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Wesley Tyson; The Gunstriker
Topic Started: Mar 24 2009, 09:28 PM (242 Views)
RevyXK
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Personal Info
Name: Wesley Tyson
Alias: The Gunstriker
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 33
Height: 6'0"
Weight: 187lbs
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Unknown
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Personality: Power-hungry, intelligent and cunning man. Wesley really wants control in his life mostly everything. He's really arrogant and violent some of time when things don't do his way.
Team: None
Secret Origin: Trained [No Modifiers]

Statistics
Total Experience gained: 0
Experience points left to use: 100
Experience Points used: 6250

Strength: 1 + 2 = 3
Agility: 7
Accuracy: 1 + 2 = 3
Durability: 4
Will Power: 2

Powers
Perfect Aim(75) [Lvl 10]: Wesley really have perfect aiming skill when pointing a gun at a target. Thus during using this ability he gains 50% in accuracy
Animal Senses(50) [Lvl 10]: Using some of his skills, Wesley has heightened senses almost like a wolf. Useable for scent, hearing or night vision.
Targeting(200) [Lvl 5]: After some target practice, Wesely is becoming a strong masksman in hitting his targets. Maybe better then any archer in using a bow & arrow.
Berserker Rage(500) [Lvl 1]: After Project Uber, Wesley gain ability of making himself stronger but he loses control not knowing who's friend or foe. He only uses this power as a last resort if he gets into trouble.
Vision, Enhanced(300): Because of his dark red eyes, Wesley can actually see through darkness, underwater, fog/smoke & blinding light
Acrobatics (75) [Lvl 4]: Wes is almost a skill acrobat but he needs more training to become a professional. But he's a novice acrobat....


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Skills
I.Q(100) [Lvl 3] (300XP): Wesley has a average IQ.
Concentration(200): With deep thinking, Wes can clear all his thoughts and emotions only thinking about the battle. Yet he can keep track on his enemy most without thinking of anything else to distract him.
High School Grad(150): Thankfully, he got by yet flunking most of his test but regaining focus and passing his exams getting his diploma.
Targeting Non Powered(250)[Lvl 1]: Using his knowledge of reading, Wesley became fond of using any type of gun. Mostly he can use anything that can blow a hole even a little one in a person's head.
- Any Weapon


Challenges
Outlaw (350): During a shootout with the police, Wesley actually killed a police officer and ever since. He become a most wanted fugitive. Police in four states have been looking for him for a long time.
Vulnerable Loved Ones (400): Wesley's mother and Excella McMichaels are the only two people that he cares about right now. He would never forgive himself if any happen to his mother. Wesley did care about his father but after a family feud, he doesn't give a crap what his dad thinks of him anymore.
Special Vulnerabilities (1,200): During some experiments, Wesley had finally learned that Radiation and Magical damage can do major damage to him. Maybe kill him if there is a large amount of radiation.
Major Psychological Restriction (400): Tasino Syndrome is a disease something like mad rage where the person is put into a conflict. This will make the person quite unpredictable in his actions.

Inventory
Occupation:
Money:
Items:
Weapons:
Costume:
Transport:

Origin:
After finishing college, Wesley decided to take part in a experimental program called Uber Menos which he didn't fully understand at the time. Wesley then saw that it would pay a wealthy sum of money then finally he actually sign up with a couple of his buddies. They finally got to the place and it looked like a waistland until a limo drove up and then a woman finally got out looking at the boys started to explain was the Project Uber Menos was and what it meant. At first it was a lie, the woman was named Excella telling Wesley that this was project of filing some papers and getting paid for it.
 
Jon
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Doom Patrol
You'll get the same condition as you got on Marvels... these two profiles will be ALL I'll look at, unless you get active once they are up and start actually interacting.

Now... on to the profile

DON*T POST UNFINISHED PROFILES!!!!

Personal Information

Height: Can you PLEASE try to get this right? If it's in feet and inches, it's 5'8''. If it's in cm, it's 5,8cm. And if it's in cm, that's about 2 inches!
Weight: 17 lbs? Get real.
Secret Origin: You don't make up secret origins...

Statistics

WHY does he have 8000 starting XP? Chars only start with 4000...

Powers

Perfect Aim: Why does he have a perfect aim like that?
Animal Senses: Animal Senses does not rely on your skills, it's an actual power. Why does he have animal senses?
Super Speed: Why can he move that fast?
Targeting: That description doesn't make any sense.

Skills

Concentration: Not how it works. You can focus on one thing IGNORING all others...
Criminal Law Knowledge: What is this supposed to be? What is Criminal Law Knowledge? What does it let you know? And Why do you think you can get it at lvl 6, when your IQ is 3?

Challenges

Major Deadly Enemies: I really wanna know WHY they're major.
Cyborg: He's a cyborg? It doesn't say anywhere that he is... in fact, his race says he's human?

Inventory

5k in money? You trying to cheat here like you did on Marvels?

Origin

Don't post any profiles unless you've done the origin.
 
