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The Last Game
Topic Started: Mon Aug 29, 2005 1:06 am (1,365,352 Views)
Lynnie
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Critiques should be helpful....not so positive tbh. Like....you need to learn and grow from your mistakes/works....

That being said back in HS I took a writer' craft class and ppl would make fun of other people's stories A LOT. It was all anonymous but you would sometimes speak loud enough so you could hear ppl critiquing you.

I remember this one guy would somehow always get my work and he would try to be really funny and the only way ppl would laugh at his jokes if he was bringing others down so he brought down my work a lot.

I'm not even a writer but I did well in that class...he was just a ****.

Wasn't helpful at all...just making fun of it. Critiques should be helpful, not necessarily positive or negative.
Edited by Lynnie, Mon Oct 19, 2015 11:14 pm.
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I could've just said that, instead of that wall of words. :mellow:
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Mon Oct 19, 2015 11:09 pm
Never heard of kind critique before, and wouldn't know how to do it positively. Critique is usually negativity towards your actions and accomplishments, a mace in the face. Trying to be positive on something you don't support is being fake, I can't see the benefits in teaching something like that. :mellow:

Weird class you've enrolled in, what kind of profession are you studying?
English major. This is a creative writing class.

I want to be a teacher, but I also want to write.

And I agree! I mean, it's constructive, which I understand, but it's hard to even be THAT when the person who wrote it didn't even bother to go to the page limit that they were told.

And like I said, these guys literally just wrote journal entries of their first 2 months of college. There is a reason people write stories, so that we don't have to hear about real life. Real life is boring and depressing.

Like literally, the only thing I can say is, "Needs more tension, but I like the idea that you have."

It would be a good class, but I feel like the teacher is so nice, to a detriment. We HAVE to find something to say.
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Lynnie
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OMFG BECOME A WRITER SO I CAN BUY YOUR BOOKS

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Maybe.

Last.
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YEAH BABY ;)
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Nyahahahahaha!

Kunoichi is love :heart: :wub:
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None of her SW1 :nope:
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someone needs to make emoticon for Kuno
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Only if it has the SW1 hat :asia:
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Incendiado estoy...

And Last.
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Que te alegra en abundancia o te quiebra del dolor...
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SW4 Empires will be released in the west next March

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maybe I should post up pics of my hubbybae <3
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