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| Shockzine | Feb 20 2009, 08:36 AM Post #1 |
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[dohtml] [Contains the information for the table.] <TABLE borderColor=#ffffff cellSpacing=1 cellPadding=1 align=center bgColor=#000000 border=1> <TBODY><TR> <TD align=middle bgColor=#ffffff> <P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#000000 size=1> S h o c k z i n e </FONT></P></TD></TR> <TR> [Do not alter this code.] <TD align=center> <IMG src="http://pressthebuttons.typepad.com/photos/uncategorized/2008/01/02/megaman.png" align=center></P> </FONT></TD></TR> <TR> [This is the header for the personal information area] <TD align=middle bgColor=#ffffff> <P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#000000 size=1> |Personal Information| </FONT></P></TD></TR> [This is the personal information area of the profile. Fill out all the Info spots below with the correct information, as seen above them] <TR><TD><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1> <b><i>Name:</i></b> Lan Robert "Rocky" Hikiri <br> <b><i>Alias:</i></b> Metaman <br> <b><i>Race:</i></b> Cybernetic Organism <br> <b><i>Gender:</i></b> Male <br> <b><i>Age:</i></b> 10 <br> <b><i>Height:</i></b> 5'1 <br> <b><i>Weight:</i></b> 145 <br> <b><i>Hair:</i></b> Brown <br> <b><i>Eyes:</i></b> Brown/green[when transformed] <br> <b><i>Alignment:</i></b> Neutral Good [this fluxuates on the lawful/chaotic axis depending on peer pressure and other childish actions.] <br> <b><i>Personality:</i></b> carefree and happy nature, good sense of right and wrong, sometimes is rash, likes to laze about and play gamestation when he can as well as hang out with friends. <br> <b><i>Team:</i></b> ---- <br> <b><i>Secret Origin:</i></b> Alien[Robotic Organism] [Metaman needs energy to remain at full functionality, through solar panels on his body he can absorb sunlight to recover this energy he also has a external plug that can be used when indoors. must charge for at least 30 mins every other day or else he will be forced to run on back up emergency power. emergency power runs out after 1 hour but can be recharged by shutting down for another hour. while running on emergency power no powers are in effect with the exception of self contained life form when acheved and robotic organism] <br> </FONT></TD></TR> <TR> [This is the header for the statistics area] <TD align=middle bgColor=#ffffff> <P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#000000 size=1> |Statistics| </FONT></P></TD></TR> [This area contains information on XP and stats. Fill it out accordingly in the info spots] <TR><TD><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1> <img src=http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/image1__r140861361.png><br><b><i>Total Experience Gained:</i></b> Info <br> <b><i>Experience Points Left To Use:</i></b> 0 <br> <b><i>Experience Points Used:</i></b> 5900 <br><br> <b><i>Strength:</i></b> 1+1=2 <br> <b><i>Agility:</i></b> 1+2=3 <br> <b><i>Accuracy:</i></b> 7 <br> <b><i>Durability:</i></b> 5 <br> <b><i>Will Power:</i></b> 1+1=2 <br> </FONT></TD></TR> <TR> [This is the header for the Powers area] <TD align=middle bgColor=#ffffff> <P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#000000 size=1> |Powers| </FONT></P></TD></TR> [This is the Powers area. Fill out the name of a power, as well as the level, where it says Power lvl ?, and add the description and cost in the Info spot on the line below it. To add another power, simply paste in the code found in the next post, below the Info spot of your latest power] <TR><TD><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1> <b><i>Biocomputing</i></b> Metaman is a Robotic organism with an advanced AI, he can store recall, and interface with other computers very easly[linked to Robotic Organism]. 550xp<br><br> <b><i>Buster Sword lvl 1:</i></b> by focusing the energy on the tip of his buster arm metaman can create a large blade extending from the arm. Energy element [linked to Robotic Organism , one power only[buster arm], armor penatration. 250xp/lvl <br><br> <b><i>Meta Buster lvl 1:</i></b> from his buster arm, metaman fires a volley of blasts at a target. energy element.[linked to Robotic Organism , one power only[buster arm] convertable to human form] 250xp/lvl <br><br> <b><i>Flight lvl 1:</i></b> Metaman's feet contain rocket boosters that can be used to send him skyward and allow flight.[linked to Robotic Organism ] 150xp/lvl<br><br> <b><i>Force Field lvl 1:</i></b> Metaman's body generates an energy shield that covers his body protecting him from harm. [linked to Robotic Organism, can feel attacks ]150xp/lvl <br><br> <b><i>Enhanced Vision:</i></b> being a robotic being, meta can change his vision and detect things in other spectums of sight. he can see in darkness, infared, ultraviolet, telescopic, blinding light, fog or smoke, underwater. [linked to robotic organism] 550xp<br><br> <b><i>Targeting lvl 1:</i></b> Metaman is outfited with multiple battle algorhythms that allow him to track and instantly attack opponents with near pin point accuracy. +10% accuracy x lvl [linked to biocomputing] 150xp/lvl<br><br> <b><i>Perfect Aim lvl 3:</i></b> Metaman has worked with his buster arm for so long, he knows instinctively just how to fire it in combination with realworld events. This works with his targeting systems to grant him even greater accuracy both near and far.. +5% accuracy[melee and ranged] x lvl [linked to biocomputing] 50xp/lvl<br><br> <b><i>Robotic Organism:</i></b> Metaman is a Robotic Organism, he contains nothing simular to human anatomy other then a humanoid shape. he is immune to telepathy and other simular mind effecting powers however he is suceptible to technopathy. he is immune to poison and pressure points. he also cannot feel pain in the same way we doas he does have sensors indicating that something is touching or harming him they just do not send such a forceful feedback to his cyber brain enough to hinder him allowing him to fight longer and harder. 