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Koriand'r (Starfire); The Tamaranean Princess
Topic Started: Feb 9 2009, 12:02 AM (168 Views)
{Zaya Ayame}
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Finally got her the way I want her xD Hope you like it =D

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Main Theme - Seventeen Ain't So Sweet - Red Jumpsuit Apparatus
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Battle Theme - Waiting - Red Jumpsuit Apparatus
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Rage Theme - No More Sorrow - Linkin Park
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Epic Battle Theme - 18 Wheeler - Pink
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Love Theme - Cat and Mouse - Red Jumpsuit Apparatus
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Solitary Theme - Inner Universe - Yoko Kanno/Origa
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Playful Theme - Respect - Pink
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Apologetic Theme - In Between - Linkin Park
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<b><i>Name</b></i>: Koriand'r (Starfire)
<br>
<b><i>Alias</b></i>: Kori Anders
<br>
<b><i>Race</b></i>: Tamaranian
<br>
<b><i>Gender</b></i>: Female
<br>
<b><i>Age</b></i>: Unknown but looks teen-ish
<br>
<b><i>Height</b></i>: 6' 0"
<br>
<b><i>Weight</b></i>: 155 lbs.
<br>
<b><i>Hair</b></i>: Red
<br>
<b><i>Eyes </b></i>: Green
<br>
<b><i>Alignment</b></i>: Lawful Good
<br>
<b><i>Personality</b></i>: A nymph, stoic, and warrior laced into one being; a wild sexuality, gentle innocence, and samurai toughness with quick-thinking and authentic optimism.
<br>
<b><i>Team</b></i>: Teen Titans
<br>
<b><i>Secret Origin</b></i>: Alien
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<b><i>Total Experience Gained:</i></b>
5,650
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<b><i>Experience Points Left To Use:</i></b>
50
<br>
<b><i>Experience Points Used:</i></b>
5,200
<br><br>
<b><i>Strength:</i></b>
4
<br>
<b><i>Agility:</i></b>
2
<br>
<b><i>Accuracy:</i></b>
2
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<b><i>Durability:</i></b>
4
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<b><i>Will Power:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Acrobatics lvl 4:</i></b>
Starfire and her race have a natural acrobative ability, being that most Tamaraneans hold the ability of flight.
Adds a +5% per level to Agility
Levels: Yes
<br>
XP Cost: 75 XP per level
<br><br>
<b><i>Starbolts lvl 1:</i></b>
During her time with the Psions, she gained the ability to create Starbolts, channeling her natural absorbed ultraviolet energy to her hands or eyes. As she does this, an field of energy contorts to her body and protects her from anything while flying. She may be vulnerable if she stops.
Levels: Yes
<br>
XP Cost: 500 XP per level
<br><br>
<b><i>Defense, Physical lvl 1:</i></b>
Starfire is very durable concussive elemental attacks.
Levels: Yes
<br>
XP Cost: 300 XP per level
<br><br>
<b><i>Flight lvl 2:</i></b>
Common of her race, Starfire can fly.
Levels: Yes
<br>
XP Cost: 200 XP per level
<br><br>
<b><i>Non-Human Physiology:</i></b>
She is able to survive in the Vaccume of space.
Levels: No
<br>
Base XP Cost: 300
<br><br>
<b><i>Super Strength Lvl 1:</i></b>
Starfire posseses strength beyond that of mortals for her size and weight. It is said that she is as strong as, or surpassing, Diana of Themyscira.
Levels: Yes
<br>
XP Cost: 600 XP per level
<br><br>
<b><i>Toughness Lvl 1:</i></b>
Starfire is durable against most types of dmanage, being is lasers, acid, or extreme heat. It's not that she has hardened skin, but her epidermis is chemically balanced to withstand any harmful chemicals or pressure to her body.
Levels: Yes
<br>
-Nullifies armor penetration
<br>
XP Cost: 700 XP per level
<br><br>
<b><i>Translation:</i></b>
Starfire is able to learn any language through touch.
Levels: No
<br>
XP Cost: 300
<br><br>
<b><i>Targeting lvl 1:</i></b>
Starfire can target her adversary and attack them with her starbolts.
Adds +10% to your Accuracy
Levels: Yes
<br>
XP Cost: 200 XP per level
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<b><i>Fighting Skills lvl 2:</i></b>
Starfire learned many of her fighting techniques from the Warlord of Okaara.
Adds a +10% to Accuracy
Levels: Yes
<br>
XP Cost: 200 XP per level
<br><br>
<b><i>I.Q Lvl 5:</i></b>
Starfire has an above Average I.Q.
