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Jared Fox
Topic Started: Nov 17 2008, 05:15 AM (428 Views)
sonic14
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Name: Fox, Jared
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Race:Human/changeling
Home World: earth
Alignment: Neutral?

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Appearance: Jared looks like an everyday ordinary kid. He's 6'0 178 lb, He has brown hair that falls down his neck. He is taller the most kids and is unique because he's tan. He wears a chained necklace of his father’s planet. He also has a head band made when he was two and still has it. He goes to an academy school so he wears the uniforms. He wears one earring in his ear and ring on his left middle finger. He has a scar on his arm that he got from training. He also wears a tennis shoes that are messed up. He carries a backpack around with items that he needs such as, water, instant ramen, bandages, senzu beans, dragonball radar, capsules and more. he's pretty messy and never combs his hair. He wears a black muscle tee shirt and a zip up grey hoody. he wears darkblue baggy jeans and listens to his cd player most of the day. He has a fighting outfit from his father's planet. OUT OF SCHOOL UNIFORMPosted Image

Personality: Jared is rather friendly type of guy. He likes to hang out with friends and play around with others. He is polite at times but still a teenager so sometimes he slips. He's a mellow person if not provoked. He is the best at his school at fighting but yet people still want to take him on. He loves to take girls out and pay for their food. He also loves to fight with worthy opponents. Every time he fights his blood starts to boil making him excited and in a sence stronger, Jared usually plays around in the fight but if he gets serious a great amount of power starts to over flow within him because of anger. Once he fights an a person seriously he brings out his true strength. He is a very playful kid and love to tell jokes. He protects his friends no matter what happens and loves having bonds with people. He Hates peole who run their mouths and think they can beat him. He also hates if you put his family in danger.

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History:

Jared was born on earth but his father was born on planet placated A planet of aliens like freiza. He looks like a human when he's regular but when he transforms he takes the form of creature that kind of looks like coolers first form. He came to earth to take it over but was interrupted by a number of fighters. They fought an epic battle, in the end Jared's father lost but agreed to live on earth as one of its protectors. Years passed and Jared's father met a woman from east city who was a fighter. She was beautiful and was fascinated about him. Where he came form what type of creature was he, how old he was. Before long Jared's father and the young woman began seeing each other on a daily basis and began to fall in love not long after a year. Jared's mother would always fight in the tournament but her passion was technology. She would continue to make androids to fight and become more stronger. He loved the adrenaline of fighting and was addicted to the feel so when Jared's mother gave birth to him Jared to was in love with fighting. Since he was a baby he had an above average power level, and as time progressed it began to grow. Together they raised Jared to fight and become a strong warrior.

Growing up Jared was trained by allot of his fathers comrades and fought along side with them. He became a great asset to the team. As he started to grow older the villains became more powerful. He knew almost 3 fighting styles and was learning each day. One day all seemed peace but then an alien like creature threatened earth planning to blow it up. The alien had an extremely high power level exceeding everybody else. Jared's father and his comrades tried to defeat him, they had a long ad grueling fight but at the end none of them came with their lives. Jared all alone started to feel some much rage that he's power level went up. He was pushed so far that he's body started to transform. With this transformation came a great amount of power, as much as the monster. As the two fought steadily Jared's powers grew stronger, Using hate as he's engine and hateful memories as the gas. When it looked as if Jared's was about to win The alien did a big blast big enough to destroy almost any planet. There was only one way to stop it and that was to use a blast to fight the other one. As they both gave of a blast the alien's was more powerful. When all hope looked lost Jared Suddenly received a great amount of power overflowing from he's body, overpowering the beast and killing it. After the battle Jared passed out on the floor transforming into a human again. {When all looked bad Jared transformed into a creature that looked like coolers form only different colors)
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Weapons: N/A

Techniques: Smash attack: The user punches the opponent in the tummy and flies back. He then rushes towards the opponent and do hard hitting quick attacks.

Bunkai Teleport "Break Up Teleport"-A very cool type of teleportation where a character breaks into pieces and reappears anyplace by reassembling. Jared can only do this about 3 times. he can only go up to 1000 yards.

Galick gun : bends to the side while holding the back of his hands parallel to each other, conducting purple ki that discharges a powerful beam.

Transformations: Nobody knows how many transformations there is but most people say it stops at 3. Jared only knows the first one which gives him the appearance of his father. The appearanceof Jared in his form is the look alike to cooler because his father is the same alien type, except Jared's color is black and red. The power level is that of super saiyan. Jared gets more powerful because of he's special ability to transfer any emotions to hate. Even if he loves something all the love will transfer into hate which empowers him more. plus he can access the first form.Posted Image The first transformation is the one on left then next is his skin turn silver and the third is on the right of the pic exculde the middle.
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sonic14
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Well i think i'm done
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It'd be nice if you ran your profile through a word process (ie Microsoft Word) because there's a lot of grammar/spelling errors, but I won't require it of you.

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Bunkai Teleport "Break Up Teleport"-A very cool type of teleportation where a character breaks into pieces and reappears anyplace by reassembling.

Be more specific with this move. Even if it wasn't specific where you got it from. What is the range of the move? How quickly/often can it be done? And so on.

-Your third attack doesn't have a name. I'm almost positive it's Piccolo's attack, and that is a finishing move (it can pierce right through someone's body). So you'll need to change that.

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Transformations: Nobody knows how many transformations there is but most people say it stops at 3. Jared only knows the first one which gives him the apparance of his father.

I know you explain your transformation in another part of the profile, but explain it again in detail here. Include his appearance, power level, and especially how the hate thing works again.
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Alrighty then
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Time warp: Jared freezes time including the opponent and does a mass amount of attacks and finishes it with a very powerful kai blast. Jared can only do it once and the opponent has to be in a 5 yard distance.

Don't say he can "freeze time". Say something more along the lines of he acts so fast (possibly using his Teleport move as a combo) that opponents can scarcely follow his movements.
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I get know alright edited
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Name: Fox, JaredGender: Male[/quote]


Messy messy. *shakes head* fix that.

Make your appearence and personality longer

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Time warp: Jared charges up and goes so fast the opponent can't comprehend, and he does a mass amount of attacks and finishes it with a very powerful kai blast. Jared can only do it once and the opponent has to be in a 5 yard distance.


I don't know if that should be passed a reguliar move, seems something close to a finisher. A different type anyways, not all Finisher's are huge explosions of ki energy now.

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Transformations: Nobody knows how many transformations there is but most people say it stops at 3. Jared only knows the first one which gives him the appearance of his father. The appearanceof Jared in his form is the look alike to cooler because his father is the same alien type, except Jared's color is black and red. The power level is that of super saiyan. Jared gets more powerful because of he's special ability to transfer any emotions to hate. Even if he loves something all the love will transfer into hate which empowers him


This seems fine, just saying this to make sure, you only get the first level of it.
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alright i think i did it
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Good enough mate, approved.
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