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| Episode 24: Shocking Events Happen! | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Aug 12 2013, 10:05 PM (140 Views) | |
| MasonRico | Aug 12 2013, 10:05 PM Post #1 |
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![]() "SHOCKING Events Happen!" Scene 1: Mt. Levi Cliff Jawaan, Gary, and Rick stand in a stand still as they try to get Riconia back safely from Devon. Devon: Cmon Jawaan! Lets hear it! Lets hear the confession to everything that you have done. Riconia: Jawaan..ahhhh. you don’t have to admit to anything because you havent done any.. Jawaan: No..no hes right. Rick and Gary look in shock as Devon has a smirk on his face. Riconia: Jawaan what are you talking about?! Jawaan: For once in his pathetic life..ughh he is right Riconia. I do need to apologize for what Ive done. Riconia looks with confusion. Scene 2: Silverados Laura walks into Silverados on the phone with Nick. The role of Laura will now be portrayed by Jennifer Aniston. Laura: So I called the food in. it should be ready in a few..No I don’t need you to stay on the phone with me while I wait, you need to get back to your patients. Okay, see you when I get back to the hospital. Bye. Laura walks to the counter. Laura: Excuse me, I have an order for Dougherty! ..Thank you. Man: Well looks like its my lucky day. Laura turns around and its Deacon. Laura: Deacon.. what I have I done to deserve this torture of your company?! Deacon: Wowwww, that’s how you talk to an old friend. Laura: Yes, old..as in you were my friend and then you stabbed me in the back and you lost that privilege! Deacon: Oh Laura, Laura Laura Laura. Cant we just let bygones be bygones?! Laura: Do dogs fly and fish know how to tap dance?!?! Deacon: See that humor! That’s what always attracted me to you. Laura: Oh my God! Youre still here? Deacon: Yes I am, I am going to keep being here until you hear me out! Laura: Here you out about what if you dont mind me asking?! Deacon: My plea for forgiveness and the privilege of being your friend again?! Laura looks with shock and surprise as she laughs at him. Scene 3: Washington Estates RJ is walking into his house. RJ: Mom! You here?! Dad..anyone?! Vonny then walks down the stairs after hearing RJs yelling. RJ: Mom! Vonny: Hey! RJ: Hey, I ummm got your message earlier and I came straight here. It sounded urgent so whats up? Vonny walks up to RJ and hugs him tightly. RJ: Wow, what was that for? Vonny: Because.. I love you, youre my son, and as my son I like to make sure you are okay and knowing when I made a bad decision on my part regarding you and your life. RJ: Mom, you haven’t made any mistakes. Youre an awesome mother and I wouldnt want anyone to have that role. Vonny: Oh my god you talk like Im a god! Hahaha RJ: Close enough, but what is it that you supposedly made a mistake. Vonny: Treating you like a baby when you definitely a man. Oh gawd Im about to cry, but I wanted to say sorry and apologize.. RJ: Apologize for what Mom? Vonny: Trying to keep you and Kayla apart.. Scene 4: Rogero Home Erika is pulling up to Anas house and gets out of the car. Erika: Wow, I could get use to driving this bad boy! Okay, so I need to get some shoes, a dress or something, ummm..this is gonna be hard. Erika is walking into the house and the camera shifts to the bushes outside of the house. There, someone out from the bushes with a hood. That person is Kayla. Kayla: Now, its time to eliminate the competition.. Goodbye , Ana. Scene 5: Washington Estates RJ: Wait, did I just hear you right because I think what I heard was is that you apologize for trying to keep me and Kayla apart. Vonny: Yes I am surprised as you that I said those exact words out of my mouth.. but yes I said it. I apologize for trying to keep you too apart. RJ: Any reason in the sudden change? Vonny: Yes, I realized that I need to let you grow and make your own decisions so you can learn from them. I cant control your love life just because I cant control my own. RJ: Wait is there something going on with you and Dad? Vonny: Well lets just say that there are a few bumps in the road here and there, but we will be able to overcome them. I have a feeling. RJ: Since I know those bumps arent Kayla.. Im guessing that those bumps would be someone by the name of Trina? Vonny looks with surprise at how her son was able to figure it out. Scene 6: Mt. Levi Cliff Jawaan: Its true Riconia, I have to confess to you. Devon: Finally, the truth will finally be revealed. Jawaan: Will you just shut up for one second?! Devon: Oh trust me, I will. I definitely wanna hear what you have to say for yourself after all the stuff that youve been up too! See Ive been watching you Jawaan. Watching you and have my men watch day in and day out neglect such a beautiful woman and her child. Jawaan: Our Child! Devon: Come now, do you really think you are in a good position to be a father?! Jawaan: Better than you any day you son of a bitch! Because youre one to talk when you abandoned your own daughter in a building by herself. Devon: IT had to be done for us to get out of there safely and undetected! Jawaan: Well look how far that got you huh?! Youre cornered, nowhere to go and we found my wife. So I will need to let her go now! Devon: Why do you keep stalling you idiot! You keep thinking im gonna forget that you have to make amends with her and ask for repentence for your sins! NO! Now start talking or this gun will start making its mark on your dear wife here. Scene 7: Silverados Laura: Repentance? Deacon: Yes. Laura: From me? Deacon: Yes. Laura: you must have fell on your head while you were out of town, because I would never fall for your sleazy ass again. You lost my friendship.. Deacon: Well I recall that it was a lil more than a friendship.. we