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| Ali | Sep 1 2013, 09:29 PM Post #1 |
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CLOSE TO HOME EPISODE ONE HUNDRED NINETY FOUR OAD: TUESDAY JULY 2, 2013 CREATED BY: ALICIA SORRENTINO WRITTEN BY: ALICIA SORRENTINO DIRECTED BY: PHIDEAUX XAVIER RATED: TV-14 DLSV SCENE ONE: SONYA’S OFFICE Sonya is sitting at her desk reading some documents in a folder. She is clearly concentrating on the contents when there is a knock on the door. SONYA Come in. The door opens up and a mysterious man walks in. Sonya stands up from behind her desk and walks over to him. SONYA You must be Stavros Pastrone, the new district attorney of Gordon County. I really wasn’t expecting to see you so soon. STAVROS I have an important meeting this afternoon so I hope that you don’t mind that I stopped by unexpectedly. SONYA It’s really not a problem, why don’t you have a seat and get comfortable? STAVROS Thank you for offering. Stavros takes a seat. Sonya then goes back behind her desk and sits in her chair. SONYA Let me be the first to welcome you to Gordon Bay. STAVROS Thank you, from what I can see it’s a lovely community. SONYA We have some of the closes knit people in all aspects of life, from the social to economic. STAVROS Well, I also read some of the more interesting news pieces as well. SONYA I’m going to assume the crimes? STAVROS Yes, mainly the ones against the former DA and the murder of Dixon James. To this day, that murder is unsolved my first order of business as DA is making sure the sick bastard who did this is put to trial. SONYA That’s rather ambitious considering the crime is nearly a year old. STAVROS Trust me; no crime will go unsolved with me. I want to have a meeting with the GBPD to see what evidence was recovered that night. SONYA All the evidence was collected; there wasn’t even a trace of DNA left behind. Whoever committed the murder clearly knew what they were doing. STAVROS But there were no prior cases of murder in Gordon Bay to go off of as precedent. SONYA The last murder we had in Gordon Bay was in 2000, the killer from that murder was found a long time ago and sentenced to death so he couldn’t have done it. STAVROS Well, Sonya let me tell you like this. When I served as the DA in other areas I solved many murders under my reigns. I expect the murderer of Dixon James to be brought to justice, sooner rather than later. SONYA I hope so and I want to give you my full confidence in what you want to do. STAVROS Thank you, and might I add you look rather ravishing sitting behind that desk. SONYA Thank you, it’s been mine for almost eight years and I don’t plan on giving it up anytime soon. STAVROS I don’t blame you. Have a good day Mayor Miles. Stavros walks out of the office as the scene fades to the opening credits. SCENE TWO: THE GROVE Evan is sitting at a table typing on his laptop and drinking a coffee. Heather walks into the building when she notices Evan, she walks over. Evan looks up at Heather and stays quiet. HEATHER Evan, it’s nice to see you baby. EVAN Umm hi…. Mo… Heather. HEATHER Wait, I’m Heather now, you know that you’ve called me mom for nearly fourteen years. EVAN I know but it really isn’t something that I should do now, I consider you close to me but to be perfectly honest, you are not my mother. HEATHER Evan, what about all the time that I spent raising you with your father? EVAN Look, we both know that he wasn’t really my father… though compared to Quinn, Eric was amazing. HEATHER Evan, don’t speak about Quinn like that. He was really trying to make a conscious effort to get to know you prior to the trial. EVAN Really? I couldn’t tell, all I can tell that he did was marry you. Hell, I didn’t even know until recently about it. HEATHER Look, I really don’t know how I can justify me and Quinn getting married to you but, it was the right thing to do. EVAN Well, maybe next time you’re doing something because it’s right, think about how stupid of a decision it is. Evan gets up and grabs his laptop before walking away. Heather seethes. SCENE THREE: DAMIAN AND TRISHA’S APARTMENT Trisha is lying on the couch sleeping when Damian comes in. Trisha wakes up and sees him putting his keys away. TRISHA Are you seriously just getting in? DAMIAN Yeah, I didn’t want to disturb you last night so I just grabbed the couch at Jordan’s… I hope that you don’t mind. TRISHA Don’t mind.. Damian I’m just getting to sleep. Drew was up all night. I am so tired and you just left me with our newborn child. DAMIAN I’m sorry but you could have at least told me that you would have needed the help. TRISHA Damian, we have a newborn child together what do you think? DAMIAN Trisha, I really don’t need your attitude right now, I had a long night. TRISHA You had a long night? Damian, our child kept me up last night… clearly I had a longer night. DAMIAN Why do you have to make this a contest? TRISHA Damian, I really don’t want to have to deal with your attitude right now… can you please either help me out or leave. DAMIAN Fine, have it your way… love you Trisha. Damian grabs his keys and leaves, slamming the door on his way out. Drew begins crying as the scene fades. SCENE FOUR: HEENAN MANSION There is a knock on the door… Sarah is coming downstairs, she goes over to the door and opens it, Adam is standing there. SARAH Adam, what are you doing here? ADAM I came to spend time with you obviously, I haven’t seen you nearly as much as I’ve wanted to since moving back to Gordon Bay. SARAH I know, that’s partially my fault, with raising Christopher and all. ADAM Wait, you’re still raising Christopher? I thought you were going to let his father step in and take over since Natalya is dead and all. SARAH Well, I haven’t been able to get in contact with the birth father. ADAM I thought the birth father was someone from your hometown? SARAH We thought that but he isn’t the father, nor is Michael Harper the father. It’s going to be hard to find this child’s birth father so, I figured instead of going into