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Episode 20: Lorie hears crazy news!
Topic Started: Jun 8 2013, 04:46 AM (94 Views)
MasonRico
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"Lorie hears crazy news!"

Scene 1: Alexandria Police Department

Rick and Trina are waiting at the main desk when suddenly Gary walks down the stairs.

Gary: Well Rick, Trina, how are you guys doing? HAve you heard anything new in the case from anyone?

Rick: No we haven't heard anything, but have you heard anything?

Gary: No I'm sorry, I actually have been dealing with another prisoner in lock up so I haven't really been hearing anything from pretty much anyone. Anyways thats beside the point, one of my officers on duty told that you wanted to see me?

Trina: Yeah, we wanted to speak to you about one of your officers.

Gary: Okay who?!

Trina: Tony..

Gary: Tony?! My nephew and your nephew Rick?! What is it that you could possibly have questions about him for?

Rick: Well its not more questions its more like assumption..

Gary: Okay what is it?

Rick: We believe that Tony may know something about Riconia's disappearance..

Gary: Now why would you think that?!

Trina: Just based on his behavior and the way he has been acting..

Rick: Just earlier he acted like he couldn't speak and that we were bothering him about the whole Riconia situation and just anything in general.

Gary: ..

Trina: Wait, is there something that you're not telling us?!

Gary: Follow me, we need to talk in private.

Scene 2: The Abandoned Building

Riconia is shocked to see her daughter in the hands of her evil and demonic ex husband Devon.

Devon: Looks like the family is all here huh?!

Riconia: Oh my god, my baby! Trinity?! Trinity!

Devon: Oh my god please! Please can you stop it seriously?! She is sleeping.

Riconia: She is a really light sleeper;how could she possibly be knocked like that?!

Devon: Oh lets just say that I got a lil help from my friend Chloroform.

Tony: Whoa, you made her unconscious?

Riconia: You Monster! You drugged my daughter?!

Devon: OUR DAUGHTER GET IT RIGHT OKAY?! OUR DAUGHTER!!!!!

Riconia is looking in fear as Tony is looking with some guilt.

Scene 3: Alexandria Park

Ana and RJ are hugging as Kayla walks and sees them.

Kayla clears her throat. Ana and RJ look as they are surprised to see her.

RJ: Kayla babe! You're here?

Kayla: Yeahhhh..just in time too I see.

Ana: We didn't know that you were standing there..

Kayla: I bet you didn't..

Ana looks in awkwardness and picks up her bag.

Ana: Well I think Im gonna just go. Sooo RJ I will talk to you later and thanks for being there for me and listening.

RJ: Of course anytime..

Ana: Bye Kayla..

Kayla: Hmm..

Ana leaves.

RJ: SOO How are you doi..

Kayla: What was that?!

RJ looks in shock.

Scene 4: Southern California Hospital

Lorie is looking out the window when she thinks about her and Darius.

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Lorie: Darius this isn't..

Darius: SOOOOO..Hahahaha this is what your busy with, what you had to get done with! I must have been interrupting your work just now huh?

Lorie: No please you need to understand!

Darius: What, that our night WAS just a big one-nightstand and that you don't feel anything for me?!

Lorie: No, its not like that!

Darius: Yeah, I am not suppose to believe that your here sleeping with my best friends sister's fiancee!


Lorie: Ughhhhh Oh My God..

Suddenly Nancy walks into the room.

Nancy: Hey how are you feeling???

Lorie: Other than my blazing headache and my aching stomach I think Im okay!

Nancy: Well thats good! All your blood work and everything is finished. Just a couple test and you should be finished.

Lorie: Good! So what time today will I be going home?!

Nancy: Umm..Soon very..very soon but Lorie there is something I want to talk to you about..

Lorie: Sure whats it about???

Nancy: Something happened..after the accident.

Lorie looks in shock as the scene fades to the opening credits.



Scene 5: Alexandria Park

Kayla and RJ get into an argument over Ana.

Kayla: So what were you and Ana out here talking about?!

RJ: Nothing Kayla! I was just giving Ana some advice thats it!

Kayla: Hmm sure..

RJ: Sure?! What is that exactly suppose to mean?

Kayla: Its just..I don't understand why when Ana has a problem. With friends like Ryan and oh yeah HER BOYFRIEND, Kris! She always comes to your for advice or needs to meet up with you. When she definitely has a problem with us being together?!

