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| ebard | Sep 4 2013, 07:53 AM Post #1 |
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Riverview Episode #0150 OAD: 8/2/2013 (Scene 1: Riverview Police Station) (Terrance escorts Mark down to his cell, Terrance locks him up across from Natalie and leaves.) Natalie: What are you in here for? Mark: I shot my daughter. Natalie: Oh, wow. Mark: You? Natalie: Murder. Allegedly. (Mark chuckles) Mark: You sound like a real lawyer. Natalie: That’s probably because I am. Mark: You’re a lawyer? Natalie: Yep. Mark: You getting out soon, because I’m going to need a good lawyer to get me out of this mess. (Scene 2: New York City Hospital) (Jake and Marie rush to Melanie’s side) Jake: I’m so glad you’re awake. Marie: I was worried sick about you. Melanie: Tell me that the police got him. Dad’s in jail, right? (Marie looks at Jake and back to Melanie) Marie: Well, there’s a funny story about that. (David busts into the room) David: I need to check the patient please. Jake: But. David: No buts, she just woke up from a coma. I need to examine her, please leave. (Jake and Marie look at each other and leave the room as David examines Melanie) (Scene 3: Natalie’s Penthouse) (The door is picked open and someone enters wearing a hoodie. The person walks over to the pile of papers on the floor and digs through them. They take their hood off and the person is Ann.) Ann: Ok, now where would a split personality that’s a stripper put divorce papers? (Ann looks around the penthouse) (Scene 4: Riverview Police Station) Natalie: Well my alter ego killed a man and I’m not even sure how I’m going to get out of that one, so I cant make any promises. Mark: Alter ego? Natalie: I have split personalities. Mark: Maybe I don’t want you as my lawyer. Natalie: I don’t see many other people taking on your case. Mark: Why’s that? Natalie: You shot your daughter. That’s a tough sell to a jury. Mark: I know, I really screwed up this time. (Mark looks at Natalie as the camera shifts to the next scene) (Scene 5: New York City Hospital) (Jake and Marie enter Melanie’s room again) David: Patient looks good as new again. Jake: When can she go home? David: Let’s take it slow. She just woke up from a coma. I’d say over the weekend we’ll re evaluate Sunday night. (David leaves and Melanie perks up) Melanie: So, did the police catch dad? Marie: Melanie, there’s something you need to know. (Jake looks at his phone and starts reading something) Marie: After you were shot, dad disappeared… (Jake interrupts Marie) Jake: They found him. Marie: What? Jake: They found him. Mark’s in jail. (Jake holds up his phone for Marie and Melanie to see) (Scene 6: Natalie’s Penthouse) (Ann sees a box labeled “Andrew Bard’s possessions” and she starts going through it. Ann finds an airport apron and takes it out of the box.) Ann: Why the hell did Andrew Bard have an apron? (Ann looks next to her on the ground and sees a manila envelope Ann opens it and takes out the divorce papers) Ann: YES! These are it! These are the divorce papers! (Ann puts them back in the envelope and hears a noise so she turns around and Clark is standing in the doorway) Clark: Ann Francis? What are you doing here? (Ann gives Clark a shocked look) |
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| Terry | Sep 4 2013, 03:48 PM Post #2 |
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Maybe Clark can arrest Ann for breaking and entering because she is breaking the law, she is breaking and entering into Natalie's penthouse trying to get her divorce papers but if Ann has permission to be there well she is acting very suspicious for someone who is supposed to be there but if she is not supposed to be in Natalie's penthouse then it is breaking and entering and maybe Clark can arrest Ann, it would serve her right considering her custody case, makes things worse for her as far as trying to win custody goes because a mother being in jail sure doesn't look good to a jury now does it? Yes Mark is in jail, for now but I either somehow see him getting out on bail or he will probably escape and if he does then Mark will become a fugitive which means spending the rest of his days on the run And I am glad that David is such a dedicated doctor, he seems to really care about his patients something you don't see all the time with doctors |
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| Mylo | Sep 5 2013, 12:29 AM Post #3 |
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Melanie's awake! I wonder if Ann finding the airport apron that is obviously Amanda's going to lead somewhere.. Surprise that Clark found her! Fun Natalie/Mark scenes! |
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