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Rufus Shenron
Topic Started: Feb 19 2009, 01:29 AM (370 Views)
Tenshi501
Newbie
1) MSN Nickname
Tenshi 501

2) Personal Info
Name: Rufus Shenron
Race: Alien
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Faction: None

3) Challenges


4) Statistics
Strength: 2
Speed4
Agility:3
Will Power:3
Durability:3
Current XP: 3000
XP Left for use: 50


5) Powers
Animal Senses- Level 1-
Bullet Proof- Level 1-
Bone Weapons- No Levels-

6) Skills
Fighting Skills- Level 1-
Pressure Points- Level 1-
Acedemic Field- Level 1-
I.Q.- Level 1-
Theif- Level 1-
Wealth- Level 1-

7) Inventory
Occupation:

Money:2,000

Other Equipment:
8) Origin: Rufus came as a baby with his parents to Earth. He was raised not knowing his true self, until ofcourse his parents told him. They told him of the race he came from, the power they had, and of the reasons they came to this new home. The described why it was so much better. But Rufus was torn.

His family always had just enough money, but never any extra. So he was always money hungry. Which lead to power hungry. But those were only nudges on the back of his mind, he could control them.

Now, though he has his super powers, he still hasn't come out with them much yet. He has no nick-name. He has no true alliance. He has no preferences. For now, and for a while most likely, he will be only fighting for himself, soon to be a force to be reckoned with.
 
TheMidnighter
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Young Justice
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Okay, now I'm not a manager on Justice, so I may be out of line commenting here, but I have been staff on Marvels and I have to say that if this was on Marvels it wouldn't be approved. Let me just go through things as I think of them.

1) It's fine if you want to put it up as text and not use the html bio form, but you have to at least get things in the right order and include everything on the profile form. You have Challenges out of place, and are missing things like Height, Weight, Eye Colour, that sort of thing. You won't be getting anywhere without these really basic things.

2) After each power, challenge and Skill you need to include a description. It doesn't have to be too much, but you need something describing the nature of these things and so on. For instance, he has Academic Knowledge, but in what field? How did he come by it? What form do his Bone Weapons take? This sort of stuff helps flesh out the character quite a bit.

3) You only say his race is 'alien'. You'll need to name the race of alien, at the very least, and maybe detail what their home world was like before he came to Earth. I have an alien character called Martian Manhunter, feel free to look him over to see the sort of thing I mean with this.

4) Your history is extremely sparse, and I don't think you'd have enough to get accepted. For instance, where did his alien parents come from? Why were they able to blend in with human society so easily? Where does he live on Earth? Does he go to school?

Anyway, these are just some things that occured to me when reading this profile. Staff, please don't murder. Or if you do, at least make it painless.
 
EnlightenedInsanity
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Challenger of the Unknown
oh dont worry, you wont be murdered... just subjected to the eternal walking...

MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

Ok, but on a more serious note, he's right. You need to use either the profile box or the correct text version of the bio sheet. Both can be found here: http://z13.invisionfree.com/JusticeRPG/ind...hp?showtopic=23

If you have any questions about creating your character, look through the rules and tutorial, or ask anyone on the chat window at the bottom of the screen. Just about everyone is very knowledgeable on the rules and process.
 
Tenshi501
Newbie
->Insert Picture Here<-

-Theme Music-

Main Theme - End of All Hope (dunno who sings)
Battle Theme - Behind Closed Doors (Rise Against)
Epic Battle Theme - Through Fire and Flames (Dragon Force)
Win Theme - The Final Fantasy "Winning a Battle" Music (From Final Fantasy)
Lose Theme - The little "Waaa Waaa Waaaaaaaaaa" Thing in ironic situations in old TV shows

