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Episode 22: Nancy lashes out at Deacon.
Topic Started: Jun 12 2013, 02:23 AM (127 Views)
MasonRico
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Nancy lashes out at Deacon.

Scene 1: Ryan's Apartment

Ryan is shocked to see his sister Carmen standing at his front door.

Ryan: Carmen?!

Carmen: Hey lil bro, long time no see..

Ryan: Umm yeah try two years! What are you doing here?!

Carmen: Hey sis its good to see ya?! Wow you look great?! DO none of those type of questions pop in your when you see family after so long?

Ryan: sorry sorry..its just this is such a surprise. You're not the type of person to just show up like with no type of announcement. Not your style.

Carmen: How do you know my style?!

Ryan: Years ago. I was eight you are 10 and you announced that you were coming down stairs to get your breakfast..

Carmen: That was one time!

Ryan: TRY EVERY MORNING!

Carmen: Well things change and so have I!

Ryan: And what might those things be?!

Carmen: Im moving back home!

Ryan looks in surprise.

Scene 2: Southern California Hospital

Nancy: What the hell are you doing here?!

Deacon: Hi Mom! Good to see you too!

Nancy walks away from the desk and tries to go to the ER, but Deacon corners her.

Deacon: Wait where are you going?! Five minutes here and your not gonna greet me, hug me, anything?!

Nancy: I think at least acknowledging your existence at the desk was enough of some acknowledgement.

Deacon: Now is that any way to talk to your son who has been gone for soooo many years?!

Nancy: STEP! MY STEP SON! You lost the title of my real son when you ran the Buchanan Corporation to the GROUND!

Deacon face becomes upset.

The scene shifts to Darius in the ER.

Darius walks to Lorie's room and sees Nick.

Darius: Dr. Dougherty! How is Lorie? Is everything okay?

Nick: Yes, everything is fine. After we checked for her situation and all the things after the fall she should be all ready to go soon.

Darius: Situation? *mumbles*

Nick: Look I have another patient so if you want you can go back and see her.

Darius: alright thanks.

Nick: No problem.

Darius walks in and sees Lorie laying in her bed.

Lorie: Heyyyy.

Darius: Hey, Dr. Dougherty said I could come back here and check up on you.

Lorie: Yeah we just finish some test so everything should almost be done FINALLY!

Darius: Hahaha how are you feeling?!

Lorie: Im feeling okay.

Darius: Are you sure?!

Lorie: What do you mean? Im feeling better and Im ready to get out this bed. I think Im pretty sure.

Darius: Well I just talked to Dr. Dougherty..he said something happened to you..

Lorie face shows nervousness.

Scene 3: Bev's House

Someone is knocking at her door.

Bev: Coming!

They keep knocking on the door.

Bev: Hold on! I'm coming! Oh man these old legs.

Bev then opens the door to Trina standing at her door.

Bev: Trina!

Trina: Hey, Mrs. Washington..How are you?

Bev: Im good Im good. Please come in! Its so good to finally see you too bad that its under these circumstances as well. Any word on Riconia..

Trina: That I know of No. Gary and Rick however got some lead of shooting at an abandoned building where Tony's cruiser was supposedly seen.

Bev: Tony's cruiser? But what would he be doing there..

Trina: Apparently he was helping Devon the whole time and we didn't know it!

Bev: Helping Devon?! Kidnapping his cousin..That just doesn't sound like him!

Trina: Wait, but its okay. Gary informed me and Rick that Tony apparently was undercover for the WSB in helping take down Devon. He just couldn't tell anyone because if he did then he would have put you, me , Rick, Gary, and all the other people he cared about at risk. Including himself.

Scene 4: The Abandoned Building

Gary: Tony you're awake! Don't try and speak we gotta get you some help. All units we need an ambu..

Tony takes the walkie and stops Gary.

Tony: No don't..please.. don't..waste time.

Rick: Come on Tony. I know you wanna die a hero or something , but please do that another day alright! Were getting you help.

Tony: By the time..ugh I get there I will already be..

Gary: Shutup!

Tony: Listen! Please!

Gary: No, We gotta get you..

Tony: I know where Riconia and Devon are!!!

Gary and Rick look at Tony as they now listen to what he has to say.

The opening credits appear.



Scene 5: The Abandoned Building

Gary: Wait wait, talk slow and take your time. You know where Riconia is?

Tony: Yes, Devon took her and drove..drove off somewhere..

Rick: Do you know where they could have gone?

Tony: De..Devon has..a loft..near a giant cliff..

Gary: Giant cliff?!

Rick: Beats me. Tell us more about this cliff..

Tony: It..has..a view…a view.

Tony slowly loses consciousness and his hands falls out of Garys hand.

Gary: Gary con con nephew! What view?!

Rick: Oh my God, Gary he is gone..

