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| Sorrow | Mar 8 2009, 03:28 AM Post #1 |
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![]() -Theme Music- Main Theme - Believe-Yellowcard Battle Theme - Let it rock-Kevin Rudolf Ft Lil Wayne Epic Battle Theme - Stronger- Trust Company Win Theme - Sing Hallelujah- Dr Alban Lose Theme - Until the day I die- Story of the year Personal Info Name: Lance Wills Alias: Copycat Race: Human/Alien Gender: Male Age: 21 Height: Always changing Weight: Always changing Hair: Red/blonde Eyes: Brown Appearance: Currently brown eyes, Reddish hair with blonde in it, Black cloak and red clouds on it. Alignment: Neutral good Personality: Lance is a trickster by nature, he uses his powers to confuse people and amuse himself. However his heart is usually in the right place he will do what he thinks is right regardless of who is in his way. People normally find him annoying because he acts like a teenager instead of a young adult. Team: None [Once you join an official team, add team name here] Secret Origin: Alien Statistics ![]() Total Experience gained: 0 Experience points left to use: 0 Experience Points used: 5400 Strength: 3 Agility: 3 Accuracy: 3 Durability: 3 Will Power: 2 Powers Shapeshift Lance has the ability to completely change his form; he can change his finger prints, retina, clothing, and voice anything. All he needs to do is visualize what he wants to look like and he becomes that form. He can also change specific parts of his body without changing the rest i.e. Arms, legs, and head. Lance normally use this power to trick people and change into his enemy to confuse their team mates if they have any, and because of his ability to copy other peoples powers he can be pretty authentic. Level: 1 Experience: 300 Total Experience 300 Options: Mass increase/decrease +100xp Mimic powers Lance's main Ability is to copy the powers of those around him, once he is aware of the power he is automatically able to use it as it his own. This makes Lance a powerful adversary. Level: 4 Experience: 1000 Total Experience: 4000 Options: None Powers mimicked - - Natural Fighter Lance's Powers have given him a natural Style of combat against his opponents, Lance is all about deception. When fighting someone he will use his copy their style of using their powers and tweak it with a little of his own style. Level: 1 Experiance: 200 Total Experiance: 200 Bonus: Add's 10% to accuracy in terms of close combat. Powers Yet to be discovered Flight Mimic Stats Extended life {Tied to Enhanced healing factor} Enhanced Healing factor Self contained life form {Breathe&Environment} Skills I.Q. Copycat is highly intelligent, He just chooses not to use that intelligence and acts like a dumbass most the time Level: 6 Experiance: 100 Total Experience: 600 Photographic Memory Lance has amazing memory capabilities, he is able to remember anything in exact detail's All he needs is to view what he wants to remember for exactly 20 seconds to retain the information perfectly. Level: None Experience: 300 Total experience: 300 Bonus: Words needed for skill learning is cut by half. Challenges Alien: Lance is one of the last survivors of Krypton, A planet far away from earth. Bonus Experiance: 400 Haunted Past: Lance's Mother is in fact human, and was abducted by an alien that wanted to sell her to an extraterrestrial zoo. However lance's father a Man of Krypton Rescued her and together they went to planet Krypton and lived together for years, Lance's father was one of the few people that believed the warning of jo-el, So he shipped his wife and son off to planet Earth. While he would try to convince others to leave. It is assumed that Lance's father did not make it off the planet. Bonus Experience: Vulnerable Loved Ones: Lance Always keeps his real identity secret through his shape shifting powers to protect his mother, and his grandparents. Bonus experience: 400 Special Vulnerability [Kryptonite]: Exposure to radioactive pieces of Lance's home world, Krypton, can easily Cause him extreme pain and agony. Normally it would kill him but his human genetics’ make it a little easier on him. However being exposed to the kryptonite for long periods of time will kill him Bonus experiance: 600 Inventory Occupation: Money: 2.000 $ Items: Weapons: Costume: [Applies to armour and such as well] Transport: Origin ![]() Issue 1: Prologue before the Hero's Birth Sally Wills a nice young southern girl, Born and raised Alabama was raised to be a Lady. She lived a typical life and would always Wish that her life would get interesting, One day her wish came true Sally was out in the fields at night watching the stars when she saw a UFO. She was bathed in a bright white light that sucked her into the ship. When she was on the ship she was placed into a cage and was to be sold into some Alien zoo. Sally was afraid and wanted to go home, however she was saved by a fleet of Kryptonian and she met and eventually fell in love with Bor-Jak. Sally chose to go to Krypton with Bor-jak instead of going home, upon arriving on krypton she discovered that it was simular to Earth only more advanced. She eventually married Bor-jak. The years went by and Sally had a son from Bor-Jak and she named her son Lance. Issue 2: Krypton's End & Sally's return Home Bor-Jak was one of the few scientist that believed Jor-El's claim that the Planet was going to be destroyed, He Sent Sally and lance off the planet telling them he would catch a latter ship. Sally never saw bor-jack again. Sally and Lance crash landed on the same fields she was abducted from, when she returned to her Parent's help she begged them for help and told them everything that happened to her. The same Night she crash landed on earth Sally & her father returned to the ship, and she activated the self destruct button destroying the ship and destroyed all evidence of her story. Once that was out of the way sally and her father return home and came up with a story for her Disappearance, That she ran away with a boy that she met over the internet and eloped, he went to war and never return and she was left with his son, Sally then moved home in order to get help raising her son. Issue 3: Lance's Life the Early Year's Lance's Early Childhood was pretty normal; He and his mother lived with his grandparents at their Family home in Alabama. He would play with other kid's and go on play dates under the supervision of his grandparents while his mother worked as a Waitress. At the Age of five Lance showed sign's of High intelligence, being able to read at a 5th grade level. His grandmother tutored him to help give him an Advantage in life to help his Intelligence factor go up. By the age of 6 Lance's powers manifested, he shape shift into an exact copy of his friend. Lance's mother was shocked; once she recovered she taught lance how to control his abilities through Self control. Issue 4: The Teen Year's Lance's Teen years proved to be Normal, His high intelligence was never discovered by fellow students or teachers due to his mischievous Behaviour. Lance had a small group of friends, none of them ever knew of his secret, because of the three golden rules, the first was never tell anyone about his powers, the second was never use his powers in front of anyone and the final rule never tell anyone about his real father. Lance never did graduate high-school, he got bored and dropped out, and He got a job as a check out clerk at the grocery store. Lance stayed in Alabama until the age of eighteen and then left home to travel and find his place in the world. Issue 5: The Birth of Copycat Lance spent 3 Year’s travelling around, He went where ever he could go until he ended up in Metropolis. Arriving in that city lance discovered the city was in need of a hero. He used his shape shifting abilities to create a new Identity; he formed when fighting for the cause his wardrobe became that of a long, dark cloak with red clouds, a red interior, and a chin-high collar. His appearance was medium length spiky hair, six piercing and a metal bar through each ear, three studs through the side of his upper nose and one spike stud on each end of his bottom lip. Three piercing under each other in each wrist, at least one on his upper wrist and some just under his neck. He also wears a beaded necklace. Issue 6: Lance’s New Home Yet to happen {for when he joins a team} |
