myself.

Origin

Metropolis is not and have not been in the throes of the underworld. For that, you want Gotham or Blüdhaven. Metropolis is in general a much brighter, shining and less criminal city.

And if it was in Metropolis, there's a better chance of it being Intergang than the mob...

Why did he wait almost 10 years before becoming Green Arrow?
 
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<b><i>Name:</i></b>
Oliver 'Ollie' Thomas Queen
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<b><i>Alias:</i></b>
Green Arrow
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<b><i>Race:</i></b>
Human
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<b><i>Gender:</i></b>
Male
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<b><i>Age:</i></b>
28
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6ft 2in
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210lbs
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Dirty Blonde
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Brown
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<b><i>Alignment:</i></b>
Chaotic Good
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<b><i>Personality:</i></b>
Ollie is a good natured man at heart, although it is harder to see when he is in costume as Green Arrow. He will always help his friends if they need it and counts his best friends as close as family.
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<b><i>Team:</i></b>
None
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<b><i>Secret Origin:</i></b>
Trained - Fighting and Knowledge Skills x0.95, Powers and IoPs x1.05
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<b><i>Experience Points Left To Use:</i></b>
128
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<b><i>Experience Points Used:</i></b>
6522
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<b><i>Strength:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Agility:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Accuracy:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Durability:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>IoP - Composite Bow & Arrows: lvl -:</i></b>
When he decided to become a crime fighter, Ollie knew that he would have to have equipment, to make him as effective as the old Heroes. For this purpose, he designed and had a composite bow and special arrows built by a separate contractor. The arrows are essentially regular arrows, painted green with lightweight, strong shafts, designed to be easily carried but strong enough to penetrate steel plates of certain thicknesses. -
- Replaceable: 200xp once,
- Force Blast (Metal): 250xp/lvl wi. Amour Piercing = +200xp, One Target Only: -100xp/lvl = 350xp/lvl
Total Cost: 350x0.8x1.05 = 294xp/lvl and 210xp once
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<b><i>Hand Crossbow: lvl -:</i></b>
Ollie recognises that not everyone is guilty but his cover must be maintained. For this reason, he carries a prototype hand crossbow. The small, single handed crossbow can fire a sedating dart at high power accurately over a distance of up to one hundred metres. It reloads itself using the kinetic energy, reducing the need for Ollie to use two hands when using it, and can fire ten darts in five seconds. The Crossbow also, however, doubles as a grapnel gun to help Ollie get to hard to reach places. This is especially useful in metropolis where the landscape necessitates a mechanism for moving vertically. -
- Force Blast (Poison) (250 XP/lvl). Armour Piercing (+200 XP/lvl), One Power Only [Slinging] (-50 XP/lvl), One Target Only (-100 XP/lvl), Disabling Effect (+300 XP/lvl), Power Deals No Damage (-300 XP/lvl) = 300 XP/lvl
- Slinging (75 XP/lvl). One Power Only [Force Blast] (-50 XP/lvl) = 50 XP/lvl
- Replaceable (200 XP once).
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<b><i>I.Q: lvl 7:</i></b>
Oliver Queen is an extremely intelligent man, breaching genius level intellect. He might not be the most intelligent man on the planet but he comes quite close. - 100xp/lvl
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<b><i>Wealth: lvl 8:</i></b>
Ollie owns Queen Industries, a global company with offices in London, Paris, New York, Gotham and Metropolis, his home city. Under his leadership, the company has thrived and he is one of the richest men in the world, by far, giving him some very influential friends. His parents left him an incredible amount of money when they died, money which has multiplied under his deft control of Queen Industries. - 200xp/lvl
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<b><i>High School Graduate:</i></b>
Ollie graduated from Excelsior Academy in Metropolis with all the knowledge that the first class foundation could give him. - 142xp
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<b><i>Fighting Skill: lvl 1:</i></b>
Oliver recognises the fact that archery might be a useful skill, but it doesn't always succeed and there may be times when he can't rely on his bow or crossbow to get him out of trouble. For this reason, he has begun training under several martial arts masters, in an effort to discourage his enemies from getting too close. He is a fair brawler, and learning to be better. - 190xp/lvl
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<b><i>Stealth: lvl 1:</i></b>
As Green Arrow, Ollie observes that people rarely notice what they don't expect, so if he stands in the shadows then they are likely not to notice him until it is too late. But 'likely' isn't 'definitely' so Ollie has studied ways of blending into his surroundings. He knows how to move silently and blend into the shadows properly, as well as which guard to take out so that the other one won't notice. - 142xp/lvl
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<b><i>Targeting, non powered: lvl 10:</i></b>
Having first learnt how to string a bow and hunt with it on the desert island, Ollie has mastered the skill of archery to such an extent that he can hit a specific country on the Daily Planet Globe from his balcony on Queen tower. He uses the skill now to hunt criminals and to try to track down the men who ordered the hit on his parents. - Any Weapon - 237xp/lvl
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<b><i>Only Human:</i></b>
Ollie is nothing other than pure red blooded human. His skills are honed and produced only by rigorous training on his own behalf. He trains every day to maintain his physical peak and uses trademark arrows to fight crime, but by no means is he bullet proof. - 1500xp
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<b><i>Medium Haunted Past:</i></b>
Ollie's parents were murdered in front of his eyes on their private yacht by the captain of the vessel and Ollie was forced to jump overboard to avoid a similar fate. He was washed up on a desert island were he was forced to fight for his survival. He will never forget the horror of waking up every day to the burning sun on that god forsaken island to the memory that his parents were dead and that he was very likely not to survive. But he did, and now the memory drives him to search for the man who ordered the hit on Ollie's parents. - 400xp
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<b><i>Outlaw:</i></b>
The Green Arrow's actions have been condemned by the Police Departments in every city he has operated in, although legends of his often merciless justice have proven fairly effective at clearing the streets of crime. - 350xp
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<b><i>Medium Deadly Enemies:</i></b>
Ollie has been working against the Mob, in the understanding that of all the people in every city his parents lived in, they are the most likely to have ordered the hit, they had the resources to do so, and the incentive. He has pissed off some very high up people and intends to keep doing so until an arrow can coax them to give him a name. He has visited many cities and places, chasing the trails his parents' assassins left. - 400xp
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<b><i>Guilty Conscience:</i></b>
During his first few months as the Green Arrow, Ollie's arrows didn't always fly to only incapacitating targets. He killed three men before realising that killing didn't help and that eventually he'd only lose himself. So now he aims at hands or feet, to disarm or incapacitate, unless he faces someone who would kill him first without a second thought, and he has no other option. - 300xp
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<b><i>Occupation:</i></b>
CEO of Queen Industries
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<b><i>Money:</i></b>
0$
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<b><i>Items:</i></b>
None
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<b><i>Weapons:</i></b>
Customised Weapons to suit his crime fighting personality.
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<b><i>Armour:</i></b>
Lightweight costume.
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None officially.
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<b>Birth and Early Life </b><br>
Oliver Queen was born to Patrick and Kirsten Queen at their apartment at Queen Tower. He attended the best education facilities available to his parents and made friends quickly, a friendly, kind boy who had no problem with doing favours for people. His parents were immensely proud of him and he thrived with their love. As he grew up, he saw the good life, but at the same time was observant of Metropolis's underworld, watching the news often and seeing the crime which the city experienced. He began to attend Excelsior Academy and met several faces who would become prominent business men in the future. He took several extra curricular courses such as archery and survival skills which would eventually prove to be excellent foresight.
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<b>Death and Survival</b> <br>
During a cruise aboard the Queen yacht, when he was nineteen, Ollie was enjoying the company of his parents as they sat below during a storm, playing a game of Risk. His father was winning when suddenly the captain of the yacht, who was part bodyguard and part lifeguard at the same time, appeared in the doorway and shot Patrick in the back of the head. Ollie's mother screamed and they both ducked as the man fired again. She screamed at him to run and, too frightened to do anything else, Ollie obeyed. He careened out the door as another shot sounded, stopping his mother's screams. Ollie leapt overboard in terror, and struck out strongly. <br>
After swimming until the boat was out of sight, Ollie found himself out of his depth, the storm sapped his energy and washed him this way and that, until he finally lost consciousness.
He woke on a beach, and was initially confused until he realised what had happened. He must have wept for hours before he decided to get up and try to at least save himself. Using some of the skills he had from school, he made a rough shelter and a fire to be seen by ships. Making a bow by using a pen knife from his pocket, he also managed to shoot some of the wildlife, giving himself food to eat as he wasn't sure which plants were edible.
<br><br>
<b>Discovery and Freedom</b> <br>
Ollie was finally rescued, after three months on the island, and was hailed as the CEO of Queen industries. His father had taught him everything he needed to know and now he managed the company efficiently, even providing expansion. He never forgot his parents' murder and tracked down the man who killed them, only to find him dead. Ollie knew that someone must have paid him for the hit, and knew that the police wouldn't do anything about it. So he took it upon himself to find the culprit by fighting the crime in Metropolis and the surrounding cities to find who paid for the hit on his parents. After the better part ten years, which he spent negotiating business agreements, spearheading the research and development into weapon systems he would soon use to locate his parents killers, he created several charities based on helping people who would otherwise turn to crime, and reinforced foreign relations for his company. During the ten years, he financed several new Aid Stations for refugees in the Middle East and phased out most of Queen Industries Military contracts, preferring to develop more non lethal weaponry such as the dart cross bow he would commandeer as a vigilante. After so long securing his future, he finally became the vigilante named the Green Arrow, and honed his skills to fight crime and stop the event of his parents murder from ever repeating itself to others.
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Powers

