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Crimson Bristle
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Topic Started: Feb 18 2013, 04:52 PM (169 Views)
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Crimson Bristle
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Feb 18 2013, 04:52 PM
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Name: Crimson Bristle
Race: Pegasus
Gender: Colt
Physical Description: Young colt of roughly 12 years of age. Brown coat with a lighter-brown mane and tail, streaked with dashes of red.

Personality: Enjoys word play, summer vacation, and friends. Tries to be cool and confident as much as he can, but ends up being a little awkward when no one's looking.
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Glacial Breeze
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Feb 18 2013, 05:59 PM
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So far the application looks good.
Could you add a bit of back story to your character. Place of residence unless he wonders around a lot.
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Arpeggio
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Feb 18 2013, 06:08 PM
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I can't approve this as of yet; we need a little more backstory and overall information about this guy before then. He looks good so far; just needs a little more info.
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Nothing is ever as it seems...
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Crimson Bristle
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Feb 18 2013, 06:54 PM
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What is there to say? Crimson is a colt. He's only twelve years old. He hasn't done anything. I can tell you that he lives in Ponyville, and my plans for the character, but laying out my plans for him is pretty much one big spoiler.
What do you want me to say?
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Cosmic Radiance
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Feb 18 2013, 07:03 PM
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I really did not want to know future plans for the character. More like a back story really.
Rich family.. normaly, poor.. or happy etc. Basically it seems it has just been a normal young colt's life growing up as far as I know. Sense as you said nothing has happened yet. I'm going to assume his life up to now has been nothing out of the ordinary and has lived a normal young colt with normal young colt experiences so far.
I'll give a tentative approval, because you don't want to reveal too much right now.
Approved.
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Arpeggio
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Feb 18 2013, 07:40 PM
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Very well then. With that bit of information, I think there's enough for a tentative approval on my part as well. You could've just said he's had a pretty ordinary life so far. 
Approved
Edited by Arpeggio, Feb 18 2013, 07:40 PM.
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