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| Raine Krone | |
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| Raine | Nov 18 2008, 06:23 PM Post #1 |
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Name: Krone, Raine (Android Seventy) Gender: Male Age: Appearance of a 15 Year old, only has been "alive" for 3 years. Race: Android Home World: Earth Alignment: Neutral _______ Appearence: ![]() Personality: Raine, being an android, acts the same way to friends and enemies. He has a strange need to learn things, and even though he is an android he has the knowledge of a slightly-above-genius human. He doesn't act like he is smart, far from it; he rarely talks unless if it is needed and even then it usually isn't very insightful. He says exactly what he thinks to people that he knows, which is why people who know him know he is smart. In battle he acts as a different person. His mind is locked on killing his target, or damaging them until they can no longer move. He doesn't believe in torture, if he needs to find out something and a gun to the head won't do it, they aren't going to talk. If he finds someone useless after he fights them, he'll finish them off. If not, he will allow them to live. As of now he has yet to kill anyone, for he believes that everyone has a purpose. He can not get annoyed or angry, only confused. Since he has a built in scanner, only powerlevels can surprise him. He prefers fighting one on one fights, and will never gang up against someone unless if that is the only way to win; or if he is helping someone fight a bully. _______ History: Having been around for only four years, there isn't much to fill on Raine's history. He was created by Dr. Wheelo and Dr. Gero in HFIL and was wished on earth by an evil man who mispoke the name Android Seventeen and said Android Seventy instead. Raine was supposed to appear at the age of seventy, but Dr. Wheelo preferred to make him look young and defenceless isntead of old and experianced. Once he was wished up on Earth, the man who summoned him fled. He didn't get a good look of the man, but the man was quite small. On his second year of life, Raine did a lot of searching and exploring of the world. He figured if he knew where everything was he'd have many advantages, and he wanted to feed his natural hunger of knowledge. He also began to study astronomy, looking at the sun's position and judging how fast it moved. He found out that every day the sun moved a little bit slower until summer, then it moved a little bit faster. On his third year of life, Raine discovered fighting tactics and things about other creatures. He noticed fighting styles and went to the world tournament to find out how others fight. He didn't participate, instead he watched and studied. He found out a few of his moves just from watching it. The Chou Makatsu was one of his favorites that he learned. He then learned the Hell's Flash by watching an android use it. The Infinite Punisher attack was one he already knew about so it was easier to use then the other attacks. _______ Weapons: His body is a weapon. He has machine guns when he takes off his hands, and he has katanas that can eject from the sides of his arms. He also has a small machine gun built inside his left eye. Behind his right eye is his scanner that allows him to sense powerlevels. Techniques: Chou Makatsu- A giant blast of energy that the user shoots from their mouth. The attack has a little more strength then the ki wave with the same speed. It's color depends on the user's ki color. Hell's Flash- The user takes their hands off and shoots machine guns from their arms. The machine guns can deal a lot of damage or a little damage, depending on how many times it hits the enemy. This can be done with only one arm and taking off only one hand, but it will only do half of the damage. Raine can fire this attack from his left eye since it has a small machine gun, but this does 1/8 of the damage. Infinite Punisher- Raine's signature attack, he creates ki all around one of his arms and shoots it at the enemy. This ki wave is extremely fast, faster then the crusher ball, and as of such is very hard to dodge. Instead of exploading, it continuously hits the enemy, trying to break through the skin. It lasts 3 seconds after impact. Transformations: This you will unlock as you progress in power, you could leave it here if you want to but isn't needed at first. |
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| SupremeAvenger | Nov 18 2008, 10:25 PM Post #2 |
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All seems very nice accept for two details:
Now keep in mind, this is not a canon forum. So all the canon characters, like Dr. Gero, currently don't exist (unless we find use to include them for later). You can mention Android 17, because for all we know that can be some random Android. But it isn't the Android 17 you would know from the show itself. So just edit those direct references (either change the name or don't mention the name at all, say he doesn't know who created him?). Everything else is fine, and after that tiny change you're good to go! |
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Nov 19 2008, 01:47 PM Post #3 |
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You still have to write out your appearence. |
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