Composite Bow and Arrows: Your math is off. The force blast costs: (250+200-100)x0.8x1.05 = 350x0.8x1.05 = 280x1.05 = 294 XP/lvl and then the 210 XP once. You add discounts and percentage increases AFTER all modifier and option costs have been added or subtracted

Hand Crossbow: Seriously... you've been playing on Marvels long enough to know how this works. First of all, put the powers up clearly, like this:

- Force Blast (Poison-Sleep): 250xp/lvl (+Armour Piercing = +200xp)(428xp/lvl)
- Replaceable: 200xp once
- Slinging: 75xp/lvl (64xp/lvl)

"One Power Only: -50xp (Poison&Slinging), One Target Only: -100xp, Disabling Effect: +300xp, Power Deals no Damage: -300xp - 306xp/lvl - 210xp Once"

Then... all those modifiers? You add them to individual powers, not to the IoP in general. So, let's go through this:

- Force Blast (Poison) (250 XP/lvl). Armour Piercing (+200 XP/lvl), One Power Only [Slinging] (-50 XP/lvl), One Target Only (-100 XP/lvl), Disabling Effect (+300 XP/lvl), Power Deals No Damage (-300 XP/lvl) = 300 XP/lvl
- Slinging (75 XP/lvl). One Power Only [Force Blast] (-50 XP/lvl) = 50 XP/lvl
- Replaceable (200 XP once).
Total Cost: 350x0.8x1.05 = 294 XP/lvl and 210 XP once.

And Slinging goes down to 50 XP/lvl, cus no power can go below 50 XP/lvl. Put your composite bow up like that, too.


Challenges

Sorry, but the Haunted Past is only Medium, not Major. 400 XP

Same goes for Deadly Enemies.

Origin

10 years of just planning? What did he do exactly, in those 10 years?
 
