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Rufus Shenron
Topic Started: Feb 19 2009, 01:29 AM (371 Views)
Tenshi501
Newbie
http://s297.photobucket.com/albums/mm218/1..._ShinRa7000.jpg

-Theme Music-

Main Theme - End of All Hope (dunno who sings)
Battle Theme - Behind Closed Doors (Rise Against)
Epic Battle Theme - Through Fire and Flames (Dragon Force)
Win Theme - The Final Fantasy "Winning a Battle" Music (From Final Fantasy)
Lose Theme - The little "Waaa Waaa Waaaaaaaaaa" Thing in ironic situations in old TV shows

Personal Info

Name: Rufus Shenron
Alias: None
Race: Genovian (Genovians come from the planet Genova. Their population look surprisingly like Humans, though their planet has less gravity, allowing for his super powers, plus their brain capasity is normally greater than the average human)
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Height: 6'1
Weight: 178
Hair: Silver/Grey
Eyes: Blue
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Personality: Rufus is not necisarilly cruel, but he is brutally honest. He speaks his mind to you, no matter who you are. But while he does not consider himself evil, he is close to it. He would kill you or ruin your life for some extra cash. His life revolves around his personal wants, meaning usually money and power. If your not with him you must be against him, there is no half way. It is near impossible to truly gain his trust, and likewise anyone who gives him 100% trust, or even more then half, he considers dumber than he'd have expected.
Team: None
Secret Origin: Alien (Weakness: His weakness is Xenotime. However, it only takes away his powers for approximately 8-10 posts, while also weakening him past the normal standards for humans, and enough exposure can kill him. Xenotime is a rare mineral found on Earth, composed mainly of yttrium and is in a crystalized form. The combination of the yttrium and other minerals for reasons unknown even to him weaken him.)

Statistics

Total Experience gained:
Experience points left to use: 150
Experience Points used: 5350

Statistics
Strength: 2
Speed4
Agility:3
Will Power:3
Durability:3



Powers

50 per level-Animal Senses- Level 2- Rufus not only has better hearing and seeing, but he can smell things others can't
300 per level-Bullet Proof- Level 1- Rufus has skin like iron, making him completely bullet proof, something he was born with as a Genovian.
400 XP-Bone Weapons- No Levels- Rufus can do multiple things with his bone weapons: Make a bone-sword shoot out his hand for use, let one grow out his shoulder, etc. However, his three favorites are: Shooting the tips of his finger-bones from his fingers like bullets, He can make extra bones grow from his ribs like spikes as a protective weapon, and his absolute favorite: He takes out his spine, the bone regrowing the same time it's taken out so nothing is messed up. That way he can use the spine as both a sword and a whip. This is yet another trait that he was born with, being it one of the most effective ways the Genovian people have of defending themselves.

Skills

200 per level-Fighting Skills- Level 2- Not only does Rufus know street fighting, but also a bit of kung-fu and his own, odd fighting style that has to do with dodging then hitting the weakspot, then dodging once more.
300 per level-Pressure Points- Level 2-Rufus knows a majority of the pressure points on the human body. He can hit them and make people hurt greatly from them, more than a normal hit, but that is all.
75 per level-Acedemic Field[MATH]- Level 5-Rufus excells at Math(5)
100 per level- Scientific Field[AVIATION]- Rufus understands a basic knowledge of Aviation (1)
100 per level-I.Q.- Level 5- Rufus has a high I.Q., greater than most humans, though it is still growing.
200 per level-Wealth- Level 4- Rufus, owning his small business, seems to get by with some ease. He can, though with slight difficulty, buy most cars and motorcycles, and a decent condo.

Challenges
400 XP-Alien-Rufus is Genovian, not local to Earth or even it's galaxy.
500 XP-No Secret-Identity- Rufus is not afraid of letting people know who and what he is, so he has no secret identity.
600 XP-Special Vulnerabilities- Radioactivity

Inventory

Occupation: None yet
Money: 2.000 $
Items: None yet
Weapons: None yet
Costume: None yet
Transport: None yet

Origin
Rufus came as a baby with his parents to Earth. His parents, once one of the "governers" of Genova were presently incharge during an uprising of the people. Sadly, in the process, Rufus's life was at stake, so in order to save him his parents fled.