RJ: Ana didn't come looking for me Kayla! I was just here, after I called you and hung up Ana showed up. With no invite at all.

Kayla: Oh my god. I cant believe this man..

Kayla walks away but RJ grabs her hand.

RJ: Kayla Kayla Kayla please! Calm down! You know that me and Ana have nothing going on. We are just really good friends and thats it honest to God.

Kayla: Are you sure about that?! Because that hug and everything that was visible from my view looked more than just a friend type of hug.

RJ: KAyla look you are THE only one for me okay?! I wouldn't go through all this trouble of going behind my family and friends back to be with you, dropping out of school, and everything else to be with you! IF that isn't being in love with someone then I don't know what is.

Kayla starts to blush.

Kayla: Wait did you just say your "in love" with me?!

RJ looks with a smirk.

Scene 6: The Abandoned Building

Riconia is scared out of her mind with Devon's actions and even considering of putting Trinity to sleep.

Riconia: Look Devon, I know you hate me and I know you hate what I have done to you, but don't you punish Trinity and everyone else around me for something I did!

Devon: on the contrary my sweet, I don't hate you at all. In fact , Im in love with you and the child that we have together! Soon we will go away somewhere far and no one will ever find us!

Riconia: But what about my family, my friends, the hospital, and my fiancee?! Don't you think they will miss me? Especially miss Trinity and the child that Im carrying they may never get to meet???

Devon: They will be fine! People leave all the time and they move on! As for Jawaan, he wont be much of a problem because from what I have been informed his love for you hasn't been that genuine..

Riconia: His love isn't genuine?! He's hiding something!? There it goes again! You and Tony apparently have some on Jawaan that he has done. What is it?! I wanna know right now!

Devon: I would love to tell but right now I plan on getting ourselves ready for the little trip we will be taking.

Riconia: Trip?! What trip?! I am not going anywhere with you. Unless its to take you to hell!

Devon: Wowwwww, Feistiness that I live of you is still there..Tony keep an eye on her while I go get everything ready for us.

Tony looks with fear and uncertainty.

Tony: Yes..sir.

Devon walks out of the room.

Sudeenly, Tony goes and run to Riconia.

Tony: Look, I didn't know about any trip, plans, none of that that he has in store for you, but I am getting you out of here!

Riconia looks in surprise.

Scene 7: Alexandria Police Department

Gary, Rick, and Trina walk into the interrogation room and Gary closes the door.

Gary: Okay I need to tell both of you something serious!

Rick: Okay, go ahead..

Gary: Well, Gary as you probably know has been involved in some major cases and stuff like that where he has to be admitted undercover..

Trina: Yeah, things like drug bust and all that but nothing like major! Right?!

Gary: Right, but recently Tony has started acting very strange and it all happened right after Riconia's disappearance.

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Gary is walking in the interrogation room, but he waits as he hears Tony on the phone with someone.

Tony: Hey, yes she is all taken care of and she is still tied up to the heating system. Huh?..Yes she all secured, I will let you know when Im on my way to continue my watch on her.
Alright Boss.

Tony hangs up the phone and he turns around to see Gary standing there.

Tony: Ummm, Uncle Boss..Whats up?!

Gary: Don't you whats up me Tony, who the hell were you just talking too?!

Tony: Okay, I know this sounds bad but..

Gary: Your damn right it sounds bad..It sounds like your talking to the man who kidnapped your cousin!

Tony: Your right..I am.

Gary: Okay, How long have you been communicating with him?!

Tony: For a few days now..

Gary: So why haven't you talked to the other officers on duty or something?! We could started looking..

Tony: Look Uncle you need to calm down okay!

Gary: What the hell do you mean it has nothing to do with me! your cousin, my niece is in grave danger and your telling me to calm down?!

Gary pulls his phone out and starts dialing.

Tony: Who are you calling?!

Gary: Im calling the Comissioner to tell him whats been going on right under his nose!

Tony: You cant do that!!!

Gary: And give me a good reason why I shouldn't?!

Tony: Because Im in deep in a major case for the WSB!

Gary looked in shock.


Rick: Wait wait wait, hold on! So Devon knew about this and couldn't tell about our daughters kidnappers because he is working for the WSB?!

Gary: Exactly..apparently they called him in under high requirement to catch Devon Bell. It seems that he has been doing more than just pimping women and selling drugs. He is widespread Mobster. Almost on same level as the Jerome or Corinthos families.

