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Xianian Ion; The Black Lotus
Topic Started: Feb 11 2009, 07:17 AM (299 Views)
Shockzine
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<TD><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff><FONT size=1><B><I>Name:</I></B> Xianian Ion<BR><B><I>Alias:</I></B> Black Lotus<BR><B><I>Race:</I></B>&nbsp;Adaptialians<BR><B><I>Gender:</I></B>&nbsp; Male<BR><B><I>Age:</I></B>&nbsp;16 <BR><B><I>Height:</I></B>&nbsp;6'1 <BR><B><I>Weight:</I></B>&nbsp;168 <BR><B><I>Hair:</I></B>&nbsp;Platinum <BR><B><I>Eyes:</I></B>&nbsp;Sliver <BR><B><I>Alignment:</I></B>&nbsp;Neutral Good&nbsp;<BR><B><I>Personality:</I></B>&nbsp;Follows his own code of ethics, based upon Ancient teachings of the White Lotus masters, very diciplined in his thoughts and actions.<BR><B><I>Team:</I></B> Info <BR><B><I>Secret Origin:</I></B> Alien[powers gained through the absorbtion of&nbsp;lunar light... "if over 24 hours goes by without Xianian being exposed to direct moonlight for at least 5 minutes xianian loses his powers"</FONT></FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1><B>Total Experience Gained:</B> 0
<BR><B>Experience Points Left To Use:</B> 150
<BR><B>Experience Points Used:</B> 5700

<BR><BR><B>Strength:</B> 1+1=2
<BR><STRONG>Agility/Speed: 7 ; </STRONG>11.9[dodge]
&nbsp;<BR><B>Accuracy:</B> 1+1=2
<BR><B>Durability:</B> 1
<BR><B>Will Power:</B> 5


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Super Speed<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; through a combination of both meditation to allow him to truely control all of his musccles at once and his mutantations. Xianian can move faster then most people can follow, even able to run on water if he moves fast enough. </FONT></FONT></FONT><FONT color=#ffffff><BR><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" size=1>Levels: No<BR>XP Cost:&nbsp;800 XP<BR><BR></FONT><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif"><FONT size=1><FONT color=#ffffff><STRONG>

Animal Senses<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; due to xianian's rapid evolution his eyes sharpened to the perfection of an eagle able to pick up fine detals from many miles away,&nbsp;also being able to reflect light to see in almost perfect darkness while still being able to see in color. &nbsp;his nose became more sensitive like that of a polar bear, able to smell someone from up to 90 miles away. his ears became longer and more atuned to that of a dolphin being able to hear 14x better then&nbsp;the normal human. &nbsp;<BR>Levels: 10<BR>XP Cost:&nbsp;500 [50/lvl]</FONT><BR><BR><STRONG>

Enhanced Healing Factor<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; Due to Xianian's adaptialian power, his body regenerates many times faster then normal. stemming from his super speed, wounds are repaired in mear minutes.&nbsp;&nbsp;[linked to super speed. ] <BR>lvl: 1<BR>xp:325<BR><BR></FONT></FONT><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif"><FONT size=1><FONT color=#ffffff><STRONG>

Jumping<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; Through his evolutions, Xianian's legs became like that of a Flea, allowing him to jump many times higher then normal. <BR>Levels: 10<BR>XP Cost:&nbsp;500 [50/lvl]<BR><BR><STRONG>

Reflexive dodge<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; Xianian can dodge most anything just by instinct alone.[linked to super speed,&nbsp;]<BR>Level: 5&nbsp;<BR>XP: 375&nbsp;[75/lvl]<BR></FONT><STRONG><BR>

Wall Climbing<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; in tandem with his acrobatics and speed and keeping the legendary balance of the white lotus&nbsp;, Xianian can run, jump, crawl, or even walk up walls with little difficulty. [linked to super speed] &nbsp;<BR>Lvl 1<br>Xp Cost: 50<br><BR><STRONG>
Coming Soon...<BR><BR>

Super Inteligence<br>
Xianian's brain is constantly adapting to his suroundings and expanding to stronger forms<br><br>

Phase Shift&nbsp;<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; due to his rapid speed his atoms can vibrate so fast as to temporarly allow himself to phaze out of focus allowing most objects the ability to pass completely through him.<BR><BR><STRONG>

