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Episode 28
Topic Started: Sep 14 2013, 04:49 PM (283 Views)
MasonRico
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Created By: Andre Wanzer Jr.
Written By: Andre Wanzer Jr.
Directed By: Trashawn Randolph
Airdate: July 15th, 2013

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Scene 1: Emergency Room Lobby

Tanya, Gerald and Ana are shocked to see Eric standing in front of them. Gerald wonders what the hell he is doing there and Tanya cuts him off by saying she called him! Gerald looks at Tanya confused and says of course she would call Eric because HE is Erikas father. Eric then states that he hopped on his jet and got here as fast he could and asks Tanya where Erika is. Ana says that she just found out from Nurse Lizzie that she is in her room in the ICU but visitors are limited right now. Eric says he wants to go see his daughter and Tanya goes with him looking back at Gerald as they walk away. Ana asks her dad if he is okay. Gerald says no he is not!

Scene 2: Silverados

Laura and Nick are walking holding hands as they walk into the restaurant. Nick expresses how much he loves Laura and she does the same. As they walk they see Deacon sitting at an outside table. Deacon looks and sees Laura then he winks at her. Laura looks and rushes for the door to go inside pulling Nick inside. Nick wonders whats wrong with her and she says its nothing, however, he looks outside and notices Deacon and says that it apparently has something to do with the man outside.

The scene shifts back outside with Deacon sitting at the table drinking his coffee. Suddenly a woman walks over and acknowledges him. She asks who he is and he then says ladies first. The woman is Rita. Deacon asks Rita the pleasure of having such a beautiful woman in his presence. Rita says for a job.

Scene 3: Ryans Apartment

Darius, who is Ryans roommate, is walking to the counter with a pair of pajama pants on and heads for his phone. He looks at his phone and sees a missed call from Lorie. He sits down and looks and debates on calling her back. Suddenly, theres a knock at the door. Darius walks over to get his shirt and starts heading for the door. He opens the door and sees Lorie standing in front of him. Darius looks and sighs.

Scene 4: Riconias Hospital Room

Riconia, RJ, Jawaan, and Kayla are talking about how cute the baby is. RJ keeps saying he would be even cuter if his name was Rick. Riconia hits her brother and tells him to shut up. They all begin to laugh and the door opens. Trina walks in the room. Everyone greets her. RJ then tells Kayla that they should go and give them some space. RJ hugs his sister and brother-inlaw and say goodbye to the baby. Riconia then asks if Jawaan can go and get her some ice and a snack. Jawaan says okay and heads out. Trina walks over and leans on her daughter's bedside asking if she is doing alright and how she is feeling. Riconia says fine, but the question is she okay! Trina looks with confusion and does not know what her daughter is talking about. Riconia tells her mom to stop with the act and says something is up! Trina looks with guilt and scene fades to the opening credits.



Scene 5: Silverados

Deacon wondered what Rita wanted and said that her mother Nancy must have sent her. Rita says no and that this has nothing to do with her mother and their rivalry. Deacon wonders and sees a folder and a some documents. Deacon asks Rita if she saw the job openings and his mission to rebuild Buchanan Enterprises. Rita says yes and noticed that he is looking a powerful attorney to help with all legal obstacles and predicaments. Deacon says he was and wanted to know if Rita knew anyone with a strong grasp at understanding how to keep these things under control. Rita says and that he is looking at her.

The scene shifts to Laura and Nick sitting at the table with Nick screaming WHAT! Laura tells him to calm down and not to make a scene. Nick is upset because he finally sees the man that destroyed Laura's life and made her lose her baby. Laura reminds him that it is okay and that it all was made up by getting back together with Nick and rekindling their marriage for the sake of their son, Chad, who is off at college to become a doctor like his parents. She grabs Nick's hand and reminds him that they are together and nothing will come between them. Nick gives Laura a kiss and suddenly Deacon walks in and sees them kissing.

Scene 6: Ryans Apartment

Darius wonders what Lorie is doing at his door. Lorie says that she wanted to come see him. He says that there is nothing for her to see, Lorie says she wants to talk. Darius says there also is nothing to talk about! Darius tries to close the door and Lorie puts her foot in it to stop it from closing. Darius wonders what the hell she is doing and Lorie says she thought Darius was kind, if he is then he would give her a chance to explain herself. Darius looks and lets her in. The door closes and the scene fades.

