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Veronica Walker; Magix
Topic Started: Mar 17 2009, 05:03 AM (159 Views)
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Personal Info

Name: Veronica Walker
Alias: Magix
Race: Human/Demon
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Height: 5’7
Weight: 165
Hair: Red {Black when using magic}
Eyes: green {Pure black when using magic}
Alignment: Neutral/Evil
Personality: Veronica was once an innocent soul, she cared deeply for her family and even if people picked on her she would not wish them ill. She changed drastically after her brother stole her EX girlfriend, She became cold and bitter and spiteful making a deal with evil, Veronica became vengeful she keeps her distance from people and love and when someone does her wrong she pays them back with extra, she still cares for animals though and can not stand cruelty to animals.
Team: None
Secret Origin: Demonically powered/ Weakness {Divine Magic}

Statistics
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Total Experience gained: 0
Experience points left to use: 50
Experience Points used: 5000

Strength:1
Agility:3
Accuracy:3
Durability:3
Will Power:5

Powers
Mastery of Magic
Veronica always believed in supernatural forces, she practiced Wicca until her heart was broken by her ex-girlfriend hooking up with her brother; So Veronica invoked the supernatural forces into her very essence. Veronica gained the abilities to cast spells and manipulate energy into shapes and effects even create protective barriers.
Level: 4
Experience: 500
Total experience: 2000
Option: Powers connected to this branch of magic.
Telekinesis (Not yet obtained)
Magic barriers (Not yet obtained)
Magic blast-Fireballs (not yet obtained)

Magical travel
A powerful side branch of magic Veronica has yet to access, Once Veronica becomes more accustomed to magic she will be able to astral project herself and travel the astral plains and teleport through liquid surfaces.
Level: 1
Experiance: 600
Total experiance: 600
Options: Version of travels
Astral travel {Locked}
Teleportation {Locked}
Phase shift {Locked}
Flight {Locked}

Sorcery
Veronica's Main power the power to cast spells, Veronica gained her witch powers after invoking the Dark forces She cursed her brother for stealing her girlfriend and she cursed her girlfriend for cheating on her with a member of her family. Other then that Veronica can pretty much do anything except cast death spells.
Level: 1
Experiance: 800
Total Experiance: 800
Option: Affect 100 lbs.

Voodoo
The Darkest branch of magic Veronica is capable of using; Veronica is able to use this branch of magic to communicate with the dead and forces of nature. If she desires it she can bring back the dead to do her bidding and even make voodoo dolls.
Level: 1
Experience: 600
Total Experience: 600

Skills
Intelligence
Veronica is incredibly gifted she knows a lot, about the supernatural especially in the mystical area.
Level 5
Experiance: 100
Total Experience: 500

Arcane Knowledge
Veronica posses great knowledge in the arts of magic, she has studied the darkest forces of magic and used that knowledge to invoke the dark arts, she has great knowledge.
Level: 5
Experience: 100
Total experience: 500

Challenges
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Supernatural Restriction
Veronica can no longer enter holy ground; her magic is rooted in the forces of darkness. So when ever Veronica tries to enter holy grounds its like an invisible wall is blocking her entrance
Bonus experience: 200
Option: Uncommon supernatural restriction.

Blames others
Veronica blames her brother for stealing her girlfriend, It did not exactly help her self esteem to see her former girlfriend getting married to her brother it's because of them that she invoked the darkest of magic’s.
Bonus experience: 250

Powers have sabotaged old relationships
Veronica is a rather spiteful young lady, when she invoked the powers of dark magic the first spell she cast on her brother, she made all women around him be repulsed by him, and all men be attracted to him instead. As for her ex girlfriend she cursed her to smell like a skunk no matter how much she bathed and used deodorant. Because of this they both hate her.
Bonus experience: 300

Traitor/Disgrace
Veronica's family sees her as a disgrace, mainly because she cursed her brother and his wife, her parents are homophobic and also they disapprove of her being a Wiccan.
Bonus experience: 300

Inventory

Occupation: [Apply at update board]
Money: 0
Items:
Weapons:
Costume: [Applies to armour and such as well]
Transport:

Origin
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Father and Daughter, Darkness through the generations

Special Issue: Buzz’s Story
to tell Veronica’s story you first need to know the story of Buzz, a demon that was once a man. Buzz used to be a man from Gotham city he was a successful Lawyer that owned his own practice specializing in helping those who could not afford legal representation. Buzz had three more people working with him and a receptionist in this small practice.

