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| David Xander; The 9000 Year Kitsune | |
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| Fox Sage | Feb 14 2009, 10:12 PM Post #1 |
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![]() -Theme Music- Main Theme - Number of the Beast - Iron Maiden Hyper Theme - Bounce - System of a Down Fighting for a Cause Theme - Worth Dying For - Rise Against Battle Theme - FSCENE8 - The Medic Droid Epic Battle Theme - The Heretic Anthem - Slipknot Epic Battle Theme 2 - Be Quick or Be Dead - Iron Maiden Training Theme - L's Theme - Yoshihisa Hirano Snapped Theme - Superbeast - Rob Zombie Building Rage Theme - Cloud Connected - In Flames Having a Good Day Theme - Disco - Metro Station Win Theme - Fer Sure - The Medic Droid Lose Theme - Repentance - Dream Theater Personal Info Name: David Xander Alias: Fox or Dave Race: Reborn Kitsune Gender: Male Age: 19 Height: 5'9'' Weight: 145lbs Hair: Dark Brown Eyes: Alternate between bright blue, teal and green Alignment: Chaotic Neutral with good intentions Personality: Dave can best be describe normally as the guy who's always calm and smiling, even in completely hopeless situations, even though he's prone to occasional extremes of emotion and occasional brooding moments. When he's genuinely happy Dave is ordinarily extremely energetic. He's also very persistent and always seeking entertainment. Team: None Secret Origin: Demonically powered Statistics Total Experience gained: 0 Experience points left to use: 10 Experience Points used: 9890 Strength:2 Agility:5 Accuracy:3 Durability:3 Will Power:2 Powers "I’ll chalk this one up to ninja skills." (Mastery of Magic, Abyssal, Demonically Powered, Arcane Knowledge reduction) - Dave, though unaware of this at this time is able to tap into his dormant abilities as a fox demon and bend the forces of the world to his will through sheer force of spirit. (Lv.5, 2000 xp) "You wouldn't believe where I went today..." (Demonically Powered magical travel, arcane knowledge reduction) Teleportation: Dave is able to "lose track of space" with the intent to move elsewhere to do just that, he fades out of space and reappears where he thinks he should be. He is also able to open portals to various other dimensions, and once he learns of a planet where life can exist, he can open a gate to it too. (Lv.4, 1920 xp) "Waffle!!" (Demonically Powered Sorcery, Arcane Knowledge reduction) Dave is able to generate and transmute relatively small objects, generally by yelling their names into a magically created summoning circle or by describing exactly how the object is going to appear and what it's going to do. (Lv.3, 1920 xp) "Didn't see that one coming, did you?" (Perfect Aim) Dave is aware of the subtleties in the air created by the energies of things around them and adjusts his technique according to them for a more accurate hit. (Lv.10, 750xp) "Oh wow, I’m pointy.." (Claws with Fangs mod as approved by Jon, emotional control, convertible to Human form) When Dave gets angry, senses a threat, gets excited or startled Dave’s canine teeth grow slightly and sharpen to needle points and elongate slightly creating powerful stabbing weapons. Under the same circumstances, Dave’s fingernails, which are actually a part of the last joint in his finger bone, despite looking normal due to a quirk in his circulatory system, extend about an inch and harden to the strength of steel, creating in essence a handful of knives. (250xp) ”Again, ninja skills.” (Inaudible) Dave has for as long has he remembered never made any noise when he moves. (Lv.6, 450xp) ”Try and keep up!” (Acrobatics) Dave has always been interested in developing his abilities as an acrobat to improve his martial arts and is also known for some skill in Parkour and breakfalls. His style is a little odd though, and is definitely still a work in progress (Lv.2, 150xp) Skills I.Q Lv.6: Dave is absolutely brilliant... when he can be arsed to try. (600xp) Pressure Points Lv.1: Dave's got a knack for hitting people in places that really ought not to be hit, usually completely by accident (300xp) Fighting Skills Lv.2: Dave is fairly talented at hand to hand combat and enjoys taking martial arts classes sometimes. (400xp) High School Grad: Dave graduated from high school on the honour role despite it boring him most of the time. (150xp) Arcane Knowledge – Forensic Magic: Dave, being very well versed in his field knows everything or close to it when it comes to detecting, identifying, classifying, performing