Gary begins to cry and the officers come up to the room.

Gary: Alright. Get he's gone. Investigate this area! And please bag him up and be careful please..

Gary and Rick walk out of the room and down the stairs.

Rick: this cliff, I wonder wht cliff that he is talking about..

Gary: I don't know but were gonna try and figure it out.

Gary and Rick get to the door when suddenly Jawaan walks through the door.

Rick: Jawaan what are you doing?!

Jawaan: Umm..the commissioner told me to come back you up. I heard about the location through the intercom. So did you find her?!

Rick: No, we didn't..

Jawaan: Oh my god..what the hell?!

Rick: But But we did get a lead from Tony..

Jawaan: Tony?! Well where is he? Let question him and gets some more info.

Rick: We cant do that.

JAwaan: WHY the hell not?!

Gary: Because HE IS DEAD ROOKIE!

Jawaan is surprised.

Scene 6: The Abandoned Building

Bev comes in the room and brings some coffee and some cake.

Bev: Here.

Trina: No I'm okay!

Bev: Child you look sicker than your patients. Now you better take this coffee!

Trina: Ha okay. Been gone but you still don't let me go without taking care of myself.

BEv: Well of course. Anyone who comes in this house must be nurtured and fed. No one leaves here unsatisfied.

Trina: Such a motherly touch. I see where Rick got his kindness from.

Bev: Speaking of Rick. hows it been?

Trina: Huh?!

Bev: How has it been? Being back home where you grew up and seeing Rick with Vonny again..

Trina: Wow. Hahaha um I mean its okay I guess. They make each other happy I can tell! And thats all that matters right?!

Trina walks over to the window and looks out soon she has a flashback in the interrogation room.

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Rick: Just listen to him. I honestly think you need to stay here too. Just to stay out of danger. How about you go to my mother's house? She would love to see you! She complains about not even seeing you since you got into town.

Trina: Hmph alright, but you better call me and keep me posted as soon as you get information!

Rick: Alright,

Trina: Hey Rick! Please be careful.

Rick smirks.

Rick: Aren't I always?!

Rick and Gary leave and head to find Riconia as Trina looks and starts to blush and cry.


Trina then starts blushing again.

Bev walks over.

Trina: Its just that I'm worried and Im trynna cling on to something strong and good to distract me from the bad things thats been going on since I got here. Especially Riconia!

Bev: You seemed worried about more than just Riconia..but about Rick as well.

Trina looks at Bev and begins to cry.

Scene 7: Ryan's Apartment

Ryan: Wait your moving back?!

Carmen: Don't act so surprised okay?! I just needed to finally start settling down from all the traveling and stuff. Now what better place to do that than my hometown?

Ryan: Alaska?! Hawaii?! Pennsylvania?! I heard Llanview nice this time of year!

Carmen: Alright Alright Alright! Why do you have such toward me right now?!

Ryan: Because every time there is more than one Buchanan in the same town, let alone the same room! There is trouble!

Carmen: Wow! Im glad you speak so highly of the family!

Ryan: come on Carmen you know that its true?! Next thing you're gonna say is that Dad is back! Speaking of Dad. Where is he these days?!

Carmen looks and is nervous to tell him that their father is in town.

Ryan: Oh no! I know that face. Its your nervous face! Don't tell me Dad's back in town too?!

Scene 8: Southern California Hospital

Nancy: What the hell are you doing here?!

Deacon: What do you mean what the hell am I doing here?! Im here too reclaim what is rightfully mine!

Nancy: Now what would that be?!

Deacon: You know exactly what it is Mother! Im here to get back the Buchanan empire!

Nancy: With what staff, what employees, what supporters?! Exactly who would you get to support you getting back your company?!

Deacon: I will find some people. Sponsors anyone! I will get this company back on its feet! With my 20% of it I will make sure that nothing is lost!

Nancy: Wow I cant believe you just came at me with 20%, I hold up too 40% of that company and nothing you can do will get it out of my hands. You hear me?!

Deacon: You forgot one thing! My kids each having up too 20% as well since there is no one else left. My sister gave away her shares to Carmen because she dint wanna get involved in this war.

Nancy: Maybe she should since she is the only one in the family other than me who has some sense. Ana anyway thats 40%..Its a tie! No way will you get Ryan to give his shares..

Deacon: How are you so sure?!

Nancy: After you caused him so much grief in your life and caused this whole family so much pain. Especially the company falling and the HEART ATTACK THAT KILLED YOUR FATHER, THEIR GRANDFATHER, AND MY HUSBAND! I DONT THINK THAT HE WOULD WANNA LOOK AT YOU! SO IF YOU DONT EXCUSE ME I HAVE PATIENTS!

Nancy walks away and leaves Deacon lost for words.