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<b><i>Name:</i></b>
Oliver 'Ollie' Thomas Queen
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<b><i>Alias:</i></b>
Green Arrow
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<b><i>Race:</i></b>
Human
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<b><i>Gender:</i></b>
Male
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<b><i>Age:</i></b>
28
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<b><i>Height:</i></b>
6ft 2in
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<b><i>Weight:</i></b>
210lbs
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<b><i>Hair:</i></b>
Dirty Blonde
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<b><i>Eyes:</i></b>
Brown
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<b><i>Alignment:</i></b>
Chaotic Good
<br>
<b><i>Personality:</i></b>
Ollie is a good natured man at heart, although it is harder to see when he is in costume as Green Arrow. He will always help his friends if they need it and counts his best friends as close as family.
<br>
<b><i>Team:</i></b>
None
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<b><i>Secret Origin:</i></b>
Trained - Fighting and Knowledge Skills x0.95, Powers and IoPs x1.05
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<b><i>Experience Points Left To Use:</i></b>
128
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6522
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<b><i>Strength:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Agility:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Accuracy:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Durability:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Will Power:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>IoP - Composite Bow & Arrows: lvl -:</i></b>
When he decided to become a crime fighter, Ollie knew that he would have to have equipment, to make him as effective as the old Heroes. For this purpose, he designed and had a composite bow and special arrows built by a separate contractor. The arrows are essentially regular arrows, painted green with lightweight, strong shafts, designed to be easily carried but strong enough to penetrate steel plates of certain thicknesses. - <br>
- Replaceable: 200xp once, <br>
- Force Blast (Metal): 250xp/lvl wi. Amour Piercing = +200xp, One Target Only: -100xp/lvl = 350xp/lvl <br>
Total Cost: 350x0.8x1.05 = 294xp/lvl and 210xp once
<br><br>
<b><i>Hand Crossbow: lvl -:</i></b>
Ollie recognises that not everyone is guilty but his cover must be maintained. For this reason, he carries a prototype hand crossbow. The small, single handed crossbow can fire a sedating dart at high power accurately over a distance of up to one hundred metres. It reloads itself using the kinetic energy, reducing the need for Ollie to use two hands when using it, and can fire ten darts in five seconds. The Crossbow also, however, doubles as a grapnel gun to help Ollie get to hard to reach places. This is especially useful in metropolis where the landscape necessitates a mechanism for moving vertically. - <br>
- Force Blast (Poison) (250 XP/lvl). Armour Piercing (+200 XP/lvl), One Power Only [Slinging] (-50 XP/lvl), One Target Only (-100 XP/lvl), Disabling Effect (+300 XP/lvl), Power Deals No Damage (-300 XP/lvl) = 300 XP/lvl <br>
- Slinging (75 XP/lvl). One Power Only [Force Blast] (-50 XP/lvl) = 50 XP/lvl <br>
- Replaceable (200 XP once). <br>
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<b><i>I.Q: lvl 7:</i></b>
Oliver Queen is an extremely intelligent man, breaching genius level intellect. He might not be the most intelligent man on the planet but he comes quite close. - 100xp/lvl
<br><br>
<b><i>Wealth: lvl 8:</i></b>
Ollie owns Queen Industries, a global company with offices in London, Paris, New York, Gotham and Metropolis, his home city. Under his leadership, the company has thrived and he is one of the richest men in the world, by far, giving him some very influential friends. His parents left him an incredible amount of money when they died, money which has multiplied under his deft control of Queen Industries. - 200xp/lvl
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<b><i>High School Graduate:</i></b>
Ollie graduated from Excelsior Academy in Metropolis with all the knowledge that the first class foundation could give him. - 142xp
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<b><i>Fighting Skill: lvl 1:</i></b>
Oliver recognises the fact that archery might be a useful skill, but it doesn't always succeed and there may be times when he can't rely on his bow or crossbow to get him out of trouble. For this reason, he has begun training under several martial arts masters, in an effort to discourage his enemies from getting too close. He is a fair brawler, and learning to be better. - 190xp/lvl
<br><br>
<b><i>Stealth: lvl 1:</i></b>
As Green Arrow, Ollie observes that people rarely notice what they don't expect, so if he stands in the shadows then they are likely not to notice him until it is too late. But 'likely' isn't 'definitely' so Ollie has studied ways of blending into his surroundings. He knows how to move silently and blend into the shadows properly, as well as which guard to take out so that the other one won't notice. - 142xp/lvl
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<b><i>Targeting, non powered: lvl 10:</i></b>
Having first learnt how to string a bow and hunt with it on the desert island, Ollie has mastered the skill of archery to such an extent that he can hit a specific country on the Daily Planet Globe from his balcony on Queen tower. He uses the skill now to hunt criminals and to try to track down the men who ordered the hit on his parents. - Any Weapon - 237xp/lvl
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<b><i>Only Human:</i></b>
Ollie is nothing other than pure red blooded human. His skills are honed and produced only by rigorous training on his own behalf. He trains every day to maintain his physical peak and uses trademark arrows to fight crime, but by no means is he bullet proof. - 1500xp
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<b><i>Medium Haunted Past:</i></b>
Ollie's parents were murdered in front of his eyes on their private yacht by the captain of the vessel and Ollie was forced to jump overboard to avoid a similar fate. He was washed up on a desert island were he was forced to fight for his survival. He will never forget the horror of waking up every day to the burning sun on that god forsaken island to the memory that his parents were dead and that he was very likely not to survive. But he did, and now the memory drives him to search for the man who ordered the hit on Ollie's parents. - 400xp
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<b><i>Outlaw:</i></b>
The Green Arrow's actions have been condemned by the Police Departments in every city he has operated in, although legends of his often merciless justice have proven fairly effective at clearing the streets of crime. - 350xp
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<b><i>Medium Deadly Enemies:</i></b>
Ollie has been working against the Mob, in the understanding that of all the people in every city his parents lived in, they are the most likely to have ordered the hit, they had the resources to do so, and the incentive. He has pissed off some very high up people and intends to keep doing so until an arrow can coax them to give him a name. He has visited many cities and places, chasing the trails his parents' assassins left. - 400xp
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<b><i>Guilty Conscience:</i></b>
During his first few months as the Green Arrow, Ollie's arrows didn't always fly to only incapacitating targets. He killed three men before realising that killing didn't help and that eventually he'd only lose himself. So now he aims at hands or feet, to disarm or incapacitate, unless he faces someone who would kill him first without a second thought, and he has no other option. - 300xp
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CEO of Queen Industries
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<b><i>Money:</i></b>
0$
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<b><i>Items:</i></b>
None
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<b><i>Weapons:</i></b>
Customised Weapons to suit his crime fighting personality.
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<b><i>Armour:</i></b>
Lightweight costume.
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None officially.
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<b>Birth and Early Life </b><br>
Oliver Queen was born to Patrick and Kirsten Queen at their apartment at Queen Tower. He attended the best education facilities available to his parents and made friends quickly, a friendly, kind boy who had no problem with doing favours for people. His parents were immensely proud of him and he thrived with their love. As he grew up, he saw the good life, but at the same time was observant of Metropolis's underworld, watching the news often and seeing the crime which the city experienced. He began to attend Excelsior Academy and met several faces who would become prominent business men in the future. He took several extra curricular courses such as archery and survival skills which would eventually prove to be excellent foresight.
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<b>Death and Survival</b> <br>
During a cruise aboard the Queen yacht, when he was nineteen, Ollie was enjoying the company of his parents as they sat below during a storm, playing a game of Risk. His father was winning when suddenly the captain of the yacht, who was part bodyguard and part lifeguard at the same time, appeared in the doorway and shot Patrick in the back of the head. Ollie's mother screamed and they both ducked as the man fired again. She screamed at him to run and, too frightened to do anything else, Ollie obeyed. He careened out the door as another shot sounded, stopping his mother's screams. Ollie leapt overboard in terror, and struck out strongly. <br>
After swimming until the boat was out of sight, Ollie found himself out of his depth, the storm sapped his energy and washed him this way and that, until he finally lost consciousness.
He woke on a beach, and was initially confused until he realised what had happened. He must have wept for hours before he decided to get up and try to at least save himself. Using some of the skills he had from school, he made a rough shelter and a fire to be seen by ships. Making a bow by using a pen knife from his pocket, he also managed to shoot some of the wildlife, giving himself food to eat as he wasn't sure which plants were edible.
<br><br>
<b>Discovery and Freedom</b> <br>
Ollie was finally rescued, after three months on the island, and was hailed as the CEO of Queen industries. His father had taught him everything he needed to know and now he managed the company efficiently, even providing expansion. He never forgot his parents' murder and tracked down the man who killed them, only to find him dead. Ollie knew that someone must have paid him for the hit, and knew that the police wouldn't do anything about it. So he took it upon himself to find the culprit by fighting the crime in Metropolis and the surrounding cities to find who paid for the hit on his parents. After the better part ten years, which he spent negotiating business agreements, spearheading the research and development into weapon systems he would soon use to locate his parents killers, he created several charities based on helping people who would otherwise turn to crime, and reinforced foreign relations for his company. During the ten years, he financed several new Aid Stations for refugees in the Middle East and phased out most of Queen Industries Military contracts, preferring to develop more non lethal weaponry such as the dart cross bow he would commandeer as a vigilante. After so long securing his future, he finally became the vigilante named the Green Arrow, and honed his skills to fight crime and stop the event of his parents murder from ever repeating itself to others.
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I've done it now, for the IoPs... but, remember... to change line in html, you add <br> where you want the break. I know you know this. Honestly... when dealing with html, check if it looks right once you've posted it... like the mistake you did while translating french on Marvels in the AU event, putting the text in <text>... everything between a < and a > in html will NOT appear when translated to text.