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| Jon | Mar 8 2009, 05:38 PM Post #2 |
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Going through this from the top... Personal Info Race: Human/Alien, you say? What kind of alien? Just saying alien won't be enough Height/Weight: Maybe it's always changing, but there's still gotta be a base height and weight, for the 'standard' form. Appearance: Just put in the standard appearance, or his original appearance? Alignment: Sounds more like Chaotic Good than Neutral Good to me, based on his personality description. Secret Origin: Alright, he's alien, so... what is the one thing that can negate his powers? Statistics You've only used 14 stat points Powers Why does he have those abilities? Please at least say it's because of his alien heritage or something like that? If this character were to be allowed to be a Kryptonian, which he's not (look under challenges), none of those powers are power Kryptonians would have... Natural Fighter: Umm... that's not how Natural Fighter works... it simply increases your aim, it doesn't let you copy somebody's style... Challenges Alien: No. Simply put, there won't be any more Kryptonians on the site than Superman, Krypto and Supergirl (if Euro ever finishes her) Haunted Past: Now... first, going by you being allowed to be a Kryptonian (which you won't), here's some comments to that: Umm... have you TRIED reading the origin for Superman, in his profile? Seeing as how he's the 'main' surviving Kryptonian, and there is no way your Haunted Past would fit within the story presented of Krypton there. Special Vulnerability: He still won't be allowed to be a Kryptonian. Origin Umm... issues? Not that there's a big problem with that, but... why? O.o Anyway... He will not be either Kryptonian or half-Kryptonian, as I've already told you, which changes much of your origin. At least make it some other alien race. And please... Metropolis does not need a hero, seeing as it already has Superman
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| Sorrow | Mar 9 2009, 07:04 AM Post #3 |
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![]() -Theme Music- Main Theme - Believe-Yellowcard Battle Theme - Let it rock-Kevin Rudolf Ft Lil Wayne Epic Battle Theme - Stronger- Trust Company Win Theme - Sing Hallelujah- Dr Alban Lose Theme - Until the day I die- Story of the year Personal Info Name: Lance Moon Wills Alias: Copycat Race: Templar Gender: Male Age: 18 Height: 6"5 Weight: 167 lb. Hair: Red/blonde Eyes: Brown Appearance: Lance's Real form is Green eyes, Brown hair, he is average built with muscular features. Alignment: Chaotic good Personality: Lance is a trickster by nature, he uses his powers to confuse people and amuse himself. However his heart is usually in the right place he will do what he thinks is right regardless of who is in his way. People normally find him annoying because he acts like a teenager instead of a young adult. Team: None [Once you join an official team, add team name here] Secret Origin: Alien {Templar} Weakness: For some strange reason Lance's Powers can be supressed with red kryptonite. Statistics ![]() Total Experience gained: 0 Experience points left to use: 0 Experience Points used: 5400 Strength: 3 Agility: 3 Accuracy: 3 Durability: 3 Will Power: 3 Powers Shapeshift Lance has the ability to completely change his form; he can change his finger prints, retina, clothing, and voice anything. All he needs to do is visualize what he wants to look like and he becomes that form. He can also change specific parts of his body without changing the rest i.e. Arms, legs, and head. Lance normally use this power to trick people and change into his enemy to confuse their team mates if they have any, and because of his ability to copy other peoples powers he can be pretty authentic. Level: 1 Experience: 300 Total Experience 300 Options: Mass increase/decrease +100xp Mimic powers Lance's main Ability is to copy the powers of those around him, once he is aware of the power he is automatically able to use it as it his own. This makes Lance a powerful adversary. Level: 4 Experience: 1000 Total Experience: 4000 Options: None Powers mimicked - - Natural Fighter Lance's Powers have given him a natural Style of combat against his opponents, by using their own abilities against them. Level: 1 Experience: 200 Total Experience: 200 Bonus: Add's 10% to accuracy in terms of close combat. Powers Yet to be discovered Flight Mimic Stats Technopathy Extended life {Tied to Enhanced healing factor} Enhanced Healing factor Self contained life form {Breathe&Environment} Skills I.Q. Copycat is highly intelligent, He just chooses not to use that intelligence and acts like a dumbass most the time Level: 6 Experience: 100 Total Experience: 600 Photographic Memory Lance has amazing memory capabilities, he is able to remember anything in exact detail's All he needs is to view what he wants to remember for exactly 20 seconds to retain the information perfectly. Level: None Experience: 300 Total experience: 300 Bonus: Words needed for skill learning is cut by half. Challenges Alien: Lance is an Alien of Spira, A planet far away from earth. Bonus Experience: 400 Haunted Past: Lance never got to know his real parents. See History Bonus Experience: Vulnerable Loved Ones: Lance Always keeps his real identity secret through his shape shifting powers to protect his adoptive mother, and adoptive grandparents. Bonus experience: 400 Special Vulnerability Water Lance’s genetics are not natural to Humans their quiet different, Lance has low tolerance for water; Water burn’s Lance like fire would burn a human. So instead of drinking water he drinks’s milk. Bonus experience: 600 Inventory Occupation: Money: 2.000 $ Items: Weapons: Costume: [Applies to armour and such as well] Transport: Origin ![]() Special issue 1: About spira The planet Spira is Far from any universe ever associated with Earth, Spira is a red planet with oceans of red fire, the planet is technology advance more so then earth or krypton. They developed a new form of interstellar transportation, by using a machine that creates gateways to other planets by typing the planet’s coordinates. They also had other advances and two sets of culture. The inhabitants consist of Humanoids known as Templars; there are two types of Templars that follow a different culture each. The monks and techno-heads the monks believe in fighting and growing stronger, while the Techno-heads are lazy and develop technology to help make their lives easier. The two culture’s don’t exactly get along they share a peace treaty. Peace is maintained as long as they stay off each other’s land, and leave each other alone. The two cultures have different set of abilities, The ability the monk’s share is the power to copy unique powers that other monk’s might have. Techno-heads are natural technopath’s and have the power to shapeshift. Special Issue 2: Enter Sen. Sen a young female from techbane, she spent her entire life in the great techno city living the average life. She finished her education in the top of her class, one day she left the city to go and explore the world. While travelling Sen was chased by a The Swallower. {Giant toad} She had no choice but to go to Monk Land’s to survive, while running for her life she ran into a Monk male named Moon, Sen and moon had a rough first meeting but was curious about each other’s culture. So they decided to meet in secret and learn from each other becoming good friends. Special Issue 3: Birth of the star-crossed lovers Sen and moon spent the next year meeting in secret, forming a close friendship even if it was forbidden; they learned much from each other’s lifestyle and culture. The two kept their friendship hidden as it was illegal. Sen and moon managed to keep their friendship and love, hidden for years until Sen got pregnant. Eventually her relationship with moon exposed the council of both tribes wanted to go to war. The two tribes settled down and gave Sen a choice. She had the option of leaving the lands of tech forever and be with moon or stay in the land of tech and never see moon again, Sen chose to leave her people and live with moon. She left her homelands with moon beside her, and together they left the land of techno and the land of monks, to the forest a place of neutral grounds where they would be safe. Not long after war broke out between the two