foster care, I could take care of him. ADAM Sarah, that’s a rather ambitious job if I do say so myself. SARAH Well, it’s nothing I can’t handle. ADAM I suppose that you’re right but Sarah you can’t put your life on hold. SARAH My life isn’t on hold, he is my family and he deserves a father. ADAM I know but Sarah, think about it, you are young and have a whole future to worry about… you aren’t a mother of your own child yet. SARAH Adam, I want to do this for my nephew… please don’t question me on it. ADAM I won’t, I was just stopping by to see if you wanted to have dinner tonight. SARAH I can’t, I’d need a babysitter for Christopher, rain check? ADAM Sure…. Sarah and Adam kiss before he leaves. SCENE FIVE: RYAN AND SOPHIES APARTMENT There is a knock on the door, Ryan walks over to the door and opens it, Jordan is standing there. RYAN Jordan, what are you doing here? Don’t you think it’s a bit late for a visit? JORDAN Baby, I’m sorry, I just really needed to see you. RYAN Okay, about what? JORDAN I umm ran into someone recently, and I’ve been wanting to tell you but… RYAN But what? Was it someone bad? JORDAN No, but I just thought that it would be in your best interest in knowing that I ran into this person. RYAN Okay, well then cut the suspense and just tell me who it is. JORDAN Umm… I saw Rachel back in town… RYAN Really? Why in the hell was she here? JORDAN I don’t know, I wanted to tell you but I didn’t think it would be a great idea for you to go and confront her about not being there for Sophie lately. RYAN Well thank you for telling me, she’ll be getting a mouthful soon enough. Thanks for telling me. JORDAN You’re welcome… well I should probably get home, see you tomorrow? RYAN Absolutely babe, see you tomorrow. Ryan and Jordan kiss before she leaves out the door. She closes the door a flashback of running into Adam pops into her head. JORDAN I had to lie for now. Jordan walks away. SCENE SIX: HEENAN ENTERPRISES George is at his desk, the door opens and Aries walks in. GEORGE Aries, thank you for coming. ARIES Well you summoned and you know I can’t tell my father in law no, what’s up? GEORGE I wanted to talk to you about something. ARIES Look, if it’s about you taking April out of that hospital my answer is still… GEORGE It’s not about that, I wanted to ask you if you wanted to start working here… ARIES Doing what? GEORGE Heenan is about to expand and I need a young, and hip team here… I think you and a few others fit that bill perfectly. ARIES Well who do you have in mind? GEORGE In due time, but first I need an answer. ARIES Well can I at least think about it? GEORGE Of course, but you know this offer won’t be on the table for long. I think you would be perfect for the spot so, just think about it. ARIES I definitely will. Aries walks out of the office. SCENE SEVEN: UNDISCLOSED LOCATION A room is shown, in the room a pair of hands are shown, in the hands there is a phone. The screen is open to a text message. “The time to move in is now, in a matter of months that enterprise will be ours.” The scene fades. |
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| Terry | Sep 1 2013, 11:01 PM Post #2 |
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I am really intrigued by Stavros Pastrone the new DA and it seems he is going to be the one that cracks down on the crime going on in Gordon Bay, this is great, finally a DA who is serious about crime but at the same time he will invite the criminal element to come into Gordon Bay because even though he has a strong record as a DA, will it even be enough to help crack down on crime It seems Evan is pushing his adopted mother Heather away more and more by the day but at the same time you can't really blame him because Heather keeps making bad choices but at the same time she really does want to reconnect with her son by making things right but I can't see how she would be able to considering she is married to Quinn, Evan's biological father who he despises It seems Trisha and Damian are falling apart more and more, which is unfortunate because I am a really big fan of this pairing, I always have been but Trisha at the same time she was overreacting to Damian coming in when he did but seeing as how she's a new mother, it must be hormones but Damian I am glad he left before he made things even worse for himself Rachel is back in town, it is understandable why she would be back considering what is going to happen to her daughter Sophie soon enough but at the same time Jordan it seems she is still hung up on Adam even after all this time, why am I not surprised As for Sarah and Adam, it seems they will fall apart soon enough because the signs are there, Sarah being a single mother figure to her nephew Christopher who has no parents because if it weren't for Sarah stepping in her nephew would have been placed in the foster care system but Adam I don't think he is ready for that responsibility of helping to raise a child Aries working at Heenan Enterprises working at H.E., I love it because it opens up so many possibilities for Aries' character especially if he is going to be a part of the business world I wonder who the mystery person is but mostly why they are headed to Gordon Bay? Well whatever the reason it seems it can't be good Edited by Terry, Sep 1 2013, 11:14 PM.
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| ebard | Sep 2 2013, 03:58 AM Post #3 |
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I feel like Stavros is going to be that character that you use to implement your changes on the show. Most headwriters use one character to drive their "message" or "tone" when they first take over and I can feel that in Stavros! I can't wait for him to interact with more characters! |
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| Mylo | Sep 3 2013, 05:52 PM Post #4 |
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I too am very intrigued by Stavros. And I agree, Sarah/Adam have some tough times ahead. |
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