Alright?

Now... You've removed the levels of your IoPs? Kinda difficult to figure out what they're at and figure out the math without it <.<

And one small thing: The Outlaw description is kinda odd... he doesn't really seem like a merciless guy judging from his guilty conscience and choice of weapons? And if there's legends of him... then exactly how long has he been Green Arrow? And where does he normally operate?
 
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<b><i>Name:</i></b>
Oliver 'Ollie' Thomas Queen
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<b><i>Alias:</i></b>
Green Arrow
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<b><i>Race:</i></b>
Human
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<b><i>Gender:</i></b>
Male
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<b><i>Age:</i></b>
28
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6ft 2in
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210lbs
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<b><i>Hair:</i></b>
Dirty Blonde
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<b><i>Eyes:</i></b>
Brown
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<b><i>Alignment:</i></b>
Chaotic Good
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<b><i>Personality:</i></b>
Ollie is a good natured man at heart, although it is harder to see when he is in costume as Green Arrow. He will always help his friends if they need it and counts his best friends as close as family.
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<b><i>Team:</i></b>
None
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<b><i>Secret Origin:</i></b>
Trained - Fighting and Knowledge Skills x0.95, Powers and IoPs x1.05
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<b><i>Experience Points Used:</i></b>
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<b><i>Strength:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Agility:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Accuracy:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>IoP - Composite Bow & Arrows: lvl 2:</i></b>
When he decided to become a crime fighter, Ollie knew that he would have to have equipment, to make him as effective as the old Heroes. For this purpose, he designed and had a composite bow and special arrows built by a separate contractor. The arrows are essentially regular arrows, painted green with lightweight, strong shafts, designed to be easily carried but strong enough to penetrate steel plates of certain thicknesses. - <br>
- Replaceable: 200xp once, <br>
- Force Blast (Metal): 250xp/lvl wi. Amour Piercing = +200xp, One Target Only: -100xp/lvl = 350xp/lvl <br>
Total Cost: 350x0.8x1.05 = 294xp/lvl and 210xp once
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<b><i>Hand Crossbow: lvl 1:</i></b>
Ollie recognises that not everyone is guilty but his cover must be maintained. For this reason, he carries a prototype hand crossbow. The small, single handed crossbow can fire a sedating dart at high power accurately over a distance of up to one hundred metres. It reloads itself using the kinetic energy, reducing the need for Ollie to use two hands when using it, and can fire ten darts in five seconds. The Crossbow also, however, doubles as a grapnel gun to help Ollie get to hard to reach places. This is especially useful in metropolis where the landscape necessitates a mechanism for moving vertically. - <br>
- Force Blast (Poison) (250 XP/lvl). Armour Piercing (+200 XP/lvl), One Power Only [Slinging] (-50 XP/lvl), One Target Only (-100 XP/lvl), Disabling Effect (+300 XP/lvl), Power Deals No Damage (-300 XP/lvl) = 300 XP/lvl <br>
- Slinging (75 XP/lvl). One Power Only [Force Blast] (-50 XP/lvl) = 50 XP/lvl <br>
- Replaceable (200 XP once). <br>
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<b><i>I.Q: lvl 7:</i></b>
Oliver Queen is an extremely intelligent man, breaching genius level intellect. He might not be the most intelligent man on the planet but he comes quite close. - 100xp/lvl
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<b><i>Wealth: lvl 8:</i></b>
Ollie owns Queen Industries, a global company with offices in London, Paris, New York, Gotham and Metropolis, his home city. Under his leadership, the company has thrived and he is one of the richest men in the world, by far, giving him some very influential friends. His parents left him an incredible amount of money when they died, money which has multiplied under his deft control of Queen Industries. - 200xp/lvl
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<b><u>Knowledge Skills</u></b>
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<b><i>High School Graduate:</i></b>
Ollie graduated from Excelsior Academy in Metropolis with all the knowledge that the first class foundation could give him. - 142xp
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<b><u>Fighting Skills</u></b>
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<b><i>Fighting Skill: lvl 1:</i></b>
Oliver recognises the fact that archery might be a useful skill, but it doesn't always succeed and there may be times when he can't rely on his bow or crossbow to get him out of trouble. For this reason, he has begun training under several martial arts masters, in an effort to discourage his enemies from getting too close. He is a fair brawler, and learning to be better. - 190xp/lvl
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<b><i>Stealth: lvl 1:</i></b>
As Green Arrow, Ollie observes that people rarely notice what they don't expect, so if he stands in the shadows then they are likely not to notice him until it is too late. But 'likely' isn't 'definitely' so Ollie has studied ways of blending into his surroundings. He knows how to move silently and blend into the shadows properly, as well as which guard to take out so that the other one won't notice. - 142xp/lvl
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<b><i>Targeting, non powered: lvl 10:</i></b>
Having first learnt how to string a bow and hunt with it on the desert island, Ollie has mastered the skill of archery to such an extent that he can hit a specific country on the Daily Planet Globe from his balcony on Queen tower. He uses the skill now to hunt criminals and to try to track down the men who ordered the hit on his parents. - Any Weapon - 237xp/lvl
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Ollie is nothing other than pure red blooded human. His skills are honed and produced only by rigorous training on his own behalf. He trains every day to maintain his physical peak and uses trademark arrows to fight crime, but by no means is he bullet proof. - 1500xp
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<b><i>Medium Haunted Past:</i></b>