1300xp <br><br> coming soon<br><br> Super Strength<br><br> Super Human Senses<br><br> Super Intelegence<br><br> Firewall[Mental Defences]<br><br> Technopathy<br><br> Reflective Dodge<br><br> Self contained life form<br><br> Sonar Sense<br> </FONT></TD></TR> <TR> [This is the header for the Skills area] <TD align=middle bgColor=#ffffff> <P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#000000 size=1> |Skills| </FONT></P></TD></TR> [This is the Skills area. Fill out the name of a skill, as well as the level, where it says Skill lvl ?, and add the description and cost in the Info spot on the line below it. To add another skill, simply paste in the code found in the next post, below the Info spot of your latest skill] <TR><TD><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1> <b><i>I.Q. lvl 4</i></b> Metaman was created originally to be a son to the Dr. Edmund Hikiri . While he could be smarter, he was designed with only a slightly higher IQ then a normal human. Through AI upgrades this can be increaced through powers. 400xp <br><br> <b><i>Concentration</i></b> Being a robotic life form, Metaman can focus on one or many things at once while preforming other tasks very easly. </FONT></TD></TR> <TR> [This is the header for the Challenges area] <TD align=middle bgColor=#ffffff> <P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#000000 size=1> |Challenges| </FONT></P></TD></TR> [This is the Challenges area. Fill out the name of your challenges where it says Challenge, and then the correct information and XP gain in the Info spots. Room for 5 challenges have been made, but if you wish for less, simply remove the code for the challenge] <TR><TD align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1><http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b3/Shockzine/vgm_megaman.jpg><br> <b><i>Slightly non human appearance:</i></b> metaman for the most part is very human-like. he has skin and hair grafted all over his entire body and even has faux eyeballs. however his eyes iminate a strange glow, and soft hydrolic sounds can be heard from his joints when he moves. [200xp] <br><br> <b><i>Robot:</i></b> Metaman is a Robotic organism, he was created to grow and learn, like a human child and function as both the son and assistant to Dr. Edmund Hikiri of Wayne Biotech and aerospace laboratorys. Orignally only programed to be an assistant, he was further upgraded with an advanced AI and outfited with prototype weapon systems that merged with his body and became a perminate part of him. After Deciding he was unique Dr. Hikiri adopted him and upgraded his body to allow him to evolve and grow as he gets older and more experanced. Like a real boy, Metaman goes to school, has crushes on girls, goes to the arcade with friends and occasionally fights crime on the streets of gotham. [400xp] <br><br> <b><i>No Secret Idenity:</i></b> Lan Hikiri, AKA metaman, is well known to be an robotic organism, or android by most of those that know him. His school knows who he is and has allowed his enrollment pending a large donation from his "father". while there are many kids at his school that distrust him and make fun of him, there are also those that seem to idolize him for being a robot. [500xp] <br><br> <b><i>Alien:</i></b> While Metaman was made right here on earth, he is crafted out of an unknown alien alloy. this alloy is lightweight and super duriable. It can disapate heat almost instantly and is not magnetic. this Megasteel metal was found inside of a crashed meteor that landed outside of gotham. needless to say, metaman was part of the exparament to determine the practicle uses for the metal. unfortunetly the remainder of the metal was confiscated by the US government. Dr. Hikiri was able to hide the fact that metaman was produced from said metal and thusfar has been able to keep the secret. [400xp] <br><br> <b><i>Vulnerable Loved ones:</i></b> Metaman's family, Dr. Edmond Hikiri, his wife Lola Hikiri, are metaman's only family. he was redesigned to be their son after Dr. Hikiri learned that his wife couldnt bear children. Metaman loves them as dearly as any child loves his parents. Dr. Hikiri also is a top scientist for Wayne Enterprizes Biotech and Aerospace division stationed just a little ways outside the suburbs of gotham. This alone could render them a target, the fact their "son" plays super hero doesn't help matters. [400xp] </FONT></TD></TR> <TR> [This is the Inventory header] <TD align=middle bgColor=#ffffff> <P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#000000 size=1> |Inventory| </FONT></P></TD></TR> [This is the Inventory area. Fill out the correct information in the Info spots] <TR><TD><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1> <b><i>Occupation:</i></b> Info <br> <b><i>Money:</i></b> Info <br> <b><i>Items:</i></b> Info <br> <b><i>Weapons:</i></b> Info <br> <b><i>Armour:</i></b> Info <br> <b><i>Transport:</i></b> Info <br> </FONT></TD></TR> <TR> [This is the Origin header] <TD align=middle bgColor=#ffffff> <P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#000000 size=1> |Origin| </FONT></P></TD></TR> [This is the Origin area. Fill out your character's origin where it says Origin. Remember that to shift a line, once the html is loaded, you must write <br>] <TR><TD align=middle> <P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1> Dr. Edmund Hikiri was born in 1969, he was a straight A student all through school and graduated from high school at the top of his class. He was Immediatly accepted into Harvard and majored in cybernetics with a minor in biology and aerodynamics. He graduated Valadictorian of his class in 1997. He immediately was offered a position as a scientist for wayne enterprizes as a top scientist in both of their biotech and aerospace labs. in 1998 a small meteor shower sprayed the fields outside of gotham with a dazzling display of lights. One meteor however survived entry into the earths atmosphere and struck a field 30 miles north of the aerospace labs. Dr. Hikiri headed the team assigned to collect samples and retreve the meteor. upon bringing the metorite back to his lab he began to run tests on the metal contained within. What he found astounded him. The metal not only was stronger then steel, but was non magnetic, absorbed vibrations with ease, dispursed heat almost instantly, and most importantly was perfect for supersonic air travel. He nicknamed the metal Megasteel and immediatly had it hydrocut and pressed into sheets. He kept most of it at the labs and took a portion of it to his home. Using some components from the biotech laboritories he began to create himself a robot using the megasteel, bionic technology, and a custom AI program he had written while still in college. this assistant was created over a 6 month time span. At the biotech labs, he had begun to use simular technology to create simular robots using a more synthetic form of the megasteel, he dubed plastisteel due to its plastic base, however this form of metal was only slightly stronger then steel and could not dispurse heat as fast nor absorb vibrations and thus was unable to be used at the Aerospace labs. These smaller robots he began to develop he dubed Servbots. They were a toned down robotic life form, only able to preform the simplest commands, but they had the potential to become mass produced and so all in all it was consitered a success. At the Aerospace labs, Dr. Hikiri was attempting to create a supersonic spacecraft using this unknown metal that was able to move at sub light speeds, however, their progam was shut down due to the government ordering Wayne enterprizes to turn over the meteorite and all of the megasteel obtained from said meteorite. Dr. Hikiri obliged their request but declined to mention anything about the megasteel he brought to his home nor the assistant crafted from said metal. <br><br> Six months passed by, 1999 had just arrived and Both the Dr and his wife, lola, had begun to attempt to have a child. His assistant, nicknamed Lan, was continously upgraded to become more human-like and evenutally obtained a mental AI state of that of a 2 year old.. further advancements allowed him to grow and learn based on his experance. He was constantly traveling with the doctor and equiped with prototype equipment to test at the labs that the Servbots were unable to. A year later at the dawn of the new millenium, Lola had learned that she was steral and could not conceve, she was heart broken. The long days she spent at home were in solitude and soon she was confined to bed, sick. one day lan walked into her bedroom while the doctor was at work and began asking her the normal questions of a three year old... she suddenly perked up and began growing truely attached to the robot, as time went on the doctor began to improve upon the Initial design of Lan and better perfected his AI and outfited his body with a new prototype developed at the biotech labs a positronic brain. His body was also upgraded to grow at a rate simular to human children through hydrolics. artificial skin graphs and hair, along with a slight nervous system allowed him to feel. As Lan grew to the age of 4 he was in all shapes just like a normal 4 year old human and was renamed Lan Robert Hikiri. through a large donation to a private school Lan was accepted. In all ways he was just like a normal preschooler. he played with other kids, made friends, enemies, got in trouble, tattled, made macaroni pictures and just all around had fun. When out of school he was picked up like a normal kid, and then went to the office and helped his father with testing new equipment. <br><br> Years passed and soon Lan was 10 years old and in the 5th grade. He no longer helped his father at the offices and lived a normal childs life. He was a mediocre student, capable of straight A's but he didn't wish to stand out. He liked to laze about playing gamestation, hanging out with neighborhood friends, and Idolizing a new hero that recently appeared nearby in metropolis, Superman. One day Lan and his friend Mayl were heading down to gotham to watch the movies when Lan saw a woman getting mugged in an ally