Manipulate Body Density<BR>&nbsp;&nbsp; </STRONG>As his Adaptialian genes continues to mutate, Xianian has found that he could toughen the power of his body and amplify his resistance to damage, or quite litterally become nothing but a whisp of air floating through the wind.<BR><BR><STRONG>

Prescience<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; As he becomes more and more focused in the White lotus teachings, as well as the extra&nbsp;mental focus granted by his adaptialian power. He has become intuned to danger moments before such danger occurs. <BR><BR><STRONG>

Super Human Senses<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; a sharper evolution of his animal instincts, this enhances his hearing, touch, smell, taste and sight to such a atuned state it is almost unmatched even by the most advanced most sensitive equipment known to man.<BR><BR><STRONG>

Natural Fighter<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; Xianian is already a excelent master in the White Lotus art, his Adaptialian gene just amplifies that aspect.<BR><BR><STRONG>

Perfect Aim<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; with incredible reflex, Xianian is able to both strike and aim with incredible accuracy.<STRONG> <BR></STRONG><BR><STRONG>

Defence(mental)<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; Xianian has focused and meditated his mind to be a perfect vault that none may enter. His Adaptialian power further focused his efforts. [skilled]<BR><BR><STRONG>

Telepathy<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; his mind has been trained to the point of mental perfection, once again fueled past its limits through his Adaptialian gene.<BR><BR><STRONG>

Telekenisis<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; steming from the same mental perfection, Xianian can now make his will a reality.<STRONG> <BR><BR>

Enhanced Vision<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; as his mutation grows and progresses in perfection. Xianian is able to see with absolute accuracy whatever he needs to see<STRONG>. <BR><BR>

Self contained life form<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; as his experance expands and grows, his gene begins to evolve him into an immortal. and as an immortal he no longer requires those things that render life human. he may still choose to preform those situations, but he no longer feels hunger, sleepy, suffication, nor would he be effected by the enviroment.[linked to Immortal]<BR><BR><STRONG>

Immortal<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; Xianian is now a Endless Being or a being without end[not one of the endless race], as such his body will never fail him, nor will he ever truely die. He has quite litterally become a living God on earth.&nbsp;[young immortal]<BR><BR><STRONG>

Non human Physiology<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; Xianian's body has now reached such a state of perfection that he is now as&nbsp;Nearly&nbsp;Impossible&nbsp;to kill as a New God, he can survive as long as he has the will to live. </FONT></FONT></FONT></P></FONT></TD></TR>
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Concentration</STRONG><BR>&nbsp;&nbsp; Meditation helped Xianian to develop a high mental discipline, allowing him not only to keep a clear head in battles, but to also control his emotions while in battle.<BR>XP Cost: 200 XP</SPAN></SPAN><BR><BR></FONT></FONT></FONT><FONT color=#ffffff><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif"><FONT size=1><STRONG>

I.Q.<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; Xianian has above average intelegence and the knowhow to solve problems as they are given<BR>Levels: 7<BR>total xp: 700<BR><BR></FONT></FONT></FONT><FONT color=#ffffff><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif"><FONT size=1><STRONG>

Enhanced Cognition Speed</STRONG><BR>&nbsp;&nbsp; As through concentration, and intense focus, xianian can process many issues both calmly and effectively in an instant.<BR>Levels: No<BR>Cost: 600 XP<BR><BR><STRONG>

Fighting Skills[White Lotus Kung Fu]<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; Xianian, is a&nbsp;young monk&nbsp;in the fighting style of White Lotus Kung Fu, an ancient chinese art almost thought to be lost. <BR>lvl 1<BR>cost: 200<BR><BR><STRONG>

Non-powered Acrobatics<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; Being a Fighter of the White Lotus style, Xianian, has trained his body to flex and bend better then most humans<BR>lvl 2<BR>cost: 200<BR><BR><STRONG>

Pressure Points<BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; The tactical prowress of the White Lotus style is generated in its ability to make pin-point accurate strikes to various nerves and blood vessles. through these strikes, the intended victim could be rendered immobile in a single strike. However, due to the amount of focus, discipline, and concentration that is developed while learning this style, a&nbsp;person trained in White Lotus can&nbsp;hold back this&nbsp;aspect while they fight if they so choose. <BR>lvl 1<BR>cost&nbsp;300<BR><BR>