While Buzz helped the helpless his law firm got deeper and deeper into debt, things eventually got worse as it looked like Buzz would have to close the law firm down until he was visited by a demon who offered to make all the debts vanished on the condition he would sell his soul to the devil. Buzz accepted the offer and the debts vanished, Buzz put the deal behind him and continued to help those who needed it. He eventually fell in love with his co worker Karen Smith, A beautiful and intelligent lawyer. However it seemed Buzz was not meant to love her as she soon married her co worker Alex walker.

Not long after Karen & Alex got married Buzz was hit by a bus and died, he went to hell and became a demon. As torture Buzz was forced to watch Karen & Alex Live their happy life, how they moved from gotham and bought a ranch in smallville He watched how Karen had two beautiful boys with Alex and the jealousy eventually consumed Buzz.

Once that happened the demon that bought Buzz soul returned to Buzz, He told the Buzz that he would let him return to earth for 1 night in any form he please. In return he must offer the forces of darkness the soul of his child; Buzz happily accepted feeling only lust. He returned to earth that night in the form of Alex, Buzz used his demonic power to knock Alex out and he went to Karen and made love to her under the stars.

Buzz Returned to hell after the act and he watched as his daughter Veronica was born, Buzz watched his daughter’s life and returned to earth in a spectral form. Because she shared the same blood as Buzz only she could see him, so she thought he was an imaginary friend.

Buzz would play with his daughter and generally be her friend; he would also fill her head with dark thoughts and tell her to keep it bottled up. Buzz eventually had to return to hell, because Veronica was coming to the age where she no longer needed an imaginary friend.

Buzz would continue to watch his daughter’s life on earth, the way she grew up and the way she was bullied. Once he saw her feelings towards her teacher, Buzz returned to earth and possessed the teacher his daughter loved. Buzz sensed something from his daughter; he eventually realized it was the purity of his daughter’s soul. Buzz made love to his daughter in the form of the teacher she loved, once she was deeply in love Buzz broke his daughter’s heart by manipulating Veronica’s older brother into marrying the teacher.

This broke Veronica’s heart, just as he planned Veronica called on the forces of magic. For the first time since her childhood Buzz appeared before his daughter and told him he would give her his power over the dark forces in return for her purity of essence. Once she agreed Buzz kissed his daughter and gave her powers to wield the mystical forces.

Buzz returned to hell to resume his torture.


Issue 1: A happy childhood
Veronica was conceived under the stars and by luck she was born under the stars; she comes from smallville and grew up like any other kid. She has two older brothers one that was older by a year and another that was ten years older, she also has her loving parents Karen & Alex walker.

She didn’t get along with her brothers because they were bloke boys. So she had an imaginary friend named Buzz a man in a black suit with blonde hair and a mask made out of a person’s skull. Together Buzz and Veronica would play all sorts of games, like pretend to be witches.

Eventually Veronica made friends and Buzz went away, she was popular throughout the early years. She started to become uncool, when she did not have a crush on Tony white like all the other girls.

Issue 2: Teenage year
Veronica entered high school an outcast, she kept to herself and read books about magic. Veronica would visit metropolis often to buy books on the subject, she never practiced it but she was a believer and would practice Wicca much to the disapproval of her parents.

Because of her brother’s cruelty, everyone at school knew of her crazy ways. Veronica suffered from bullying and pranks from the kids at school, they threw a bucket of water on her to see if she would melt. They would duck tape her to the flag pole.

Issue 3: She kissed a girl and she liked it
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High school for Veronica was hell, until one day the new English teacher came to replace the old one. Veronica felt her heart beat insanely and she realized she was in love with her English teacher; Veronica wanted to be close to her teacher so she started to fail in class and when the teacher offered tutoirials she happily accepted the help.

Veronica spent long afternoons with her teacher, together they would study and eventually a forbidden relationship started. Veronica and her teacher became lovers, they spent their time together and Veronica thought she found her soul mate when her teacher believed in Wicca.

Veronica eventually made love to her teacher and wanted to spend her life with her, her heart broke when her teacher broke up with her and suddenly married her brother. This sent Veronica off the deep end.