He was raised not knowing his true self, his true race. He thought he was just a normal human. Until ofcourse his parents told him. They told him of the race he came from, the power they had, and of the reasons they came to this new home. The described why it was so much better. But Rufus was torn. Rufus had grown up on this planet. In school he was always at the top. He always pushed for the best, getting his first job when he was 14, making his first 100,000 by the time he was 17, after getting the idea of investing in the autopart stocks and working part time at 2, sometimes 3 local places. He was a childhood genius: But to find out it was because he was not one of them. He was different. It tore him apart.

His family always had alot of money. They paid the bills, bought food, and then just about anything else they wanted. He loved the power, the wealth. But to know he was going to be the child of a Governor, maybe even more by the time he grew up, got to him. He wanted more. Much more.

Now, though he has his super powers, he still hasn't come out with them much yet. He has no nick-name. He has no true alliance. He has no preferences. For now, and for a while most likely, he will be only fighting for himself, soon to be a force to be reckoned with. But still, some day he wishes to go back to Genova. Take control. At the very least he wanted to rule earth. And though they didn't seem very small, it did to him. And it was something he truly believes he was going to achieve.


(Hope it's better now )
 
Jon
Member Avatar
Doom Patrol
Alright...

First of all:
Sorry that I missed this before, but no biggie, and I've added it to my calculations, but Math is scientific, not academic, knowledge. So it'll cost you 100 XP/lvl, not 75 XP/lvl.

And then... even with that extra 25 XP/lvl added to math... your total XP usage adds up to 3700, meaning you still got 1800 XP left to spend...

I could put the profile up now, but before I do that, I want to ask you if you want to spend that 1800 XP on anything? If you do, post a revised profile of that
 
Tenshi501
Newbie
http://s297.photobucket.com/albums/mm218/1..._ShinRa7000.jpg

-Theme Music-

Main Theme - End of All Hope (dunno who sings)
Battle Theme - Behind Closed Doors (Rise Against)
Epic Battle Theme - Through Fire and Flames (Dragon Force)
Win Theme - The Final Fantasy "Winning a Battle" Music (From Final Fantasy)
Lose Theme - The little "Waaa Waaa Waaaaaaaaaa" Thing in ironic situations in old TV shows

Personal Info

Name: Rufus Shenron
Alias: None
Race: Genovian (Genovians come from the planet Genova. Their population look surprisingly like Humans, though their planet has less gravity, allowing for his super powers, plus their brain capasity is normally greater than the average human)
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Height: 6'1
Weight: 178
Hair: Silver/Grey
Eyes: Blue
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Personality: Rufus is not necisarilly cruel, but he is brutally honest. He speaks his mind to you, no matter who you are. But while he does not consider himself evil, he is close to it. He would kill you or ruin your life for some extra cash. His life revolves around his personal wants, meaning usually money and power. If your not with him you must be against him, there is no half way. It is near impossible to truly gain his trust, and likewise anyone who gives him 100% trust, or even more then half, he considers dumber than he'd have expected.
Team: None
Secret Origin: Alien (Weakness: His weakness is Xenotime. However, it only takes away his powers for approximately 8-10 posts, while also weakening him past the normal standards for humans, and enough exposure can kill him. Xenotime is a rare mineral found on Earth, composed mainly of yttrium and is in a crystalized form. The combination of the yttrium and other minerals for reasons unknown even to him weaken him.)

Statistics

Total Experience gained:
Experience points left to use: 200
Experience Points used: 5350

Statistics
Strength: 2+1= 3 600 xp
Speed4+1=5 1000xp
Agility:5
Will Power:5
Durability:4



Powers

50 per level-Animal Senses- Level 2- Rufus not only has better hearing and seeing, but he can smell things others can't
300 per level-Bullet Proof- Level 1- Rufus has skin like iron, making him completely bullet proof, something he was born with as a Genovian.
400 XP-Bone Weapons- No Levels- Rufus can do multiple things with his bone weapons: Make a bone-sword shoot out his hand for use, let one grow out his shoulder, etc. However, his three favorites are: Shooting the tips of his finger-bones from his fingers like bullets, He can make extra bones grow from his ribs like spikes as a protective weapon, and his absolute favorite: He takes out his spine, the bone regrowing the same time it's taken out so nothing is messed up. That way he can use the spine as both a sword and a whip. This is yet another trait that he was born with, being it one of the most effective ways the Genovian people have of defending themselves.

