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| Episode 21: Riconia is in grave danger! | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 10 2013, 04:21 AM (112 Views) | |
| MasonRico | Jun 10 2013, 04:21 AM Post #1 |
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![]() "Riconia is in grave danger!" Scene 1: Ryan's Apartment Ana is shocked to see Erika standing in Ryan's apartment door in just his shirt. Ana: Wowwww. Erika: Ana?! What the..what are you doing here?! Ana: I would ask you the same thing, buttttt from the look of things it looks like you guys were playing a little game. I guess you won based on the shirt your wearing! Erika: This isn't what it looks like! Ana walks in the apartment. Ana: Really?! Then tell me what it is then! I am dying to hear! Erika: ..Wet! Ana: Oh god! Really your hormones couldn't control themselves?! Erika: No stupid! I got wet and Ryan offered me to wear some of his old clothes. Ana: He wore that shirt today and its brand new! Just admit cuz, you and Ryan had sex! Ana sits with a giant smile on her face. Suddenly Ryan walks into the room with just his towel. Ryan: Hey Erika. Ready for round..two?! Ana: Well guess you don't have to admit it now! Erika sighs as Ryan is in shock. Scene 2: Alexandria Police Department Rick and Trina are standing there after hearing all the information they hear from Gary. Rick: Okay, so where is Tony now?! Do you think he is with Riconia or Devon? Gary: Maybe, but I wouldn't go wherever they are yet. Because we don't know what position Tony is in right now.. Trina: why did the WSB pick him out of all people?! Why couldn't they pick from their selection of all other agents they should have sent out? Gary: Frisco Jones is on another assignment at the moment, Anna Devane is the Comissioner of the Port Charles Police Department, and agents like John McBain are off on another disclosed assignment so were not sure what is going on, but all I know is that Tony accepted the assignment given to him and its his responsibility to finish it. Suddenly an officer walks in the interrogation room and interrupts. Officer: Sir, we have a problem. The officer gives Gary the report. Gary's face suddenly changes. Rick: Gary, whats wrong?! Is something wrong? Gary: There have been signs of shooting in the abandon complex building. Trina: OKay? So what got you so worked up. Gary: Tony's police cruiser was spotted in the area. Rick and Trina look at each other. Scene 3: The Abandoned Building Riconia is shown with her eyes closed as she slowly opens them. She looks around to see nothing has changed but Tony laying on her. Riconia: Oh Gawd, its okay. Tony get up its okay. Suddenly she realizes that Tony isn't responding. Ricoina: Tony, Tony whats wrong? This isn't funny Tony, the game is over! Soon she feels blood running on her clothes and legs. Riconia: Oh my GOD! TOny please wake up! Please wake up right now, this is not funny! Devon: Well this is a surprise. Riconia looks up with shock. Devon: Its crazy how the mighty WSB agent wasn't able to withstand one small bullet to the heart. Riconia: You bastard! You killed him! You killed my cousin! And you won get away with it! Do you hear me? You're gonna pay! Devon: SHUT UP! JUST SHUT UP WILL YOU?! IM TIRED OF HEARING YOUR CONSTANT SCREECHING AND NAGGING! NOW GET UP! Devon pulls Riconia up from the ground! Riconia tries to resist as she constantly calls out Tony's name. Devon: He cant hear because he is dead! LEts go. Riconia: Where are you taking me?! Devon: Don't worry about it. Just know. You and me are going for a little ride. Riconia begins to cry. Scene 4: Southern California Hospital Lorie is trying to comprehend the information that Nancy just gave her. Lorie: So wait a minute Nurse?! Im not following. Did you just say WAS?! Nancy: Yes, thats what I said Lorie. Lorie: First, I didn't even I was pregnant! When did this happen?! Nancy: It says that you were entering at about 5 weeks. Lorie: 5 weeks?! Thats impossible I haven't.. Lorie then thinks and remembers that she started her meetings with Jawaan at around that time and also her one night stand with Darius around that time too. Lorie: So, nurse I'm still trynna understand. Im pregnant, but you keep saying was.. Nancy: Lorie, I'm sorry to tell you this but you had a miscarriage.. Lorie looks in shock as the scene fades to the opening credits. Scene 5: Southern California Hospital Lorie: A miscarriage?! I had a miscarriage.. Nancy: Yes, after taking that fall. The baby took most of the impact. Causing your miscarriage. Lorie begins crying and comes to hug her. Lorie: I cant believe I lost my baby! I hear about all but its me!..I LOST MY BABYYYY..AHHHHHHH!!!!! Nancy: Its okay, its okay. You will get through this..Now that you know the only thats left is us telling the father of the baby the news. Lorie: Oh my god no we cannot do that!!! Nancy: Why not?! Darius has the right to know Lorie. Lorie: No he doesn't! Because IM not even sure if he is the father of the baby!!!! Nancy looks in confusion. Scene 6: Alexandria Police Department Rick: Tony's cruiser?! Gary: Yeah, apparently its parked ride outside the building. Trina: So Im guessing thats where Devon maybe? Gary: Possibly! Rick: Then Riconia is probably there too! We have to go.. NOW! Trina: Okay lets go! Gary: Wait, Trina I think it would be better if you stayed here. Trina: What?! No, if my daughter is in trouble then I am going! Trina tries to walk out but Rick grabs her arm. Trina: What are doing let go of me! Rick: Just listen to him. I honestly think you need to stay here too. Just to stay out of danger. How about you go to my mother's house? She would love to see you! She complains about not even seeing you since you got into town. Trina: Hmph alright, but you better call me and keep me posted as soon as you get information! Rick: Alright, Trina: Hey Rick! Please be careful. Rick smirks. Rick: Aren't I always?! Rick and Gary leave and head to find Riconia as Trina looks and starts to blush and cry. Scene 7: Ryan's Apartment Erika is putting her jeans back on as Ana is talking to Ryan about discovering him and Erika together. Ana: Yeah I was calling Ryans' phone, but I see why you weren't answering it. Ryan: Look I'm sorry okay. Didnt mean to miss your call! Ana: Look, I don't care why you missed my call! Im just glad that this is the reason. You guys are back together!!!! Ryan: Um we actually didn't decide on that yet but..if Erika would like to get back together with me. I would really love having her company again. Erika suddenly stops as she is putting her jacket on. Erika: Umm..well.. Ana: Look you don't have to answer that now but we need to talk about this right now! Erika: Right now?! But didn't you have to talk to Ryan.. Ana: Oh that can wait! My main concern is that your back in your groove her at home! Lets go. Erika: What about the pizza?! Its not gonna eat itself! Ana: You're right.. Ana throws the box at Ryan. Ana: You can eat it! Its all yours. Don't worry about paying me back, but if ya do don't hesitate to throw a couple dollars.. Ryan: Ha! I will keep that in mind! Ana: Alright come on Erika lets go! Erika: Wait.. Ana is pulling Erika as she is trying to say goodbye. Erika: Hey..text me later okay?! Ryan: Alright. Goodnight. Ana: GOODNIGHT! Ana slams the door. Ryan looks and laughs as he carries the pizza to the couch. Scene 8: Southern California Hospital Nancy: What do you mean that you don't know who the father of this baby is Lorie? Lorie: Okay. Yes I did sleep with Darius, but I slept with someone else.. Nancy: Who??? Lorie: I slept with.. Suddenly a loud boom is heard the ER lobby. Nancy: Ughhh, we will talk about this later! Nancy runs out into the ER lobby and sees Jawaan on the ground. Jacob is being held back by Darius and a male nurse. Cindy comes and helps him up after she sees what is going on. Nancy walks over to Jawaan and checks on him. Nancy: Jawaan are you all right? Jacob: He wont be okay after I Am DONE WITH HIM!!! LET ME GO DARIUS! Darius: As much as I would love too sir. I just cant. Nancy: Can someone please tell me what is going on here? Jacob: You're young grandson in law over here slept with my daughter behind my back while his fiancee is missing! Thats why in this situation now!!!! Nancy: What?!?! JAcob: Yeahp! He not only got someone