<b>Photographic Memory</b></STRONG><BR>&nbsp;&nbsp; as his Adaptilian gene perfected xianian's body, his mind was also perfected allowing anything seen to be stored and recolected with ease.<BR>cost: 300<BR><BR>

<b>Coming Soon....</b><BR><BR><STRONG>

<b>Weapon Skills</b><BR></STRONG>&nbsp;&nbsp; through the white lotus teaching, Xianian is proficient in many forms of ancient weapons. bo staff, nunchuku, sai daggers, spear,&nbsp;longsword[single handed and two handed]. katana, double bladed weapons, hand daggers, two weapon fighting, spears and polearms, kama, tri part staff, shurikens[ninja daggers and stars], Mace, chain flail, chain whip, spear whip,&nbsp;and bo sticks. He is so versitile that&nbsp;he can use anything he can grab as a make shift weapon and fit it into one of those fighting styles. <BR><BR><STRONG>

<b>Stealth</b></STRONG><BR>&nbsp;&nbsp; through rigious training, xianian has learned how to not only be feet of foot, but silent as the grave. his movements are only heard by those he wishes to know he is coming.<BR><BR><STRONG>

<b>Targeting</b></STRONG><BR>&nbsp;&nbsp; through his white lotus training, xianian has become a master at archery, firearms, shurikens, daggers, and many other weapons, equal only to his versitile use of hand to hand weapons. </FONT></FONT></FONT></SPAN></SPAN></FONT></TD></TR>
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<TD><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1><B>Alien:</B>&nbsp;Xianian is an Adaptialian from the Planet Adaptia&nbsp;in the&nbsp;Drow system&nbsp;and is not of this planet. ~400 XP&nbsp;&nbsp;<BR><BR><B>

Non Human Appearance:</B> Onix black skin, white hair, pointed ears, silver eyes... its not too hard to determine that xianian is more then he seems. ~400xp<BR><BR><STRONG>

No Secret Identity:</STRONG>&nbsp; Xianian chooses to not conceal his Identity. for the most part, this is to keep any focus away from his monk brothers. but also, he sees no reason for lies and deception. he is what he is and he will do what he does... he knows that while he may not be human... it is his actions and not his genetics that define who he is. And he will let people see his actions and judge for themselves.

~500<BR><BR><STRONG><EM>Vulnerable Loved Ones</EM>:</STRONG> The monks of the Temple of the White lotus, are the closest thing to family that Xianian has. They took him in, and raised him as their own. while they are masters of kung fu, they are also pacifists in nature and it would not be hard to use them as leverage agenst xianian. ~300<BR><BR><B>