Skills

200 per level-Fighting Skills- Level 2- Not only does Rufus know street fighting, but also a bit of kung-fu and his own, odd fighting style that has to do with dodging then hitting the weakspot, then dodging once more.
300 per level-Pressure Points- Level 2-Rufus knows a majority of the pressure points on the human body. He can hit them and make people hurt greatly from them, more than a normal hit, but that is all.
75 per level-Acedemic Field[MATH]- Level 5-Rufus excells at Math(5)
100 per level- Scientific Field[AVIATION]- Rufus understands a basic knowledge of Aviation (1)
100 per level-I.Q.- Level 5- Rufus has a high I.Q., greater than most humans, though it is still growing.
200 per level-Wealth- Level 4- Rufus, owning his small business, seems to get by with some ease. He can, though with slight difficulty, buy most cars and motorcycles, and a decent condo.

Challenges
400 XP-Alien-Rufus is Genovian, not local to Earth or even it's galaxy.
500 XP-No Secret-Identity- Rufus is not afraid of letting people know who and what he is, so he has no secret identity.
600 XP-Special Vulnerabilities- Radioactivity

Inventory

Occupation: None yet
Money: 2.000 $
Items: None yet
Weapons: None yet
Costume: None yet
Transport: None yet

Origin
Rufus came as a baby with his parents to Earth. His parents, once one of the "governers" of Genova were presently incharge during an uprising of the people. Sadly, in the process, Rufus's life was at stake, so in order to save him his parents fled.

He was raised not knowing his true self, his true race. He thought he was just a normal human. Until ofcourse his parents told him. They told him of the race he came from, the power they had, and of the reasons they came to this new home. The described why it was so much better. But Rufus was torn. Rufus had grown up on this planet. In school he was always at the top. He always pushed for the best, getting his first job when he was 14, making his first 100,000 by the time he was 17, after getting the idea of investing in the autopart stocks and working part time at 2, sometimes 3 local places. He was a childhood genius: But to find out it was because he was not one of them. He was different. It tore him apart.

His family always had alot of money. They paid the bills, bought food, and then just about anything else they wanted. He loved the power, the wealth. But to know he was going to be the child of a Governor, maybe even more by the time he grew up, got to him. He wanted more. Much more.

Now, though he has his super powers, he still hasn't come out with them much yet. He has no nick-name. He has no true alliance. He has no preferences. For now, and for a while most likely, he will be only fighting for himself, soon to be a force to be reckoned with. But still, some day he wishes to go back to Genova. Take control. At the very least he wanted to rule earth. And though they didn't seem very small, it did to him. And it was something he truly believes he was going to achieve.
 
Jon
Member Avatar
Doom Patrol
ummm... now your base stats... before you've bought any stats... adds up to 22...
See? 2+4+5+5+4 = 22...

Let's go back to your old stats for now...

Statistics
Strength: 2
Speed4
Agility:3
Will Power:3
Durability:3

And then buy based on those, alright? Actually, except for agility, will power and durability, you haven't changed anything here, except for what you've bought.

And you've forgot to change Math from an Academic to a Scientific Field.
 
Tenshi501
Newbie
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-Theme Music-

Main Theme - End of All Hope (dunno who sings)
Battle Theme - Behind Closed Doors (Rise Against)
Epic Battle Theme - Through Fire and Flames (Dragon Force)
Win Theme - The Final Fantasy "Winning a Battle" Music (From Final Fantasy)
Lose Theme - The little "Waaa Waaa Waaaaaaaaaa" Thing in ironic situations in old TV shows

Personal Info

Name: Rufus Shenron
Alias: None
Race: Genovian (Genovians come from the planet Genova. Their population look surprisingly like Humans, though their planet has less gravity, allowing for his super powers, plus their brain capasity is normally greater than the average human)
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Height: 6'1
Weight: 178
Hair: Silver/Grey
Eyes: Blue
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Personality: Rufus is not necisarilly cruel, but he is brutally honest. He speaks his mind to you, no matter who you are. But while he does not consider himself evil, he is close to it. He would kill you or ruin your life for some extra cash. His life revolves around his personal wants, meaning usually money and power. If your not with him you must be against him, there is no half way. It is near impossible to truly gain his trust, and likewise anyone who gives him 100% trust, or even more then half, he considers dumber than he'd have expected.
Team: None
Secret Origin: Alien (Weakness: His weakness is Xenotime. However, it only takes away his powers for approximately 8-10 posts, while also weakening him past the normal standards for humans, and enough exposure can kill him. Xenotime is a rare mineral found on Earth, composed mainly of yttrium and is in a crystalized form. The combination of the yttrium and other minerals for reasons unknown even to him weaken him.)