Personal Info

Name: Rufus Shenron
Alias: None
Race: Genovian (Genovians come from the planet Genova. Their population look surprisingly like Humans, though their planet has less gravity, allowing for his super powers, plus their brain capasity is normally greater than the average human)
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Height: 6'1
Weight: 178
Hair: Orange
Eyes: [Your character's eye colour]
Alignment: Neutral
Personality: Rufus is, in a sense, much like Lex Luthor. He's very calm and intelegent. Even though unlike Lex, Rufus has super powers, he still enjoys to use his brain before he resorts to brawn.
Team: None
Secret Origin: Alien (Weakness: His weakness is Genovous. However, it only takes away his powers. Other than being slowed and sweating a little bit, the Genovous effects him in no other way. IE: If he wears a Genovous neckless he can not use super speed, strength, etc. He is turned into a practically normal human)

Statistics

Total Experience gained: 4000
Experience points left to use: 50
Experience Points used: 3950

Statistics
Strength: 2
Speed4
Agility:3
Will Power:3
Durability:3



Powers

Animal Senses- Level 1- Rufus not only has better hearing and seeing, but he can smell things others can't, and almost has another sense when it comes to knowing if things are wrong
Bullet Proof- Level 1- Rufus is like superman in the effect bullets bounce right of his skin.
Bone Weapons- No Levels- Rufus can do multiple things with his bone weapons: Make a bone-sword shoot out his hand for use, let one grow out his shoulder, etc. However, his three favorites are: Shooting the tips of his finger-bones from his fingers like bullets, He can make extra bones grow from his ribs like spikes as a protective weapon, and his absolute favorite: He takes out his spine, the bone regrowing the same time it's taken out so nothing is messed up. That way he can use the spine as both a sword and a whip.

Skills

Fighting Skills- Level 1- Not only does Rufus know street fighting, but also a bit of kung-fu and his own, odd fighting style that has to do with dodging then hitting the weakspot, then dodging once more.
Pressure Points- Level 1-Rufus knows a majority of the pressure points on the human body. He can hit them and make people hurt greatly from them, more than a normal hit, but that is all.
Acedemic Field- Level 1-Rufus is good in most acedemic fields, though he excells in Science, Math, Statistics and Literature.
I.Q.- Level 1- Rufus has a high I.Q., greater than most humans, though it is still growing.
Theif- Level 1-Rufus to get to where he is now is good at pick-pocketing, robbing small stores and some minor identity theft without being caught.
Wealth- Level 1- Rufus is considered upper middle class/lower upper class in the case where he can afford most things others can't, like multiple mansions, etc.

Challenges

[List your chosen challenges here. See the Challenges page for more info. Make sure to list the XP you gain from each challenge.]

Inventory

Occupation: [Apply at update board]
Money: 2.000 $
Items:
Weapons:
Costume: [Applies to armour and such as well]
Transport:

Origin
Rufus came as a baby with his parents to Earth. His parents, once one of the "governers" of Genova were presently incharge during an uprising of the people. Sadly, in the process, Rufus's life was at stake, so in order to save him his parents fled.

He was raised not knowing his true self, his true race. He thought he was just a normal human. Until ofcourse his parents told him. They told him of the race he came from, the power they had, and of the reasons they came to this new home. The described why it was so much better. But Rufus was torn. Rufus had grown up on this planet. In school he was always at the top. He always pushed for the best, getting his first job when he was 16, making his first 100,000 by the time he was 17. He was a childhood genius: But to find out it was because he was not one of them. He was different. It tore him apart.

His family always had alot of money. They paid the bills, bought food, and then just about anything else they wanted. He loved the power, the wealth. But to know he was going to be the child of a Governor, maybe even more by the time he grew up, got to him. He wanted more. Much more.

Now, though he has his super powers, he still hasn't come out with them much yet. He has no nick-name. He has no true alliance. He has no preferences. For now, and for a while most likely, he will be only fighting for himself, soon to be a force to be reckoned with. But still, some day he wishes to go back to Genova. Take control. At the very least he wanted to rule earth. And though they didn't seem very small, it did to him. And it was something he truly believes he was going to achieve.


 
EnlightenedInsanity
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Challenger of the Unknown
ok, a few things...