Levels: Yes
<br>
XP Cost: 100
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<b><i>Alien:</i></b>
Starfire, though a good person at heart, is from another planet in the universe and this excerts it's self when ever she gets mad or simply speaks cheerfully. Some have trouble dealing with her powers and personality.
<br>
XP Worth: 400 XP
<br><br>
<b><i>Haunted Past:</i></b>
When Koriand'r and her sister, Komand'r, were sent to train with the Legendary Warlord of Okaara but Komand'r left and instead joined the Citadel and had Tamaran invaded. She and Kory was sold to slavery and later were taken for experimentation by the Psions. They performed gruesom tortures on both Kory and her sister, testing their body's energy mass limits to see how long it would take before they exploded but they both were ablt to escape.
-Medium Haunted Past
<br>
XP Worth: 400
<br><br>
<b><i>Non-Human Appearance:</i></b>
Koriand'r has orange skin and glowing green eyes, without a pupil, and a tall body which attracts attention, though some unwanted attention. By human standards, she's extremely attractive but this can cause some controversy to females and males alike.
<br>
-Slightly Non-Human: 200 XP
<br><br>
<b><i>Conflicting Interests:</i></b>
Sometimes, Koriand'r wishes that she could go back to Tamaran, with her mother and father, to her home planet but she would only be there to be forced to become Queen and attain a betrothed that she wouldn't love.
<br>
XP Worth: 350 XP
<br><br>
<b><i>Won't Break the Law:</i></b>
Koriand'r will never break the law, out of respect for other cultures and planets.
<br>
XP Worth: 300 XP
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Info
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<P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1>Being princess of one of the rarest and powerful ruling families, Koriand’r would almost seem like she had a normal childhood being so optimistic, wise and open to ideas. However, that is not the case as she is anything but normal. When Koriand’r was a child, she enjoyed the small leisure of her home planet, Tamaran. Her sister, Komand’r was the elder of both Tamaranean children but was unable to fly, rendering her handicapped by Tamaranean standards. Due to this, her sister hated Kory and the fact that she would take the throne. This would then lead to Komand’r selling out her home planet to the Citadel and having her sister sold to slavery in order to save the planet.
<br>
Komand’r and Koriand’r were both captured by the Psions, a sadistic race that experimented on both of them, wanting to find out how much energy they’re bodies could hold before they exploded. This was Koriand’r only chance to escape as she blasted away her restraints and, begrudgingly, rescued both her and her sister. It was then they went their own separate ways. Komand’r went to Tamaran to try and win the throne with the help of the Citadel and Koriand’r left to aimlessly wander about in space. After a while of travelling along planets to further her studies into other cultures and planet lifestyles she happened upon Earth and found it to be a beautiful place to stay for a few weeks. It was there that she found herself a home with the Teen Titans. It started when she first appeared on Earth, frightening many of its inhabitance when she nearly broke the cement from her fast landing. Curious and wishing to learn more so she could interact with this new race, Koriand’r found the closest male and engaged in Linguistic Contact, in other words: She kissed him. After a moment, Kory found that not only could she understand the inhabitance but she had also made a ‘friend’ in their language. He showed her around the city and after the day had ended wanted to kiss her some more. Refusing the nice man, or so she thought, she left to find a place to stay the night.
<br>
This didn’t go over well with him and he tried to grab her and make her stay. Angered by his forcefulness, she threw him away from her and did not take into accountancy her strength versus his and he was thrown much farther than she intended. Luckily for him, he landed in a nice, soft pile of trash. Still peeved, though apologetic, she turned away only find herself face-to-faces with Lex Luthor’s squadron of police forces. He had seemingly come to greet her himself. After speaking of her intentions and his planet they mutually agreed that she was new to the planet and needed a place to stay and a job. When asked how old she was, she simply replied:
<br>
‘On my planet, I would be the equivalent of a teenager though here I am much older than you.’
<br>
That was all Lex needed to hear before he offered a place on the Teen Titans. She didn’t want to refuse such a kind gesture and it was a chance to make ‘better’ friends.
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Jon
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Starbolts: This is blasting... right? So, she can't do blasts of energy like in the comics and cartoon? Blasting works by throwing yourself at the enemy, allowing her to fly at someone while being protected. it can't be projected into blasts, as your description seems to say... you want Force Blasts for that.

That's the only issue I got with the profile

Oh, and for your Translation power, I'll give you a -100 XP discount, because you need to touch someone to learn their language.