Ollie's parents were murdered in front of his eyes on their private yacht by the captain of the vessel and Ollie was forced to jump overboard to avoid a similar fate. He was washed up on a desert island were he was forced to fight for his survival. He will never forget the horror of waking up every day to the burning sun on that god forsaken island to the memory that his parents were dead and that he was very likely not to survive. But he did, and now the memory drives him to search for the man who ordered the hit on Ollie's parents. - 400xp
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<b><i>Outlaw:</i></b>
At the very start of his career as a vigilante, Ollie was fairly terminal about how he should deal with criminals, time and experience have mellowed his feelings, but the police still have on record several murders by arrows and a man in green seen leaving the crime scene, for this reason, the Green Arrow is an outlawed vigilante and pursued by the police if they get close enough. - 350xp
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<b><i>Medium Deadly Enemies:</i></b>
Ollie has been working against the Mob, in the understanding that of all the people in every city his parents lived in, they are the most likely to have ordered the hit, they had the resources to do so, and the incentive. He has pissed off some very high up people and intends to keep doing so until an arrow can coax them to give him a name. He has visited many cities and places, chasing the trails his parents' assassins left. - 400xp
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<b><i>Guilty Conscience:</i></b>
During his first few months as the Green Arrow, Ollie's arrows didn't always fly to only incapacitating targets. He killed three men before realising that killing didn't help and that eventually he'd only lose himself. So now he aims at hands or feet, to disarm or incapacitate, unless he faces someone who would kill him first without a second thought, and he has no other option. - 300xp
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<b><i>Money:</i></b>
0$
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<b><i>Items:</i></b>
None
<br>
<b><i>Weapons:</i></b>
Customised Weapons to suit his crime fighting personality.
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<b><i>Armour:</i></b>
Lightweight costume.
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None officially.
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<b>Birth and Early Life </b><br>
Oliver Queen was born to Patrick and Kirsten Queen at their apartment at Queen Tower. He attended the best education facilities available to his parents and made friends quickly, a friendly, kind boy who had no problem with doing favours for people. His parents were immensely proud of him and he thrived with their love. As he grew up, he saw the good life, but at the same time was observant of Metropolis's underworld, watching the news often and seeing the crime which the city experienced. He began to attend Excelsior Academy and met several faces who would become prominent business men in the future. He took several extra curricular courses such as archery and survival skills which would eventually prove to be excellent foresight.
<br><br>
<b>Death and Survival</b> <br>
During a cruise aboard the Queen yacht, when he was nineteen, Ollie was enjoying the company of his parents as they sat below during a storm, playing a game of Risk. His father was winning when suddenly the captain of the yacht, who was part bodyguard and part lifeguard at the same time, appeared in the doorway and shot Patrick in the back of the head. Ollie's mother screamed and they both ducked as the man fired again. She screamed at him to run and, too frightened to do anything else, Ollie obeyed. He careened out the door as another shot sounded, stopping his mother's screams. Ollie leapt overboard in terror, and struck out strongly. <br>
After swimming until the boat was out of sight, Ollie found himself out of his depth, the storm sapped his energy and washed him this way and that, until he finally lost consciousness.
He woke on a beach, and was initially confused until he realised what had happened. He must have wept for hours before he decided to get up and try to at least save himself. Using some of the skills he had from school, he made a rough shelter and a fire to be seen by ships. Making a bow by using a pen knife from his pocket, he also managed to shoot some of the wildlife, giving himself food to eat as he wasn't sure which plants were edible.
<br><br>
<b>Discovery and Freedom</b> <br>
Ollie was finally rescued, after three months on the island, and was hailed as the CEO of Queen industries. His father had taught him everything he needed to know and now he managed the company efficiently, even providing expansion. He never forgot his parents' murder and tracked down the man who killed them, only to find him dead. Ollie knew that someone must have paid him for the hit, and knew that the police wouldn't do anything about it. So he took it upon himself to find the culprit by fighting the crime in Metropolis and the surrounding cities to find who paid for the hit on his parents. After the better part ten years, which he spent negotiating business agreements, spearheading the research and development into weapon systems he would soon use to locate his parents killers, he created several charities based on helping people who would otherwise turn to crime, and reinforced foreign relations for his company. During the ten years, he financed several new Aid Stations for refugees in the Middle East and phased out most of Queen Industries Military contracts, preferring to develop more non lethal weaponry such as the dart cross bow he would commandeer as a vigilante. After so long securing his future, he finally became the vigilante named the Green Arrow, and honed his skills to fight crime and stop the event of his parents murder from ever repeating itself to others.
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by my count you should have 6950 to spend which actually leaves you with 504 remaining XP...want to use that to increase anything?

Besides that everything else seems alright to me, except one thing:

Now this just may be a personal dislike/doubt, but I really dont like your reason why his bows have the armor piercing modifier. Normal bows, no matter how strong they are, would never be able to pierce someone with 10 durability, which having this modifier at certain levels you would be able to. If Jon doesnt mind the description thats fine, but I would really like another reason why they are so strong.

So besides that and the extra xp, everything looks alright to me.
 
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Yeah... I don't really like that description either. At least make it some special metal or something... or give it the 'Level Can't Increase' modifier, so it can't increase beyond lvl 5?
 