1) put an eye color of some kind

2) When you do your personality, try not to compare yourself to another character. rewrite it and be a bit more original in the description, or at least dont compare him to another person

3) your total experience gained is 0

4) You need to put the cost per level next to each of your powers and skills

5) An IQ of 1 is basically that of an animal, not a super intelligent human. You cannot increase your IQ after you create your character, so if you want a high IQ, you need to put more points into it.

6) I would suggest taking at least a few challenges for some extra XP
 
Jon
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Doom Patrol
More points

7) Your alignment. He doesn't sound very neutral to me... he sounds evil. And nonetheless, you gotta add Lawful, Neutral or Chaotic to your Alignment.

8) Secret Origin: What is Genovous? How did it get to Earth?

9) Animal Senses: No, you won't have a 6th sense for knowing when things are wrong. That's done with the Prescience power.

10) Bullet Proof: Again, don't base it off 'like someone else'. Make an unique description.

11) Yes... he can do that with his bone weapons... but HOW and WHY does he have them? Is it a part of his alien race?

12) Academic Field: This is wrong. You choose ONE academic field each time you take the skill, which you will then level up on its own.

13) Your description for your lvl 1 Wealth is way off. You need way more levels than 1 to get that...
 
Tenshi501
Newbie
http://s297.photobucket.com/albums/mm218/1..._ShinRa7000.jpg

-Theme Music-

Main Theme - End of All Hope (dunno who sings)
Battle Theme - Behind Closed Doors (Rise Against)
Epic Battle Theme - Through Fire and Flames (Dragon Force)
Win Theme - The Final Fantasy "Winning a Battle" Music (From Final Fantasy)
Lose Theme - The little "Waaa Waaa Waaaaaaaaaa" Thing in ironic situations in old TV shows

Personal Info

Name: Rufus Shenron
Alias: None
Race: Genovian (Genovians come from the planet Genova. Their population look surprisingly like Humans, though their planet has less gravity, allowing for his super powers, plus their brain capasity is normally greater than the average human)
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Height: 6'1
Weight: 178
Hair: Silver/Grey
Eyes: Blue
Alignment: Chaotic/Lawful Evil
Personality: Rufus is not necisarilly cruel, but he is brutally honest. He speaks his mind to you, no matter who you are. But while he does not consider himself evil, he is close to it. He would kill you or ruin your life for some extra cash. His life revolves around his personal wants, meaning usually money and power. If your not with him you must be against him, there is no half way. It is near impossible to truly gain his trust, and likewise anyone who gives him 100% trust, or even more then half, he considers dumber than he'd have expected.
Team: None
Secret Origin: Alien (Weakness: His weakness is Xenotime. However, it only takes away his powers for approximately 8-10 posts, while also weakening him past the normal standards for humans, and enough exposure can kill him.)

Statistics

Total Experience gained: 1500
Experience points left to use: 150
Experience Points used: 5350

Statistics
Strength: 2
Speed4
Agility:3
Will Power:3
Durability:3



Powers

50 per level-Animal Senses- Level 2- Rufus not only has better hearing and seeing, but he can smell things others can't
300 per level-Bullet Proof- Level 1- Rufus has skin like iron, making him completely bullet proof, something he was born with as a Genovian.
400 XP-Bone Weapons- No Levels- Rufus can do multiple things with his bone weapons: Make a bone-sword shoot out his hand for use, let one grow out his shoulder, etc. However, his three favorites are: Shooting the tips of his finger-bones from his fingers like bullets, He can make extra bones grow from his ribs like spikes as a protective weapon, and his absolute favorite: He takes out his spine, the bone regrowing the same time it's taken out so nothing is messed up. That way he can use the spine as both a sword and a whip. This is yet another trait that he was born with, being it one of the most effective ways the Genovian people have of defending themselves.

