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| Troglodyte | Nov 24 2008, 08:25 PM Post #1 |
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Name: Tiax Gender: neither Age: 1335 Race: Mutant Home World: none Alignment: Neutral-evil _______ Appearence:Tiax does not look like much of a threat to most people, barely two feet tall, sort of pudgy and lacking the defined muscles of the average Ki-user. He is green, quite wrinkly with a disproportionally large head in comparison to his body. His face is dominated by his bloated blue-green eyes wich rests below heavy lids. The fact that he lacks any brow only makes his eyes more prominent. His mouth is located on a small snout and is shaped so that it almost looking as he is constantly smiling. Due to the fact that he is rather portly his snout is made less prominent by his double-chin and ample cheeks.His arms are long, dexterious and somewhat monkey-like, apart from the fact that they are covered in a hairless, wrinkly, rubbery hide. He is usually wearing baggy, black pants made out of a soft yet durable fabric and a sleeveless shirt made from the same type of fabric. Over these he usually wears flowing robes wich reach to his feet, usually either dark blue or deep scarlet. On top of this he usually wears a thick cape with a hood. While he may look old and frail to most races, Tiax is actually at his prime, and is quite strong and extremely quick Personality: Tiax is a genius when it comes to both technology and magic, and usually feigns helplessness to put eventual opposition at ease. He is usually a pleasant person and definately not one to fly of the handle. Self-controll is one of his most harshly practiced disciplines. Tiax is not one for open confrontation and usually prefers to negotiate deals that are beneficant to him, however, when stripped of other alternatives, he will charge into combat, usually trying to engineer a scenario where he starts off advantageous. Tiax is rather ambitious and has the rather stereotypical goal of ruling the world. However, he is quite aware that he will not be able to do so unopposed, thus he expects to be needing a certain amount of help to do so. The only other goal that Tiax has is to aquire even more magical abilities and increase his power. People almost always see Tiax as polite but secretive, and might even see him as a coward. While it is true that Tiax often chooses to flee rather than fight, it is hardly fair to blame the small green yoda-like man of being a coward, as it is rare for the tiny sorcerer to actually panic. In his mind there is nothing wrong with cowardice and escaping. Honor is for foolhardy bruisers while intelligence and cunning is for scheming wizards such as himself _______ History:Little more than a hundred years ago, a little ugly creature was born on a titanic pirate-spaceship, mostly inhabited by refugees and criminals fleeing from whatever punishments awaited them. Tiax father Minax was among the ruling council of this vessel, partly because of the rather meager magical abilities wich he possessed. on to his son. Tiax, being a brighter and far more dedicated student than his father had been learned easily, and within a few centuries even surpassed his fathers abilities Only a few hundred hundred years later, just after Tiax seventh century alive The inhabitants of the giant ship was experiencing great turmoil. After several failed raids upon some exceedingly well-protected planets, the Captains and his luitenants (wich included Minax, Tiax father) where threatening a mutiny of the starving and increasingly unhappy crew. While the leaders where quite powerfull compared to their underlings, their powers could do little about the numbers of their assaliants. Battle coursed within the space-ship. Tiax and Minax suspected that this could prove deadly, and quickly had an escape-pod prepared for them. However, one of the of the more powerfull rebels snuck up on the pair of wizards and severely injured Minax with a Ki-blast. However, Tiax quickly retorted with a devastating kick. obliterating the pirate, and then dragged his injured father into the escape-pod. Once they had jettisoned from the space-ship, Minax tried to heal his father with his magic. However, it was too late, and the elder wizard had already succumbed to death. Minax was stricken with grief, and barely noticed the explosion, wich sent his pod off-course and caused him to crash on a small blue planet. . . Even without his magic, the wizard was drastically superior to the early humans, and quickly brought several of them under his power, either by magic or by bribes and promise of great rewards, forging a small empire for himself. An empire wich stands to this day. _______ Weapons: None. Techniques: Kaphala Kapha!