 
{Zaya Ayame}
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Mk, fixed it and added Force Blast (Starbolts) ^^

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Battle Theme - Waiting - Red Jumpsuit Apparatus
<br>
Rage Theme - No More Sorrow - Linkin Park
<br>
Epic Battle Theme - 18 Wheeler - Pink
<br>
Love Theme - Cat and Mouse - Red Jumpsuit Apparatus
<br>
Solitary Theme - Inner Universe - Yoko Kanno/Origa
<br>
Playful Theme - Respect - Pink
<br>
Apologetic Theme - In Between - Linkin Park
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Understanding Theme - Misery Loves It's Company - Red Jumpsuit Apparatus
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<b><i>Name</b></i>: Koriand'r (Starfire)
<br>
<b><i>Alias</b></i>: Kori Anders
<br>
<b><i>Race</b></i>: Tamaranian
<br>
<b><i>Gender</b></i>: Female
<br>
<b><i>Age</b></i>: Unknown but looks teen-ish
<br>
<b><i>Height</b></i>: 6' 0"
<br>
<b><i>Weight</b></i>: 155 lbs.
<br>
<b><i>Hair</b></i>: Red
<br>
<b><i>Eyes </b></i>: Green
<br>
<b><i>Alignment</b></i>: Lawful Good
<br>
<b><i>Personality</b></i>: A nymph, stoic, and warrior laced into one being; a wild sexuality, gentle innocence, and samurai toughness with quick-thinking and authentic optimism.
<br>
<b><i>Team</b></i>: Teen Titans
<br>
<b><i>Secret Origin</b></i>: Alien
<br>
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<b><i>Total Experience Gained:</i></b>
0
<br>
<b><i>Experience Points Left To Use:</i></b>
50
<br>
<b><i>Experience Points Used:</i></b>
5,700
<br><br>
<b><i>Strength:</i></b>
4
<br>
<b><i>Agility:</i></b>
2
<br>
<b><i>Accuracy:</i></b>
2
<br>
<b><i>Durability:</i></b>
4
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<b><i>Will Power:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Acrobatics lvl 4:</i></b>
Starfire and her race have a natural acrobative ability, being that most Tamaraneans hold the ability of flight.
Adds a +5% per level to Agility
Levels: Yes
<br>
XP Cost: 75 XP per level
<br><br>
<b><i>Blasting lvl 1:</i></b>
As she uses her Starbolts she can field of energy contorts to her body and protects her from anything while flying. She may be vulnerable if she stops.
<br>
Levels: Yes
<br>
XP Cost: 500 XP per level
<br><br>
<b><i>Defense, Physical lvl 1:</i></b>
Starfire is very durable concussive elemental attacks.
<br>
Levels: Yes
<br>
XP Cost: 300 XP per level
<br><br>
<b><i>Force Blast [Starbolts] lvl 2:</i></b>
During her time with the Psions, she gained the ability to create Starbolts, channeling her natural absorbed ultraviolet energy to her hands or eyes.
<br>
.Linked to Star Bolts: -50
<br>
Levels: Yes
<br>
XP Cost: 250 XP per level
<br><br>
<b><i>Flight lvl 2:</i></b>
Common of her race, Starfire can fly.
<br>
Levels: Yes
<br>
XP Cost: 200 XP per level
<br><br>
<b><i>Non-Human Physiology:</i></b>
She is able to survive in the Vaccume of space.
<br>
Levels: No
<br>
Base XP Cost: 300
<br><br>
<b><i>Super Strength Lvl 1:</i></b>
Starfire posseses strength beyond that of mortals for her size and weight. It is said that she is as strong as, or surpassing, Diana of Themyscira.
<br>
Levels: Yes
<br>
XP Cost: 600 XP per level
<br><br>
<b><i>Toughness Lvl 1:</i></b>
Starfire is durable against most types of dmanage, being is lasers, acid, or extreme heat. It's not that she has hardened skin, but her epidermis is chemically balanced to withstand any harmful chemicals or pressure to her body.
<br>
Levels: Yes
<br>
-Nullifies armor penetration
<br>
XP Cost: 700 XP per level
<br><br>
<b><i>Translation:</i></b>
Starfire is able to learn any language through touch.
<br>
.Touch Required: -100 XP
<br>
Levels: No
<br>
XP Cost: 300
<br><br>
<b><i>Targeting lvl 1:</i></b>
Starfire can target her adversary and attack them with her starbolts.
