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Episode 19: Truths Come Out!
Topic Started: Jun 1 2013, 07:05 PM (97 Views)
MasonRico
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"Ana confides in RJ."

Scene 1: Alexandria Park

RJ walks to the bench and has a seat where he tries to calm himself down from the conversation with his mom.

RJ: Ughhhh, lets see any missed messages..

Suddenly RJ sees a lot of missed messages from Kayla and he decides to call her.

Scene 2: Southern California Hospital

Kayla is coming out of Laura's office with a nice smile on her face.

Kayla: Thank you so much for seeing me without any kind of notice Dr. Dougherty. Oh sorry I mean Laura!

Laura: Its okay Kayla. Sometimes patients need that extra private time and people in general usually need someone to talk to. But think of me as more of a friend than just your doctor okay?

Kayla: Okay I will and I'm going to take your advice, I really think that we can make this work. No matter what

Laura: Good Im glad to hear that and remember what I said okay?!

Kayla: Yes ma'am. Have a good one.

Laura closes her office door and Kayla's phone starts to ring.

Kayla: Hello?! RJ Hey! I was just thinking about you..Yes they were good thoughts as usual..Whats that.. the park?! Okayyyy I will be there in about 15 to 20 minutes..Okay see you there..I love you too..bye.

Kayla smiles and starts walking.

The scene shifts to RJ looking at his phone when suddenly Ana is walking over to him.

Ana: RJ!

RJ: Ana, hey what are you doing here?!

Ana: You know this is where I come to think!

RJ: Yeah, when you were like five years old!

Ana: Okay and?! Hahaha old traditions die hard right?! Besides you know I used to always come her with my dad..and my mom.

RJ: Yeah I know, but what is it that your thinking about. When you were walking over I could tell that something was bothering you?!

Ana: Wow, is it really that noticeable. Well you always could read me like a book.

RJ: Hey, thats why I'm your best friend right?!..now come one whats up?!

Ana: Its my dad.. He finally came out of his slump and he decided to move on with his life and start dating again!

RJ: Well thats not a bad thing is it?! Its actually good because I remember your dad was really like depressed and bummed out about your mom passing away.

Ana: Yeah I know that but thats not what I'm mad about! I actually was excited when he told me that he had found someone. It literally made me feel like he was going to be okay without my mom.

RJ: Okay, so you still haven't said what the problem is!

Ana: Its who my dad is deciding to spend his time with is whats bumming me out!

RJ: Cmon! Who could your dad possible be with that would make you this upset and mad?

Ana: Well my Dad thought it was a good idea to start dating my Aunt Tanya.

RJ looks in shock.

Scene 3: Alexandria Police Department

Rick and Trina walk to Jacob's office and knock on his door to come in.

Rick: Jacob?! Comissioner are you in there?!

Trina: He couldn't have gone anywhere we just saw him not even ten minutes ago!

Rick suddenly opens the door and sees that nobody is there. Trina then goes to a nearby officer.

Trina: Excuse me officer, do you happen to know where the commissioner is?

Officer: He said something about he had to go to the hospital now and then something about his daughter..

Scene 4: Southern California Hospital

Jacob is running into the emergency room and goes to the desk where Nancy is.

Nancy: Jacob, what are you doing here?

Jacob: Nancy, is my daughter here?

Nancy: Your daughter?..I don't think..

Jacob: Nancy, please just tell me if my daughter is here! I got a call from her phone saying that..

Suddenly the ambulance rushes in with Lorie on the stretcher running her to the back. Jacob tries to follow but Nancy stops him.

Nancy: I want you to stay here.

Jacob: Look Nancy thats my daughter and I..

Nancy: I know I know! But right now I want you to relax and let us handle this I will keep you posted.

Nancy goes back into the emergency room as Jacob sits down in the chair in the lounge with his head in his hands. Then Darius walks into the emergency room.

Darius: Mr. Loan?

Jacob: YEs?

Darius: I'm Darius Comissiong, I called you to tell you about Lorie.