Skills

200 per level-Fighting Skills- Level 2- Not only does Rufus know street fighting, but also a bit of kung-fu and his own, odd fighting style that has to do with dodging then hitting the weakspot, then dodging once more.
300 per level-Pressure Points- Level 2-Rufus knows a majority of the pressure points on the human body. He can hit them and make people hurt greatly from them, more than a normal hit, but that is all.
Acedemic Field- Level 1-Rufus excells at Math
100 per level-I.Q.- Level 9- Rufus has a high I.Q., greater than most humans, though it is still growing.
200 per level-Wealth- Level 3- Rufus, owning his small business, seems to get by with some ease. He can, though with slight difficulty, buy most cars and motorcycles, and a decent condo.

Challenges
400 XP-Alien-Rufus is Genovian, not local to Earth or even it's galaxy.
500 XP-No Secret-Identity- Rufus is not afraid of letting people know who and what he is, so he has no secret identity.
600 XP-Special Vulnerabilities- Rufus is vulnerable and weak to Xenotime

Inventory

Occupation: None yet
Money: 2.000 $
Items: None yet
Weapons: None yet
Costume: None yet
Transport: None yet

Origin
Rufus came as a baby with his parents to Earth. His parents, once one of the "governers" of Genova were presently incharge during an uprising of the people. Sadly, in the process, Rufus's life was at stake, so in order to save him his parents fled.

He was raised not knowing his true self, his true race. He thought he was just a normal human. Until ofcourse his parents told him. They told him of the race he came from, the power they had, and of the reasons they came to this new home. The described why it was so much better. But Rufus was torn. Rufus had grown up on this planet. In school he was always at the top. He always pushed for the best, getting his first job when he was 16, making his first 100,000 by the time he was 17. He was a childhood genius: But to find out it was because he was not one of them. He was different. It tore him apart.

His family always had alot of money. They paid the bills, bought food, and then just about anything else they wanted. He loved the power, the wealth. But to know he was going to be the child of a Governor, maybe even more by the time he grew up, got to him. He wanted more. Much more.

Now, though he has his super powers, he still hasn't come out with them much yet. He has no nick-name. He has no true alliance. He has no preferences. For now, and for a while most likely, he will be only fighting for himself, soon to be a force to be reckoned with. But still, some day he wishes to go back to Genova. Take control. At the very least he wanted to rule earth. And though they didn't seem very small, it did to him. And it was something he truly believes he was going to achieve.


 
Jon
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Doom Patrol
1) What is Xenotime? Depending on that, your special vulnerability might and might not be allowed.

2) Your alignment... you're not Chaotic/Lawful evil... you're either one or the other. Or... just make him Neutral Evil?

3) Academic Field: 1 level in this does NOT mean you excel in it.

4) IQ... you will need a special permission to have an IQ of 9 or 10... I honestly can't see why we should allow it in this case, as there's no special reason that you need it for this character.

5) You haven't gained any XP yet...

6) For the origin... How exactly did he make that much money in so little time?
 
Tenshi501
Newbie
http://s297.photobucket.com/albums/mm218/1..._ShinRa7000.jpg

-Theme Music-

Main Theme - End of All Hope (dunno who sings)
Battle Theme - Behind Closed Doors (Rise Against)
Epic Battle Theme - Through Fire and Flames (Dragon Force)
Win Theme - The Final Fantasy "Winning a Battle" Music (From Final Fantasy)
Lose Theme - The little "Waaa Waaa Waaaaaaaaaa" Thing in ironic situations in old TV shows

Personal Info

Name: Rufus Shenron
Alias: None
Race: Genovian (Genovians come from the planet Genova. Their population look surprisingly like Humans, though their planet has less gravity, allowing for his super powers, plus their brain capasity is normally greater than the average human)
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Height: 6'1
Weight: 178
Hair: Silver/Grey
Eyes: Blue
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Personality: Rufus is not necisarilly cruel, but he is brutally honest. He speaks his mind to you, no matter who you are. But while he does not consider himself evil, he is close to it. He would kill you or ruin your life for some extra cash. His life revolves around his personal wants, meaning usually money and power. If your not with him you must be against him, there is no half way. It is near impossible to truly gain his trust, and likewise anyone who gives him 100% trust, or even more then half, he considers dumber than he'd have expected.
Team: None
Secret Origin: Alien (Weakness: His weakness is Xenotime. However, it only takes away his powers for approximately 8-10 posts, while also weakening him past the normal standards for humans, and enough exposure can kill him. Xenotime is a rare mineral found on Earth, composed mainly of yttrium and is in a crystalized form. The combination of the yttrium and other minerals for reasons unknown even to him weaken him.)