Issue 4: From Wicca to bitcha
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Veronica went off the rails; she felt such heartache and pain like she would never recover from it. She wanted revenge and read a spell from one of her books trying to seek vengeance, Veronica then met Buzz she had no idea who he was but felt she had seen him before. Buzz made Veronica a deal he would give her the power she craved to use for vengeance, but she must sacrifice purity of essence.

Veronica had no idea what he meant but she agreed, loosing her soul for the power she so desperately wanted. Using that power she cursed the two people that screwed her over in the most vicious way possible. After that she left smallville and her old life behind her not wanting to see her ex girlfriend or her brother ever again.

Issue 5: Daughter of darkness
Plot spoiler: Veronica discovers the root of her origin and her real father's involvment in it all

Issue 6: One of many
Plot spoiler: Veronica learns one of her father's secrets

Issue 7: ??????
Plot: Unknown

Issue???: Redemption Is possible even for one who has fallen so far
Plot summery: Veronica's Redemption story
 
Inimicus
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Alright starting off here

-Secret Origin: Say what five powers are getting the discount (you get a 10% discount to five powers)

-ALL YOUR MAGIC POWERS: You need to pick a type for your magic, look under the magic powers page then state what it is...for example Mastery of Abyssal Magic would be a good thing if she used demonic magic. Anyway pick a type and add that to all magic powers (all the powers need to have the same type as your mastery of magic)

-Mastery of Magic: It may be a character thing but you have acess to all the powers listed under mastery of magic at the start, they just get more powerful

-Voodo: What option have you chosen for level 1?

-IQ: this says nothing to their base of knowledge, its just their capacity to learn. So remove the part about her extensive knowledge about magic, thats covered by her arcane knowledge

As for the origin...I dont know much about the demon thing and much of the background of the site i'd prefer to leave up to someone like Jon with more knowledge.

Your math adds up if you dont want to use your ten percent discounts, fix the things above and wait for Jon's okay on the rest but aside from that looks good to me.
 
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Personal Info

Name: Veronica Walker
Alias: Magix
Race: Human/Demon
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Height: 5’7
Weight: 165
Hair: Red {Black when using magic}
Eyes: green {Pure black when using magic}
Alignment: Neutral/Evil
Personality: Veronica was once an innocent soul, she cared deeply for her family and even if people picked on her she would not wish them ill. She changed drastically after her brother stole her EX girlfriend, She became cold and bitter and spiteful making a deal with evil, Veronica became vengeful she keeps her distance from people and love and when someone does her wrong she pays them back with extra, she still cares for animals though and can not stand cruelty to animals.
Team: None
Secret Origin: Demonically powered
Advantage: You can choose 5 powers which you have been granted through demonic abilities. These 5 powers will have their cost reduced by 10%.
Disadvantage: Divine Magic elemental damage will affect you at x1.5 its actual level.

Statistics
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Total Experience gained: 0
Experience points left to use: 30
Experience Points used: 5020

Strength:1
Agility:2+1=3
Accuracy:5
Durability:3
Will Power:4

Powers
Mastery of Magic (Abyssal magic)
Veronica always believed in supernatural forces, she practiced Wicca until her heart was broken by her ex-girlfriend hooking up with her brother; So Veronica invoked the supernatural forces into her very essence. Veronica gained the abilities to cast spells and manipulate energy into shapes and effects even create protective barriers.
Level: 4
Original Experience: 500
Discount: Look at secret origin
Experiance 450
Total experience: 1800
Options: Fireballs,telekinesis, barriers, magic blast

Magical travel (locked)
A powerful side branch of magic Veronica has yet to access, Once Veronica becomes more accustomed to magic she will be able to astral project herself and travel the astral plains and teleport through liquid surfaces.
Level: 0
Experiance: 600 - power 4 10% discount (540/lv)
Total experiance: 0
Options: Version of travels
Astral travel {Locked}
Teleportation {Locked}
Phase shift {Locked}
Flight {Locked}

Sorcery
Veronica's Main power the power to cast spells, Veronica gained her witch powers after invoking the Dark forces She cursed her brother for stealing her girlfriend and she cursed her girlfriend for cheating on her with a member of her family. Other then that Veronica can pretty much do anything except cast death spells.
Level: 1
Original Experiance: 800
Discount: Look at secret origin
Experiance: 720
Total Experiance: 720
Option: Affect 100 lbs.