Jacob: What the hell is going on?! What in the world did you do to my daughter? What got her into this mess?

Someone walks in suddenly comes through the doors. Darius then turns around to look.

Darius: Instead of asking me what happened; I think that you need to ask him first.

Jacob looked and was in shock.

Jacob: What the hell?

The camera suddenly focuses on Jawaan as the scene fades to the opening credits.



Scene 5: Southern California Hospital

Jacob wants answers to what happened to his daughter and why she is in the hospital.

Jacob: Jawaan, what the hell are you doing here?

Jawaan: Sir, I can explain everything to you. I can explain how this guy came and cause a big commotion and..

Darius: Oh really?! I caused a commotion?! Let me tell you something you son of a bitch! I will..

Darius and Jawaan starts arguing back and forth when Jacob splits them up.

Jacob: HEY HEY HEY! STOP IT! STOP IT RIGHT NOW! I.. SAID..STOP! I really don't know nor do I care about the nature of this little argument, rivalry, or whatever is going on.
All I want to know is what the hell happened to my daughter. So start talking. Darius you tell me what is going on.

Darius: Okay Sir. Me and Jawaan were fighting in Lorie's apartment and the fight escalated and it got really ugly. Jawaan punched me and I fell into Lorie and she fell over the table.

Jacob: Okay, so it was an accident???

Darius: Yes, it was a complete accident.

Jawaan: Exactly Comissioner, neither of us would deliberately hurt your daughter.

Jacob: Okay, okay..at least I know that this all was just an accident. But what I wanna know is what started this whole fight in the first place in my daughter's apartment?!?!

Darius looks at Jawaan and Jawaan begins to worry.

Darius: You wanna know the truth sir?!

Jacob: No, I wanna hear a cute fairytale. Yes I wanna hear the truth, now start talking, one of you!

Darius: As I would love to tell on him, I would just want to see if your officer here would have to take responsibility for what he did..

Jacob: What do you mean "take responsibility?!" Jawaan what did you do?

Jawaan begins to sweat and get nervous.

Scene 6: Alexandria Police Department

Rick and Trina are sitting in the station trying to figure out this case and where Riconia maybe.

Rick: This is crazy! The Comissioner is gone, Jawaan is no where to be found, and Tony is gone too!

Trina: Yeah..

Trina is looking into space and thinking about something.

Rick: Hey whats up, looks like you're thinking about something..

Trina: Its nothing, nothing at all. Im just..

Trina: Oh come on now. I have known for too long for you tell me that that isn't your thinking face and you realized something.

Rick: Wow, do you know me pretty well.

Trina: Yes, but now I need to spill it. What did you figure out?

Rick: I am still thinking about how when we were questioning Tony, he got so defensive about the whole thing and left out of here in such a hurry.

Trina: Yeah, okay?

Rick: When we were asking him questions. It seemed like he was trying to avoid us and not have contact with us. When we asked him question he would get defensive and he even walked out on us. To me that just seems a lil suspicious.

Trina: Yeah I was thinking that too, but that doesn't mean that he has anything to do with what is going on.. does it?

Rick: No, not exactly but it doesn't mean that he doesn't know something and he isn't trying to tell anyone about it.

Trina: But come on now. Riconia is his cousin and they are close. Why would he have something to do with her disappearance.

Rick: Look I don't know okay?! I DONT KNOW! But all I know is that Tony is feeling guilty in the back of his mind about something and with based on the conversation! I think it has something to do with Riconia.

Trina: So if you have a feeling that Tony knows something and maybe just maybe might know where Riconia is? What are we gonna do?

Rick looks and suddenly gets an idea. He suddenly walks over too the officers main desk.

Rick: Excuse me Officer, is Officer Gary Jacks in the building right now?

Officer: Ummm, Yes he is. He is dealing with an inmate right now but as soon as he is done I will tell him to come up!

Rick: Okay Thank You.

Trina walks over to the desk.

Trina: So you walked away and didn't say anything. However, by the face you made over there it looked like you thought of something!