way. He suddenly felt overcome with emotion and dashed to help her, his body transformed into its "testing" state covering his body with a thick aerodynamic blue armor, a blue helmet covering his head. In a single punch he knocked out the mugger and returned the purse to the woman. she thanked him with much gratitude and asked his name... he thought for a moment unsure of what to say... He thought of his hero superman and suddenly thought of the metal he was made of... "I'm Metaman!" he exclamed. <br><br> Later that night he told his parents what had occured earlyer that day and asked his father to reinstall the buster tool he used to use when he was testing materials with his father. They sat down and after a lengthy talk, he agreed to place the buster tool back upon him, on three conditions... first, He would not use the buster to show off, bully, or do anything that would get him in trouble at school or with the law... Second, He would not play superhero unless all of his homework was done, and Third, he would be home in time for supper... that weekend Dr. Hikiri reinstalled his buster tools onto both of his arms as well as thrusters onto the bottoms of his feet.<br><br> The next day at school some crazed madmen barged into the school wielding automatic weapons and began to hold the students hostage, demanding ransom, helicopters, the releace of their leader from Archam, etc.. basicly the works. Lan was playing hooky that day with Mayl and overheard what had occured at the school. He immediatly looked toward her and transformed into his battle form before taking to the sky heading toward the school. cop cars and on lookers were all over the street. without even stopping meta blasted through, his hand sinking into his forearm and became 2 arm cannons. he moved through the halls, fire erupting as he confronted the mad men, knocking them all out and saving the headmaster from the leader. afterward His name suddenly began to erupt over the headlines over the next few weeks. His idenity known, his father clamed he was a plastisteel creation of his, and his most beloved son. The school sustained minor damage from the battle but remained grateful to their student and kept him enrolled even though the fact he contained weaponry was a contraversial issue. Lan however was grounded from super heroics for 3 weeks, not because of the attention he drew to himself... but because he skipped class that day.... <br><br><img src=http://megaman.neoseeker.com/w/i/megaman/3/37/Lan.jpg align=center> </FONT></P></TD></TR></TBODY></TABLE> [/dohtml] |
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| Jon | Feb 20 2009, 11:06 AM Post #2 |
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Personal Information First of all... please change the name to something else than Megaman. It's already close to him being disallowed, based on the looks alone and similiarities in character alone... Add Lawful, Neutral or Chaotic to his alignment. He's not an alien. The thing with Secret Origins is that you don't just take them and rename them to something else, just to get those abilities. Seeing as how he's a cyborg/robot, the Technology Secret Origin would fit. Also... a 14 years old robot? They didn't have the tech for him that many years ago... Challenges Robot: Just some of the description... What is the name of the guy? And Wayne Biotech and Aerospace laboratories? I'm pretty sure that's two completely different fields, not even based in the same buildings. Alien: He's not an alien. He's a robot, built on Earth. Being made from an alien alloy doesn't change that. Origin I can't see why he'd be upgraded to have weapons... |
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| Shockzine | Feb 20 2009, 04:51 PM Post #3 |
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looks and name? you're kidding right? sense when has that been an issue.. my argent character is in the same boat as far as that.. the WoW character is the prohet valen, and the order of good is the Argent dawn... just cause mega's a little more well known shouldnt hurt him... I just have to make him fit the site, which isnt hard sense I really don't know too much about megaman. [its like me making my trademark crono character and you almost disallowing him because his name is crono... ] I didnt really want to add "lawful, neutral, or chaotic to his alignment... because well... hes a kid[i need to change his age... to maybe 10]. while he tries to follow rules, peer pressure could get to him and make him do things he normally wouldnt do.... or he would break the law without really knowing hes breaking it. also as a kid he could lie to save himself from getting into trouble, or tattle on others and feel guilty... kinda see where im going with it... I just didnt want to confine him to this that or the other, because his personallity and demenor is still developing... at the age of 10 he is still in 5th grade. I guess neutral would cover it if its a problem. as for secret orgins.... you allowed aquaman to be an alien..an alien.. for a person born on earth in the bottom of the ocean... nuff said on that... next technological wouldnt work unless I made it for no modifiers which I really didn't want. I saw how cyborg was made and didn't like the layout of it... technological is more for power armor characters... not characters that ARE power armor. the whole thing about him not being able