Voodoo
The Darkest branch of magic Veronica is capable of using; Veronica is able to use this branch of magic to communicate with the dead and forces of nature. If she desires it she can bring back the dead to do her bidding and even make voodoo dolls.
Level: 1
Original Experience: 600
Experiance: 540
Total Experience: 540
Options: communicate with dead

Targeting
veronica's demon blood allows her to hone in on her targets from afar like the natural preator she is.
Level: 2
Normal ExperianceExperience: 200 - power 5 10% discount (180/lv)
Total Experience: 360
Bonus: 10% acc / lv

Skills
Intelligence
Veronica is incredibly gifted she knows a lot, and being half demon also granted her high intellegence.
Level 5
Experiance: 100
Total Experience: 500

Arcane Knowledge
Veronica posses great knowledge in the arts of magic, she has studied the darkest forces of magic and used that knowledge to invoke the dark arts, she has great knowledge.
Level: 5
Experience: 100
Total experience: 500

Challenges
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Supernatural Restriction
Veronica can no longer enter holy ground; her magic is rooted in the forces of darkness. So when ever Veronica tries to enter holy grounds its like an invisible wall is blocking her entrance
Bonus experience: 200
Option: Uncommon supernatural restriction.

Blames others
Veronica blames her brother for stealing her girlfriend, It did not exactly help her self esteem to see her former girlfriend getting married to her brother it's because of them that she invoked the darkest of magic’s.
Bonus experience: 250

Powers have sabotaged old relationships
Veronica is a rather spiteful young lady, when she invoked the powers of dark magic the first spell she cast on her brother, she made all women around him be repulsed by him, and all men be attracted to him instead. As for her ex girlfriend she cursed her to smell like a skunk no matter how much she bathed and used deodorant. Because of this they both hate her.
Bonus experience: 300

Traitor/Disgrace
Veronica's family sees her as a disgrace, mainly because she cursed her brother and his wife, her parents are homophobic and also they disapprove of her being a Wiccan.
Bonus experience: 300


Inventory

Occupation: [Apply at update board]
Money: 0
Items:
Weapons:
Costume: [Applies to armour and such as well]
Transport:

Origin
Posted Image
Father and Daughter, Darkness through the generations

Special Issue: Buzz’s Story
to tell Veronica’s story you first need to know the story of Buzz, a demon that was once a man. Buzz used to be a man from Gotham city he was a successful Lawyer that owned his own practice specializing in helping those who could not afford legal representation. Buzz had three more people working with him and a receptionist in this small practice.

While Buzz helped the helpless his law firm got deeper and deeper into debt, things eventually got worse as it looked like Buzz would have to close the law firm down until he was visited by a demon who offered to make all the debts vanished on the condition he would sell his soul to the devil. Buzz accepted the offer and the debts vanished, Buzz put the deal behind him and continued to help those who needed it. He eventually fell in love with his co worker Karen Smith, A beautiful and intelligent lawyer. However it seemed Buzz was not meant to love her as she soon married her co worker Alex walker.

Not long after Karen & Alex got married Buzz was hit by a bus and died, he went to hell and became a demon. As torture Buzz was forced to watch Karen & Alex Live their happy life, how they moved from gotham and bought a ranch in smallville He watched how Karen had two beautiful boys with Alex and the jealousy eventually consumed Buzz.

Once that happened the demon that bought Buzz soul returned to Buzz, He told the Buzz that he would let him return to earth for 1 night in any form he please. In return he must offer the forces of darkness the soul of his child; Buzz happily accepted feeling only lust. He returned to earth that night in the form of Alex, Buzz used his demonic power to knock Alex out and he went to Karen and made love to her under the stars.

Buzz Returned to hell after the act and he watched as his daughter Veronica was born, Buzz watched his daughter’s life and returned to earth in a spectral form. Because she shared the same blood as Buzz only she could see him, so she thought he was an imaginary friend.

Buzz would play with his daughter and generally be her friend; he would also fill her head with dark thoughts and tell her to keep it bottled up. Buzz eventually had to return to hell, because Veronica was coming to the age where she no longer needed an imaginary friend.