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<b><i>Name:</i></b>
Oliver 'Ollie' Thomas Queen
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<b><i>Alias:</i></b>
Green Arrow
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<b><i>Race:</i></b>
Human
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<b><i>Gender:</i></b>
Male
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<b><i>Age:</i></b>
28
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<b><i>Height:</i></b>
6ft 2in
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<b><i>Weight:</i></b>
210lbs
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<b><i>Hair:</i></b>
Dirty Blonde
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<b><i>Eyes:</i></b>
Brown
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<b><i>Alignment:</i></b>
Chaotic Good
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<b><i>Personality:</i></b>
Ollie is a good natured man at heart, although it is harder to see when he is in costume as Green Arrow. He will always help his friends if they need it and counts his best friends as close as family.
<br>
<b><i>Team:</i></b>
None
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<b><i>Secret Origin:</i></b>
Trained - Fighting and Knowledge Skills x0.95, Powers and IoPs x1.05
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Info
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<b><i>Experience Points Left To Use:</i></b>
20
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<b><i>Experience Points Used:</i></b>
7434
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<b><i>Strength:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Agility:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Accuracy:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Durability:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Will Power:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>IoP - Composite Bow & Arrows: lvl 3:</i></b>
When he decided to become a crime fighter, Ollie knew that he would have to have equipment, to make him as effective as the old Heroes. For this purpose, he designed and had a composite bow and special arrows built by a separate contractor. The arrows are essentially regular arrows, painted green with lightweight, strong shafts, designed to be easily carried but strong enough to penetrate steel plates of certain thicknesses, the points are made of Starium, an alloy which was created by technicians at Star Labs, a subsidiary of Queen Industries. The cutting qualities of Starium happen to exceed that of - <br>
- Replaceable: 200xp once, <br>
- Force Blast (Metal): 250xp/lvl wi. Amour Piercing = +200xp, One Target Only: -100xp/lvl = 350xp/lvl <br>
Total Cost: 350x0.8x1.05 = 294xp/lvl and 210xp once
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<b><i>Hand Crossbow: lvl 1:</i></b>
Ollie recognises that not everyone is guilty but his cover must be maintained. For this reason, he carries a prototype hand crossbow. The small, single handed crossbow can fire a sedating dart at high power accurately over a distance of up to one hundred metres. It reloads itself using the kinetic energy, reducing the need for Ollie to use two hands when using it, and can fire ten darts in five seconds. The Crossbow also, however, doubles as a grapnel gun to help Ollie get to hard to reach places. This is especially useful in metropolis where the landscape necessitates a mechanism for moving vertically. - <br>
- Force Blast (Poison) (250 XP/lvl). Armour Piercing (+200 XP/lvl), One Power Only [Slinging] (-50 XP/lvl), One Target Only (-100 XP/lvl), Disabling Effect (+300 XP/lvl), Power Deals No Damage (-300 XP/lvl) = 300 XP/lvl <br>
- Slinging (75 XP/lvl). One Power Only [Force Blast] (-50 XP/lvl) = 50 XP/lvl <br>
- Replaceable (200 XP once). <br>
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<b><i>I.Q: lvl 7:</i></b>
Oliver Queen is an extremely intelligent man, breaching genius level intellect. He might not be the most intelligent man on the planet but he comes quite close. - 100xp/lvl
<br><br>
<b><i>Wealth: lvl 8:</i></b>
Ollie owns Queen Industries, a global company with offices in London, Paris, New York, Gotham and Metropolis, his home city. Under his leadership, the company has thrived and he is one of the richest men in the world, by far, giving him some very influential friends. His parents left him an incredible amount of money when they died, money which has multiplied under his deft control of Queen Industries. - 200xp/lvl
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<b><i>High School Graduate:</i></b>
Ollie graduated from Excelsior Academy in Metropolis with all the knowledge that the first class foundation could give him. - 142xp
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<b><i>Fighting Skill: lvl 2:</i></b>
Oliver recognises the fact that archery might be a useful skill, but it doesn't always succeed and there may be times when he can't rely on his bow or crossbow to get him out of trouble. For this reason, he has begun training under several martial arts masters, in an effort to discourage his enemies from getting too close. He is a fair brawler, and learning to be better. - 190xp/lvl
<br><br>
<b><i>Stealth: lvl 1:</i></b>
As Green Arrow, Ollie observes that people rarely notice what they don't expect, so if he stands in the shadows then they are likely not to notice him until it is too late. But 'likely' isn't 'definitely' so Ollie has studied ways of blending into his surroundings. He knows how to move silently and blend into the shadows properly, as well as which guard to take out so that the other one won't notice. - 142xp/lvl
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<b><i>Targeting, non powered: lvl 10:</i></b>
Having first learnt how to string a bow and hunt with it on the desert island, Ollie has mastered the skill of archery to such an extent that he can hit a specific country on the Daily Planet Globe from his balcony on Queen tower. He uses the skill now to hunt criminals and to try to track down the men who ordered the hit on his parents. - Any Weapon - 237xp/lvl
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<b><i>Only Human:</i></b>
Ollie is nothing other than pure red blooded human. His skills are honed and produced only by rigorous training on his own behalf. He trains every day to maintain his physical peak and uses trademark arrows to fight crime, but by no means is he bullet proof. - 1500xp
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<b><i>Medium Haunted Past:</i></b>
Ollie's parents were murdered in front of his eyes on their private yacht by the captain of the vessel and Ollie was forced to jump overboard to avoid a similar fate. He was washed up on a desert island were he was forced to fight for his survival. He will never forget the horror of waking up every day to the burning sun on that god forsaken island to the memory that his parents were dead and that he was very likely not to survive. But he did, and now the memory drives him to search for the man who ordered the hit on Ollie's parents. - 400xp
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<b><i>Outlaw:</i></b>
At the very start of his career as a vigilante, Ollie was fairly terminal about how he should deal with criminals, time and experience have mellowed his feelings, but the police still have on record several murders by arrows and a man in green seen leaving the crime scene, for this reason, the Green Arrow is an outlawed vigilante and pursued by the police if they get close enough. - 350xp
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<b><i>Medium Deadly Enemies:</i></b>
Ollie has been working against the Mob, in the understanding that of all the people in every city his parents lived in, they are the most likely to have ordered the hit, they had the resources to do so, and the incentive. He has pissed off some very high up people and intends to keep doing so until an arrow can coax them to give him a name. He has visited many cities and places, chasing the trails his parents' assassins left. - 400xp
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<b><i>Guilty Conscience:</i></b>
During his first few months as the Green Arrow, Ollie's arrows didn't always fly to only incapacitating targets. He killed three men before realising that killing didn't help and that eventually he'd only lose himself. So now he aims at hands or feet, to disarm or incapacitate, unless he faces someone who would kill him first without a second thought, and he has no other option. - 300xp
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CEO of Queen Industries
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<b><i>Money:</i></b>
0$
<br>
<b><i>Items:</i></b>
None
<br>
<b><i>Weapons:</i></b>
Customised Weapons to suit his crime fighting personality.
<br>
<b><i>Armour:</i></b>
Lightweight costume.
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None officially.
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Oliver Queen was born to Patrick and Kirsten Queen at their apartment at Queen Tower. He attended the best education facilities available to his parents and made friends quickly, a friendly, kind boy who had no problem with doing favours for people. His parents were immensely proud of him and he thrived with their love. As he grew up, he saw the good life, but at the same time was observant of Metropolis's underworld, watching the news often and seeing the crime which the city experienced. He began to attend Excelsior Academy and met several faces who would become prominent business men in the future. He took several extra curricular courses such as archery and survival skills which would eventually prove to be excellent foresight.
<br><br>
<b>Death and Survival</b> <br>
During a cruise aboard the Queen yacht, when he was nineteen, Ollie was enjoying the company of his parents as they sat below during a storm, playing a game of Risk. His father was winning when suddenly the captain of the yacht, who was part bodyguard and part lifeguard at the same time, appeared in the doorway and shot Patrick in the back of the head. Ollie's mother screamed and they both ducked as the man fired again. She screamed at him to run and, too frightened to do anything else, Ollie obeyed. He careened out the door as another shot sounded, stopping his mother's screams. Ollie leapt overboard in terror, and struck out strongly. <br>
After swimming until the boat was out of sight, Ollie found himself out of his depth, the storm sapped his energy and washed him this way and that, until he finally lost consciousness.
He woke on a beach, and was initially confused until he realised what had happened. He must have wept for hours before he decided to get up and try to at least save himself. Using some of the skills he had from school, he made a rough shelter and a fire to be seen by ships. Making a bow by using a pen knife from his pocket, he also managed to shoot some of the wildlife, giving himself food to eat as he wasn't sure which plants were edible.
<br><br>
<b>Discovery and Freedom</b> <br>
Ollie was finally rescued, after three months on the island, and was hailed as the CEO of Queen industries. His father had taught him everything he needed to know and now he managed the company efficiently, even providing expansion. He never forgot his parents' murder and tracked down the man who killed them, only to find him dead. Ollie knew that someone must have paid him for the hit, and knew that the police wouldn't do anything about it. So he took it upon himself to find the culprit by fighting the crime in Metropolis and the surrounding cities to find who paid for the hit on his parents. After the better part ten years, which he spent negotiating business agreements, spearheading the research and development into weapon systems he would soon use to locate his parents killers, he created several charities based on helping people who would otherwise turn to crime, and reinforced foreign relations for his company. During the ten years, he financed several new Aid Stations for refugees in the Middle East and phased out most of Queen Industries Military contracts, preferring to develop more non lethal weaponry such as the dart cross bow he would commandeer as a vigilante. He also funded a project by Star Labs, a subsidiary of Queen Industries, which created the metal Starium which was an alloy which could be honed to such a sharpness that it could cut through most metals without suffering. After so long securing his future, he finally became the vigilante named the Green Arrow, and honed his skills to fight crime and stop the event of his parents murder from ever repeating itself to others.
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I like the change to the arrows, looks good to me. Your XP used section is off, but oddly enough your XP left to spend section is write. It should read:

Total Experience Gained: 0
Experience Points Left To Use: 20
Experience Points Used: 6930

So yah, just that one quick little change and unless anyone else has anything you are all set
 
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Great. ^^ Thanks Ini. :D

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Fury Theme: Watch Your Back - Benny Cassette
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Battle Theme: Hang On - Seether
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Epic Battle Theme: Wake Me Up Inside - Evanescence
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<b><i>Name:</i></b>
Oliver 'Ollie' Thomas Queen
<br>
<b><i>Alias:</i></b>
Green Arrow
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<b><i>Race:</i></b>
Human
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<b><i>Gender:</i></b>
Male
<br>
<b><i>Age:</i></b>
28
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<b><i>Height:</i></b>
6ft 2in
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<b><i>Weight:</i></b>
210lbs
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<b><i>Hair:</i></b>
Dirty Blonde
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<b><i>Eyes:</i></b>
Brown
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<b><i>Alignment:</i></b>
Chaotic Good
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<b><i>Personality:</i></b>
Ollie is a good natured man at heart, although it is harder to see when he is in costume as Green Arrow. He will always help his friends if they need it and counts his best friends as close as family.
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<b><i>Team:</i></b>
None
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<b><i>Secret Origin:</i></b>
Trained - Fighting and Knowledge Skills x0.95, Powers and IoPs x1.05
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<b><i>Total Experience Gained:</i></b>
Info
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<b><i>Experience Points Left To Use:</i></b>
20
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<b><i>Experience Points Used:</i></b>
6930
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<b><i>Strength:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Agility:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Accuracy:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Durability:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Will Power:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>IoP - Composite Bow & Arrows: lvl 3:</i></b>
When he decided to become a crime fighter, Ollie knew that he would have to have equipment, to make him as effective as the old Heroes. For this purpose, he designed and had a composite bow and special arrows built by a separate contractor. The arrows are essentially regular arrows, painted green with lightweight, strong shafts, designed to be easily carried but strong enough to penetrate steel plates of certain thicknesses, the points are made of Starium, an alloy which was created by technicians at Star Labs, a subsidiary of Queen Industries. The cutting qualities of Starium happen to exceed that of - <br>
- Replaceable: 200xp once, <br>
- Force Blast (Metal): 250xp/lvl wi. Amour Piercing = +200xp, One Target Only: -100xp/lvl = 350xp/lvl <br>
Total Cost: 350x0.8x1.05 = 294xp/lvl and 210xp once
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<b><i>Hand Crossbow: lvl 1:</i></b>
Ollie recognises that not everyone is guilty but his cover must be maintained. For this reason, he carries a prototype hand crossbow. The small, single handed crossbow can fire a sedating dart at high power accurately over a distance of up to one hundred metres. It reloads itself using the kinetic energy, reducing the need for Ollie to use two hands when using it, and can fire ten darts in five seconds. The Crossbow also, however, doubles as a grapnel gun to help Ollie get to hard to reach places. This is especially useful in metropolis where the landscape necessitates a mechanism for moving vertically. - <br>
- Force Blast (Poison) (250 XP/lvl). Armour Piercing (+200 XP/lvl), One Power Only [Slinging] (-50 XP/lvl), One Target Only (-100 XP/lvl), Disabling Effect (+300 XP/lvl), Power Deals No Damage (-300 XP/lvl) = 300 XP/lvl <br>
- Slinging (75 XP/lvl). One Power Only [Force Blast] (-50 XP/lvl) = 50 XP/lvl <br>
- Replaceable (200 XP once). <br>
Total Cost: 350x0.8x1.05 = 294 XP/lvl and 210 XP once.
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<b><u>Special Skills</u></b>
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<b><i>I.Q: lvl 7:</i></b>
Oliver Queen is an extremely intelligent man, breaching genius level intellect. He might not be the most intelligent man on the planet but he comes quite close. - 100xp/lvl
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<b><i>Wealth: lvl 8:</i></b>
Ollie owns Queen Industries, a global company with offices in London, Paris, New York, Gotham and Metropolis, his home city. Under his leadership, the company has thrived and he is one of the richest men in the world, by far, giving him some very influential friends. His parents left him an incredible amount of money when they died, money which has multiplied under his deft control of Queen Industries. - 200xp/lvl
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<b><i>High School Graduate:</i></b>
Ollie graduated from Excelsior Academy in Metropolis with all the knowledge that the first class foundation could give him. - 142xp
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<b><i>Fighting Skill: lvl 2:</i></b>
Oliver recognises the fact that archery might be a useful skill, but it doesn't always succeed and there may be times when he can't rely on his bow or crossbow to get him out of trouble. For this reason, he has begun training under several martial arts masters, in an effort to discourage his enemies from getting too close. He is a fair brawler, and learning to be better. - 190xp/lvl
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<b><i>Stealth: lvl 1:</i></b>
As Green Arrow, Ollie observes that people rarely notice what they don't expect, so if he stands in the shadows then they are likely not to notice him until it is too late. But 'likely' isn't 'definitely' so Ollie has studied ways of blending into his surroundings. He knows how to move silently and blend into the shadows properly, as well as which guard to take out so that the other one won't notice. - 142xp/lvl
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<b><i>Targeting, non powered: lvl 10:</i></b>
Having first learnt how to string a bow and hunt with it on the desert island, Ollie has mastered the skill of archery to such an extent that he can hit a specific country on the Daily Planet Globe from his balcony on Queen tower. He uses the skill now to hunt criminals and to try to track down the men who ordered the hit on his parents. - Any Weapon - 237xp/lvl