tribes. Special Issue 4: Downfall of the star-crossed lovers Sen and moon spent the next seven months in bliss, despite the war of the two tribes the war became devastating scaring the planet beyond repair. Not wanting their child to be born into a world full of war, sen and moon planned to leave spira and go to a safer place. The two lovers made a plan; they managed to sneak into techbane and to where the Teleportation transport was stored but came across trouble with security, Moon fought and sacrificed himself so that sen and their child could get to the teleported off spira and made it to Earth. Special Issue 5: The Birth of Earth’s Future Sen Teleported to Earth, and arrived in the cornfield in a bright light, at the same time a women in her thirties was driving in a van when she saw the light. Once the flash subsided the women ran out to see what the commotion, she came across a weakened sen pleading for help. The women Helped sen and brought her home, sen told her story grateful for the stranger’s help. The lady was sceptical of sen’s story until she used her power to shape shift into a pregnant version of the lady. The time went by fast and sen and the lady became good friends, Sen’s Child was born but tragically Sen died after giving birth. The women feeling sadness for loosing her new friend decided to keep the boy and called him Lance Moon Wills giving the boy her last name Issue 1: Lance's Life the Early Year's Not long after Lance’s birth, Lindsey Decided to move back home to Alabama and raise Lance in a loving environment, Lindsey never told her parents about Sen She claimed Lance was hers and that was that. A few years latter Lance began to show his high intelligence, his adopted mother would tutor him from an early age. Despite his high intelligence he chose to be a dumbass instead. Another few years went by and Lance discovered his special abilities, when Lance’s mother saw the powers he possessed. She taught him self control and told him not to use his powers giving the boy rules. Issue 2: The Teen Year's Lance's Teen years proved to be Normal, His high intelligence was never discovered by fellow students or teachers due to his mischievous Behaviour. Lance had a small group of friends, none of them ever knew of his secret, because of the three golden rules, the first was never tell anyone about his powers, the second was never use his powers in front of anyone and the final rule never tell anyone about his real Parents. Lance never did graduate high-school, he got bored and dropped out, and He got a job as a check out clerk at the grocery store. Lance stayed in Alabama until the age of eighteen and then left home to travel and find his place in the world. Issue 3: The Birth of Copycat Lance spent 3 Year’s travelling around, He went where ever he could go until he ended up in Metropolis. Arriving in that city Lance discovered the city was in need of a hero. He used his shape shifting abilities to create a new Identity; he formed when fighting for the cause his wardrobe became that of a long, dark cloak with red clouds, a red interior, and a chin-high collar. His appearance was medium length spiky hair, six piercing and a metal bar through each ear, three studs through the side of his upper nose and one spike stud on each end of his bottom lip. Three piercing under each other in each wrist, at least one on his upper wrist and some just under his neck. He also wears a beaded necklace. Issue 4: Lance’s New Home Yet to happen {for when he joins a team} |
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| Jon | Mar 9 2009, 08:11 AM Post #4 |
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Only looking in here briefly, so... The Alien weakness: No. There's only Green Kryptonite here, and again... it's something that affects Kryptonians, not others as well. And the Special Vulnerability challenge: Water is not a damaging element, but I will let it slide, since you've written that having it just touch him burns his skin, but remember, water based attacks will still deal x1.5 natural damage to you, as well. |
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| Sorrow | Mar 9 2009, 09:44 AM Post #5 |
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Newbie
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![]() -Theme Music- Main Theme - Believe-Yellowcard Battle Theme - Let it rock-Kevin Rudolf Ft Lil Wayne Epic Battle Theme - Stronger- Trust Company Win Theme - Sing Hallelujah- Dr Alban Lose Theme - Until the day I die- Story of the year Personal Info Name: Lance Moon Wills Alias: Copycat Race: Templar Gender: Male Age: 18 Height: 6"5 Weight: 167 lb. Hair: Red/blonde Eyes: Brown Appearance: Lance's Real form is Green eyes, Brown hair, he is average built with muscular features. Alignment: Chaotic good Personality: Lance is a trickster by nature, he uses his powers to confuse people and amuse himself. However his heart is usually in the right place he will do what he thinks is right regardless of who is in his way. People normally find him annoying because he acts like a teenager instead of a young adult. Team: None [Once you join an official team, add team name here] Secret Origin: Alien {Templar} Weakness: Templar's gather their power from the Earth's Life force. however they have a weakness and it's wolfsbane. Having wolfsbane in their bloodstream will supress Lance's powers until the wolfsbane runs its course. Statistics ![]() Total Experience gained: 0 Experience points left to use: 0 Experience Points used: 5400 Strength: 3 Agility: 3 Accuracy: 3 Durability: 3 Will Power: 3 Powers Shapeshift Lance has the ability to completely change his form; he can change his finger prints, retina, clothing, and voice anything. All he needs to do is visualize what he wants to look like and he becomes that form. He can also change specific parts of his body without changing the rest i.e. Arms, legs, and head. Lance normally use this power to trick people and change into his enemy to confuse their team mates if they have any, and because of his ability to copy other peoples powers he can be pretty authentic. Level: 1 Experience: 300 Total Experience 300 Options: Mass increase/decrease +100xp Mimic powers Lance's main Ability is to copy the powers of those around him, once he is aware of the power he is automatically able to use it as it his own. This makes Lance a powerful adversary. Level: 4 Experience: 1000 Total Experience: 4000 Options: None Powers mimicked - - Natural Fighter Lance's Powers have given him a natural Style of combat against his opponents, by using their own abilities against them. Level: 1 Experience: 200 Total Experience: 200 Bonus: Add's 10% to accuracy in terms of close combat. Powers Yet to be discovered Flight Mimic Stats Technopathy Extended life {Tied to Enhanced healing factor} Enhanced Healing factor Self contained life form {Breathe&Environment} Skills I.Q. Copycat is highly intelligent, He just chooses not to use that intelligence and acts like a dumbass most the time Level: 6 Experience: 100 Total Experience: 600 Photographic Memory Lance has amazing memory capabilities, he is able to remember anything in exact detail's All he needs is to view what he wants to remember for exactly 20 seconds to retain the information perfectly. Level: None Experience: 300 Total experience: 300 Bonus: Words needed for skill learning is cut by half. Challenges Alien: Lance is an Alien of Spira, A planet far away from earth. Bonus Experience: 400 Haunted Past: Lance never got to know his real parents. See History Bonus Experience: Vulnerable Loved Ones: Lance Always keeps his real identity secret through his shape shifting powers to protect his adoptive mother, and adoptive grandparents. Bonus experience: 400 Special Vulnerability Water Lance’s genetics are not natural to Humans their quiet different, Lance has low tolerance for water; Water burn’s Lance like fire would burn a human. So instead of drinking water he drinks’s milk. Bonus experience: 600 Inventory Occupation: Money: 2.000 $ Items: Weapons: Costume: [Applies to armour and such as well] Transport: Origin ![]() Special issue 1: About spira The planet Spira is Far from any universe ever associated with Earth, Spira is a red planet with oceans of red fire, the planet is technology advance more so then earth or krypton. They developed a new form of interstellar transportation, by using a machine