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Before Life or Death; my story
Topic Started: Sun Oct 16, 2005 4:23 am (462 Views)
Nataku956
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I wrote this way back. It was a story that goes with my RP that I also made a while back. Of course none of you will get it but its an okay story. All characters belong to me, you know the how copyright stuff.

Feel free to post comments on how it is, and if you would like to read more so I can start writing again.
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Years before the blood shed, there once was a young boy named Nataku. Ever since he could remember he has always been alone in a world torn apart by death and destruction. Nataku is now staying in an abandon house in the town of Trice.

Nataku looking out a broken window, "The sun rises another day and so do I." After giving a brief sigh he goes out the door to a local bar. The bar is in better condition than the boys house but still is abit run down, the bar tender looks at the young boy who enters, "Hey we don’t serve six year olds kid." Nataku looks at the bar tender and grins, "Yeah I know, but um you can give me some milk for free cant you?" The bar tender chuckles, "All you have to do is ask my boy." He serves Nataku his milk. Nataku sits on the bar stool and drinks his milk in four gulps, "Mmm, that was great." The bar tender grins, "So what are we up to today?" Nataku scratching his head, "I haven’t decided yet I guess I should go look?" Nataku jumps off the stool, waves good bye and heads out the door to see what the day awaits.

Not to far away another young boy is running for his life, breathing heavily, "Why me...what..did I ever do to...the Liberal army..." The boy hears galloping hoofs and begins to run again. The young boy see's a hole just big enough for him to hide into, he quickly jumps in it and waits for the soldiers to pass. Three armored soldiers in horses stop almost right in front of the hole. "Where is that damn boy!!" another says, "I told you sir that boy is nothing but trouble." One soldier with a puzzled look asks, "What is the boy's name anyways?" The soldier in charge gives him a mean look, "Who cares!! For the crime he has committed against the Liberal army he will pay." The three soldiers gallop off in search for him, not knowing he was in front of them the whole time. After the soldiers have left the boy crawls out cautiously, wiping his sweat away from his forehead, "That was close. I never knew stealing some food was such a big deal...he could at least know my name." He takes in a deep breath and screams, "IT'S LEON YOU IDIOT!!!!!" Luckily the soldiers were too far to hear him. Leon looks around and see's a small town, "Hmm I guess Ill go there."

Leon walked staggering into the town of Trice, "Man..I didn't think...I was this...tired." Leon took one more step before he collapsed. Luckily for him the young boy looking for something to do saw him, "Hey....hmm I guess you need help." Nataku picks up the unconscious Leon and takes him to his home. Nataku rests him on his beat up bed. Nataku looks around and finds water in his storage, "Well it ain't cold but its water." Nataku then pours the water on top of Leon, "Ack..hey what? Huh where am I? Who are you?" Nataku waves his hand, "The names Nataku I found you in front of the town entrance." Leon rubbing his head, "Thanks, my name's Leon." Leon extends his hand, Nataku cheerfully accepted it and shook his hand, "Pleasure to meet you Leon." Leon gets up and looks at his surroundings, "You got anything to eat?"

After a brief lunch Leon looks out the window to study the town, "I’m impressed, this is one of the few cities left in the world that hasn’t suffered form all the battles that have been happening." Nataku stands next to him and looks out the window, "Even though this town hasn’t been affected by it, it’s still in poor condition. All the towns people may have to move soon if we wish to survive." Leon looks at him puzzled, "What do you mean?" Nataku lowers his head, "Most of Trice's supplies are running low, and the Liberal army hasn’t assisted us in months." Leon takes a step back almost in fear of what he has heard, "Did...did you say...the Liberal army?" Nataku looks at him , "Yes why what’s wrong?" Leon grasps Nataku by his shirt, "You’re telling me that this town is owned by the Liberal army?" Nataku trying to get loose, "Yes, uh...your hurting me?" Leon lets go not realizing that he was hurting him, "I’m sorry, I must be going." Nataku did not understand but he saw no reason to stop him, as Leon opened the door he froze at what he saw. Three armored horses were at the bars horse stall. Leon, "That can’t be them please God tell me it’s not them."

Nataku peered out the door trying to see what made Leon stop. Before Nataku could ask him what was the matter, screams were coming from the bar. Leon and Nataku both stare at each other in confusion. Nataku and Leon, reluctantly, stand by a window trying to listen to what is going on. "Tell me where the boy is or perish!" The bar tender screamed out in pain from the Liberal soldiers attack, "I’m telling, ack, that....I don't....know any boy ....by the name of Leon." The Liberal soldier gave a hard look, "Then you are of no use to me." The soldier drew his sword and sliced the bar tender's throat. Leon felt anger and sorrow for what is happening because of him, he looks at Nataku for his reactions and was shocked by them. Nataku was clenching his fists, grinding his teeth, and his eyes almost showed the fire that was burning inside him. Leon whispered to him, "Don’t do it Nataku your just a kid like me, we can’t do nothing." Leons words were lost on him. Nataku had completely changed, with a surge of emotions inside him Nataku burst threw the window. The three soldiers were caught off guard, Nataku with lightning speed grabbed the sword form the soldier and sliced off his arm. "AAAHHHHH!!!!!", the soldier screamed in pain. The two other soldiers tried to draw their swords but were killed by Nataku in two swings of his sword. Nataku then stood in front of the remaining soldier, "You, you killed him. Now you too shall die." With one quick stoke it was over. Leon remained still amazed at what he has seen, he couldn’t understand how a boy his age could kill three soldiers as if they were nothing. Nataku stood for a moment, the same fire in his eyes, but just as quick as his emotions had came they faded. Nataku then dropped the sword, and began to cry, "What....what have I done?" Leon sensed more soldiers coming, "Come on we have to get out of here." Leon grabs his arm and runs out the bar. Leon then looks at the horses, "I guess we'll take these." Leon mounts the horse as if he had done it all his life, "Give me your hand." Nataku was still in shock, but with out even looking at Leon he mounted the horse. Leon and Nataku then rode out the town to escape form the Liberal army leaving many unanswered questions?

After riding for over two hours Leon and Nataku finally stop to rest. Leon gets off the horse panting, "Man.....that...was..close." Nataku sat on the horse motionless and still in shock.

Leon stared at his partner, "What’s wrong Nataku?" Nataku slowly got off the horse and began to walk for no reason. Leon got off and started to follow his friend, "Hey man come on tell me what’s wrong, hey I know killing isn’t right and stuff..but" Nataku cut off Leon, "OF COURSE ITS NOT RIGHT NOBODY SHOULD EVER HAVE TO KILL NOBODY!!!!" Leon took a few steps back, "Calm down Nataku, its okay." Nataku begins to cry and continues walking, Leon follows.

After sometime walking Nataku stops to rest. Leon just sits next to his bud, "Finally, I thought u would never stop." Nataku points to a town in the distance, Leon smiled with joy, "Finally a town!! Let’s go!!"

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Very tense. Very nice also. A very nice introduction to the story.

Well done, Nakatu! (Referring to both: To the story and to the user.) :)
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Oct 15 2005, 11:09 PM
Very tense. Very nice also. A very nice introduction to the story.

Well done, Nakatu! (Referring to both: To the story and to the user.) :)

Thanks. It would have been better if I posted the revised rp because it had such an awesome story that left you wanting to know the main d00ds past. The reason why I wrote this.

Will I continue is the question?
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Nice work! However, I think you should keep the same tense through out the story unless you are writing a flashback.
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Its a very big flashback. The later or present story is filled with tension and backstabs and such....just need to get around completing it.
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OMG, it's AWESOME!!! :D
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Why thank you ^^
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