Scene 9: Ryan's Apartment

Ryan: Wow, Dad's back. For what I don't know and guess what I don't wanna know!

Carmen: Look okay, I don't know why he is back, but I think it has something to do with Grandpa's company.

Ryan: Buchanan Co.?! What would he want with that?

Carmen: I don't know, but I know that he will probably be on his way with some kind of proposal for you. Especially since were old enough to get involved.

Ryan: are you..ya know getting involved?!

Carmen: I have one life Ryan..and I don't know think I wanna waste if over a piece of the past..but it's Dad so I feel like I have to support him.

Ryan: So your not sure??

Carmen: I don't know. Oh my god I need a drink! This is too much and I think that we should just stop talking about it!

Ryan: Yes please!

Carmen: Hey, since we need to catch up, I want drinks, and you want to get out of this whole convo! Lets go to the bar!

Ryan: Ummm I don't know.

Carmen: Come on it would be fun!

Ryan: Nah you go on without me!

Carmen: Ughh, okay! Don't say I didn't ask.

Ryan walks Carmen to the door.

Carmen: Hey, even with our differences, it WAS good to see you again.

Ryan: Same.

Carmen walks out the door. Ryan closes it.

Ryan: sighs, This just spells trouble.

Scene 10: Southern California Hospital

Darius: So what happened?!

Lorie begins to cry.

Darius: Cmon why are you crying?! A pretty girl like you should not be crying.

Lorie: its just that I have done some terrible things these past couple of weeks and its all coming back to haunt me!

Darius: con it couldn't have been that bad!

Lorie: Yes, you don't understand its that bad!

Darius: It couldn't anymore worse than you having sex with Jawaan. On more than one occasion anyway..

Lorie: Yeah it worse..

Darius: ha, look its not like you were pregnant by him or anything! Now that would be bad..

Lorie looks down at her hands and begins crying worse..

Darius: Wait, mum I was joking.. I was joking Lorie relax!

Lorie: Im sorry.

Darius: But you're not kidding. Oh my god he got you pregnant!

Lorie: I was pregnant..

Darius: Lorie, what do you mean was???

Lorie: I had a miscarriage Darius!!!! THATS WHAT I MEAN! I LORIE CASSANDRA LOAN HAD A MISCARRIAGE!

Darius begins to cry and doestn know what to do..

Lorie: Please I just don't you to hate me..I just want you too just..be there for me.. because I don't know it anyone else will..

Darius: I..I don't know..Lorie..I just.. I gotta go!

Darius runs for the door.

Lorie: DARIUS!!! DARIUS!!! PLEASE COME BACKKK..

The cameras fades away as Lorie puts her hands in her face and cries.

Scene 11: Bev's Apartment

Trina and Bev are walking to the door.

Trina: Thank you again Mrs. Washington, the hospitality is just exactly what I needed.

Bev: Anytime Trina, and call me Bev.

Trina: Okay, Bev.

Trina and Bev laugh.

Bev: Now, be safe okay?! Riconia will be found and we will get her and you back in that hospital helping those patients.

Trina: I hope so!

Bev: And also..while your here. You may have history, but I think you have a future that you can write on your own making it your own, without Rick.

Trina: I have faith in that. Bye.

Bev: Bye.

Bev closes the door.

Trina looks at her phone and sees a picture of her and Riconia.

Trina: We will find you soon baby I promise.

Trina walks to her car.

Scene 12: The Abandoned Building

Jawaan: Dead?! You mean Devon killed him?!

Gary: Yes, and he was the only one that had a lead on where Devon and Riconia next destination is!

Rick: The only thing that we have from it is a cliff near here..

Jawaan: Wait, a cliff..Did he say this cliff had some type of view of the city?!

Rick: He didn't say the city, but he did mention the view..Do you know what he is talking about?!

Jawaan: I think I have a hunch! Come on lets go!

Gary, Rick, and Jawaan are heading toward the police cruiser.

Gary starts the car and turns the gear in drive. The cruise is speeding onto the main roads as the scene fades.

the ending credits appear.



Next on Alexandria!


Ana (to Erika): Do you think that your falling for Ryan again?!

Deacon (to Ryan): Son how are you?!

Darius (to Kris): Man I really don't know how I can forgive her..

Jawaan (to Rick): Don't worry we don't have that much farther!

Riconia: Oh my god..Please don't tell me its time!!!!
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ebard
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Minus the ongoing kidnapping storyline this was the strongest episode ever from you!

I'm in LOVE with the Buchanan family company drama already! Carmen and Deacon were great additions!

Bev/Trina and Lori/Darius scenes grabbed me as well.

Good work!
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SoapHW
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The kid napping story takes away a bit from an otherwise great episode. I hope the kidnapping drama ends within the next few episodes I read. But that said, I enjoyed this overall.
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