Rick: Okay, so Tony knew about Devon and what was going on?! What the hell! why didn't couldn't tell anyone in the squads or the Comissioner so we can eventually help him stop Devon faster.

Gary: Because apparently Tony wouldn't want himself or Riconia getting hurt by the hands of Devon with her being pregnant and the recent kidnapping of Trinity. Would you want to risk the lives of RIconia and Trinity because he was found out?!

Rick and Trina look.

Scene 8: Alexandria Park

RJ: Wait what?!

Kayla: You just said that you were in love with me..is that..is that true? Are you..in love with me?!

RJ walks around and looks in space thinking.

Kayla: I know what I heard! IT was loud and clear..are you actually in love with me?

RJ: You know what yeah! Yeah im in love with you Kayla! I have never been in love so I don't know what to feel but I know that this is it! This is love and I feel IT for you. You make me so happy and you know exactly the right words to say to keep me calm and I don't know what I would be right now if I wasn't with you.

Kayla looks in surprise and stand there in silence.

RJ: Look I know that you probably want to just walk away because you aren't in that position yet, but I just had to say that..

Suddenly Kayla runs up too RJ and kisses him.

Kayla: Don't ever say that Im not in the position because from where Im standing this is the PERFECT position for loving someone.

Kayla and RJ look then RJ's phone rings.

RJ: Hey umm its my Mom. I told I would meet her tonight to talk but..

Kayla: No, no go! You need to talk to your mom; she will always be the number one in your life. So go!

RJ: You sure?!

Kayla: GO OKAY?!

RJ: OKay, but hey I love you.

Kayla: I love you more..

RJ walks away as Kayla stands there.

Kayla: I love you so much RJ.

Kayla looks at her phone and sees a picture of them together.

Soon the scene flips to her conversation with Laura:

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Laura and Kayla are sitting in her office.

Kayla: Dr. Dougherty, I don't know what to do?! I know RJ loves me but its Ana. She is always there and she just wont stay away!

Laura: Okay, well have you talked to her?!

Kayla: ONce, but apparently the point hasn't come cross.

Laura: Well I think you need to confront her and speak your mind. Put your foot down and tell her that its you and RJ not her and RJ.

Kayla: You're right.

Laura: Look, some girls will soon need to understand their boundaries. If you don't tell them whats real and put them in there place then nothing changes but in their favor. So you go and talk to her and you make sure that you get your point across anyway possible.


Kayla begins smirking.

Kayla: Doc, trust me I will get my point across.

Kayla walks away.

Scene 9: Ryan's Apartment

Ana is walking to the door and begins knocking.

Ana: Ryan?! Hey Ryan!

No one answers.

Ana: Hey open up its Ana. I need to talk to you. I got pizza.

No one answers.

Ana: CMon can I please come in?!

Suddenly Someone opens the door and Ana looks in shock.

Ana: Heeyyyyyy..Wowwwww.

Suddenly the camera focuses on the door with Erika standing in the door with Ryan's shirt on with surprise at seeing her cousin/unknown sister.

Scene 10: Southern California Hospital

Lorie: Soo, what you found its nothing serious right..?

Nancy: Umm, have you been feeling sick in the morning at all?

Lorie: Um a lil bit. Kinda naucious and throwing up..

Nancy: Okay, what about dizziness or higher mood swings???

Lorie: I mean not really but..doctor can you please just tell me what is going on and what you found?!

Nancy looks at Lorie.

Nancy: Lorie, we found out that you were pregnant.

Lorie looks with shock.

Scene 11: The Abandoned Building

Riconia: Wait what is going on?! Why are you letting me go Tony?

Tony: Look, Im undercover okay?! I just need you to listen and follow my lead okay?!

Riconia: Oh god thank you, you don't know what I was thinking about doing to you when I got out of here!

Tony: Hahahaha Well You wont have to now. So hurry up and lets get out of here before.

Suddenly Riconia sees a gun.

Riconia: OH MY GOD TONY WATCH OUT!

The gun goes off and fades to the ending credits.


"Next on Alexandria..."


Lorie (to Nancy): What do I was pregnant?!

Ana (to Erika): I was calling Ryan's phone, but I see why you weren't answering.

Gary (to Rick): There have signs of shooting at the abandon complex building.

Devon (to Riconia): You me are going for a little ride!
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ebard
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Nice cliffhanger!

Liked the shoutout to GH fans also!
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SoapHW
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The kidnapping story has run a little long for me at this point. I am excited for it to end. I loved the GH shout out too!
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