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| Episode #137; OAD: 07/16/2013 | |
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| ebard | Aug 25 2013, 10:11 AM Post #1 |
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Riverview Episode #0137 OAD: 7/16/2013 (Scene 1: Ferry) (Jake and Melanie are on a ferry) Melanie: I’m excited for the concert! Jake: Me too. Melanie: I know that we’re supposed to be here to get the divorce papers rolling but I’m glad we have some time for fun. (Melanie smiles and kisses Jake as someone lurks behind Jake and Melanie in the shadows) (Scene 2: Ron’s Apartment) (Ron enters the living room and Ann’s looking at something on her phone and throws it down out of anger) Ron: What was that all about? Ann: Jake and Melanie are in New York. Ron: How do you know? Ann: He just posted something on Facebook about it. Ron: For some reason I don’t see you and Jake as Facebook friends. Ann: Well we are and he’s in New York with that slut and where is my daughter? Huh? Let me guess, with his mother. His mother isn’t Charlene’s caregiver. He is. Ron: Calm down, we’ll use it in our favor in court. Ann: Oh no, I’m going over right now! (Ann goes to storm off and Ron grabs her arm) Ron: Ann, we need to get some things straight. (Ann gives Ron a shocked look) (Scene 3: Clark’s Penthouse) (Clark enters the penthouse and sets his keys down, when he turns around he sees Amanda sitting on the couch) Clark: What are you doing here? Amanda: I wanted to talk to you. Clark: I don’t think it’s the right time to talk right now. Amanda: What? Why? Clark: Amanda, I’m busy covering up the murder that you’re responsible for. Amanda: How many times are you going to throw that in my face? Clark: Amanda, YOU KILLED A MAN! Amanda: I know, you don’t think that I know what I did? Clark: Apparently not, cause you then tried to frame an innocent person for it. Amanda: Natalie is far from innocent. Clark: What did she do, huh Amanda? What exactly did Natalie do to make you frame her for a murder?! (Clark glares at Amanda) (Scene 4: Governor’s Island) (Jake and Melanie arrive on the island and walk over to the concert that is forming outside of a huge tent.) Melanie: This island is gorgeous! Jake: Not as gorgeous as you. (Jake and Melanie kiss as they wait for the band. The camera pans back and reveals the mystery man standing behind them as he takes out his phone and makes a phone call.) Man: This is Mark. You better give me what I want or your partner and his beautiful girlfriend are dead. (Mark hangs up the phone and watches Jake and Melanie) (Scene 5: Ron’s Apartment) Ann: What are you doing? I’m going to get my daughter. Ron: No, you need to stop this behavior where you come up with any excuse possible to run to the Francis’. Ann: My daughter is there Ron. I have a right to see her. Ron: You know that Jessica is not going to let you see that child. Ann: Jessica doesn’t have a choice. Ron: Jake’s in New York to get new divorce papers. That’s a good thing for us. The faster you divorce him, the faster we can get married and get custody of Charlene. Ann: No, the faster Jake and I get divorce the faster he can marry Melanie and then pay off a judge to keep custody of Charlene. (Ann rolls her eyes and storms off as Ron watches after her, Ron looks at his phone and listens to Mark’s voicemail. Ron gives a confused/annoyed face and returns the call.) Ron: I don’t know who you think you’re tracking, but I don’t have a partner so kill whoever you want, they aren’t connected to me. (Ron hangs up his phone and leaves the room) (Scene 6: Clark’s Penthouse) Amanda: She was trying to take you from me! Clark: You are insane! Natalie and I broke up a year ago, she moved here for a case. Amanda: The case was over! Clark: No, Amanda, it was just beginning. Amanda: You know what, you’re right. It was just beginning. She would’ve been here for months wrapping that case up. She was opening up an office here. Things were happening that were permanent. Clark: So what? I loved you. Not Natalie, you. Amanda: Loved? Past tense. Clark: Amanda. I can’t continue dating you now. You don’t think that we’re still going to date after what you did, do you? (Amanda gives Clark a hurt look) (Scene 7: Governor’s Island) (Train takes the stage and the begin to perform “Drive By”) (Jake and Melanie smile at each other as they watch the band perform. Mark stands in the back of the concert and sees his phone light up with a new voicemail. Mark walks away from the noise as he listens to Ron’s voicemail. Mark smiles and takes out his gun and makes sure it’s loaded and smiles to himself) Mark: Oh, Ronald, you have no idea how wrong you are. (Mark returns to the concert and continues watching Jake and Melanie) Edited by ebard, Aug 25 2013, 10:13 AM.
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| Terry | Aug 25 2013, 01:06 PM Post #2 |
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Glad Tony Geary's character of Mark finally makes his debut and he is connected to Ron, can't say that I'm surprised that he is the one watching Melanie and Jake but I wonder why though Amanda is going away, she'll be tried and she'll be convicted no doubt |
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| Mylo | Aug 26 2013, 04:30 PM Post #3 |
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The Jake/Melanie/Ann/Ron story is going to get intense! So Amanda and Clark are no more. |
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