Statistics

Total Experience gained:
Experience points left to use: 150
Experience Points used: 5350

Statistics
Strength: 2
Speed4
Agility:3
Will Power:3
Durability:3



Powers

50 per level-Animal Senses- Level 2- Rufus not only has better hearing and seeing, but he can smell things others can't
300 per level-Bullet Proof- Level 1- Rufus has skin like iron, making him completely bullet proof, something he was born with as a Genovian.
400 XP-Bone Weapons- No Levels- Rufus can do multiple things with his bone weapons: Make a bone-sword shoot out his hand for use, let one grow out his shoulder, etc. However, his three favorites are: Shooting the tips of his finger-bones from his fingers like bullets, He can make extra bones grow from his ribs like spikes as a protective weapon, and his absolute favorite: He takes out his spine, the bone regrowing the same time it's taken out so nothing is messed up. That way he can use the spine as both a sword and a whip. This is yet another trait that he was born with, being it one of the most effective ways the Genovian people have of defending themselves.

Skills

200 per level-Fighting Skills- Level 2- Not only does Rufus know street fighting, but also a bit of kung-fu and his own, odd fighting style that has to do with dodging then hitting the weakspot, then dodging once more.
300 per level-Pressure Points- Level 2-Rufus knows a majority of the pressure points on the human body. He can hit them and make people hurt greatly from them, more than a normal hit, but that is all.
75 per level-Acedemic Field[MATH]- Level 5-Rufus excells at Math(5)
100 per level- Scientific Field[AVIATION]- Rufus understands a basic knowledge of Aviation (1)
100 per level-I.Q.- Level 5- Rufus has a high I.Q., greater than most humans, though it is still growing.
200 per level-Wealth- Level 4- Rufus, owning his small business, seems to get by with some ease. He can, though with slight difficulty, buy most cars and motorcycles, and a decent condo.

Challenges
400 XP-Alien-Rufus is Genovian, not local to Earth or even it's galaxy.
500 XP-No Secret-Identity- Rufus is not afraid of letting people know who and what he is, so he has no secret identity.
600 XP-Special Vulnerabilities- Rufus is vulnerable and weak to Xenotime

Inventory

Occupation: None yet
Money: 2.000 $
Items: None yet
Weapons: None yet
Costume: None yet
Transport: None yet

Origin
Rufus came as a baby with his parents to Earth. His parents, once one of the "governers" of Genova were presently incharge during an uprising of the people. Sadly, in the process, Rufus's life was at stake, so in order to save him his parents fled.

He was raised not knowing his true self, his true race. He thought he was just a normal human. Until ofcourse his parents told him. They told him of the race he came from, the power they had, and of the reasons they came to this new home. The described why it was so much better. But Rufus was torn. Rufus had grown up on this planet. In school he was always at the top. He always pushed for the best, getting his first job when he was 14, making his first 100,000 by the time he was 17, after getting the idea of investing in the autopart stocks and working part time at 2, sometimes 3 local places. He was a childhood genius: But to find out it was because he was not one of them. He was different. It tore him apart.

His family always had alot of money. They paid the bills, bought food, and then just about anything else they wanted. He loved the power, the wealth. But to know he was going to be the child of a Governor, maybe even more by the time he grew up, got to him. He wanted more. Much more.