Scene 7: Emergency Room Lobby

Gerald is pacing back and forth in the lobby and Ana stops him and tells him to sit down and relax! She never has seen her dad act like this and says he is acting like it was her in the ICU. Gerald looks at Ana and reminds her about how Erika was like more than a niece and that she was like a daughter to him and a sister to Ana. Ana reminds him that she is aware of all this and that walking around being worried all day is gonna help! Gerald says she is right and that she reminds him so much of her mother, Ophelia. Ana says she learned from the best of course a mom and dad that loved me. Now Erika has her mom and her father there to support her and love her too. Gerald looks with a frown on his face because he knows that Eric is not Erika's father.

Scene 8: Erikas Hospital Room

Eric is sitting over her Erikas bed and crying at what has happened to his daughter. He keeps saying how he knew her coming back here was a mistake that nothing but trouble would come to her life. Going on about the danger, he begins to blame Tanya for all of this. Saying that she was never fit as a mother to her and that soon he will be taking her away from her while he has the chance. Tanya walks in and tells Eric over her dead body!

Scene 9: Ricoinas Hospital Room

Riconia continues to ask her mother what is wrong with her. Trina says it is nothing and that she worries too much. Riconia looks at her mom and tells that she cannot be fooled. She has known her mom to long and can tell when she is lying. She asked if something happened. Trina says that Vonny came to her and was talking about how I need to stay away from Rick and their marriage. That she is Ricks past and that Vonny is his present and future. Riconia looks and says she has completely gone crazy and that she has no right to make false allegations like that. She says how her dad and Trina cannot even stay in the same room without arguing; now you have sudden feelings for him is crazy. Trina looks at her daughter and says yeah that it is crazy. Trina sits down on the side of the bed and Riconia looks with a shocked face. Riconia says oh my god and Trina wonders what is up. Riconia says it is not a false allegation or crazy. That it is true and all over her Moms face. Her feeling for her Dad coming back.

Scene 10: Busboys

Deacon sees Laura and Nick, they decide that they are done eating and get up from the table. They head out the door as Deacon heads over to the counter for another coffee. He says to himself that well at least something good to outweigh that bad moment. Suddenly someone walks up behind him and says well you are about to get another bad moment. Deacon turns around and sees Carmen and she hands him a document folder. Deacon wonders what this is. Carmen tells him that Ryan is going against him. He is trying to take over and be CEO of Buchanan. Deacon face changes from wonder to a look of disgust.

Scene 11: Emergency Room Lobby

Ana and Gerald are sitting down where Gerald still has a sad worried look on his face. Ana asks him is something still bothering him because he still looks upset about something. Gerald says that he just wish he could be a better father to Ana and her sister. Ana says that Britt is fine in boarding school and that they both love him with all their heart! Gerald says that he is not talking Britt. Ana then wonders what he means. Gerald is about to say something when Kris runs over and calls Anas name. Ana gets up and hugs Kris. He asks how Erika is doing and Ana says she is stable right now. Kris wonders what happened and asks if they can go get some food and coffee from the cafeteria. Ana says yeah and asks her Dad if he wants to come. Gerald says no and tells them to have fun. They say okay and that they are not done their conversation. Ana and Kris walk away and Gerald is upset because he could not tell Ana the truth that he has another sister.

Scene 12: Erikas Hospital Room

Tanya tells Eric that she does not know what he is planning but he better know that he is not taking her daughter away from her. Eric says that Erika has had nothing but trouble when she is around you. Now this incident has taken it pass the peak of bad parenting. Tanya tells Eric that he needs to realize she is an adult now and that she can make her own decision and decide on who she wants to be associated with and who she wants to be around. Eric says that mentality is what is going to get Erika in more trouble. Tanya sighs and cannot believe that bull that he is pulling right now. When they are supposed to be coming together for Erika all he wants to do is argue and be in control of everything and make it about him! Eric says that if Tanya cared about her then she would let him take over. Eric is walking out and Tanya tells him he has no right to do this! Eric says he has every right to do this for his daughter. Tanya tells him that right is about to be taken from him because is NOT HIS DAUGHTER! Eric looks with shock at what Tanya just said to him and the scene fades to the ending credits.



"Next on Alexandria..."

Lorie and Darius argue about her lies!

Carmen and Deacon plan to sabotage Ryan.

RJ and Kayla/ Ana and Kris argue about their relationships!

Trina confesses!

Tanya comes clean!
Edited by MasonRico, Oct 1 2013, 04:12 PM.
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ebard
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Is this a test format? Cause if so I say go with it. I much prefer dialogue or script format, but you are still able to write a good scene this way so I say stick with it!
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Melissa
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I like this story so far and I am looking forward to Lorie and Darius's argument.
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