that creates gateways to other planets by typing the planet’s coordinates. They also had other advances and two sets of culture. The inhabitants consist of Humanoids known as Templars; there are two types of Templars that follow a different culture each. The monks and techno-heads the monks believe in fighting and growing stronger, while the Techno-heads are lazy and develop technology to help make their lives easier. The two culture’s don’t exactly get along they share a peace treaty. Peace is maintained as long as they stay off each other’s land, and leave each other alone. The two cultures have different set of abilities, The ability the monk’s share is the power to copy unique powers that other monk’s might have. Techno-heads are natural technopath’s and have the power to shapeshift. Special Issue 2: Enter Sen. Sen a young female from techbane, she spent her entire life in the great techno city living the average life. She finished her education in the top of her class, one day she left the city to go and explore the world. While travelling Sen was chased by a The Swallower. {Giant toad} She had no choice but to go to Monk Land’s to survive, while running for her life she ran into a Monk male named Moon, Sen and moon had a rough first meeting but was curious about each other’s culture. So they decided to meet in secret and learn from each other becoming good friends. Special Issue 3: Birth of the star-crossed lovers Sen and moon spent the next year meeting in secret, forming a close friendship even if it was forbidden; they learned much from each other’s lifestyle and culture. The two kept their friendship hidden as it was illegal. Sen and moon managed to keep their friendship and love, hidden for years until Sen got pregnant. Eventually her relationship with moon exposed the council of both tribes wanted to go to war. The two tribes settled down and gave Sen a choice. She had the option of leaving the lands of tech forever and be with moon or stay in the land of tech and never see moon again, Sen chose to leave her people and live with moon. She left her homelands with moon beside her, and together they left the land of techno and the land of monks, to the forest a place of neutral grounds where they would be safe. Not long after war broke out between the two tribes. Special Issue 4: Downfall of the star-crossed lovers Sen and moon spent the next seven months in bliss, despite the war of the two tribes the war became devastating scaring the planet beyond repair. Not wanting their child to be born into a world full of war, sen and moon planned to leave spira and go to a safer place. The two lovers made a plan; they managed to sneak into techbane and to where the Teleportation transport was stored but came across trouble with security, Moon fought and sacrificed himself so that sen and their child could get to the teleported off spira and made it to Earth. Special Issue 5: The Birth of Earth’s Future Sen Teleported to Earth, and arrived in the cornfield in a bright light, at the same time a women in her thirties was driving in a van when she saw the light. Once the flash subsided the women ran out to see what the commotion, she came across a weakened sen pleading for help. The women Helped sen and brought her home, sen told her story grateful for the stranger’s help. The lady was sceptical of sen’s story until she used her power to shape shift into a pregnant version of the lady. The time went by fast and sen and the lady became good friends, Sen’s Child was born but tragically Sen died after giving birth. The women feeling sadness for loosing her new friend decided to keep the boy and called him Lance Moon Wills giving the boy her last name Issue 1: Lance's Life the Early Year's Not long after Lance’s birth, Lindsey Decided to move back home to Alabama and raise Lance in a loving environment, Lindsey never told her parents about Sen She claimed Lance was hers and that was that. A few years latter Lance began to show his high intelligence, his adopted mother would tutor him from an early age. Despite his high intelligence he chose to be a dumbass instead. Another few years went by and Lance discovered his special abilities, when Lance’s mother saw the powers he possessed. She taught him self control and told him not to use his powers giving the boy rules. Issue 2: The Teen Year's Lance's Teen years proved to be Normal, His high intelligence was never discovered by fellow students or teachers due to his mischievous Behaviour. Lance had a small group of friends, none of them ever knew of his secret, because of the three golden rules, the first was never tell anyone about his powers, the second was never use his powers in front of anyone and the final rule never tell anyone about his real Parents. Lance never did graduate high-school, he got bored and dropped out, and He got a job as a check out clerk at the grocery store. Lance stayed in Alabama until the age of eighteen and then left home to travel and find his place in the world. Issue 3: The Birth of Copycat Lance spent 3 Year’s travelling around, He went where ever he could go until he ended up in Metropolis. Arriving in that city Lance discovered the city was in need of a hero. He used his shape shifting abilities to create a new Identity; he formed when fighting for the cause his wardrobe became that of a long, dark cloak with red clouds, a red interior, and a chin-high collar. His appearance was medium length spiky hair, six piercing and a metal bar through each ear, three studs through the side of his upper nose and one spike stud on each end of his bottom lip. Three piercing under each other in each wrist, at least one on his upper wrist and some just under his neck. He also wears a beaded necklace. Issue 4: Lance’s New Home Yet to happen {for when he joins a team} |
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| EnlightenedInsanity | Mar 10 2009, 12:52 AM Post #6 |
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ok, first off, wolfsbane is a no. mostly because your not a werewolf, but also because it wouldnt make sense for someone who is attuned to the earth's life force to be weakened by a plant that grows on the earth. secondly, who is lindsey? you dont explain who she is, you just suddenly say her name. is it the woman? a friend of hers? her sister? daughter? explain please thirdly, there are way too many grammer, punctuation, and other such mistakes in your origin. Look it over again and fix most, if not all of them. otherwise the math is fine, rating haunted past at 200, fix up the rest and we should be able to approve it |
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| Sorrow | Mar 10 2009, 04:42 AM Post #7 |
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![]() -Theme Music- Personal Info Name: Lance Moon Wills Alias: Copycat Race: Templar Gender: Male Age: 18 Height: 6"5 Weight: 167 lb. Hair: Red/blonde Eyes: Brown Appearance: Lance's Real form is Green eyes, Brown hair, he is average built with muscular features. Alignment: Chaotic good Personality: Lance is a trickster by nature, he uses his powers to confuse people and amuse himself. However his heart is usually in the right place he will do what he thinks is right regardless of who is in his way. People normally find him annoying because he acts like a teenager instead of a young adult. Team: None [Once you join an official team, add team name here] Secret Origin: Alien {Templar} Weakness: Templar's gather their power by yellow sunlight, their body soaks up the solor power and enpower them, red sunlight robs them of their powers until they can gather more solor power Statistics ![]() Total Experience gained: 0 Experience points left to use: 200 Experience Points used: 5400 Strength: 3 Agility: 3 Accuracy: 3 Durability: 3 Will Power: 3 Powers Shapeshift Lance has the ability to completely change his form; he can change his finger prints, retina, clothing, and voice anything. All he needs to do is visualize what he wants to look like and he becomes that form. He can also change specific parts of his body without changing the rest i.e. Arms, legs, and head. Lance normally use this power to trick people and change into his enemy to confuse their team mates if they have any, and because of his ability to copy other peoples powers he can be pretty authentic. Level: 1 Experience: 300 Total Experience 300 Options: Mass increase/decrease +100xp Mimic powers Lance's main Ability is to copy the powers of those around him, once he is aware of the power he is automatically able to use it as it his own. This makes Lance a powerful adversary. Level: 4 Experience: 1000 Total Experience: 4000 Options: None Powers mimicked - - Natural Fighter Lance's Powers have given him a natural Style of combat against his opponents, by using their own abilities against them. Level: 1 Experience: 200 Total Experience: 200 Bonus: Add's 10% to accuracy in terms of close combat. Powers Yet to be discovered Flight Mimic Stats Technopathy Extended life {Tied to Enhanced healing factor} Enhanced Healing factor Self contained life form {Breathe&Environment} Skills I.Q. Copycat is highly intelligent, He just chooses not to use that intelligence and acts like a dumbass most the time Level: 6 Experience: 100 Total Experience: 600 Photographic Memory Lance has amazing memory capabilities, he is able to remember anything in exact detail's All he needs is to view what he wants to remember for exactly 20 seconds to retain the information perfectly. Level: None Experience: 300 Total experience: 300 Bonus: Words needed for skill learning is cut by half. Challenges Alien: Lance is an Alien of Spira, A planet far away from earth. Bonus Experience: 400 Haunted Past: Lance never got to know his real parents. See History Bonus Experience: 200 Vulnerable Loved Ones: Lance Always keeps his real identity secret through his shape shifting powers to protect his adoptive mother, and adoptive grandparents. Bonus experience: 400 Special Vulnerability Water Lance’s genetics are not natural to Humans their quiet different, Lance has low tolerance for water; Water burn’s Lance like fire would burn a human. So instead of drinking water he drinks’s milk. Bonus experience: 600 Inventory Occupation: Money: 2.000 $ Items: Weapons: Costume: [Applies to armour and such as well] Transport: Origin ![]() Special issue 1: About spira The planet Spira is Far from any universe ever associated with Earth, Spira is a red planet with oceans of red fire, the planet is technology advance more so then earth or krypton. They developed a new form of interstellar transportation, by using a machine that creates gateways to other planets by typing the planet’s coordinates. They also had other advances and two sets of culture. The inhabitants consist of Humanoids known as Templars; each templer has different abilities, they are solor powered creatures. there are two types of Templars that follow a different culture each. The monks and techno-heads the monks believe in fighting and growing stronger, while the Techno-heads are lazy and develop technology to help make their lives easier. The two culture’s don’t exactly get along they share a peace treaty. Peace is maintained as long as they stay off each other’s land, and leave each other alone. The two cultures have different set of abilities, The ability the monk’s share is the power to copy unique powers that other monk’s might have. Techno-heads are natural technopath’s and have the power to shapeshift. Special Issue 2: Enter Sen. Sen a young female from techbane, she spent her entire life in the great techno city living the average life. She finished her education in the top of her class, one day she left the city to go and explore the world. While travelling Sen was chased by a The Swallower. {Giant toad} She had no choice but to go to Monk Land’s to survive, while running for her life she ran into a Monk male named Moon, Sen and moon had a rough first meeting but was curious about each other’s culture. So they decided to meet in secret and learn from each other becoming good friends. Special Issue 3: Birth of the star-crossed lovers Sen and moon spent the next year meeting in secret, forming a close friendship even if it was forbidden; they learned much from each other’s lifestyle and culture. The two kept their friendship hidden as it was illegal. Sen and moon managed to keep their friendship and love, hidden for years until Sen got pregnant. Eventually her relationship with moon exposed the council of both tribes wanted to go to war. The two tribes settled down and gave Sen a choice. She had the option of leaving the lands of tech forever and be with moon or stay in the land of tech and never see moon again, Sen chose to leave her people and live with moon. She left her homelands with moon beside her, and together they left the land of techno and the land of monks, to the forest a place of neutral grounds where they would be safe. Not long after war broke out between the two tribes. Special Issue 4: Downfall of the star-crossed lovers Sen and moon spent the next seven months in bliss, despite the war of the two tribes the war became devastating scaring the planet beyond repair. Not wanting their child to be born into a world full of war, sen and moon planned to leave spira and go to a safer place. The two lovers made a plan; they managed to sneak into techbane and to where the Teleportation transport was stored but came across trouble with security, Moon fought and sacrificed himself so that sen and their child could get to the teleported off spira and made it to Earth. Special Issue 5: The Birth of Earth’s Future Sen Teleported to Earth, and arrived in the cornfield in a bright light, at the same time a women in her thirties was driving in a van when she saw the light. Once the flash subsided the women ran out to see what the commotion, she came across a weakened sen pleading for help. The women Helped sen and brought her home, sen told her story grateful for the stranger’s help. The lady was sceptical of sen’s story until she used her power to shape shift into a pregnant version of the lady. The time went by fast and sen and the lady became good friends, Sen’s Child was born but tragically Sen died after giving birth. The women feeling sadness for loosing her new friend decided to keep the boy and called him Lance Moon Wills giving the boy her last name Issue 1: Lance's Life the Early Year's Not long after Lance’s birth, Lindsey Decided to move back home to Alabama and raise Lance in a loving environment, Lindsey never told her parents about Sen She claimed Lance was hers and that was that. A few years latter Lance began to show his high intelligence, his adopted mother would tutor him from an early age. Despite his high intelligence he chose to be a dumbass instead. Another few years went by and Lance discovered his special abilities, when Lance’s mother saw the powers he possessed. She taught him self control and told him not to use his powers giving the boy rules. Issue 2: The Teen Year's Lance's Teen years proved to be Normal, His high intelligence was never discovered by fellow students or teachers due to his mischievous Behaviour. Lance had a small group of friends, none of them ever knew of his secret, because of the three golden rules, the first was never tell anyone about his powers, the second was never use his powers in front of anyone and the final rule never tell anyone about his real Parents. Lance never did graduate high-school, he got bored and dropped out, and He got a job as a check out clerk at the grocery store. Lance stayed in Alabama until the age of eighteen and then left home to travel and find his place in the world. Issue 3: The Birth of Copycat Lance spent 3 Year’s travelling around, He went where ever he could go until he ended up in Metropolis. Arriving in that city Lance discovered the city was in need of a hero. He used his shape shifting abilities to create a new Identity; he formed when fighting for the cause his wardrobe became that of a long, dark cloak with red clouds, a red interior, and a chin-high collar. His appearance was medium length spiky hair, six piercing and a metal bar through each ear, three studs through the side of his upper nose and one spike stud on each end of his bottom lip. Three piercing under each other in each wrist, at least one on his upper wrist and some just under his neck. He also wears a beaded necklace. Issue 4: Lance’s New Home Yet to happen {for when he joins a team} |
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| Jon | Mar 10 2009, 07:52 AM Post #8 |
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He is not Kryptonian... come up with something original... |
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| Sorrow | Mar 10 2009, 08:14 AM Post #9 |
