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| Episode #18: Someone goes to the hospital | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Apr 25 2013, 04:24 AM (83 Views) | |
| MasonRico | Apr 25 2013, 04:24 AM Post #1 |
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![]() "Someone goes to the hospital." Scene 1: Police Department Rick and Trina run into the police station to confront Jacob on what has happened to Trinity. Rick: Well I see you beat me here! Figures as you are always late. Trina: Please! When my mother instincts are going off; there is nothing to stop me from keeping my family safe. Especially my children. Rick: Hey there goes Jacob. Comissioner! Comissioner JAcob! Jacob: Rick..Trina..hey we haven't gotten anything on Riconia's whereabouts yet, but we are still looking for her. Rick: That is great really, but.. Trina: We have another problem!!! Jacob: Well sure go ahead, tell me whats going on?! Trina: Its about Riconia's daughter and our granddaughter Trinity..she is missing. Jacob: Wait what when?! Trina: Just a couple of hours ago! I went to go and pick her up and the daycare said that someone had already picked Trinity up from the daycare. It was a little odd so I said well who picked her up?! Jacob: And..what did they say? Trina: They said her father picked her up and her father is only one person.. Jacob: Yeah Jawaan is her father, he has been gone he could have gone to get her. Trina: No, it wasn't him because he has been out and the person that got Trinity wasn't Jawaan..it was her real father Devon. Thats the one that has my daughter! Suddenly the camera shifts to Tony sitting at his desk listening to the conversation with a worried face. Scene 2: The Washington Estates RJ: What is it that you could possibly wanna talk to me about that you haven't already said?! Vonny: Nothing, probably nothing..its just I wonder. I wonder why a boy with SO much potential would go and throw his life away for some girl who is just going to do nothing but have him crashing in flames? RJ: Mom I am not throwing my life away! I am just taking a break and making sure that Kayla gets the help and support that she needs! Is that so hard to understand?! Vonny: No, no its not hard to understand. Trust me I have been there okay? I was like you making sure that someone was okay and put aside the things I was doing to help that person because I loved them. RJ: Okay, then you should understand why I'm doing this! Vonny: I do, but there are consequences and disappointment at then end of the road RJ! I regretted the decision by sticking by someone when they need me the most. My life was just wasting away slowly and painfully as their life gets better and they start to forget about you. The love that they were given unconditionally. RJ: Wait, who could possibly be talking about right now? Vonny: I'm talking about your father! RJ looks in shock. Scene 3: Southern California Hospital Laura is sitting in her office when suddenly Kayla walks in the door. Kayla: Dr. Dougherty? Laura: Kayla, what are you doing here? Kayla: I was wondering if we could talk if thats okay? Laura: Yeah of course, it must be important since it couldn't wait until your appointment tomorrow. Kayla: Yes, I need someone to talk too right now! My boyfriend is busy right now so I really don't have anyone to talk too at this moment. Laura: Well, like I said before I'm always if you need to talk. Laura walks and closes the door. Scene 4: The Rogero Home Gerald is in shock by Ana's response to the news. Gerald: Wait hold on. What did you just say young lady? Ana: I said what the hell are you doing with her?! If you hadn't noticed Dad that is Aunt Tanya a.k.a Mom's sister! Gerald: Yes, I noticed and I'm aware of that! I know this is coming as a little bit of a surprise for you, but I found someone new! Someone that gets me and thats what we both wanted right? Ana: Yeah your right, we did want this. But, I guess you meant something different! I wanted someone new for you, but I didn't know the definition of someone new was family! Especially not mom's sister MY AUNT! Gerald: Yes I know may seem a little low.. Ana: HA! A little low dad?! No, it is more than a little low. This is the lowest thing you have ever done and you should be ashamed of yourself. Wish mom could see you right now. Remembering her and moving on with her sister. Tanya suddenly interrupts the conversation. Tanya: Ana, please do understand, your father and I.. Ana: Yeah and I just don't think that I was talking to you! Tanya and Gerald look in shock as the scene fades to the opening credits. Scene 5: The Washington Estates RJ: Wait what do you mean your talking about my dad? What does he have to do with any of this? Vonny: Your father was the one that I have been sitting beside all these years caring for and loving RJ! We have been married all these years and I just start feeling day after day for some reason that I wasted my life! RJ: So your saying that you regret being there for him?! Is that what you are trying to say to me?! Vonny: No..well yes..I don't know! Just know that when you make a commitment like this; its hard to let go! For example, when I met your father he was grieving okay! Grieving over the heartbreak he had from an old love of his.. RJ: Lemme guess..that someone was Trina?! Vonny: Hmmmm, yes. Trina