were going to get married Laura and we were going to be happy with a son. Laura: Yes, my son. That I lost because of you and your rivalries with these partnering companies. Deacon: I never meant for you to get caught in my war. Laura: Really?! Well guess what I did and because of you and your wars for Buchanan Enterprise. Someones henchmen came after me and when I gave birth it caused me to have a stillborn!, you caused your fathers death, and you lost the love that you apparently would do anything for! The waiter then comes to the counter and says Lauras order is ready. Laura: Excuse me. Laura picks up her bag and heads to the door. Deacon then grabs her arm. Deacon: Laura I.. Laura: Get your hands off of me! And go to hell! Laura leaves out and Deacon sighs with regret. Deacon: I think that went a little better than I hoped. Scene 8: The Washington Estate Vonny: Wow, is it that obvious? RJ: Well, I know she is back in town and bet she has had contact with Dad so I just put two and two together. Vonny: Just like your father. RJ: Mom, look dont worry. I know that Trina and Dad have history.. Vonny: and that resulted in you having a sister. RJ: BUT! Dad loves you I dont think he would trade you in for anyone in the world. Vonny: You really think so honey? RJ: I know so.. besides if me and Kayla are still together then you guys will definitely be together. Because I actually can say Kayla has changed and we have become stronger by talking and being open to one another so I think talking would probably. Help the situation. Vonny: Your right honey, Im so glad you are growing up into such a fine young man. If Kayla makes you happy Im happy. RJ: Good thats allI want is to have everyone be happy. Vonny: However, RJ: Oh no. Vonny: Now listen hear me out. I know you and her are together now, but I want you to know that I want your career and dreams to come first. Because you have potential with your art and you can be big with this. And apparently someone else thinks so too. RJ: Wait what are you talking about? Vonny: I wanted to wait until your father got back but I think that is a good time to give you this especially with your sister missing and everything. RJ: What is it? Vonny goes in her purse and pulls out a packet and hands it too RJ. RJ: Oh my God. IS this? Vonny: Like I said son dont hold your dreams aside for love because opportunities wait for no one. Vonny walks into the other room when RJs faces is in shock. The camers goes in and shows the packet says, “London Institute of Performing and Visual Arts.” Scene 9: The Rogero Home Erika walks downstairs with two bags full of clothes. Erika: Ughhh sorry cuz but I never know what to wear so Im gonna make sure that I have options. As Erika is walking downstairs she hears Gerald on the phone in his office. Erika: Wow, uncle Gerald sounds really mad.. Erika goes to the door and puts her head to the door. Listening to Geralds conversation. Gerald: Look, I understand, but I dont think that its the right time to tell her yet. Tanya listen.. Erika: Why is he talking to my mom? And who is he talking? Gerald: If you really think that Erika should know now then we need to get together and figure out together how we are gonns sit down and tell her..the last thing she needs right now is too be blind sided that her dad isnt Eric, but me.. Erika eyes get huge and is surprised by the information she just heard. She begins to cry and grabs her bags and heads for the door. Erika throws all the stuff in the backset and jumps in the car. Erika then turns the key in the ignition and suddenly an explosion is heard from Geralds office. Gerald: What the hell?! Scene 10: Mt. Levi Cliff Jawaan: You know what your right Devon. Im stalling. Its time I came clean. Gary: What the hell is going on son? JAwaan: Dont worry Gary, I got it all covered. I have been lying to Riconia. Riconia: What? Jawaan: I havent been the best husband. Im always worried about what Im gonna do to keep my job, get y life, on and everything that forget about you and our baby. Becoming a cop made me forget about how I left you at home when you werent working and how coming home and your in the bed asleep as you were probably up waiting for me to get home. Im sorry and I wanna apologize. Devon: Wow, thats all? Thats all that you have gotta say? Jawaan: No, you son of a bitch its not. I also wanna say that Im sorry to Rick for leaving his daughter unattended which caused this whole situation. If I was there, none of this would have happened. I love her and I want to make I keep her safe. Rick: Its okay son Its okay. Jawaan: Oh my God! This is ridiculous! IM tired of your stalling! Its time for me too end this load of crap right now! Devon pulls his gun toward Jawaan Jawaan: Get Down! Riconia: AHHHHHH!!!!!! A gunshot goes off! "Next on Alexandria..." RJ (to Kayla): What if we went to London?! Kayla: (to RJ): London?! Rita (to Vonny): Rick is the only man for you and he knows that! Rick (to Trina): We found Riconia! Nancy (to Ryan): Dont let your father get the company! Take it from under him! Gerald: ERIKA!!!!! Riconia (to Jawaan): Im going into labor!!! Jawaan (to Riconia): Seriously?! |
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| ebard | Aug 13 2013, 03:47 AM Post #2 |
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Your writing has gotten better every single episode, and this was your best yet! Great work! You needed to thin the cast a bit, and it looks like you're doing just that! Also, LOVE your opening! The AMC theme song is my favorite! Edited by ebard, Aug 13 2013, 03:48 AM.
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| SoapHW | Jul 26 2015, 08:00 AM Post #3 |
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This was a good episode. |
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