LittleDragonZ

Feb 17 2008, 12:15 PM

You certainly did what your first paragraph implied. I like the way you mentioned the maps in-depth and other aspects. You seem to of mentioned many minor aspects, and not bother with the core. Well, what I mean by that is not doing it the traditional way and summarizing it straight to the point. Even going to the extent of mentioning Gairyuki's hate towards the voice acting, haha. Though, I'm not saying it was a bad idea, but a different approach.

What I would suggest is that you should reorder parts. You seemed to of just jotted down anything that you thought of at the time in any random way, though you did mention this in your introduction. It could be seen as a bit confusing, especially when the members might want to refer to a specific area.