and undoing magic and all of its go-betweens (Lv.10, 1000xp) Challenges Chronic Condition - "The Metabolism from Hell": Due to a blood pressure condition combined with his ability to burn through food at rates that make no sense at all to medical officials everywhere, Dave has to be very careful to eat on time. After two hours without eating he'll feel slightly tired, after three, fatigue will completely set in, at four, dizziness and exceptional discomfort, at five, the last two symptoms worsen and then he's almost certain to pass out and will need to eat something high in sugar if he wants to stay awake for more than 5 minutes after waking up. (400xp) Extremely Deadly Enemies - In Dave's search for power and answers he's run into and run into trouble with many of mythology's greatest... and annoyed the hell out of most of them for seeming human and yet acting as one of their own (little do they know...) and as such several Greek, Egyptian, and Shinto gods and greater demons as well as their minions and champions seek to destroy him due to his apparent lack of manners. Most noted among these are Ares, Seth, and the serpent, Orochi, all of whom would gladly see him and his eradicated, and this may well happen if he isn't careful. He's also generally seen as a nuisance amongst older mages and those who can see his true nature won't hesitate to kill him on sight. (800xp) Psychological - Boredom: Dave is completely and frequently able to quite simply not care about an issue or a subject to the point where he will have absolutely nothing to do with it, meaning he'll refuse to even look at it unless he's somehow forced to. (250xp) Slightly Non-Human Appearance - Dave has small fangs that grow a noticeable amount when he gets angry or senses danger as well as has eyes that change colour rapidly depending on his mental state and energy level. (200xp) No Secret Identity - Dave is quite comfortable openly using his abilities in every day life, and publicly tends to use magic as much as he sees the need to. He quite simply doesn't care enough to construct a superhero title for himself. He's content to fight as Dave. Or he may go by Fox if he absolutely must pick a callsign, because that's both fitting and kinda badass. He always introduces himself as Dave, thought. (500xp) Inventory Occupation: Money: 0 $ Items: Weapons: Costume: Fox Aura (Power Proof, Self Repair, Bullet Proof) – Dave’s aura is so thick around him that he appears to be surrounded by a slight heat haze that bears a resemblance to a nine tailed fox. It takes on an indigo tint in intense battles. The energy is so densely concentrated that it offers a layer of protection to Dave and because it is made of aura, constantly repairs itself with the energetic exhaust from Dave’s body. Transport: Origin Dave has spent most of his life living as something of a curiosity in most respects. Good fortune always seemed to follow him; the fates seemed to conspire to give him what he wanted. This ability to seemingly obtain his heart’s desires by simply desiring them quickly turned him toward a field of magical study in his spare time, as he noted that he felt distinctly different from the average, and knew that his will had an effect on the world around him. He quickly discovered actual schools of thought much like his own and decided to turn his talents toward the creation of more fantastical effects than discovering random twenties when he wanted to buy lunch and forgot his wallet. By the age of ten he’d made contact with another, deeper side of himself; a side that had strange memories of other worlds he’d never seen. He kept these thoughts to himself mostly, expressing them through his love of writing until eventually the whole picture came together for him in a physical meeting between himself and a pair of giant foxes who seemed bent on paying him their deepest respects. ”Thaloc,” they’d called him. He was deeply confused and requested that they called him Dave. They complied eagerly before hopping down into their portal. After returning home he’d pulled up what little information he could as a now fifteen year old and discovered that it was the name of an obscure Egyptian god that was shared with the Aztec. Apparently he was destined to be able to steal souls and communicated with angels and devils and make it rain… and change shape. Dave’s initial reply can be read just below… ”Duuuuuuude.” A few years later, after having learned how to project himself onto other planes of