hurt, but he got himself hurt. Jawaan: And how is that sir?! Jacob: Physically and Financially! Return your badge and clean out your desk! YOU ARE NO LONGER WELCOME IN MY FORCE!!!! OR ANYONE ELSES SQUAD FOR THAT MATTER!!! YOU HEAR ME?!??! YOU ARE DONE! Jacob suddenly rips his arms from Darius and storms out of the hospital. Darius looks out the windows and sighs as he sees the Commissioner leaving. Darius: See what you did?! You caused ALLLL of this. When can I go see my girlfriend? Nancy: She is okay go ahead. Darius: Thank you. Darius walks away as Nancy looks at Jawaan with an evil stare. Nancy: Now I think that you should go home and get some sleep. Enough to make you THINK and realize what you did WAS SO STUPID, IRRESPONSIBLE, and DUMB! Do you hear me..? Jawaan sits is silence. Nancy: I know I am not talking to myself. I said DO YOU HEAR ME?! Jawaan: Hmmm..Yes Ma'am. Jawaan gets up and goes for the door of the ER. Nancy looks in the distance as she looks stressed. Scene 9: The Abandoned Building Gary and Rick are running in. When they find an unconscious bloody Tony on the floor. Gary: Tony! Rick: what the hell? Gary goes and tries to shake him awake, but he is dead. Gary starts to cry. Rick: Wow, I don't know what the hell is..Whoa Trinity! Rick sees Trinit laying on the chair asleep. Rick: Come here come here. Look Gary I found Trinity, she is alive. Gary: I promise I will avenge you nephew. I swear on my life! Rick: Gary, there is no sign of Devon or Riconia anywhere.. They're gone. Gary looks around and wonders what is going on.. Rick: I cant believe that he killed our nephew.. and left his child here uncared for with a dead body. Gary: HE IS GONNA PAY WHEN WE FIND HIM! Rick: But where do we look..he doesn't exactly leave a trail.. Suddenly they here moaning.. They turn around and Tony is slightly alive! Scene 10: Car Devon is driving and listening too music. Devon: Don't worry my sweet, just know that soon we will be together you and me.. The scene shifts to Riconia in the trunk. Thinking about her fiancee and daughter to keep her strength. Riconia then feels she is having contractions! Riconia: Oh no.. Scene 11: Ryan's Apartment Ryan is sitting on his couch eating the last slice of pizza. He then hears a knock at the door. Ryan: Look Ana, I know your probably hungry. But I ate all of it! You shouldn't have.. Ryan then opens the door and is surprised by whose there.. Ryan: Left.. Woman: Come on. Your not surprised yo see me?! Ryan: Carmen?! The camera faces the girl named Carmen. Carmen: Hey lil bro, long time no see.. Scene 12: Southern California Hospital Nancy is standing at the nurses desk when suddenly someone walks up behind her. Man: Excuse Me. Im in need of some assistance. Nancy: Okay and what can I help with?! Nancy turns and is shocked by who she sees. Nancy: Oh My God! Deacon what the hell are you doing here?! Deacon: Hello there mother. ITs good to see you too! Nancy: Its never good to see you! Deacon begins to smirk as the scene fades to the ending credits. Next on Alexandria! Tony(to Gary): I know where he is taking her.. Ryan (to Carmen): So wheres Dad these days?! Nancy (to Deacon): What the hell are you doing here?! Deacon (to Nancy): I am here to claim what is rightfully mine!!! Bev (to Trina): You seem worried about more than just about Riconia..but about Rick as well. Darius (to Lorie): I just talked to the nurse..she said something happened to you.. |
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| ebard | Jun 10 2013, 06:08 AM Post #2 |
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I think now that Alexandria is airing weekly instead of daily you need to switch the pacing of the stories as well. This kidnapping story has been going on for WAY too long for a primetime series. It was way faster paced today than it has been but still needs to pick up some. |
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| SoapHW | Jun 25 2015, 10:48 AM Post #3 |
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I agree the kidnapping storyline has been in progress for way, way too long. But it was still a decent episode. |
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