Conflicting Intrests:</B> Xianian is a student of the white lotus. his way is that of non violence, however not fighting when others are in danger could lead to a greater harm. he is constantly balancing this ideal in his mind when approached with a confrontation with another. ~250</FONT></TD></TR>
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<P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1>Xianian was born in on planet Adaptialia. His mother at child birth, and his father died shortly after durring a war that was occuring on the planet. As a message to others, baby Xianian's body was shot out into space as a sign of terror for those that didnt submit to the warlords rule. Xianian however being a newborn, suddenly evolved as he touched the upper atmosphere of the planet. A giant rocky formation came over his body and encased him in a state of suspended animation. For thousands of years he drifted across the universe until he was caught in Jupiter's orbit and flung toward earth. He crashlanded in the mountians of China,&nbsp;a few monks went to investigate the crash and found baby Xianian huddled among the wreckage, his body adapting and absorbed the moonlight, and revived him. The monks saw this crying baby in the center of the meteor and seeing this as a sign from&nbsp;buddah,&nbsp;took him in and raised him as one of them. When he turned&nbsp;3 the monks began to train him in the ancient ways of the White Lotus.&nbsp;they&nbsp;began instiling in him the core values of the White Lotus; Honor, Discipline, Respect,&nbsp;Sacrifice, Focus, Loyalty,&nbsp;and Purity.&nbsp;Once Xianian became 12, he began experencing rapid changes in his body. His skin became blacker then cole, hair whiter then pearls, his ears elongated to a point, and his eyes became like silver. <BR><BR>The Monks knew he was an alien, but he didn't care.&nbsp;Xianian was forbidden to leave the temple.&nbsp;His only respite being the&nbsp;meditative training.&nbsp;Not long after did Xianian begin to notice that he could move faster then he used to. one day while preforming a elaborate kata that normally took 5 minutes to complete, he was able to finish&nbsp;in less then 5 seconds.&nbsp;The monks&nbsp;were amazed, not only at Xianian's speed, but how humble he was. I never tried to boast about his powers, his discipline was that strong. <BR><BR>Once&nbsp;he turned 16, a letter appeared undernethe his door of the temple.&nbsp;It contained no return address but had a warning inside of it. Someone&nbsp;found out&nbsp;about Xianian, and informed the Chinese government about him. The monks drew together to keep Xianian as one of them, but he felt this was his time to sacrifice something for them and left the temple, proclaming that he would travel to america. <BR><BR>the next day Xianian set off on his own, covered in a brown cloak. he began with a slow run, but now that he had no restrictions he decided to test himself and&nbsp;sped off, it took him no more then a few minutes to reach the otherside of China. He was amazed with his&nbsp;own speed. Secretly he wished to know what exactly he was, maybe this&nbsp;journey was what he needed&nbsp;to find out.&nbsp;<br><br> Xianian soon just kept going until he reached the pacific ocean. How ever he didn't stop running, his speed was enough to where he could run on the surface of the water without sinking. after a few hours he arrived on the west coast of america at about midnight. he had to take a break. his breath was far from gone. he was used to training for hours on end, but running, at that speed for so long... he was just exausted and colapsed. Hours later, he awoke lying in a bed. "dont be frightened" a girl said next to him. "I found you on the beach and brought you here. I'm Illiana" xianian couldnt understand a word of what she was saying, as he only knew chinese, but her demener told him what he needed to know. he stayed with her for a few months, helping her with her housework and such and in return she unknowingly was teaching him english, or at least a basic understanding of the language. he trained daily outside meditating in the surf on the beach, and honing his skills. Eventually he began to take jobs nearby in L.A. to help pay for his stay, and worked hard in a asian grocery. one day while working, Illiana came to buy some supplies when mobsters began to swarm in. Xianian along with the others followed their instructions as they were all taken hostage and brought into the basement. the owner apperantly didn't pay his protection money. Just as they were about to excacute everyone as a warning Xianian sprung into action and very swiftly knocked all of them out. the police arrived shortly after and made a report of the situation. the next day Xianian was fired for not stopping them sooner, and the police discovered that he was an Illegal Alien[Alien as from outside usa] and came to take him into custady. Illiana, had already forseen this and had called a relative in gotham city. Xianian had Illiana hold on to his back, and off they went arriving in Gotham in just a few hours time, and arrived at her relatives home where they both now reside...</FONT></P>
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Alright... Warning! Several hours of studying on an assignment that I still dunno how to do = me being brain dead, so NOT gonna check math or anything, will possibly miss stuff and apologizing in advance if I end up typing something that's rude or in any way taken as more negative than it was meant to be.

Personal Information

Secret Origin: Sorry, but a solar eclipse as your weakness? Not gonna allow that. Even with those crystals, since it'd be metagaming even trying to find those without somehow learning of them.

Powers

All powers with it: The Rare Power Loss based on your Secret Origin will NOT be allowed. You won't gain two advantages from the same, specific thing that makes you lose power.

Mastery of Elements: No. This WON'T happen. You won't be allowed a mastery of elements that A) Allows you to create or manipulate multiple elemental attacks like that, B) still works at half effect after being negated and C) Has the Skilled Modifier. That CANNOT be applied to Mastery of Elements.

Flight: No to the Skilled Modifier being applied to Flight. Again, Flight is not something you become able to do even if you train long enough.

Skills

I.Q. : Does he really need an IQ of 10? If he does, come up with a good enough reason that he has it... as the rules say you must. At the moment, I don't see why he must have that.

Photographic Memory can only be gained at Character Creation

Challenges

No Secret Identity: This one doesn't fly. Unlike other chars with No Secret Identity, he doesn't have much of a personal life that he would wish to hide. For instance, my Flash char, who, while being a super hero, also has a personal life aside from it, even if his identity is not hidden in it.