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i tried but the person who posted before you shit all over the wolfsbane idea,besides why can't i use that idea, its not like superman is the only solor powered person. |
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| Jon | Mar 10 2009, 03:26 PM Post #10 |
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First: Disable the autoplay of that play list or I will remove it from the profile Second: Because of your behaviour these last few days, both in the chat and here, you're now getting your first official warning out of three. Get to the third, and you will be banned. This will be reflected in your warn level. And now that you have been giving a warning already, others will come easier. Third: Explain to me just why he would have those powers because of a yellow sun? Please... I want to know... because nowhere in the origin or anywhere do you tell anything to that effect. |
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| Sorrow | Mar 11 2009, 02:23 AM Post #11 |
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![]() -Theme Music- [dohtml]<div style="text-align: center; margin-left: auto; visibility:visible; margin-right: auto; width:450px;"> <object width="435" height="270"> <param name="movie" value="http://www.profileplaylist.net/mc/mp3player_new.swf"></param> <param name="allowscriptaccess" value="never"></param> <param name="wmode" value="transparent"></param> <param name="flashvars" value="config=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.indimusic.us%2Fext%2Fpc%2Fconfig_black_noautostart.xml&mywidth=435&myheight=270&playlist_url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.indimusic.us%2Floadplaylist.php%3Fplaylist%3D60368041%26t%3D1236733713&wid=os"></param> <embed style="width:435px; visibility:visible; height:270px;" allowScriptAccess="never" src="http://www.profileplaylist.net/mc/mp3player_new.swf" flashvars="config=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.indimusic.us%2Fext%2Fpc%2Fconfig_black_noautostart.xml&mywidth=435&myheight=270&playlist_url=http://www.indimusic.us/loadplaylist.php?playlist=60368041&t=1236733713&wid=os" width="435" height="270" name="mp3player" wmode="transparent" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" border="0"/> </object> <br/> <a href="http://www.profileplaylist.net"><img src="http://www.profileplaylist.net/mc/images/create_black.jpg" border="0" alt="Get a playlist!"/></a> <a href="http://www.mysocialgroup.com/standalone/60368041" target="_blank"><img src="http://www.profileplaylist.net/mc/images/launch_black.jpg" border="0" alt="Standalone player"/></a> <a href="http://www.mysocialgroup.com/download/60368041"><img src="http://www.profileplaylist.net/mc/images/get_black.jpg" border="0" alt="Get Ringtones"/></a> </div>[/dohtml] Personal Info Name: Lance Moon Wills Alias: Copycat Race: Templar Gender: Male Age: 18 Height: 6"5 Weight: 167 lb. Hair: Red/blonde Eyes: Brown Appearance: Lance's Real form is Green eyes, Brown hair, he is average built with muscular features. Alignment: Chaotic good Personality: Lance is a trickster by nature, he uses his powers to confuse people and amuse himself. However his heart is usually in the right place he will do what he thinks is right regardless of who is in his way. People normally find him annoying because he acts like a teenager instead of a young adult. Team: None [Once you join an official team, add team name here] Secret Origin: Alien {Templar} Weakness: Templar's gather their power by yellow sunlight, their body soaks up the solor power and enpower them, red sunlight robs them of their powers until they can gather more solor power Statistics ![]() Total Experience gained: 0 Experience points left to use: 200 Experience Points used: 5400 Strength: 3 Agility: 3 Accuracy: 3 Durability: 3 Will Power: 3 Powers Shapeshift Lance has the ability to completely change his form; he can change his finger prints, retina, clothing, and voice anything. All he needs to do is visualize what he wants to look like and he becomes that form. He can also change specific parts of his body without changing the rest i.e. Arms, legs, and head. Lance normally use this power to trick people and change into his enemy to confuse their team mates if they have any, and because of his ability to copy other peoples powers he can be pretty authentic. Level: 1 Experience: 300 Total Experience 300 Options: Mass increase/decrease +100xp Mimic powers Lance's main Ability is to copy the powers of those around him, once he is aware of the power he is automatically able to use it as it his own. This makes Lance a powerful adversary. Level: 4 Experience: 1000 Total Experience: 4000 Options: None Powers mimicked - - Natural Fighter Lance's Powers have given him a natural Style of combat against his opponents, by using their own abilities against them. Level: 1 Experience: 200 Total Experience: 200 Bonus: Add's 10% to accuracy in terms of close combat. Powers Yet to be discovered Flight Mimic Stats Technopathy Extended life {Tied to Enhanced healing factor} Enhanced Healing factor Self contained life form {Breathe&Environment} Skills I.Q. Copycat is highly intelligent, He just chooses not to use that intelligence and acts like a dumbass most the time Level: 6 Experience: 100 Total Experience: 600 Photographic Memory Lance has amazing memory capabilities, he is able to remember anything in exact detail's All he needs is to view what he wants to remember for exactly 20 seconds to retain the information perfectly. Level: None Experience: 300 Total experience: 300 Bonus: Words needed for skill learning is cut by half. Challenges Alien: Lance is an Alien of Spira, A planet far away from earth. Bonus Experience: 400 Haunted Past: Lance never got to know his real parents. See History Bonus Experience: 200 Vulnerable Loved Ones: Lance Always keeps his real identity secret through his shape shifting powers to protect his adoptive mother, and adoptive grandparents. Bonus experience: 400 Special Vulnerability Water Lance’s genetics are not natural to Humans their quiet different, Lance has low tolerance for water; Water burn’s Lance like fire would burn a human. So instead of drinking water he drinks’s milk. Bonus experience: 600 Inventory Occupation: Money: 2.000 $ Items: Weapons: Costume: [Applies to armour and such as well] Transport: Origin ![]() Special issue 1: About spira The planet Spira is Far from any universe ever associated with Earth, Spira is a red planet with oceans of red fire, the planet is technology advance more so then earth or krypton. They developed a new form of interstellar transportation, by using a machine that creates gateways to other planets by typing the planet’s coordinates. They also had other advances and two sets of culture. The inhabitants consist of Humanoids known as Templars; each templer has different abilities, they are solor powered creatures. there are two types of Templars that follow a different culture each. The monks and techno-heads the monks believe in fighting and growing stronger, while the Techno-heads are lazy and develop technology to help make their lives easier. The two culture’s don’t exactly get along they share a peace treaty. Peace is maintained as long as they stay off each other’s land, and leave each other alone. The two cultures have different set of abilities, The ability the monk’s share is the power to copy unique powers that other monk’s might have. Techno-heads are natural technopath’s and have the power to shapeshift. Special Issue 2: Enter Sen. Sen a young female from techbane, she spent her entire life in the great techno city living the average life. She finished her education in the top of her class, one day she left the city to go and explore the world. While travelling Sen was chased by a The Swallower. {Giant toad} She had no choice but to go to Monk Land’s to survive, while running for her life she ran into a Monk male named Moon, Sen and moon had a rough first meeting but was curious about each other’s culture. So they decided to meet in secret and learn from each other becoming good friends. Special Issue 3: Birth of the star-crossed lovers Sen and moon spent the next year meeting in secret, forming a close friendship even if it was forbidden; they learned much from each other’s lifestyle and culture. The two kept their friendship hidden as it was illegal. Sen