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Seigi
Topic Started: Jul 21 2010, 05:00 PM (288 Views)
ziro
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Edited by ziro, Jul 29 2010, 04:37 AM.
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McMuffin
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First of welcome to the site, yada yada, *insert generic admin welcome here*.

First off, for the sake of simplicity, and to make things pretty, could you capitalise haishi and male. It makes things look tidier on the profile.

Right, your character needs an age. Simples.

Few broken tags, try to have bold tags around just the title, such as Appearance and Personality themselves, nistead of the entirety of the writing.

Finally, you need to just give a brief overview of your character's race. This is required for Mutants; just like general overview of them, is he the only one, do they have a home planet, etc.

But other than that it seems fine.

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ziro
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Hriky
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Space your techniques out.

Also does that mean you have the Human racial trait?
">>Can have one racial trait from any other besides Androids and Demons."

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