RevyXK
Newbie
Posted Image
Personal Info
Name: Wesley Tyson
Alias: The Gunstriker
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 33
Height: 6'0"
Weight: 187lbs
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Unknown
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Personality: Power-hungry, intelligent and cunning man. Wesley really wants control in his life mostly everything. He's really arrogant and violent some of time when things don't do his way.
Team: None
Secret Origin: Trained [No Modifiers]

Statistics
Total Experience gained: 0
Experience points left to use: 100
Experience Points used: 6250

Strength: 1 + 2 = 3
Agility: 7
Accuracy: 1 + 2 = 3
Durability: 4
Will Power: 2

Powers
Perfect Aim(75) [Lvl 10]: Wesley really have perfect aiming skill when pointing a gun at a target. Thus during using this ability he gains 50% in accuracy
Animal Senses(50) [Lvl 10]: Using some of his skills, Wesley has heightened senses almost like a wolf. Useable for scent, hearing or night vision.
Targeting(200) [Lvl 5]: After some target practice, Wesely is becoming a strong masksman in hitting his targets. Maybe better then any archer in using a bow & arrow.
Berserker Rage(500) [Lvl 1]: After Project Uber, Wesley gain ability of making himself stronger but he loses control not knowing who's friend or foe. He only uses this power as a last resort if he gets into trouble.
Vision, Enhanced(300): Because of his dark red eyes, Wesley can actually see through darkness, underwater, fog/smoke & blinding light
Acrobatics (75) [Lvl 4]: Wes is almost a skill acrobat but he needs more training to become a professional. But he's a novice acrobat....

Posted Image
Skills
I.Q(100) [Lvl 3] (300XP): Wesley has a average IQ.
Concentration(200): With deep thinking, Wes can clear all his thoughts and emotions only thinking about the battle. Yet he can keep track on his enemy most without thinking of anything else to distract him.
High School Grad(150): Thankfully, he got by yet flunking most of his test but regaining focus and passing his exams getting his diploma.
Targeting Non Powered(250)[Lvl 1]: Using his knowledge of reading, Wesley became fond of using any type of gun. Mostly he can use anything that can blow a hole even a little one in a person's head.
- Any Weapon

Challenges
Outlaw (350): During a shootout with the police, Wesley actually killed a police officer and ever since. He become a most wanted fugitive. Police in four states have been looking for him for a long time.
Vulnerable Loved Ones (400): Wesley's mother and Excella McMichaels are the only two people that he cares about right now. He would never forgive himself if any happen to his mother. Wesley did care about his father but after a family feud, he doesn't give a crap what his dad thinks of him anymore.
Special Vulnerabilities (1,200): During some experiments, Wesley had finally learned that Radiation and Magical damage can do major damage to him. Maybe kill him if there is a large amount of radiation.
Major Psychological Restriction (400): Tasino Syndrome is a disease something like mad rage where the person is put into a conflict. This will make the person quite unpredictable in his actions.

Inventory
Occupation:
Money:
Items:
Weapons:
Costume:
Transport:

Origin:
After finishing college, Wesley decided to take part in a experimental program called Uber Menos which he didn't fully understand at the time. Wesley then saw that it would pay a wealthy sum of money then finally he actually sign up with a couple of his buddies. They finally got to the place and it looked like a waistland until a limo drove up and then a woman finally got out looking at the boys started to explain was the Project Uber Menos was and what it meant. At first it was a lie, the woman was named Excella telling Wesley that this was project of filing some papers and getting paid for it. Wesley thought everything was going to be cool as him and his friends got into the limo which some people were inside the limo guns drasn at them. Wes thought this was going to get bad real quick as Excella started testing one of Wes's friends and yet she told them to shoot them until she finally got to him. The big man started shooting Wes's friend one by one until she started screaming until Excella had found what she was looking seeing that she could work with this person. Finally the limo stopped at research facility, Wes was ordered to get out from the limo and his hands were raised getting out. Excella ordered her goons to take him to the research lab where which she thought she would start a whole new chapter is Wes's life. The hired goons started pointing their guns telling Wesley to go where Excella told them to send him and then he started walking which he started crying thinking that his friends were dead. Excella was getting her tools and machines ready as Wesley was ordered to strip his clothing and then get inside medlab chamber. The door started to open then suddenly Wesley tried to escape and then the goons was able to catch him and throw him inside the chamber and then the door started to close.

Excella activated the controls and then weird machines started entering Wesley's body putting some sort of red water into his veins and then he started to screaming. The red water that was being injected into his veins was a new bio drug which Excella had being studied for a while and Wesley was going to be her guinea pig. She started continuing the process by activating the bio drug with her computer putting in the commands. Wesley memories were actually being erased from his very head.....

Six Months Later
Excella was walking down the lab and then a new warrior started coming from the chamber yet it was Wesley but he seemed different from before. She had biocloned the created the perfect warrior with gun wielding abilities which will aid her soldier in the future. Wesley had a new warrior's name it was called Gunstriker
 
Inimicus
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Young Justice
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From my cursory glance you really havent changed ANYTHING that Jon asked you to change with the powers so do that now.

Berserker rage you are still getting wrong: You dont CHOOSE to use it, it happens when you get very angry or pissed off, as in when adrenaline is pumping so make it sound that way or I doubt this char will ever get approved

and also you still get vulnerabilities wrong. If I shoot him with a dang bullet it will kill him just as dead as radiation will. Special vulnerabilities mean they do MORE DAMAGE. The attack counts at twice its level but if he gets hit with a level 10 bullet he is still DEAD! Edit the description so it doesnt sound like he can ONLY be harmed that way.

I'm not going to look at anything else and I doubt others will until you change what Jon told you to in his last post and get Berserker Rage right.
 
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