Now, though he has his super powers, he still hasn't come out with them much yet. He has no nick-name. He has no true alliance. He has no preferences. For now, and for a while most likely, he will be only fighting for himself, soon to be a force to be reckoned with. But still, some day he wishes to go back to Genova. Take control. At the very least he wanted to rule earth. And though they didn't seem very small, it did to him. And it was something he truly believes he was going to achieve.


(Hope it's better now :P)

 
Big Boss
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Newbie
With the IQ, five is above average, however I'd remove the part stating that it's still growing, considering you can't increase your IQ.

I'm not sure about the Xenotime. I'll step back and leave that to the more experienced managers.

Oh, and for the record, I believe it's Nightwish that sings End of All Hope.
 
Jon
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Doom Patrol
Yeah, the End of All Hope is by Nightwish.

And sorry, but Xenotime won't fly as a Speciaul Vulnerability. I know that Kryptonians such as Superman and Krypto has had it allowed, but in some cases, we make special allowances to actual DC characters.
You'll have to choose an element from the damaging elements list.
 
Tenshi501
Newbie
Uhm I can't find a Damaging Elements list, could you link me to it?
 
Tenshi501
Newbie
http://s297.photobucket.com/albums/mm218/1..._ShinRa7000.jpg

-Theme Music-

Main Theme - End of All Hope (dunno who sings)
Battle Theme - Behind Closed Doors (Rise Against)
Epic Battle Theme - Through Fire and Flames (Dragon Force)
Win Theme - The Final Fantasy "Winning a Battle" Music (From Final Fantasy)
Lose Theme - The little "Waaa Waaa Waaaaaaaaaa" Thing in ironic situations in old TV shows

Personal Info

Name: Rufus Shenron
Alias: None
Race: Genovian (Genovians come from the planet Genova. Their population look surprisingly like Humans, though their planet has less gravity, allowing for his super powers, plus their brain capasity is normally greater than the average human)
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Height: 6'1
Weight: 178
Hair: Silver/Grey
Eyes: Blue
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Personality: Rufus is not necisarilly cruel, but he is brutally honest. He speaks his mind to you, no matter who you are. But while he does not consider himself evil, he is close to it. He would kill you or ruin your life for some extra cash. His life revolves around his personal wants, meaning usually money and power. If your not with him you must be against him, there is no half way. It is near impossible to truly gain his trust, and likewise anyone who gives him 100% trust, or even more then half, he considers dumber than he'd have expected.
Team: None
Secret Origin: Alien (Weakness: His weakness is Radioactivity. However, it only takes away his powers for approximately 8-10 posts, while also weakening him past the normal standards for humans, and enough exposure can kill him. Radioactivity is not often found on earth, but he knows all known places that have, or have had, radioactivity, and is careful to stay clear of them.)

Statistics

Total Experience gained:
Experience points left to use: 150
Experience Points used: 5350

Statistics
Strength: 2
Speed4
Agility:3
Will Power:3
Durability:3



Powers

50 per level-Animal Senses- Level 2- Rufus not only has better hearing and seeing, but he can smell things others can't
300 per level-Bullet Proof- Level 1- Rufus has skin like iron, making him completely bullet proof, something he was born with as a Genovian.
400 XP-Bone Weapons- No Levels- Rufus can do multiple things with his bone weapons: Make a bone-sword shoot out his hand for use, let one grow out his shoulder, etc. However, his three favorites are: Shooting the tips of his finger-bones from his fingers like bullets, He can make extra bones grow from his ribs like spikes as a protective weapon, and his absolute favorite: He takes out his spine, the bone regrowing the same time it's taken out so nothing is messed up. That way he can use the spine as both a sword and a whip. This is yet another trait that he was born with, being it one of the most effective ways the Genovian people have of defending themselves.