-Tiax's magic words that have various effects such as teleportation and making things appear. Think of it as, "Abra Kadabra". Tiax can create small things with this magical power. simple things that are made out of a single chunk of material (ranging from a crystall ball to jewels or simply a lump of metal) are easy, while creating complex, multipart objects, such as a gun or a dragonball-radar would be impossible. The only way Tiax can create one of these is by knowing how they function beforehand. So if Tiax knew exactly how to build a dragonball radar, he could create one, by imagining any and all details and their functions mentally. However, the chances of success would still be fairly slim. Tiax can also use this power to view other places through a crystal ball. This power has a very wide range, and he can even 'visit' places on nearby planets or the sun, if he suspected anything interesting was going on there. He can also focus his 'view' on certain individuals, wich he has met earlier. He can also teleport himself and others to other places, but this is a very tricky thing to do, as his teleportation only has a range of about fifty to a hundred miles. to do this, he must first 'view it' by using the remote-viewing spell, mentioned earlier. However, teleporting to well-known locations within his range, he can do without his crystal-ball He is also able to send his voice and vauge images directly into the minds of people within a maximum radius of a hundred miles around him. However, while he can adjust the range of the transmissions, he cannot affect who will hear him. If he decides to send a transmission fifty feet, everyone within range will pick it up, whether he wants them too or not. Ayatsuri no Majyutsu - Tiax's magic skills that allow him to control anyone with evil in their heart. The more evil, the more controll Tiax gets. While those who are evil through and through would be very easy to controll, people who have only had a few brushes with evil, would only be partially controlled. While, they would have an powerfull urge to do whatever Tiax commands them, they would be able to resist. (People with an 'Evil' alignment are more or less slaves, and might even work to further Tiax goals or rush to his protection without a direct order, while those of a Neutral alignment are able to resist orders, but still gets an urge to do whatever Tiax wishes of them. The only thing that the Neutral ones cannot do is harm/kill Tiax directly. Obviously Tiax has no sway over those that act all good) At his current level Tiax would must be in his victims immediate vicinity, prefferably having a line of sight to whoever he tries to use this power on. Kaifuku Power "Healing Power"-The ability to completely heal people near death with hands. Transformations: This you will unlock as you progress in power, you could leave it here if you want to but isn't needed at first. |
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| SupremeAvenger | Nov 28 2008, 09:08 PM Post #2 |
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Woooo, Troggie finished his profileee. Okay, here goes: -His history/homeworld is kinda non-specific. You don't really need to have a whole bunch of details, but you say he was born on a ship,
A ) You say he's only a little over 1000 years old, so he'd only have been born hundreds of years ago, correct? B ) Right after that sentence you mention him escaping from his Home Planet. Now I'm probably being a little picky with this, but just give us a bit more clarification. Was he born on a ship of people traveling the galaxy, who settled on a boring, peaceful planet that he escaped from? Just a tad bit more detail. Just a tad. And the moves... Magic is made by Ki. Since the only real user of magic in the series was Babidi, he's the only comparison.
A ) You can take out that "Who can perform it:" section in all of your moves, just by adding this move you can perform it plus it isn't that important. B ) Because your character isn't as powerful as Babidi, you'll need to be a little more specific as to what your powers are. You can't start out doing it all, I would think you'd pick a specialty, or at least limit the range or something. The description for this move is just pretty vague and needs to be clarified. Remember, it's only a Standard Move, so it can't do too much.
You either need to: - State rather severe limitations on this move (Like how much control he has, how long, range, etc.) -Get rid of the move. (As it is now, this move is a Finishing Move. Basically all characters have some shred of evil in their hearts, and to be able to completely control them, I'd even call that an Ultimate Finishing Move.)
You can have this, but keep in mind to completely heal someone that's almost dead will take up a substantial amount of Ki. |
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| Troglodyte | Dec 2 2008, 09:25 PM Post #3 |
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I gotta agree with you there. This app is rather horrible. I've done my best to clean it up a wee bit now though. |
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| Heretic | Dec 3 2008, 07:53 PM Post #4 |
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all that is fine for your first technique bit...
how does he gain all that? besides that I'm pretty much fine with this |
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