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| Tweet Topic Started: 11 Jul 2012, 11:08 PM (6,663 Views) | |
| Quill | 10 Oct 2012, 03:04 AM Post #541 |
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Quill went back down stairs to Bonbon. "Honey. I think we have a problem." He said as he approached her. |
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| Deleted User | 10 Oct 2012, 05:02 AM Post #542 |
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Bon Bon is slumped over onto the ground, still covered by the blanket. |
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| Quill | 10 Oct 2012, 05:08 AM Post #543 |
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Quill rolls his eyes and shakes her gently. "Bonbon, wake up." he says insistently. |
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| Deleted User | 10 Oct 2012, 05:10 AM Post #544 |
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Bon Bon fails to wake from his shaking. |
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| Quill | 10 Oct 2012, 05:12 AM Post #545 |
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"Baby?" he lifts her head and his heart starts to race as his blood goes cold. he places his hoof on her chest feeling for a heart beat. |
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| Deleted User | 10 Oct 2012, 05:14 AM Post #546 |
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Bon Bon isn't breathing, her body is cold. |
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| Quill | 10 Oct 2012, 05:18 AM Post #547 |
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"No. NO! Wake up. Wake up damn you." He starts trying to revive her. "You were fine just a little wile ago Where is every one. they wouldn't have just left Wake up." He says allowed between breathing into her cold lips and pumping at her heart. |
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| Deleted User | 10 Oct 2012, 05:20 AM Post #548 |
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blood starts to well on her chest... forming a pattern.. it starts to spell something.... You thought you coul the words keep forming even as he watches |
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| Quill | 10 Oct 2012, 05:26 AM Post #549 |
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"Could what. Could what you sick freak?" he was sure it was the thing she had wrested from him. the evil magic that had affected his mind. He hugged her and looked to her back to see if it had gone around. "Bonbon. I'm so sorry. I never meant to cause this." He was starting to cry. After all this and after they were together she was now dying if she wasn't already dead and he didn't know how to save her. |
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| Deleted User | 10 Oct 2012, 05:29 AM Post #550 |
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The writing continues forming on her underside... when complete it reads: You thought you could escape us that easily? A cackling fills the tunnels, echoing endlessly. It is a high pitched cackle and chill's Quill to the bone. |
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| Quill | 10 Oct 2012, 05:34 AM Post #551 |
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"Show yourself you piece of shit!" He shouts and lays her respectfully on the ground and put's the blanket over Bonbon completely, covering her face. |
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| Deleted User | 10 Oct 2012, 05:36 AM Post #552 |
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The ground beneath Quill starts to shatter and break, dropping piece by piece into a void of darkness. |
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| Quill | 10 Oct 2012, 05:39 AM Post #553 |
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"No no. Click where are you?" Quill tries to grab Bonbon's body and get out back to the square where he has room to move. he whistles for his pet who would no longer have dragons to scare her. Edited by Quill, 10 Oct 2012, 05:40 AM.
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| Deleted User | 10 Oct 2012, 05:41 AM Post #554 |
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He has no clue or idea if his pet is coming, but as he reaches for Bon Bon, her body falls away into the abyss. He can see her ragdoll form tumble in and disappear in the darkness before the falling floor forces him deeper into the caverns, blocking the way to the main chamber. |
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| Quill | 10 Oct 2012, 05:48 AM Post #555 |
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He contemplates letting the darkness take him after her for a second but something Mark said rang in his mind. Would it be loyal to her, if you gave up if she died. Despite the pain he had to live so that he could be Loyalty. He turns and takes the tunnels as well as he can remember them. There was another exit. He had to get to it. "Bonbon. I'm sorry. I'll give you a proper ceremony, but I can't come with you. We can't be together yet. I've got too much to do. there are too many creatures counting on me." He cries for her as he keeps running. |
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| Deleted User | 10 Oct 2012, 05:51 AM Post #556 |
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The ground continues to crumble and chase him as he continues to run, but the tunnels follow no path he remembers, it is one long path that seems to go. The cackling echos again as he comes to a fork in the road. He would have a choice in direction, but one side is caved in, Click buried beneath rocks from a cave-in |
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| Quill | 10 Oct 2012, 05:55 AM Post #557 |
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"Click! Click! I thought your armor was stronger than that. I'm sorry girl." He takes the other path and keeps running. "Who are you!?" He demands through the sobs and the stinging of his eyes makes it more difficult but he continues down the path. Had Scribe gotten out and done something. He would be cold and heartless enough now to do something like this but he didn't have the magic to. |
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| Deleted User | 10 Oct 2012, 06:01 AM Post #558 |
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The voice splits, several answer. "You know Quite well who we are!" "You did our dirty work!" "You were our pawn!" "Y'all was our weapon!" "You belong to us!" "There is no where you can hide!" "There is no where to run!" All eight voices cackle madly and merge again as the walls explode in a fiery light and Quill begins to fall. |
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| Quill | 10 Oct 2012, 06:06 AM Post #559 |
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Even as he fell Quill tried to step up the stones to get out. "I defy you! I deny any power or authority you have over me. Harmony Is stronger than you. Kill me but there will be others. Others even stronger than me. You can't rule by fear, if those you rule do not fear you." One last act of defiance. perhaps words too late but if he was going down he would go down spitting in their faces. the past was that. the past and he was no longer their pawn. |
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| Deleted User | 10 Oct 2012, 06:09 AM Post #560 |
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The voices cackle louder as he falls and darkness envelops him. The burning heat of the sun boils him in his skin before everything quits and Quill ceases to think. His body cools and he feels soaked the the bone. Feeling returns and he can tell he is breathing heavily. Everything feels weak, but he feels alive. |
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