existence he has encountered many of mythology’s heavy hitters. Gods, demons, angels, bigger demons, monsters, holy crap more demons, to the point where even on this plane he’s begun to have dealings with them, learning from some, enraging most due to the fact that his body appears human despite his attitudes and level of ability. By the time he’d met most of the spirits he’d wanted to, his aura had grown so strong that it began to be visible even to those without second sight. It was said that he would be surrounded by what looked like a heat haze whenever his emotions grew intense. Now 19, he works as an mage for hire, taking on jobs for various governments as well as crime organizations, doing everything from solving murders to completing summoning circles and figuring out why the Don’s magical luck charm was suddenly on the fritz, in addition to the normal discovering whether or not a house is haunted gig of the average paranormal investigator. |
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| EnlightenedInsanity | Feb 16 2009, 05:21 PM Post #2 |
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alright, as far as your bio stands right now, you wont be allowed to take the "No Secret Identity" challenge. The way that particular challenge works is you generally have to have someone that would be in danger because you dont keep your identity hidden. For the most part, no secret identity and vulnerable loved ones go hand in hand as far as challenges. So before I check over the math, edit that bit up and we can go from there. |
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| Jon | Feb 16 2009, 11:49 PM Post #3 |
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Some more points: Seeing as how the Egyptian and Shinto pantheons are, well, dead... that'd seriously hamper that deadly enemies rating. And the Greek gods rarely interfere, evne if they're still alive. And your costume won't fly. An aura is a power, not a costume. |
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| Fox Sage | Feb 18 2009, 05:13 AM Post #4 |
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Alrighty, well, I've decided to do a few retoolings so I'll have this back up and running in a couple of days at the latest Many thanks!
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| Fox Sage | Feb 19 2009, 11:42 PM Post #5 |
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There we go, edited a bit ![]() -Theme Music- Main Theme - Number of the Beast - Iron Maiden Hyper Theme - Bounce - System of a Down On The Job Theme – Clint Eastwood - Gorillaz Fighting for a Cause Theme - Worth Dying For - Rise Against Battle Theme - FSCENE8 - The Medic Droid Epic Battle Theme - The Heretic Anthem - Slipknot Epic Battle Theme 2 - Be Quick or Be Dead - Iron Maiden Training Theme - L's Theme - Yoshihisa Hirano Snapped Theme - Superbeast - Rob Zombie Building Rage Theme - Cloud Connected - In Flames Having a Good Day Theme - Disco - Metro Station Win Theme - Fer Sure - The Medic Droid Lose Theme - Repentance - Dream Theater Personal Info Name: David Xander Alias: Fox or Dave Race: Reborn Kitsune Gender: Male Age: 19 Height: 5'9'' Weight: 145lbs Hair: Sandy Blonde Eyes: Alternate between bright blue, teal and green Alignment: Chaotic Neutral with good intentions Personality: Dave can best be describe normally as the guy who's always calm and smiling, even in completely hopeless situations, even though he's prone to occasional extremes of emotion and occasional brooding moments. When he's genuinely happy Dave is ordinarily extremely energetic. He's also very persistent and always seeking entertainment. Team: None Secret Origin: Demonically powered Statistics Total Experience gained: 0 Experience points left to use: 10 Experience Points used: 10 240 Strength:2 Agility:5 Accuracy:3 Durability:3 Will Power:2 Powers "I’ll chalk this one up to ninja skills." (Mastery of Magic, Abyssal, Demonically Powered, Arcane Knowledge reduction) - Dave, though unaware of this at this time is able to tap into his dormant abilities as a fox demon and bend the forces of the world to his will through sheer force of spirit. (Lv.5, 2000 xp) "You wouldn't believe where I went today..." (Demonically Powered magical travel, arcane knowledge reduction) Teleportation: Dave is able to "lose track of space" with the intent to move elsewhere to do just that, he fades out of space and reappears where he thinks he should be. He is also able to open portals to various other dimensions, and once