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| Episode #146; OAD: 07/29/2013 | |
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| ebard | Sep 4 2013, 07:50 AM Post #1 |
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Riverview Episode #0146 OAD: 7/29/2013 (Scene 1: Riverview Police Station) Natalie: Are you having second doubts on your divorce with Jake? Ann: Yes and no. I’m doubting if I’m doing the right thing to get Charlene back. Natalie: Well you have to divorce Jake in order to even consider suing for full custody. The judge wont even consider it if you guys are still together because it’ll look like you’re indecisive. Ann: You think remarrying is the best option? Natalie: The judges generally favor the mother, especially if they’re re-established. However, marrying Jake’s Uncle might not prove that. Ann: Well, Jake is marrying Melanie and Ron’s the best bet that I have. Natalie: Not necessarily. Did Jake cheat on you with Melanie? Ann: They both swear all they did was kiss. Natalie: Well emotionally cheating is admissible in court. (Ann smiles at Natalie) (Scene 2: Francis Mansion) (Jessica enters the house and turns the light on in the living room and William is sitting in a chair, startling Jessica.) Jessica: Look at that. For once I’m not the one waiting up for my spouse to come home from work. (Jessica sets her purse down) William: Why are you doing this? Jessica: Doing what? Getting a job, contributing to the household? William: Bullshit. You and I both know that we are doing fine on my income alone. Jessica: I don’t want to live off of your income William. William: What does that mean? Jessica: When we lived in New York and everything was great then yes, I didn’t mind being the housewife and raising Jake and taking care of the house and having fundraisers. William: What changed? Jessica: Marie. William: Oh, here we go. (William gets up and walks away from Jessica) Jessica: Here we go?! YOU ARE HAVING A BABY WITH ANOTHER WOMAN! (Jessica glares at her husband) (Scene 3: New York City Hospital) (Jake stands still in Melanie’s room as Marie glares him down) Marie: I want to know the truth Jake, what happened between Melanie and my father? Jake: Nothing, Melanie hasn’t even seen him since we’ve been here. Marie: He just stumbled upon her, his own daughter? Jake: Yeah, I know, what are the chances, right? Marie: Slim to none. Jake, Melanie has had plastic surgery since my father has last seen her. He wouldn’t have recognized her, so cut the crap. What happened to put Melanie in the hospital? (Jake clenches his jaw and looks at Marie as he realizes that he has to tell the truth.) (Scene 4: Riverview Police Station) Ann: Do you think that will win the case for us? Natalie: Probably not win, but the worse the picture is that we paint of Jake the better your chances. Ann: I actually cheated though. Natalie: Jake faked his own death, cheated on you, was involved in various illegal criminal activities and has been illegally withholding your daughter from you for months now. (Ann gets a text message and reads it and smiles) Natalie: What is it? Ann: And he’s been involved in a shooting. Natalie: What? (Ann holds up her phone and it’s an article on the shooting of Melanie and Ann smiles as Natalie smirks back) (Scene 5: Francis Mansion) William: Is this what this is all about? Marie and I’s baby? Jessica: Um, yes. William: Jessica, I’ve told you that there’s nothing going on between Marie and I anymore. Jessica: That’s what you said last time as well. William: I thought all of this was behind us. Jessica: I did too and then I go into your office and you’re having a meeting with her. William: It was business. Jessica: Yeah, I don’t care. I don’t want you around her. William: I have to be around her. I’m the father of her child. Jessica: I just have a bad feeling about all of this. William: So you thought teaming up with my brother was going to solve things? Jessica: No, I thought it would make it even. (Jessica leaves the room as William shakes his head and takes a drink from his scotch glass.) (Scene 6: New York City Hospital) Jake: Ok, fine. Melanie and I thought someone was crashing at the apartment. As soon as we got there it appeared like someone was sleeping there. I thought maybe it was Ann’s brother, she used to let him stay the night when he was in town. Then we kept feeling like we were being followed. Marie: You didn’t call the police? Jake: And tell them what? (Marie rolls her eyes) Marie: Continue. Jake: We got home the other night and it had looked like someone had ransacked the apartment and then someone wearing a mask held us hostage. Marie: Oh no. Jake: The guy said that he wanted me and Ron to pay for what we did to his business. Then he tried to shoot me, but shot Melanie. He felt bad for shooting the wrong person and took his mask off to help and Melanie identified him as her father. Marie: Why in the HELL did you not tell the police this? Jake: I thought maybe Melanie would like to make that decision on whether or not to send her father to prison. (Marie scoffs and grabs her purse and starts to storm out of the room) Jake: Where are you going?! Marie: To tell the police the truth! (Marie leaves the room and Jake sighs and looks at Melanie) |
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| Terry | Sep 4 2013, 03:24 PM Post #2 |
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How insecure is Jessica growing? She should understand that William and Marie need to be around each other because Marie is pregnant with Jessica's husband's baby and that William's baby is a part of her family whether she likes it or not And Marie going to the police to rat her father out, why can't I say that I am surprised and Jake should have at least made more of an effort to try to stop her And Ann manuvering to try to get custody of Charlene especially with all that is happening, I can honestly say that she's playing this smart but at the same time how will Natalie help her case? Natalie is not exactly stable, the woman has DID for crying out loud so how do we even know she is 100 percent in control of her mental faculties |
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| Mylo | Sep 5 2013, 12:11 AM Post #3 |
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Jessica did come off a little insecure but I still love that she's doing this. This partnership is really going to cause friction for the couple! Good Marie and Jake scenes..but even better Ann/Natalie scenes! I love them conspiring against Jake! I can't wait to see what happens! |
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