Vulnerable Loved Ones: Doesn't fly either. He was raised by monks, not his grandfather, and you don't even mention that grandfather anywhere.
 
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ack sorry for a few of them... thought i got rid of all the grandfather referances when i was editing the bio from marvels to fit here.


ill fix that and talk to you about the rest later jon. ^_^
 
Shockzine
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should all be fixed
 
Abusse
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Shockzine
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you just worry about your own bios nikon...
 
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Jon
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When you make changes, make the changes in a new post.

Statistics

Only actual stats goes here. Remove that dodge thing.

Powers

Immortal: You won't become an Endless. The Endless are another kind of beings altogether, of which only 7 exists... 7 which are already set. Use another name for this.

Non-Human Physiology: The 'survive as long as he has the will to live' bit... that won't fly.

Challenges

Still can't see the No Secret Identity being more easily approved...

Origin

I highly doubt that he'd just be able to get jobs, no matter where, with his appearance...
 
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>_< geeze what is up with you people and terminology[refering to immortal].... on marvels exar got on my case because I said he became a living god on earth. so i change it to endless being so people wouldnt get confused and start worshiping me like a cult... then you say endless is a type of race or something. endless means just that...without end. when he becomes immortal he becomes a being without end. he can be defeated and seemingly killed but after this he will always come back some way or how.

NHP... ok this is a VERY weak version of lucifers and argents NHP... the only thing it does is that.

now you allow the joker to instantly be immortal.... but someone cant have this as a NHP... gimme a break dude... as far as comics go.. sure i can understand that... but man you cannot be serious as far as allowing some characters to do some things just because they are DC trademarks.... on the same note, letting aquaman be "alien" and take the "alien" challenge when a demon cant? I swear some things that are being done arent makeing any sense.

and why cant Xianian have no secret idenity, he tried to keep it.. he was exposed and left his own fricken country because he was wanted... once he arrived in the US any life he had was instantly lost as soon as he revealed his powers to save a few people, and forced him to leave to the other side of the country. all because of his Idenity being known. your "flash" character shares something simular being exposed on TV... with the exception that he is loved, while mine is hated for being an illegal alien, and then in his own country for being a true alien... just because someone lives in a temple doesnt mean they dont have a life with the fellow monks or with villagers that visit the temple..

and finally... yes you are right... it would be hard for him to find a job I never said he found one immedatly..... why do you think he is working as a bagger in a ASIAN grocery store.... they arent nessacarrly 1. in the best part of town... 2. a high paying job... 3. owned by people that really care about how wierd their employees are... as long as they work.. and can speak chineese, korean, japaneese or veitnamese they dont care if you look like quasimodo or if you are in the country illegally.
 
Jon
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Endless: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Endless_(comics)
So... change it to something else.

Yes, characters from the comics actually will be allowed some things that others can't do. That's the advantage to making those instead of originals. And there's a big difference between the description you got and the description that the Joker got... and don't compare it to Argent's. I hadn't seen that you had changed it until just now, and what you've put up won't be approved.

And alright, I'm willing to let you have no secret identity then.
 
Shockzine
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ill change it.... i eneded up looking at the endless when researching dream... I like death.. :P

still dude... thats some powerful stuff... and well DC doesnt have too many intresting characters..either overpowered or horribly underpowered.. ah well how about this then.. "due to xianian's unstable DNA, if he is suddenly thrust into a situation that would instantly kill him, his body is able to suddenly evolve and encase him into a protective cacoon and set him into hybernation until the conditions change to something better.. situations that this would include would be extreme heat, cold, space, radiation & explosion[nuke blast], etc. extreme means instant death situations like thrown into the sun, in a nuke blast, thrown into space, blasted with a deadly flash freeze. basicly this will 1/2 the word requirements for revival posts.
 
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Isn't that powerful for the Joker... it just means he won't have to write a ressurection post if he dies.
And trust me, they have loads of interesting chars, which are neither over- or underpowered... give the comics a read first.

And that physiology... would being repeteadly beaten to death or being hit by several blasts count as the instant change? Or just a single blast through the head, for instance?
 
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single blast
 
Jon
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Just wanna be completely sure about this, so, trying again:

So, a single lvl 10 blast through the head would make that power work... but about 50 lvl 6 blasts wouldn't?
 
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