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Aegob Manara
Topic Started: May 6 2012, 06:30:25 PM (192 Views)
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Name: Aegob Manara
Homeworld: Coruscant
Nickname/Alias: Karn Torak
Date of Birth: 41 ABY (Age 22)

Faction: Independent
Rank: Bounty Hunter

Species: Human
Height: 5'11
Weight: 165
Hair Color: Blond
Skin Color: Tan

Appearance: Although a little ragged, Aegob stands confident at average height. His muscles are well toned, mostly because of the struggles he's faced. His face shows a look of aggressive amusement, constantly thinking.
With several tattoos, mostly tribal, he can be a intimidating figure which has proved itself a advantage. He's also dotted with the many scars he has gained.
Commonly seen wearing a black trench coat, and military style boots along with medium armor. Aegob bases his appearance around functionality, not fashion

Personality: Aggressive, calculating, but ultimately righteous. He carries a lack of remorse for what he's done, and makes decisions as they come. Introverted, and confident, he's usually calm. Although he can be provoked, he isn't prown to mood swings. He prefers not to reveal his past, and as of yet hasn't grown particularly close to anyone.
Being a Bounty Hunter, credits have been his main motivator, along with his own morals. He'll take most any job, as long as it pays. He's never seemed to care whether his target is dead or alive, as long as the mission is completed.
Having been on his own for many years, he's fiercely independent. Often refusing help, he's proven to be hardheaded. Once he has something in his mind, it's unlikely he'll drop it, especially a grudge or a bounty. There's nothing he enjoys more than a challenge.
Weaknesses and Strengths:
Strengths:
Having spent much of his life on the streets, Aegob street smarts are top notch. His physical form is great, making him a formidable opponent, along with being a remarkable marksman. His lightsaber skills are above average, despite being rusty.
Aegob does have several weaknesses. Among them are his skill with the Force. Despite being a Jedi Padawan, he hasn't drawn on these skills in quite a while. He's learned to be cold, and generally doesn't trust people. This has cause him to be a sort of lone warrior, generally working alone. Despite this he's proven to be reckless at times, and rush into situations.
Equipment
- Green Bladed Lightsaber: More of a secondary weapon, it is a reminder of Aegob's old life. When asked, he says he took it off a target so as to not reveal his past.
- DeepWater-class light freighter: Known as the Sure Shot, One of the only things Aegob is attached to.
- E-11
-Sc-4 Blaster Pistol
Force Powers
-Core Powers: Moderate.
-Lightning: Weak
- Mind control: Weak
-Force Precognition: Weak
History: (Four Paragraphs Minimum)
Born on Coruscant to a low class family in 41 ABY, Aegob Manara was quickly discovered as a force sensitive. Recruited by the Jedi Order at the age of two, he was assigned to Master Malon Vendar. Learning quickly, the pair went on many missions together, forming a close bond.
Aegob learned quickly, building his own lightsaber at 9, and showing a affinity for the force. For a young padawan, he showed much potential. Nonetheless his time with the Order was cut short

At 14, Aegob had this bond ripped from him on what appeared to be a simple mission to Nar Shaddaa. Assigned to investigate recent street violence and the disappearance of Jedi Jaered Corsh. The pair discovered that Jaered had fallen and been usurping control over the street gangs. When the two made a attempt to stop him, Vendar was slain. Fatally injuring Aegob, and leaving him for dead, Jaered left Nar Shaddaa to keep from being found.

Mortally wounded, Aegob was rescued by the Red Nebulae Gang. Realizing Jedi were not infallible, he lost all faith in the Jedi, and proceeded to do what it takes to live. No search team was ever sent for him, furthering his distaste for the Order. Taught the streets, he eventually became a bounty hunter, forsaking the dark and light. Considered dead by the Jedi, he owes allegiance to no one.
He eventually made it off planet, although completely changed. It would cause many struggles with good and evil later on. He wandered the galaxy for many years, learning things he shouldn't have, and doing what it took for him to survive.

He learned much about gambling, hustling, and maybe most importantly fighting. Deciding to cut many ties, he took on a role as a bounty hunter. Willing to take any job, he's gained many scars and stories all which have made him who he is today.

Ever since the events on Nar Shaddaa, Aegob has neglected his training, only drawing on his Jedi abilities a handful of times. To the Jedi Order, he's dead and he prefers to keep it that way. With time his ability with the Force would return to it's former level.
(Could I get some help with the photo?)
(Plan on fleshing him out in session)
Edited by peter5158, May 8 2012, 10:06:29 PM.
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Grub
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Mmm, Jared Leto.

- Please balance strengths and weaknesses.
- Please list which (or all) core powers and the relative strengths of each.
- History is too brief, should be four paragraphs minimum.

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Think I fixed it.
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Nailed it.

The history could use some formatting and spacing, its also still too short. I edited your image tag as well and the image is no longer hosted on photobucket. :redface:
Sirra Vale (Jedi Knight)
Ariadne Adate (Federation Chief of Senate)
Elden Lesius (Sith)
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Fixed
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