Statistics

Total Experience gained:
Experience points left to use: 500
Experience Points used: 5350

Statistics
Strength: 2+1=3 -600 xp
Speed4
Agility:3
Will Power:3
Durability:3



Powers

50 per level-Animal Senses- Level 2- Rufus not only has better hearing and seeing, but he can smell things others can't
300 per level-Bullet Proof- Level 1- Rufus has skin like iron, making him completely bullet proof, something he was born with as a Genovian.
400 XP-Bone Weapons- No Levels- Rufus can do multiple things with his bone weapons: Make a bone-sword shoot out his hand for use, let one grow out his shoulder, etc. However, his three favorites are: Shooting the tips of his finger-bones from his fingers like bullets, He can make extra bones grow from his ribs like spikes as a protective weapon, and his absolute favorite: He takes out his spine, the bone regrowing the same time it's taken out so nothing is messed up. That way he can use the spine as both a sword and a whip. This is yet another trait that he was born with, being it one of the most effective ways the Genovian people have of defending themselves.

Skills

200 per level-Fighting Skills- Level 2- Not only does Rufus know street fighting, but also a bit of kung-fu and his own, odd fighting style that has to do with dodging then hitting the weakspot, then dodging once more.
300 per level-Pressure Points- Level 2-Rufus knows a majority of the pressure points on the human body. He can hit them and make people hurt greatly from them, more than a normal hit, but that is all.
75 per level-Acedemic Field[Literature]- Level 4- Rufus has a fairly good vocabulary
100 per level- Scientific Field[AVIATION]- Rufus understands a basic knowledge of Aviation (5)
100 per level- Scientific Field[MATH]- level 5- Excells at math
100 per level-I.Q.- Level 5- Rufus has a high I.Q., greater than most humans, though it is still growing.
200 per level-Wealth- Level 4- Rufus, owning his small business, seems to get by with some ease. He can, though with slight difficulty, buy most cars and motorcycles, and a decent condo.

Challenges
400 XP-Alien-Rufus is Genovian, not local to Earth or even it's galaxy.
500 XP-No Secret-Identity- Rufus is not afraid of letting people know who and what he is, so he has no secret identity.
600 XP-Special Vulnerabilities- Radioactivity

Inventory

Occupation: None yet
Money: 2.000 $
Items: None yet
Weapons: None yet
Costume: None yet
Transport: None yet

Origin
Rufus came as a baby with his parents to Earth. His parents, once one of the "governers" of Genova were presently incharge during an uprising of the people. Sadly, in the process, Rufus's life was at stake, so in order to save him his parents fled.

He was raised not knowing his true self, his true race. He thought he was just a normal human. Until ofcourse his parents told him. They told him of the race he came from, the power they had, and of the reasons they came to this new home. The described why it was so much better. But Rufus was torn. Rufus had grown up on this planet. In school he was always at the top. He always pushed for the best, getting his first job when he was 14, making his first 100,000 by the time he was 17, after getting the idea of investing in the autopart stocks and working part time at 2, sometimes 3 local places. He was a childhood genius: But to find out it was because he was not one of them. He was different. It tore him apart.

His family always had alot of money. They paid the bills, bought food, and then just about anything else they wanted. He loved the power, the wealth. But to know he was going to be the child of a Governor, maybe even more by the time he grew up, got to him. He wanted more. Much more.

Now, though he has his super powers, he still hasn't come out with them much yet. He has no nick-name. He has no true alliance. He has no preferences. For now, and for a while most likely, he will be only fighting for himself, soon to be a force to be reckoned with. But still, some day he wishes to go back to Genova. Take control. At the very least he wanted to rule earth. And though they didn't seem very small, it did to him. And it was something he truly believes he was going to achieve.
 
Jon
Member Avatar
Doom Patrol
You had spent 5000, not 5350 XP, as you had put, despite having 500 left to use... so I guess you just forgot to change that.

It's up, welcome to the rp

And just a little thing: The link to your pic isn't working. Just thought you'd like to know
 
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