and moon managed to keep their friendship and love, hidden for years until Sen got pregnant. Eventually her relationship with moon exposed the council of both tribes wanted to go to war. The two tribes settled down and gave Sen a choice. She had the option of leaving the lands of tech forever and be with moon or stay in the land of tech and never see moon again, Sen chose to leave her people and live with moon. She left her homelands with moon beside her, and together they left the land of techno and the land of monks, to the forest a place of neutral grounds where they would be safe. Not long after war broke out between the two tribes. Special Issue 4: Downfall of the star-crossed lovers Sen and moon spent the next seven months in bliss, despite the war of the two tribes the war became devastating scaring the planet beyond repair. Not wanting their child to be born into a world full of war, sen and moon planned to leave spira and go to a safer place. The two lovers made a plan; they managed to sneak into techbane and to where the Teleportation transport was stored but came across trouble with security, Moon fought and sacrificed himself so that sen and their child could get to the teleported off spira and made it to Earth. Special Issue 5: The Birth of Earth’s Future Sen Teleported to Earth, and arrived in the cornfield in a bright light, at the same time a women in her thirties was driving in a van when she saw the light. Once the flash subsided the women ran out to see what the commotion, she came across a weakened sen pleading for help. The women Helped sen and brought her home, sen told her story grateful for the stranger’s help. The lady was sceptical of sen’s story until she used her power to shape shift into a pregnant version of the lady. The time went by fast and sen and the lady became good friends, Sen’s Child was born but tragically Sen died after giving birth. The women feeling sadness for loosing her new friend decided to keep the boy and called him Lance Moon Wills giving the boy her last name Issue 1: Lance's Life the Early Year's Not long after Lance’s birth, Lindsey Decided to move back home to Alabama and raise Lance in a loving environment, Lindsey never told her parents about Sen She claimed Lance was hers and that was that. A few years latter Lance began to show his high intelligence, his adopted mother would tutor him from an early age. Despite his high intelligence he chose to be a dumbass instead. Another few years went by and Lance discovered his special abilities, when Lance’s mother saw the powers he possessed. She taught him self control and told him not to use his powers giving the boy rules. Issue 2: The Teen Year's Lance's Teen years proved to be Normal, His high intelligence was never discovered by fellow students or teachers due to his mischievous Behaviour. Lance had a small group of friends, none of them ever knew of his secret, because of the three golden rules, the first was never tell anyone about his powers, the second was never use his powers in front of anyone and the final rule never tell anyone about his real Parents. Lance never did graduate high-school, he got bored and dropped out, and He got a job as a check out clerk at the grocery store. Lance stayed in Alabama until the age of eighteen and then left home to travel and find his place in the world. Issue 3: The Birth of Copycat Lance spent 3 Year’s travelling around, He went where ever he could go until he ended up in Metropolis. Arriving in that city Lance discovered the city was in need of a hero. He used his shape shifting abilities to create a new Identity; he formed when fighting for the cause his wardrobe became that of a long, dark cloak with red clouds, a red interior, and a chin-high collar. His appearance was medium length spiky hair, six piercing and a metal bar through each ear, three studs through the side of his upper nose and one spike stud on each end of his bottom lip. Three piercing under each other in each wrist, at least one on his upper wrist and some just under his neck. He also wears a beaded necklace. Issue 4: Lance’s New Home Yet to happen {for when he joins a team} |
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| EnlightenedInsanity | Mar 11 2009, 03:02 AM Post #12 |
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I looked it over, math adds up and you've fixed that which you were asked to. I cant put it up atm because only Jon can create forums, but I give you permission to start rp'ing until then. Just do not ask for any updates until your character is up, alright? |
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| Jon | Mar 11 2009, 10:45 AM Post #13 |
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Something that EI missed, but that I wrote the first time: The whole thing about Metropolis NEEDING a hero isn't strictly true, as, for instance, Superman is already working out of it... you make it sound like it's a place like Gotham with that line. |
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| Sorrow | Mar 11 2009, 11:10 AM Post #14 |
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![]() -Theme Music- [dohtml]<div style="text-align: center; margin-left: auto; visibility:visible; margin-right: auto; width:450px;"> <object width="435" height="270"> <param name="movie" value="http://www.profileplaylist.net/mc/mp3player_new.swf"></param> <param name="allowscriptaccess" value="never"></param> <param name="wmode" value="transparent"></param> <param name="flashvars" value="config=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.indimusic.us%2Fext%2Fpc%2Fconfig_black_noautostart.xml&mywidth=435&myheight=270&playlist_url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.indimusic.us%2Floadplaylist.php%3Fplaylist%3D60368041%26t%3D1236733713&wid=os"></param> <embed style="width:435px; visibility:visible; height:270px;" allowScriptAccess="never" src="http://www.profileplaylist.net/mc/mp3player_new.swf" flashvars="config=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.indimusic.us%2Fext%2Fpc%2Fconfig_black_noautostart.xml&mywidth=435&myheight=270&playlist_url=http://www.indimusic.us/loadplaylist.php?playlist=60368041&t=1236733713&wid=os" width="435" height="270" name="mp3player" wmode="transparent" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" border="0"/> </object> <br/> <a href="http://www.profileplaylist.net"><img src="http://www.profileplaylist.net/mc/images/create_black.jpg" border="0" alt="Get a playlist!"/></a> <a href="http://www.mysocialgroup.com/standalone/60368041" target="_blank"><img src="http://www.profileplaylist.net/mc/images/launch_black.jpg" border="0" alt="Standalone player"/></a> <a href="http://www.mysocialgroup.com/download/60368041"><img src="http://www.profileplaylist.net/mc/images/get_black.jpg" border="0" alt="Get Ringtones"/></a> </div>[/dohtml] Personal Info Name: Lance Moon Wills Alias: Copycat Race: Templar Gender: Male Age: 18 Height: 6"5 Weight: 167 lb. Hair: Red/blonde Eyes: Brown Appearance: Lance's Real form is Green eyes, Brown hair, he is average built with muscular features. Alignment: Chaotic good Personality: Lance is a trickster by nature, he uses his powers to confuse people and amuse himself. However his heart is usually in the right place he will do what he thinks is right regardless of who is in his way. People normally find him annoying because he acts like a teenager instead of a young adult. Team: None [Once you join an official team, add team name here] Secret Origin: Alien {Templar} Weakness: Templar's gather their power by yellow sunlight, their body soaks up the solor power and enpower them, red sunlight robs them of their powers until they can gather more solor power Statistics ![]() Total Experience gained: 0 Experience points left to use: 200 Experience Points used: 5400 Strength: 3 Agility: 3 Accuracy: 3 Durability: 3 Will Power: 3 Powers Shapeshift Lance has the ability to completely change his form; he can change his finger prints, retina, clothing, and voice anything. All he needs to do is visualize what he wants to look like and he becomes that form. He can also change specific parts of his body without changing the rest i.e. Arms, legs, and head. Lance normally use this power to trick people and change into his enemy to confuse their team mates if they have any, and because of his ability to copy other peoples powers he can be pretty authentic. Level: 