he learns of a planet where life can exist, he can open a gate to it too. (Lv.4, 1920 xp) "Didn't see that one coming, did you?" (Perfect Aim) Dave is aware of the subtleties in the air created by the energies of things around them and adjusts his technique according to them for a more accurate hit. (Lv.10, 750xp) "Oh wow, I’m pointy.." (Claws with Fangs mod as approved by Jon, emotional control, convertible to Human form) When Dave gets angry, senses a threat, gets excited or startled Dave’s canine teeth grow slightly and sharpen to needle points and elongate slightly creating powerful stabbing weapons. Under the same circumstances, Dave’s fingernails, which are actually a part of the last joint in his finger bone, despite looking normal due to a quirk in his circulatory system, extend about an inch and harden to the strength of steel, creating in essence a handful of knives. (250xp) ”Again, ninja skills.” (Inaudible Linked to Acrobatics) Dave has for as long has he remembered never made any noise when he moves. (Lv.6, 450xp -50xp, 400xp) ”Try and keep up!” (Acrobatics Linked to Inaudible) Dave has always been interested in developing his abilities as an acrobat to improve his martial arts and is also known for some skill in Parkour and breakfalls. His style is a little odd though, and is definitely still a work in progress (Lv.2, 150xp) ”You neglected to take into account one fact; I’m a lucky bastard.” (Item of Power) Dave always carries on him a small good luck charm that his girlfriend made for him. It hasn’t failed him yet. It’s also his focus for summoning a whip made of flame. The charm itself is usually kept in his pocket. Probability Alteration (Lv.4, 1600xp) Elemental Weapon, Fire Whip (Lv.1, 120xp) Skills I.Q Lv.6: Dave is absolutely brilliant... when he can be arsed to try. (600xp) Pressure Points Lv.1: Dave's got a knack for hitting people in places that really ought not to be hit, usually completely by accident (300xp) Fighting Skills Lv.5: Dave is fairly talented at close range combat and enjoys taking martial arts classes sometimes. (1000xp) High School Grad: Dave graduated from high school on the honour role despite it boring him most of the time. (150xp) Arcane Knowledge – Forensic Magic: Dave, being very well versed in his field knows everything or close to it when it comes to detecting, identifying, classifying, performing and undoing magic and all of its go-betweens (Lv.10, 1000xp) Challenges Chronic Condition - "The Metabolism from Hell": Due to a blood pressure condition combined with his ability to burn through food at rates that make no sense at all to medical officials everywhere, Dave has to be very careful to eat on time. After two hours without eating he'll feel slightly tired, after three, fatigue will completely set in, at four, dizziness and exceptional discomfort, at five, the last two symptoms worsen and then he's almost certain to pass out and will need to eat something high in sugar if he wants to stay awake for more than 5 minutes after waking up. (400xp) Extremely Deadly Enemies - In Dave's search for power and answers he's run into and run into trouble with many of mythology's greatest... and annoyed the hell out of most of them for seeming human and yet acting as one of their own (little do they know...) and as such several gods and greater demons as well as their minions and champions seek to destroy him due to his apparent lack of manners. Most noted among these are Jupiter, Pan, Belial, and Orochi, all of whom would gladly see him and his eradicated, and this may well happen if he isn't careful. He's also generally seen as a nuisance amongst older mages and those who can see his true nature won't hesitate to kill him on sight. His movements are also tracked by several secret religious organizations who seek to “exorcise the world of his kind” as they tend to put it, as well as a few corporations in the bio-weapon industry who would seek to unravel the mystery of how a demon could bind itself to a human body without becoming a cancer upon the body. They tend to pop up fairly frequently, what with him technically being a demon masquerading as a human and all. And here’s the kicker, he can barely remember half of these peoples’ names from past lives and encounters, let alone how to defeat them. (800xp) Psychological - Boredom: Dave is completely and frequently able to quite simply not care about an issue or a subject to the point where he will have absolutely nothing to do with it, meaning he'll refuse