Adds +10% to your Accuracy
<br>
Levels: Yes
<br>
XP Cost: 200 XP per level
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<b><i>Fighting Skills lvl 2:</i></b>
Starfire learned many of her fighting techniques from the Warlord of Okaara.
Adds a +10% to Accuracy
<br>
Levels: Yes
<br>
XP Cost: 200 XP per level
<br><br>
<b><i>I.Q Lvl 5:</i></b>
Starfire has an above Average I.Q.
<br>
Levels: Yes
<br>
XP Cost: 100
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<b><i>Alien:</i></b>
Starfire, though a good person at heart, is from another planet in the universe and this excerts it's self when ever she gets mad or simply speaks cheerfully. Some have trouble dealing with her powers and personality.
<br>
XP Worth: 400 XP
<br><br>
<b><i>Haunted Past:</i></b>
When Koriand'r and her sister, Komand'r, were sent to train with the Legendary Warlord of Okaara but Komand'r left and instead joined the Citadel and had Tamaran invaded. She and Kory was sold to slavery and later were taken for experimentation by the Psions. They performed gruesom tortures on both Kory and her sister, testing their body's energy mass limits to see how long it would take before they exploded but they both were ablt to escape.
-Medium Haunted Past
<br>
XP Worth: 400
<br><br>
<b><i>Non-Human Appearance:</i></b>
Koriand'r has orange skin and glowing green eyes, without a pupil, and a tall body which attracts attention, though some unwanted attention. By human standards, she's extremely attractive but this can cause some controversy to females and males alike.
<br>
-Slightly Non-Human: 200 XP
<br><br>
<b><i>Conflicting Interests:</i></b>
Sometimes, Koriand'r wishes that she could go back to Tamaran, with her mother and father, to her home planet but she would only be there to be forced to become Queen and attain a betrothed that she wouldn't love.
<br>
XP Worth: 350 XP
<br><br>
<b><i>Won't Break the Law:</i></b>
Koriand'r will never break the law, out of respect for other cultures and planets.
<br>
XP Worth: 300 XP
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<b><i>Money:</i></b>
$0
<br>
<b><i>Items:</i></b>
Info
<br>
<b><i>Weapons:</i></b>
Info
<br>
<b><i>Armour:</i></b>
Info
<br>
<b><i>Transport:</i></b>
Info
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<P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1>Being princess of one of the rarest and powerful ruling families, Koriand’r would almost seem like she had a normal childhood being so optimistic, wise and open to ideas. However, that is not the case as she is anything but normal. When Koriand’r was a child, she enjoyed the small leisure of her home planet, Tamaran. Her sister, Komand’r was the elder of both Tamaranean children but was unable to fly, rendering her handicapped by Tamaranean standards. Due to this, her sister hated Kory and the fact that she would take the throne. This would then lead to Komand’r selling out her home planet to the Citadel and having her sister sold to slavery in order to save the planet.
<br>
Komand’r and Koriand’r were both captured by the Psions, a sadistic race that experimented on both of them, wanting to find out how much energy they’re bodies could hold before they exploded. This was Koriand’r only chance to escape as she blasted away her restraints and, begrudgingly, rescued both her and her sister. It was then they went their own separate ways. Komand’r went to Tamaran to try and win the throne with the help of the Citadel and Koriand’r left to aimlessly wander about in space. After a while of travelling along planets to further her studies into other cultures and planet lifestyles she happened upon Earth and found it to be a beautiful place to stay for a few weeks. It was there that she found herself a home with the Teen Titans. It started when she first appeared on Earth, frightening many of its inhabitance when she nearly broke the cement from her fast landing. Curious and wishing to learn more so she could interact with this new race, Koriand’r found the closest male and engaged in Linguistic Contact, in other words: She kissed him. After a moment, Kory found that not only could she understand the inhabitance but she had also made a ‘friend’ in their language. He showed her around the city and after the day had ended wanted to kiss her some more. Refusing the nice man, or so she thought, she left to find a place to stay the night.
<br>
This didn’t go over well with him and he tried to grab her and make her stay. Angered by his forcefulness, she threw him away from her and did not take into accountancy her strength versus his and he was thrown much farther than she intended. Luckily for him, he landed in a nice, soft pile of trash. Still peeved, though apologetic, she turned away only find herself face-to-faces with Lex Luthor’s squadron of police forces. He had seemingly come to greet her himself. After speaking of her intentions and his planet they mutually agreed that she was new to the planet and needed a place to stay and a job. When asked how old she was, she simply replied:
<br>
‘On my planet, I would be the equivalent of a teenager though here I am much older than you.’