and your dad were supposed to get married, but she decided to leave him! And when I met him we became closer when I decided I wanted to help him fix and mend his broken heart! But.. RJ: Mom, Im sorry but Im tired of listening to this. Just because you think that you're marriage with Dad is all a big conspiracy of some sort does not mean that will happen with me and Kayla! Vonny: Well ya know what?! I just don't want my son to end up being left in the dust as Kayla is feeding off your love like a leach to her advantage until your left with nothing! RJ storms to the door! Vonny: Wait, RJ where are you going?! RJ: Away from here okay..this isn't a place I feel like I'm wanted or I'm supported. Vonny: Honey you are always supported by us! RJ: Yeah when you feel like it or it approves to you right??? Vonny: Thats not what I.. RJ: I'm sorry Mom I'm done… RJ runs out the door and slams it. Vonny looks in shock and begins to cry. Scene 6: Police Department Jacob: Now that we have no doubt that Devon is in the area. We can put a search out for him and keep everyone on the look out for him. Trina: What if that isn't enough?! What if he has already gotten out of Alexandria and taken my babies with him?! Rick: Look Trina. For this whole operation to work..I am going to need you to calm down! We cannot go to the worst case scenario okay? Trina: You're right, as usual.. you always know the right things to say Rick: Calm and collective..Thats me. Hahaha Jacob: Okay if you guys will excuse me for one second I have to make a phone call really quick. Trina: No no please, go take your time. Jacob: Okay be right back. Jacob walks away and Tony is rushing out the door. Trina: Tony! Tony: Umm, Aunt Trina and Uncle Rick. Whats up? Rick: Nothing much, just trying to get some answers about Riconia and Trinity's whereabouts. Hey have you heard or seen any.. Tony: No, I haven't seen anything! Rick is looking in wonder as Tony becomes very defensive. Rick: Umm okay. Well if you.. Tony: I don't know anything right now, but if you want any answers I will let you know when I find out! Rick: Okay, are you alright Tony? Tony: Yeah im fine. Why wouldn't I be?! Trina: Nothing, you just seem to be a little bit nervous and worried about something. Tony: Im fine okay. You don't have to worry about me. I am alright. Rick: Are you sure cause if something is.. Tony: I SAID IM FINE OKAY?! GEESH! Rick and Trina look in shock at Tony's uproar. Tony then storms out of the door of the station. Trina: Did he seem a little.. Rick: Nervous.. Trina: Kinda like he was.. Rick: Hiding something? Rick and Trina look at each other as they walk to Jacob's office. Scene 7: The Rogero Home Gerald: I cannot believe that you are acting this way right now! Seriously?! Ana: Yes seriously! You cannot really expect me to accept you and my aunt seeing each other as nothing more than a funny joke! Huh, you really don't believe I could see it like that?! Gerald: Look Ana, I like it or not..me and your Aunt Tanya really care for each other and want to see where this can lead too. This has nothing to do with you or anyone else for that matter. This is something that we want to pursue! Tanya: Ana, honey, the last thing that I want to do is hurt you in any way! I am your aunt and I love you very much! Me and your dad just have feelings for each other and hope that we get your support and blessing. If thats okay?! Ana: My support and blessing?! Really you think that I will be able to support this right now?! You must not love and know me enough to think you would get me to be happy with this.. Ana grabs her keys and bag and heads for the door. Gerald: Where are you going?! Ana: Out for some air! Its been so much going on these past couple of weeks. I think I need some time to myself for a minute. Tanya: Ana, I really hope we can talk about this some more and find common ground. Ana: Yeah I don't know about that but I will get back to you on that one. You're worried about me being upset; the one you should really be worried about is Erika. Hope you find the right words to tell her this one. Ana leaves out the door and Tanya turns to Gerald. Tanya: Oh my god. She is right how am I gonna tell Erika?! Scene 8: Jacob's Office Jacob is calling Lorie but someone else answers the phone. Jacob: Hello. Man: Hello Mr. Loan?! JAcob: Yes, who is this? Man: My name is Darius Comissiong. Jacob: Okay Darius..may I speak to my daughter please? Darius: Ummmm well.. Jacob: Well?! Can I speak to my daughter Darius?! Now! Darius: I'm sorry you wont be able to talk to her. Can you please just go to the hospital please?! Jacob: The hospital?! Why do I need to go to the hospital?! Darius: I'm sorry sir, but there has been an accident.. Jacob looks in shock as the scene fades to the end credits. |
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| ebard | Apr 27 2013, 09:03 AM Post #2 |
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For some reason I just couldn't get into this episode. It might've been the wait between episodes, not sure I just didn't feel it. |
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| SoapHW | Jun 15 2015, 04:18 AM Post #3 |
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This episode was admittedly slow but at least the cliffhanger made up for it. |
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