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EPISODE 147 (June 28)
Topic Started: Jul 1 2013, 01:28 AM (74 Views)
fugeesfan247
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ebard
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I forgot to comment on this yesterday. Good episode, not too much progressed. I think you're trying to squeeze too many storylines into each episode. Maybe just feature 2 or 3 heavily and then rotate the stories, like today I think I could 6 different storylines taking place. A bit much for one episode.

Your dialogue has VASTLY improved though since you started writing. Great work!
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