Rick: Lets just say were finally going to get to the bottom of what Tony has been doing or where he is going.

Scene 7: The Abandoned Building

Riconia is laying on the ground hot, hungry, and sweaty. She looks up and is dirty suddenly thinking about Jawaan.
However, her interaction with him and Lorie keeps playing back in her head.

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Riconia: ......and who are you??!
Lorie: Just a helping hand. Someone to help your "babe" here in getting his job.


Riconia looks in wonder and is still trying to put the two and two together. Suddenly someone opens the door.

Tony: Hey cuz! Whats up?

Riconia: Other than my smell and my craving for food right now. I think that I'm peachy! And if you didn't know that was sarcasm again!

Tony: Oh don't be like that girly! Im only doing my job and thats it. If it was any other way then I would have done but there isn't.

Riconia: Whatever, you know you still haven't told me the secret that you promised to tell me! If you cant let me out you can at least do that for me.

Tony: Well..

Suddenly a car pulls up and Tony looks out the window.

Tony: Ya know I would but I think that I should wait ya know?! Because the boss is here and he has a surprise for you!

Riconia sighs.

Scene 8: Alexandria Park

RJ: Wow your aunt! Thats what I call a major gamble..

Ana: Exactly, like I know that he is trying to find love and everything after my mothers passing but don't go and shack it up with your deceased wife and my mother's
sister and think that its gonna be okay!

RJ: Yeah it is crazy!

Ana: Thankyou, finally somebody sees the problem in this!

RJ: Whoa whoa whoa, yes I said its a major gamble, but I never said that I thought it was anything wrong with it.

Ana: Wait what?! Are you really saying that you don't see anything wrong with my dad dating my aunt.

RJ: Honestly no I don't. Look Ana, your dad has been out of it for a while and from what I can see Tanya makes him happy. After the death of your mom and the separation of her and my uncle. I think that they were easily pulled to each for them to naturally comfort each other. Look I know you don't like it but wouldn't you say your Dad looked happy?

Ana: Yeah, I actually never seen him that happy since my mom.

RJ: Okay, then maybe you might wanna give them a chance and see. Never know you might start to like her with your dad. Because she is still your aunt and she loves you.

Ana: Wowwww..this is the first that I have ever heard you talk and speak words then they make sense!

RJ: Well I have been practicing.

Ana and RJ laugh.

Ana: Thanks RJ I really appreciate you helping me with this. Wow I cant believe I was so stupid to make this about myself when it should be about my dad being happy.

RJ: You're not dumb okay?! You're just a worried daughter and making sure your dad makes the right choice and he is okay.

Ana: Thanks.

RJ: So come on. This right here calls for a hug.

Ana: Oh my god you are SO cheesy!

RJ: But ya still love me! Hahaha

Ana: Whatevr!

Ana and RJ begin to hug and laugh.
Suddenly Kayla walks over and sees them hugging and the camera closes up on her shocked face.

Scene 9: The Abandoned Building

Tony: I think you're gonna like this surprise cousin.

Riconia: If its not my husband or someone coming to save me! Then I really don't care what the hell Devon has.

Devon suddenly walks in the room.

Devon: You don t care about what I have?!

Riconia looks in shock at Devon.

Riconia: You son of a bitch!

Devon: Come now thats not the type of language you use in front of our daughter.

The cameras closes up on Devon holding in his arms.

Devon: The family is all together again.

Scene 10: Southern California Hospital

Jacob: Come on now Jawaan! Tell me what it is that you need to take responsibility for?!

Jawaan looks in silence.

Jacob: Come on Jawaan! Just tell me it cant be that bad!

Jawaan: Sir I honestly wanna say Im sorry and its just..

Jacob: Goddamnit JAWAAN TELL ME!

Jawaan: Ive been having sex with your daughter!!!!!!!

Jacob and Darius look in shock as the scene fades.

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ebard
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It'll take me a bit to get back into this because it's been gone for so long, but this was a good return!
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SoapHW
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Intense episode!
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