to even look at it unless he's somehow forced to. (250xp) Slightly Non-Human Appearance - Dave has small fangs that grow a noticeable amount when he gets angry or senses danger as well as has eyes that change colour rapidly depending on his mental state and energy level. (200xp) Special Vulnerability – Sonic Loud high pitched noises cause Dave a mind numbing amount of pain, with the potential to incapacitate him completely, even to the point of losing consciousness, if exposed to the sound for long enough. (600xp) Inventory Occupation: Money: 300 $ Items: Cell Phone Weapons: GP 35 Pistol, Silenced, Laser Pointer Attached Costume: Transport: Origin Dave has spent most of his life living as something of a curiosity in most respects. Good fortune always seemed to follow him; the fates seemed to conspire to give him what he wanted. This ability to seemingly obtain his heart’s desires by simply desiring them quickly turned him toward a field of magical study in his spare time, as he noted that he felt distinctly different from the average, and knew that his will had an effect on the world around him. He quickly discovered actual schools of thought much like his own and decided to turn his talents toward the creation of more fantastical effects than discovering random twenties when he wanted to buy lunch and forgot his wallet. By the age of ten he’d made contact with another, deeper side of himself; a side that had strange memories of other worlds he’d never seen. He kept these thoughts to himself mostly, expressing them through his love of writing until eventually the whole picture came together for him in a physical meeting between himself and a pair of giant foxes who seemed bent on paying him their deepest respects. ”Thaloc,” they’d called him. He was deeply confused and requested that they called him Dave. They complied eagerly before hopping down into their portal. After returning home he’d pulled up what little information he could as a now fifteen year old and discovered that it was the name of an obscure Egyptian god that was shared with the Aztec. Apparently he was destined to be able to steal souls and communicated with angels and devils and make it rain… and change shape. Dave’s initial reply can be read just below… ”Duuuuuuude.” :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: |
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| Jon | Feb 20 2009, 10:53 AM Post #6 |
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A note about your magic in general: There's always a cost to using magic... I can't see you mentioning what the cost of that has been to David. Powers Modifiers (such as what you got for your Inaudible with Linked) subtracts the cost they mention from each level of the power, not the total. And while I won't approve of Inaudible being linked to acrobatics, as it doesn't seem to make any sense to me, if you were to link something, you would only mention it in the power that is linked to another, that is, the one that receives the subtraction. IoP: Not how IoPs works. You take the costs of all the individual levelling (non-IoP specific) powers in the IoP and adds them together, multiplies that by x0.8, and then that is what the entire IoP costs to level up... and if the IoP then has a level of 3, then all the powers on it would have a level of 3. Skills Arcane Knowledge is just arcane knowledge. There's nothing else to it, like your Forensic Magic. Challenges Deadly Enemies: You mention nothing of this in the Origin... Perhaps you should do that? Also, Orochi, at least, I'm pretty sure is a Shinto God or something like that... at least Japanese. Those are dead. And the way you're wording it, it seems like he's just randomly walking into whatever planes that these Gods or Demons inhabit... it doesn't work like that. YOu aren't just allowed into Olympus or Hell... and he's not strong enough to force his way inside. The organizations part will have to go. Demons are not common knowledge. And the whole 'secret religious organizations' part... How would they even know what he is? Origin Umm... why would they call him that? Those Gods are dead... o.o And why was he chosen to do precisely that? |
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| Fox Sage | Mar 4 2009, 04:31 AM Post #7 |
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Just a heads up, I'm scrapping this character for now... He needs a lot more work before he's ready for human consumption. |
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