<br>
That was all Lex needed to hear before he offered a place on the Teen Titans. She didn’t want to refuse such a kind gesture and it was a chance to make ‘better’ friends.
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Jon
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Alright, there's a few new issues now...

First of all, you got 5650 XP to spend, not 5750 all of sudden

Second, for your Forceblast and Translation, you don't subtract the modifier cost from the cost that you present in XP Cost... the Force Blast should be 200 XP/lvl and Translation should be 200

Finally, even counting it at that, I get your total XP usage to 4800 XP, so you got a lot more you can spend.
 
{Zaya Ayame}
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Fixed >.<

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Main Theme - Seventeen Ain't So Sweet - Red Jumpsuit Apparatus
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Battle Theme - Waiting - Red Jumpsuit Apparatus
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Rage Theme - No More Sorrow - Linkin Park
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Epic Battle Theme - 18 Wheeler - Pink
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Love Theme - Cat and Mouse - Red Jumpsuit Apparatus
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Solitary Theme - Inner Universe - Yoko Kanno/Origa
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Playful Theme - Respect - Pink
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Understanding Theme - Misery Loves It's Company - Red Jumpsuit Apparatus
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<b><i>Name</b></i>: Koriand'r (Starfire)
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<b><i>Alias</b></i>: Kori Anders
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<b><i>Race</b></i>: Tamaranian
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<b><i>Gender</b></i>: Female
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<b><i>Age</b></i>: Unknown but looks teen-ish
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<b><i>Height</b></i>: 6' 0"
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<b><i>Weight</b></i>: 155 lbs.
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<b><i>Hair</b></i>: Red
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<b><i>Eyes </b></i>: Green
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<b><i>Alignment</b></i>: Lawful Good
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<b><i>Personality</b></i>: A nymph, stoic, and warrior laced into one being; a wild sexuality, gentle innocence, and samurai toughness with quick-thinking and authentic optimism.
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<b><i>Team</b></i>: Teen Titans
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<b><i>Secret Origin</b></i>: Alien
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<b><i>Total Experience Gained:</i></b>
0
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<b><i>Experience Points Left To Use:</i></b>
50
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<b><i>Experience Points Used:</i></b>
5,600
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<b><i>Strength:</i></b>
4
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<b><i>Agility:</i></b>
2
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<b><i>Accuracy:</i></b>
2
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<b><i>Durability:</i></b>
4
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<b><i>Will Power:</i></b>
3
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<b><i>Acrobatics lvl 4:</i></b>
Starfire and her race have a natural acrobative ability, being that most Tamaraneans hold the ability of flight.
Adds a +5% per level to Agility
Levels: Yes
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XP Cost: 75 XP per level
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<b><i>Blasting lvl 1:</i></b>
As she uses her Starbolts she can field of energy contorts to her body and protects her from anything while flying. She may be vulnerable if she stops.
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Levels: Yes
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XP Cost: 500 XP per level
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<b><i>Defense, Physical lvl 1:</i></b>
Starfire is very durable concussive elemental attacks.
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Levels: Yes
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XP Cost: 300 XP per level
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<b><i>Force Blast [Starbolts] lvl 3:</i></b>
During her time with the Psions, she gained the ability to create Starbolts, channeling her natural absorbed ultraviolet energy to her hands or eyes.
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.Linked to Star Bolts: -50
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Levels: Yes
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XP Cost: 200 XP per level
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<b><i>Flight lvl 2:</i></b>
Common of her race, Starfire can fly.
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Levels: Yes
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XP Cost: 200 XP per level
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<b><i>Non-Human Physiology:</i></b>
She is able to survive in the Vaccume of space.
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Levels: No
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Base XP Cost: 300
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<b><i>Super Strength Lvl 1:</i></b>
Starfire posseses strength beyond that of mortals for her size and weight. It is said that she is as strong as, or surpassing, Diana of Themyscira.
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Levels: Yes
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XP Cost: 600 XP per level
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<b><i>Toughness Lvl 1:</i></b>
Starfire is durable against most types of dmanage, being is lasers, acid, or extreme heat. It's not that she has hardened skin, but her epidermis is chemically balanced to withstand any harmful chemicals or pressure to her body.
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Levels: Yes
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-Nullifies armor penetration
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XP Cost: 700 XP per level
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<b><i>Translation:</i></b>
Starfire is able to learn any language through touch.