to get biological powers was just completely off when your whole body is the technology.... to me it doesnt make sense that someone can touch a robotic being and prevent him from using his body... skipping the next thing for a moment. it will be explained in the orgin good catch in the robotic discription... I missed that... originally his father was "Dr. Light" I changed it to "Dr. Hikiri" because light was too much like the original megaman, and hikiri was more human like. as for that, yes you are right... I never said he worked in one, hes a scientist for both, and due to their nature they are both near each other in the outskirts of gotham. as i said above... you let aquaman take "alien".... plus if the US government found out that he is made of that "alien" metal, they would confiscate him and use him for millatary applications, as well as imprisioning the Dr. for keeping classified materials. origin... simple.. product testing... the buster sword was originally used to help fuse and cut materials... the mega buster was used to test the duriability of a material.. also as well before being modified to be a child, megaman wasn't only his assistant but a robotic bodyguard for the labs as well. anyway give me some more time... everything will make sense soon
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| Jon | Feb 21 2009, 11:46 AM Post #4 |
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No, I'm not kidding. Exactly the thing that he's recognizable from other continuities, even with an altered backstory, is something that is against the rules. It's the same thing when Midnighter asked me if he could make the Midnighter, a character that is from another comic continuity, which is even published by DC, and I said no. Yes, Argent is not as recognizable, and that's the whole point. Yes, you need to add that. And yes, neutral would fit. Being made of an alien alloy does not make you alien. Living under the sea, as a being that is effectively different from humans in what they can do and survive means that Aquaman is an alien. And as for the negation thing... those that can negate technology (if somebody choses Negate Power with the Technology Secret Origin) would probably do it through some EMP wave or something like that. And I'd allow you the same thing that I allowed for Horus... all powers based on the tech will receive a discount... which means that you could have powers that weren't cybernetic parts, which would still get that discount. His profile was posted here |
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| Shockzine | Feb 21 2009, 06:55 PM Post #5 |
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actually...its not even an altered backstory... its completely original... personally i dont even know megaman's real backstories for any of the megas with the exception of megaman volnutt and megaman.exe[hub hikiri]. only thing i took was his brother's name from battle net. [lan hikiri], added robert as a middle name for referance to the rockman alias of mega, and made his friends name mayl. well and added servbots aka legomen ...which i wana make next.. everything else was completely original.. from the doctors orgins to megasteel to school, to well superman suddenly becoming his idol.. I just personally like "megaman" its just easy to say... ultraman is a alternate reality superman... omegaman is too long to say with 4 sylables... Blue Bomber would work except he doesnt have any bombs. robotboy reminds me too much of the nick toons anime... cyborg is already taken... cyberman just sounds like a porn star name.... maybe its the orgin.. I just kinda like the way I wrote it for the orgin of his name. Megaman as a refrence to his new idol superman, and calling himself mega not only due to the metal he is made of but as a refrence that he has hopes to be better then superman. [just wait until you see him in action... I am going to make him annoy superman every chance he gets with hero worship. maybe even hindering him in battle by using his 10 year old "good ideas" to help" ] ill change orgin though, give me some time to recalculate it. |
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| Jon | Feb 22 2009, 10:40 PM Post #6 |
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He is still NOT an alien. Origin Your origin hadn't been put up when I replied. Going through it now. It seems fine, but, it still doesn't answer the problem that despite an origin that isn't the same as the one from any of the series... It is still Megaman. It's the same thing if I made Spider-Man here, and completely changed his backstory, but still used Spider-Man pics and still called him Spider-Man... it wouldn't be allowed. And it won't be allowed. So please... at least use another name. |
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| Shockzine | Feb 23 2009, 01:19 AM Post #7 |
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"ill change orgin though, give me some time to recalculate it. " that was ment for secret orgin. I have to recalculate XP for the discount. |
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| Jon | Feb 24 2009, 04:00 PM Post #8 |
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Then say secret origin and not origin... it's two different things... And quite honestly... Metaman? You really think that one is gonna fly? |
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