1 Experience: 300 Total Experience 300 Options: Mass increase/decrease +100xp Mimic powers Lance's main Ability is to copy the powers of those around him, once he is aware of the power he is automatically able to use it as it his own. This makes Lance a powerful adversary. Level: 4 Experience: 1000 Total Experience: 4000 Options: None Powers mimicked - - Natural Fighter Lance's Powers have given him a natural Style of combat against his opponents, by using their own abilities against them. Level: 1 Experience: 200 Total Experience: 200 Bonus: Add's 10% to accuracy in terms of close combat. Powers Yet to be discovered Flight Mimic Stats Technopathy Extended life {Tied to Enhanced healing factor} Enhanced Healing factor Self contained life form {Breathe&Environment} Skills I.Q. Copycat is highly intelligent, He just chooses not to use that intelligence and acts like a dumbass most the time Level: 6 Experience: 100 Total Experience: 600 Photographic Memory Lance has amazing memory capabilities, he is able to remember anything in exact detail's All he needs is to view what he wants to remember for exactly 20 seconds to retain the information perfectly. Level: None Experience: 300 Total experience: 300 Bonus: Words needed for skill learning is cut by half. Challenges Alien: Lance is an Alien of Spira, A planet far away from earth. Bonus Experience: 400 Haunted Past: Lance never got to know his real parents. See History Bonus Experience: 200 Vulnerable Loved Ones: Lance Always keeps his real identity secret through his shape shifting powers to protect his adoptive mother, and adoptive grandparents. Bonus experience: 400 Special Vulnerability Water Lance’s genetics are not natural to Humans their quiet different, Lance has low tolerance for water; Water burn’s Lance like fire would burn a human. So instead of drinking water he drinks’s milk. Bonus experience: 600 Inventory Occupation: Money: 2.000 $ Items: Weapons: Costume: [Applies to armour and such as well] Transport: Origin ![]() Special issue 1: About spira The planet Spira is Far from any universe ever associated with Earth, Spira is a red planet with oceans of red fire, the planet is technology advance more so then earth or krypton. They developed a new form of interstellar transportation, by using a machine that creates gateways to other planets by typing the planet’s coordinates. They also had other advances and two sets of culture. The inhabitants consist of Humanoids known as Templars; each templer has different abilities, they are solor powered creatures. there are two types of Templars that follow a different culture each. The monks and techno-heads the monks believe in fighting and growing stronger, while the Techno-heads are lazy and develop technology to help make their lives easier. The two culture’s don’t exactly get along they share a peace treaty. Peace is maintained as long as they stay off each other’s land, and leave each other alone. The two cultures have different set of abilities, The ability the monk’s share is the power to copy unique powers that other monk’s might have. Techno-heads are natural technopath’s and have the power to shapeshift. Special Issue 2: Enter Sen. Sen a young female from techbane, she spent her entire life in the great techno city living the average life. She finished her education in the top of her class, one day she left the city to go and explore the world. While travelling Sen was chased by a The Swallower. {Giant toad} She had no choice but to go to Monk Land’s to survive, while running for her life she ran into a Monk male named Moon, Sen and moon had a rough first meeting but was curious about each other’s culture. So they decided to meet in secret and learn from each other becoming good friends. Special Issue 3: Birth of the star-crossed lovers Sen and moon spent the next year meeting in secret, forming a close friendship even if it was forbidden; they learned much from each other’s lifestyle and culture. The two kept their friendship hidden as it was illegal. Sen and moon managed to keep their friendship and love, hidden for years until Sen got pregnant. Eventually her relationship with moon exposed the council of both tribes wanted to go to war. The two tribes settled down and gave Sen a choice. She had the option of leaving the lands of tech forever and be with moon or stay in the land of tech and never see moon again, Sen chose to leave her people and live with moon. She left her homelands with moon beside her, and together they left the land of techno and the land of monks, to the forest a place of neutral grounds where they would be safe. Not long after war broke out between the two tribes. Special Issue 4: Downfall of the star-crossed lovers Sen and moon spent the next seven months in bliss, despite the war of the two tribes the war became devastating scaring the planet beyond repair. Not wanting their child to be born into a world full of war, sen and moon planned to leave spira and go to a safer place. The two lovers made a plan; they managed to sneak into techbane and to where the Teleportation transport was stored but came across trouble with security, Moon fought and sacrificed himself so that sen and their child could get to the teleported off spira and made it to Earth. Special Issue 5: The Birth of Earth’s Future Sen Teleported to Earth, and arrived in the cornfield in a bright light, at the same time a women in her thirties was driving in a van when she saw the light. Once the flash subsided the women ran out to see what the commotion, she came across a weakened sen pleading for help. The women Helped sen and brought her home, sen told her story grateful for the stranger’s help. The lady was sceptical of sen’s story until she used her power to shape shift into a pregnant version of the lady. The time went by fast and sen and the lady became good friends, Sen’s Child was born but tragically Sen died after giving birth. The women feeling sadness for loosing her new friend decided to keep the boy and called him Lance Moon Wills giving the boy her last name Issue 1: Lance's Life the Early Year's Not long after Lance’s birth, Lindsey Decided to move back home to Alabama and raise Lance in a loving environment, Lindsey never told her parents about Sen She claimed Lance was hers and that was that. A few years latter Lance began to show his high intelligence, his adopted mother would tutor him from an early age. Despite his high intelligence he chose to be a dumbass instead. Another few years went by and Lance discovered his special abilities, when Lance’s mother saw the powers he possessed. She taught him self control and told him not to use his powers giving the boy rules. Issue 2: The Teen Year's Lance's Teen years proved to be Normal, His high intelligence was never discovered by fellow students or teachers due to his mischievous Behaviour. Lance had a small group of friends, none of them ever knew of his secret, because of the three golden rules, the first was never tell anyone about his powers, the second was never use his powers in front of anyone and the final rule never tell anyone about his real Parents. Lance never did graduate high-school, he got bored and dropped out, and He got a job as a check out clerk at the grocery store. Lance stayed in Alabama until the age of eighteen and then left home to travel and find his place in the world. Issue 3: The Birth of Copycat Lance spent 3 Year’s travelling around, He went where ever he could go until he ended up in gothen city . Arriving in that city Lance discovered the city was in need of a hero. He used his shape shifting abilities to create a new Identity; he formed when fighting for the cause his wardrobe became that of a long, dark cloak with red clouds, a red interior, and a chin-high collar. His appearance was medium length spiky hair, six piercing and a metal bar through each ear, three studs through the side of his upper nose and one spike stud on each end of his bottom lip. Three piercing under each other in each wrist, at least one on his upper wrist and some just under his neck. He also wears a beaded necklace. Issue 4: The man of steel vs the man of steel Plot: Lance vs superman story Issue 5: Lance’s New Home Yet to happen {for when he joins a team} |
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| Jon | Mar 11 2009, 11:17 AM Post #15 |
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