Welcome Guest [Log In] [Register]
Welcome to Justice. We hope you enjoy your visit.


You're currently viewing our forum as a guest. This means you are limited to certain areas of the board and there are some features you can't use. If you join our community, you'll be able to access member-only sections, and use many member-only features such as customizing your profile, sending personal messages, and voting in polls. Registration is simple, fast, and completely free.


Join our community!


If you're already a member please log in to your account to access all of our features:

Username:   Password:
Nikon; Replacing Spark Point
Topic Started: Apr 21 2009, 10:40 PM (186 Views)
Abusse
Member Avatar
Newbie
I say again, replacing Spark Point

[dohtml]

<DIV>
<TABLE borderColor=#ffffff cellSpacing=1 cellPadding=1 align=center bgColor=#000000 border=1>
<TBODY>
<TR>
<TD align=middle bgColor=#ffffff>
<P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#000000 size=1>|Abusse| </FONT></P></TD></TR>
<TR>
<TD>
<P align=center><IMG height=[IMG width=[IMG HEIGHT]src="[IMG URL]" WIDTH]><IMG id=vImage style="WIDTH: 278px; HEIGHT: 300px" height=300 src="http://www.pep.ph/images/guide/644fb5ab6.jpg" width=3278></P></FONT>
<P></P>
<P align=center>
<TABLE borderColor=#ffffff cellSpacing=1 cellPadding=1 bgColor=#000000 border=1>
<TBODY>
<TR>
<TD align=middle bgColor=#ffffff>
<P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#000000 size=1>|Theme Music| </FONT></P></TD></TR>
<TR>
<TD align=middle>
<P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1>Main Theme: - Mein Herz Brennt - Rammstein
<br> Battle Theme: - Fireproof - Pillar
<br> Epic Battle Theme: - Stripped - Rammstein
<br>Win Theme: - I Don't Wanna Stop - Ozzy Osbourne
<br>Lose Theme: - Redeemer - Marilyn Manson
</FONT></P></TD></TR></TBODY></TABLE></P></TD></TR>
<TR>
<TD align=middle bgColor=#ffffff>
<P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#000000 size=1>|Personal Information| </FONT></P></TD></TR>
<TR>
<TD><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1><B><I>Name:</I></B>
Nikon
<BR><B><I>Alias:</I></B>
None
<BR><B><I>Race:</I></B>
Alien
<BR><B><I>Gender:</I></B>
Seems Male
<BR><B><I>Age:</I></B>
30
<BR><B><I>Height:</I></B>
6'2"
<BR><B><I>Weight:</I></B>
87 kg.
<BR><B><I>Hair:</I></B>
None
<BR><B><I>Eyes:</I></B>
Black-ish
<BR><B><I>Alignment:</I></B>
Lawful Evil
<BR><B><I>Personality:</I></B>
Calculating, Sarcastic, Moody
<BR><B><I>Team:</I></B>
None
<BR><B><I>Secret Origin:</I></B>
Alien, No modifier
<BR></FONT></TD></TR>
<TR>
<TD align=middle bgColor=#ffffff>
<P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#000000 size=1>|Statistics| </FONT></P></TD></TR>
<TR>
<TD><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1><B><I>Total Experience Gained:</I></B> 0000
<BR><B><I>Experience Points Left To Use:</I></B> 150
<BR><B><I>Experience Points Used:</I></B> 9,950
<BR><BR><B><I>Strength:</I></B>
4
<BR><B><I>Agility:</I></B>
4
<BR><B><I>Accuracy:</I></B>
2 +1 = 3
<BR><B><I>Durability:</I></B>
4
<BR><B><I>Will Power:</I></B>
1 + 1 = 2
<BR></FONT></TD></TR>
<TR>
<TD align=middle bgColor=#ffffff>
<P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#000000 size=1>|Powers| </FONT></P></TD></TR>
<TR>
<TD><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1>
<B><I> Force Blast: Level 3, 650 XP per Lv.</I></B>
<br> Nikon can charge a powerful bolt of <B>energy</B> which he can launch from his hands to attack his enemies. <I>Control, Armour Piercing </I>
<br><br>
<B><I> Flight: Level 3, 150 XP per Lv.</I></B>
<br> Capable of exerting energy around himself, Nikon can propel himself to fly. <I>Linked to Force Blast </I>
<br><br>
<B><I> Superhuman Senses: Level 2, 200 XP per Lv.</I></B>
<br> Nikon possesses natural senses, far above the human norm.
<br><br>
<B><I> Stretching: Level 1 300 XP per Lv.</I></B>
<br> With seemingly elastic skin, the alien being can distort his shape and stretch to freakish lengths.
<br><br>
<B><I> Self Contained Life form, 400 XP.</I></B>
<br> Not affected easily by his environmental surroundings and requiring no food, Nikon is of a hardy species.
<br><br>
<B><I> Super Speed: 800 XP.</I></B>
<br> Nikon moves exceptionally fast in comparison to the majority of Earthlings.
<br><br>
<B><I> Healing Factor: Level 2 325 XP per Lv.</I></B>
<br> As a result of his increased metabolism, Nikon heals exponentially faster <I>linked to Super Speed </I>
<br>
</FONT></TD></TR>
<TR>
<TD align=middle bgColor=#ffffff>
<P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#000000 size=1>|Skills| </FONT></P></TD></TR>
<TR>
<TD><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1><B><I>I.Q: Level 5</I></B>
<br> Nikon seems reasonably intelligent
<br><br>
<B><I>High School Graduate, 150</I></B>
<br> Nikon has studied the Earth to gain the equivalence of a High School Graduate
<br><br>
<B><I>Concentration, 200</I></B>
<br> Nikon possesses seemingly limitless attention and focus when the need arises.
<br><br>
<B><I>Military Knowledge, 300</I></B>
<br> Before coming upon Earth, Nikon was briefed and trained upon its military styling.
<br><br>