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<b><i>Only Human:</i></b>
Ollie is nothing other than pure red blooded human. His skills are honed and produced only by rigorous training on his own behalf. He trains every day to maintain his physical peak and uses trademark arrows to fight crime, but by no means is he bullet proof. - 1500xp
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<b><i>Medium Haunted Past:</i></b>
Ollie's parents were murdered in front of his eyes on their private yacht by the captain of the vessel and Ollie was forced to jump overboard to avoid a similar fate. He was washed up on a desert island were he was forced to fight for his survival. He will never forget the horror of waking up every day to the burning sun on that god forsaken island to the memory that his parents were dead and that he was very likely not to survive. But he did, and now the memory drives him to search for the man who ordered the hit on Ollie's parents. - 400xp
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<b><i>Outlaw:</i></b>
At the very start of his career as a vigilante, Ollie was fairly terminal about how he should deal with criminals, time and experience have mellowed his feelings, but the police still have on record several murders by arrows and a man in green seen leaving the crime scene, for this reason, the Green Arrow is an outlawed vigilante and pursued by the police if they get close enough. - 350xp
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<b><i>Medium Deadly Enemies:</i></b>
Ollie has been working against the Mob, in the understanding that of all the people in every city his parents lived in, they are the most likely to have ordered the hit, they had the resources to do so, and the incentive. He has pissed off some very high up people and intends to keep doing so until an arrow can coax them to give him a name. He has visited many cities and places, chasing the trails his parents' assassins left. - 400xp
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<b><i>Guilty Conscience:</i></b>
During his first few months as the Green Arrow, Ollie's arrows didn't always fly to only incapacitating targets. He killed three men before realising that killing didn't help and that eventually he'd only lose himself. So now he aims at hands or feet, to disarm or incapacitate, unless he faces someone who would kill him first without a second thought, and he has no other option. - 300xp
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<b><i>Occupation:</i></b>
CEO of Queen Industries
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<b><i>Money:</i></b>
0$
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<b><i>Items:</i></b>
None
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<b><i>Weapons:</i></b>
Customised Weapons to suit his crime fighting personality.
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<b><i>Armour:</i></b>
Lightweight costume.
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<b><i>Transport:</i></b>
None officially.
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<b>Birth and Early Life </b><br>
Oliver Queen was born to Patrick and Kirsten Queen at their apartment at Queen Tower. He attended the best education facilities available to his parents and made friends quickly, a friendly, kind boy who had no problem with doing favours for people. His parents were immensely proud of him and he thrived with their love. As he grew up, he saw the good life, but at the same time was observant of Metropolis's underworld, watching the news often and seeing the crime which the city experienced. He began to attend Excelsior Academy and met several faces who would become prominent business men in the future. He took several extra curricular courses such as archery and survival skills which would eventually prove to be excellent foresight.
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<b>Death and Survival</b> <br>
During a cruise aboard the Queen yacht, when he was nineteen, Ollie was enjoying the company of his parents as they sat below during a storm, playing a game of Risk. His father was winning when suddenly the captain of the yacht, who was part bodyguard and part lifeguard at the same time, appeared in the doorway and shot Patrick in the back of the head. Ollie's mother screamed and they both ducked as the man fired again. She screamed at him to run and, too frightened to do anything else, Ollie obeyed. He careened out the door as another shot sounded, stopping his mother's screams. Ollie leapt overboard in terror, and struck out strongly. <br>
After swimming until the boat was out of sight, Ollie found himself out of his depth, the storm sapped his energy and washed him this way and that, until he finally lost consciousness.
He woke on a beach, and was initially confused until he realised what had happened. He must have wept for hours before he decided to get up and try to at least save himself. Using some of the skills he had from school, he made a rough shelter and a fire to be seen by ships. Making a bow by using a pen knife from his pocket, he also managed to shoot some of the wildlife, giving himself food to eat as he wasn't sure which plants were edible.
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<b>Discovery and Freedom</b> <br>
Ollie was finally rescued, after three months on the island, and was hailed as the CEO of Queen industries. His father had taught him everything he needed to know and now he managed the company efficiently, even providing expansion. He never forgot his parents' murder and tracked down the man who killed them, only to find him dead. Ollie knew that someone must have paid him for the hit, and knew that the police wouldn't do anything about it. So he took it upon himself to find the culprit by fighting the crime in Metropolis and the surrounding cities to find who paid for the hit on his parents. After the better part ten years, which he spent negotiating business agreements, spearheading the research and development into weapon systems he would soon use to locate his parents killers, he created several charities based on helping people who would otherwise turn to crime, and reinforced foreign relations for his company. During the ten years, he financed several new Aid Stations for refugees in the Middle East and phased out most of Queen Industries Military contracts, preferring to develop more non lethal weaponry such as the dart cross bow he would commandeer as a vigilante. He also funded a project by Star Labs, a subsidiary of Queen Industries, which created the metal Starium which was an alloy which could be honed to such a sharpness that it could cut through most metals without suffering. After so long securing his future, he finally became the vigilante named the Green Arrow, and honed his skills to fight crime and stop the event of his parents murder from ever repeating itself to others.
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