Skills

200 per level-Fighting Skills- Level 2- Not only does Rufus know street fighting, but also a bit of kung-fu and his own, odd fighting style that has to do with dodging then hitting the weakspot, then dodging once more.
300 per level-Pressure Points- Level 2-Rufus knows a majority of the pressure points on the human body. He can hit them and make people hurt greatly from them, more than a normal hit, but that is all.
75 per level-Acedemic Field[MATH]- Level 5-Rufus excells at Math(5)
100 per level- Scientific Field[AVIATION]- Rufus understands a basic knowledge of Aviation (1)
100 per level-I.Q.- Level 5- Rufus has a high I.Q., greater than most humans, though it is still growing.
200 per level-Wealth- Level 4- Rufus, owning his small business, seems to get by with some ease. He can, though with slight difficulty, buy most cars and motorcycles, and a decent condo.

Challenges
400 XP-Alien-Rufus is Genovian, not local to Earth or even it's galaxy.
500 XP-No Secret-Identity- Rufus is not afraid of letting people know who and what he is, so he has no secret identity.
600 XP-Special Vulnerabilities- Rufus is vulnerable and weak to Xenotime

Inventory

Occupation: None yet
Money: 2.000 $
Items: None yet
Weapons: None yet
Costume: None yet
Transport: None yet

Origin
Rufus came as a baby with his parents to Earth. His parents, once one of the "governers" of Genova were presently incharge during an uprising of the people. Sadly, in the process, Rufus's life was at stake, so in order to save him his parents fled.

He was raised not knowing his true self, his true race. He thought he was just a normal human. Until ofcourse his parents told him. They told him of the race he came from, the power they had, and of the reasons they came to this new home. The described why it was so much better. But Rufus was torn. Rufus had grown up on this planet. In school he was always at the top. He always pushed for the best, getting his first job when he was 14, making his first 100,000 by the time he was 17, after getting the idea of investing in the autopart stocks and working part time at 2, sometimes 3 local places. He was a childhood genius: But to find out it was because he was not one of them. He was different. It tore him apart.

His family always had alot of money. They paid the bills, bought food, and then just about anything else they wanted. He loved the power, the wealth. But to know he was going to be the child of a Governor, maybe even more by the time he grew up, got to him. He wanted more. Much more.

Now, though he has his super powers, he still hasn't come out with them much yet. He has no nick-name. He has no true alliance. He has no preferences. For now, and for a while most likely, he will be only fighting for himself, soon to be a force to be reckoned with. But still, some day he wishes to go back to Genova. Take control. At the very least he wanted to rule earth. And though they didn't seem very small, it did to him. And it was something he truly believes he was going to achieve.


(Hope it's better now )

 
Jon
Member Avatar
Doom Patrol
umm... you've KINDA switched it around...

Xenotime WOULD be allowable as for the reason that you, as an alien, lose your powers...

but...

Xenotime would NOT be allowable as the element for your Special Vulnerability challenge...

See the difference? (and besides, there's no way you would be able to remember every single known place with radioactivity around :P)
 
Tenshi501
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-Theme Music-

Main Theme - End of All Hope (dunno who sings)
Battle Theme - Behind Closed Doors (Rise Against)
Epic Battle Theme - Through Fire and Flames (Dragon Force)
Win Theme - The Final Fantasy "Winning a Battle" Music (From Final Fantasy)
Lose Theme - The little "Waaa Waaa Waaaaaaaaaa" Thing in ironic situations in old TV shows

Personal Info

Name: Rufus Shenron
Alias: None
Race: Genovian (Genovians come from the planet Genova. Their population look surprisingly like Humans, though their planet has less gravity, allowing for his super powers, plus their brain capasity is normally greater than the average human)
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Height: 6'1
Weight: 178
Hair: Silver/Grey
Eyes: Blue
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Personality: Rufus is not necisarilly cruel, but he is brutally honest. He speaks his mind to you, no matter who you are. But while he does not consider himself evil, he is close to it. He would kill you or ruin your life for some extra cash. His life revolves around his personal wants, meaning usually money and power. If your not with him you must be against him, there is no half way. It is near impossible to truly gain his trust, and likewise anyone who gives him 100% trust, or even more then half, he considers dumber than he'd have expected.
Team: None
Secret Origin: Alien (Weakness: His weakness is Xenotime. However, it only takes away his powers for approximately 8-10 posts, while also weakening him past the normal standards for humans, and enough exposure can kill him. Xenotime is a rare mineral found on Earth, composed mainly of yttrium and is in a crystalized form. The combination of the yttrium and other minerals for reasons unknown even to him weaken him.)