Buzz would continue to watch his daughter’s life on earth, the way she grew up and the way she was bullied. Once he saw her feelings towards her teacher, Buzz returned to earth and possessed the teacher his daughter loved. Buzz sensed something from his daughter; he eventually realized it was the purity of his daughter’s soul. Buzz made love to his daughter in the form of the teacher she loved, once she was deeply in love Buzz broke his daughter’s heart by manipulating Veronica’s older brother into marrying the teacher.

This broke Veronica’s heart, just as he planned Veronica called on the forces of magic. For the first time since her childhood Buzz appeared before his daughter and told him he would give her his power over the dark forces in return for her purity of essence. Once she agreed Buzz kissed his daughter and gave her powers to wield the mystical forces.

Buzz returned to hell to resume his torture.

Issue 1: A happy childhood
Veronica was conceived under the stars and by luck she was born under the stars; she comes from smallville and grew up like any other kid. She has two older brothers one that was older by a year and another that was ten years older, she also has her loving parents Karen & Alex walker.

She didn’t get along with her brothers because they were bloke boys. So she had an imaginary friend named Buzz a man in a black suit with blonde hair and a mask made out of a person’s skull. Together Buzz and Veronica would play all sorts of games, like pretend to be witches.

Eventually Veronica made friends and Buzz went away, she was popular throughout the early years. She started to become uncool, when she did not have a crush on Tony white like all the other girls.

Issue 2: Teenage year
Veronica entered high school an outcast, she kept to herself and read books about magic. Veronica would visit metropolis often to buy books on the subject, she never practiced it but she was a believer and would practice Wicca much to the disapproval of her parents.

Because of her brother’s cruelty, everyone at school knew of her crazy ways. Veronica suffered from bullying and pranks from the kids at school, they threw a bucket of water on her to see if she would melt. They would duck tape her to the flag pole.

Issue 3: She kissed a girl and she liked it
Posted Image
High school for Veronica was hell, until one day the new English teacher came to replace the old one. Veronica felt her heart beat insanely and she realized she was in love with her English teacher; Veronica wanted to be close to her teacher so she started to fail in class and when the teacher offered tutoirials she happily accepted the help.

Veronica spent long afternoons with her teacher, together they would study and eventually a forbidden relationship started. Veronica and her teacher became lovers, they spent their time together and Veronica thought she found her soul mate when her teacher believed in Wicca.

Veronica eventually made love to her teacher and wanted to spend her life with her, her heart broke when her teacher broke up with her and suddenly married her brother. This sent Veronica off the deep end.

Issue 4: From Wicca to bitcha
Posted Image
Veronica went off the rails; she felt such heartache and pain like she would never recover from it. She wanted revenge and read a spell from one of her books trying to seek vengeance, Veronica then met Buzz she had no idea who he was but felt she had seen him before. Buzz made Veronica a deal he would give her the power she craved to use for vengeance, but she must sacrifice purity of essence.

Veronica had no idea what he meant but she agreed, loosing her soul for the power she so desperately wanted. Using that power she cursed the two people that screwed her over in the most vicious way possible. After that she left smallville and her old life behind her not wanting to see her ex girlfriend or her brother ever again.

Issue 5: Daughter of darkness
Plot spoiler: Veronica discovers the root of her origin and her real father's involvment in it all

Issue 6: One of many
Plot spoiler: Veronica learns one of her father's secrets

Issue 7: ??????
Plot: Unknown

Special Issue: Enter Magix
Plot summery: Veronica's Involvment in Events, each event she enters will have a short summery of what she did.
 
Inimicus
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Math and such adds up according to my counts, id like a little more description on her magics, like how it looks and such (My Satanus char I will be making sometime uses his magic in a lot of fire and darkness for its various effects for example), but thats your choice wether or not you want to expand on it ^^

A manager will need to give her their stamp of approval (especially on the origin as im unsure about that) but for her powers and XP usage everything looks alright
 
Jon
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Magic

What's the price she's paid for being able to use magic? State it clearly under Mastery of Magic.

Origin

Shorten it. Too many details for an origin.
Remove the parts that haven't happened yet.
The whole 'special issue' thing and 'issues' thing in general? Remove that. Just write it plainly. And write it chronologically... way I see it, you write twice about some things atm...
 
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