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.Touch Required: -100 XP
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Levels: No
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XP Cost: 200
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<b><i>Targeting lvl 3:</i></b>
Starfire can target her adversary and attack them with her starbolts.
Adds +10% to your Accuracy
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Levels: Yes
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XP Cost: 200 XP per level
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<b><i>Fighting Skills lvl 3:</i></b>
Starfire learned many of her fighting techniques from the Warlord of Okaara.
Adds a +10% to Accuracy
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Levels: Yes
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XP Cost: 200 XP per level
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<b><i>I.Q Lvl 5:</i></b>
Starfire has an above Average I.Q.
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Levels: Yes
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XP Cost: 100
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<b><i>Alien:</i></b>
Starfire, though a good person at heart, is from another planet in the universe and this excerts it's self when ever she gets mad or simply speaks cheerfully. Some have trouble dealing with her powers and personality.
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XP Worth: 400 XP
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<b><i>Haunted Past:</i></b>
When Koriand'r and her sister, Komand'r, were sent to train with the Legendary Warlord of Okaara but Komand'r left and instead joined the Citadel and had Tamaran invaded. She and Kory was sold to slavery and later were taken for experimentation by the Psions. They performed gruesom tortures on both Kory and her sister, testing their body's energy mass limits to see how long it would take before they exploded but they both were ablt to escape.
-Medium Haunted Past
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XP Worth: 400
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<b><i>Non-Human Appearance:</i></b>
Koriand'r has orange skin and glowing green eyes, without a pupil, and a tall body which attracts attention, though some unwanted attention. By human standards, she's extremely attractive but this can cause some controversy to females and males alike.
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-Slightly Non-Human: 200 XP
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<b><i>Conflicting Interests:</i></b>
Sometimes, Koriand'r wishes that she could go back to Tamaran, with her mother and father, to her home planet but she would only be there to be forced to become Queen and attain a betrothed that she wouldn't love.
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XP Worth: 350 XP
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<b><i>Won't Break the Law:</i></b>
Koriand'r will never break the law, out of respect for other cultures and planets.
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XP Worth: 300 XP
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<P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1>Being princess of one of the rarest and powerful ruling families, Koriand’r would almost seem like she had a normal childhood being so optimistic, wise and open to ideas. However, that is not the case as she is anything but normal. When Koriand’r was a child, she enjoyed the small leisure of her home planet, Tamaran. Her sister, Komand’r was the elder of both Tamaranean children but was unable to fly, rendering her handicapped by Tamaranean standards. Due to this, her sister hated Kory and the fact that she would take the throne. This would then lead to Komand’r selling out her home planet to the Citadel and having her sister sold to slavery in order to save the planet.
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Komand’r and Koriand’r were both captured by the Psions, a sadistic race that experimented on both of them, wanting to find out how much energy they’re bodies could hold before they exploded. This was Koriand’r only chance to escape as she blasted away her restraints and, begrudgingly, rescued both her and her sister. It was then they went their own separate ways. Komand’r went to Tamaran to try and win the throne with the help of the Citadel and Koriand’r left to aimlessly wander about in space. After a while of travelling along planets to further her studies into other cultures and planet lifestyles she happened upon Earth and found it to be a beautiful place to stay for a few weeks. It was there that she found herself a home with the Teen Titans. It started when she first appeared on Earth, frightening many of its inhabitance when she nearly broke the cement from her fast landing. Curious and wishing to learn more so she could interact with this new race, Koriand’r found the closest male and engaged in Linguistic Contact, in other words: She kissed him. After a moment, Kory found that not only could she understand the inhabitance but she had also made a ‘friend’ in their language. He showed her around the city and after the day had ended wanted to kiss her some more. Refusing the nice man, or so she thought, she left to find a place to stay the night.
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This didn’t go over well with him and he tried to grab her and make her stay. Angered by his forcefulness, she threw him away from her and did not take into accountancy her strength versus his and he was thrown much farther than she intended. Luckily for him, he landed in a nice, soft pile of trash. Still peeved, though apologetic, she turned away only find herself face-to-faces with Lex Luthor’s squadron of police forces. He had seemingly come to greet her himself. After speaking of her intentions and his planet they mutually agreed that she was new to the planet and needed a place to stay and a job. When asked how old she was, she simply replied:
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‘On my planet, I would be the equivalent of a teenager though here I am much older than you.’
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That was all Lex needed to hear before he offered a place on the Teen Titans. She didn’t want to refuse such a kind gesture and it was a chance to make ‘better’ friends.
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Jon
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