Statistics

Total Experience gained:
Experience points left to use: 150
Experience Points used: 5350

Statistics
Strength: 2
Speed4
Agility:3
Will Power:3
Durability:3



Powers

50 per level-Animal Senses- Level 2- Rufus not only has better hearing and seeing, but he can smell things others can't
300 per level-Bullet Proof- Level 1- Rufus has skin like iron, making him completely bullet proof, something he was born with as a Genovian.
400 XP-Bone Weapons- No Levels- Rufus can do multiple things with his bone weapons: Make a bone-sword shoot out his hand for use, let one grow out his shoulder, etc. However, his three favorites are: Shooting the tips of his finger-bones from his fingers like bullets, He can make extra bones grow from his ribs like spikes as a protective weapon, and his absolute favorite: He takes out his spine, the bone regrowing the same time it's taken out so nothing is messed up. That way he can use the spine as both a sword and a whip. This is yet another trait that he was born with, being it one of the most effective ways the Genovian people have of defending themselves.

Skills

200 per level-Fighting Skills- Level 2- Not only does Rufus know street fighting, but also a bit of kung-fu and his own, odd fighting style that has to do with dodging then hitting the weakspot, then dodging once more.
300 per level-Pressure Points- Level 2-Rufus knows a majority of the pressure points on the human body. He can hit them and make people hurt greatly from them, more than a normal hit, but that is all.
75 per level-Acedemic Field[MATH]- Level 5-Rufus excells at Math(5)
100 per level- Scientific Field[AVIATION]- Rufus understands a basic knowledge of Aviation (1)
100 per level-I.Q.- Level 5- Rufus has a high I.Q., greater than most humans, though it is still growing.
200 per level-Wealth- Level 4- Rufus, owning his small business, seems to get by with some ease. He can, though with slight difficulty, buy most cars and motorcycles, and a decent condo.

Challenges
400 XP-Alien-Rufus is Genovian, not local to Earth or even it's galaxy.
500 XP-No Secret-Identity- Rufus is not afraid of letting people know who and what he is, so he has no secret identity.
600 XP-Special Vulnerabilities- Radioactivity also takes away Rufus's powers.

Inventory

Occupation: None yet
Money: 2.000 $
Items: None yet
Weapons: None yet
Costume: None yet
Transport: None yet

Origin
Rufus came as a baby with his parents to Earth. His parents, once one of the "governers" of Genova were presently incharge during an uprising of the people. Sadly, in the process, Rufus's life was at stake, so in order to save him his parents fled.

He was raised not knowing his true self, his true race. He thought he was just a normal human. Until ofcourse his parents told him. They told him of the race he came from, the power they had, and of the reasons they came to this new home. The described why it was so much better. But Rufus was torn. Rufus had grown up on this planet. In school he was always at the top. He always pushed for the best, getting his first job when he was 14, making his first 100,000 by the time he was 17, after getting the idea of investing in the autopart stocks and working part time at 2, sometimes 3 local places. He was a childhood genius: But to find out it was because he was not one of them. He was different. It tore him apart.

His family always had alot of money. They paid the bills, bought food, and then just about anything else they wanted. He loved the power, the wealth. But to know he was going to be the child of a Governor, maybe even more by the time he grew up, got to him. He wanted more. Much more.

Now, though he has his super powers, he still hasn't come out with them much yet. He has no nick-name. He has no true alliance. He has no preferences. For now, and for a while most likely, he will be only fighting for himself, soon to be a force to be reckoned with. But still, some day he wishes to go back to Genova. Take control. At the very least he wanted to rule earth. And though they didn't seem very small, it did to him. And it was something he truly believes he was going to achieve.


(Hope it's better now )

 
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