<B><I>Targeting (Force Blasts), Level 10. 135 XP per Lv.</I></B>
<br>With pinpoint precision, Nikon can aim his force blasts <I>Military Discount</I>
<br><br>
<B><I>Fighting Skills, Level 10. 180 XP per Lv.</I></B>
<br>Though not originally a combatant, in studying the Earth's military history, Nikon became took a particular interest in combative skills, and became a martial arts master <I>Military Discount</I>
<br>
</FONT></TD></TR>
<TR>
<TD align=middle bgColor=#ffffff>
<P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#000000 size=1>|Challenges| </FONT></P></TD></TR>
<TR>
<TD><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1>
<B><I> Alien: 400 </I></B>
<br> Nikon is an alien, claiming he is from a distant galaxy which he affectionately calls "The North"
<BR><BR><B><I> Non-Human Appearance: 600 </I></B>
<br> Nikon possesses green skin, and antennae like extensions from his skull.
<BR><BR><B><I> No Secret Identity: 500 </b></i>
<BR> Making no effort to hide his appearance, heritage or aliens any who pay attention know of Nikon.
<BR><BR><B><I> Major Psychological: 400 </b></i>
<BR> A pathological liar, short fused, and destructive by nature Nikon is a rather large annoyance to be around.
<BR><BR><B><I> Minor Haunted Past: 200 </b></i>
<BR> Murdering his own father, family and generally disliked even in his own society, Nikon has had a colourful past.
</FONT></TD></TR>
<TR>
<TD align=middle bgColor=#ffffff>
<P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#000000 size=1>|Inventory| </FONT></P></TD></TR>
<TR>
<TD><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1><B><I>Occupation:</I></B> None
<BR><B><I>Money:</I></B> $775
<BR><B><I>Items:</I></B> Goggles (Night Vision)
<BR><B><I>Weapons:</I></B> Rifle
<BR><B><I>Armor:</I></B> Power Proof Self Repairing Costume (With communicator)
<BR><B><I>Transport:</I></B> None
<BR></FONT></TD></TR>
<TR>
<TD align=middle bgColor=#ffffff>
<P align=center><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#000000 size=1>|Origin| </FONT></P></TD></TR>
<TR>
<TD align=middle><TR>
<TD><FONT face="Verdana, Geneva, Arial, Sans-serif" color=#ffffff size=1>
Born into a relatively abusive family, Nikon aspired from the age of 4 to become an explorer, his father favouring him for civil service for the empire. Nikon did not agree with this choice. Despite being groomed for this job regardless upon reaching the age of 17, Nikon began to fight back. <br>
"You don't understand my choices, I had to watch my father die before my own eyes" he would hesitate, "By me!" he would explain before the tribunal that was to decide his fate for the murders. <br>
Fortunately coming from an overly militant aggressive society he was conscripted, Nikon was then tasked to become part of an expeditionary force (of one), sent arbitrarily into space to conquer and claim whatever planet he should arrive on. From here Nikon would spend the equivalence of 10 years in isolation, military training and exercise, grooming his skills so as to survive any apparent ordeal with lesser races of the universe.
<br>
Living some centuries in artificial hibernation, Nikons shuttle would enter Earth's orbit, literally thousands of light years away from his home world. Unaware of the apparent time lapse, he has now landed upon Planet Earth, with every intent of following through with his tasking. <br>
Spending the equivalent of two years in Earth's orbit, his satellite mimicking the signal and appearance of a satellite, he studied the Earth from afar picking up various signals, learning their culture and studying their society. Finally satisfied with his knowledge, he would jettison himself to the Earth's surface, to the only place aliens seemed to land, into the USA.
</FONT></P></TD></TR></TBODY></TABLE></DIV>

[/dohtml]
 
Big Boss
Member Avatar
Newbie
I haven't done the math, but the information looks good to me. I just wanna see what the other managers think.
 
Inimicus
Member Avatar
Young Justice
[ * ]
For the forceblast say what element it is in the name or next to control and piercing just so everybody knows easily what it is.

I assume in your description of flight you mean exerting ENERGY around himself not exerting exerting around himself, just might want to fix that ;)

For Stretching list next to it Levelx20 length just like control and piercing on the blast

You have 10,100xp to spend with all your challenges but have spent 10,250 so you need to find 150xp to remove from somewhere

however TAKE NOTE, you will need to change a bit more before that as your No Secret Identity challenge will not be allowed. That challenge is only for those who have a life they would want to protect and choose not to, like my character Pyre who has a family, friends, and school which he doesnt hide. You character doesnt seem to really have a life that he could protect or would want to. So you need to remove that challenge or give him reason to have it.

I'll look at your origin fully after you fix that

 
Abusse
Member Avatar
Newbie
I'll work on that challenge then....

I did say element in the description, thats why ENERGY was bolded.
 
« Previous Topic · Register · Next Topic »