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Episode #151; OAD: 08/05/2013
Topic Started: Sep 17 2013, 09:01 AM (63 Views)
ebard
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Riverview
Episode #0151
OAD: 8/5/2013


(Scene 1: Second Townhouse)
(Marie helps Melanie into the house)
Melanie: That was the worst flight of my life.
Marie: When was the last time you flew with a bullet hole in you?
Melanie: Good call.
(Marie helps Melanie sit down on the couch)
Melanie: Oh, thank god I’m home.
Marie: Now we need to talk about me for 5 minutes.
Melanie: Wait, wait, first I want to talk about Jake.
(Marie rolls her eyes)
Marie: What about him?
Melanie: In the hospital, what were you guys going to tell me?
(Marie looks at Melanie as the scene fades to black)

(Scene 2: Natalie’s Penthouse)
(Ann turns and is surprised that Clark is in the doorway)
Ann: It’s Ann Diedrick Francis actually.
Clark: Forgive me.
Ann: You’re forgiven.
Clark: Now, could you tell me what you’re doing in Natalie Field’s Penthouse?
(Ann looks around and realizes that she has some explaining to do)
Ann: I was here for my divorce papers.
Clark: So you broke in?
Ann: No, I told the doorman downstairs that I was a Francis.
(Ann smirks at Clark who chuckles back)
Clark: So that’s why you haven’t switched back to Diedrick yet?
Ann: No, because I can’t find my divorce papers.
(Ann holds up the manila envelope)
Ann: But I found them!

(Scene 3: Francis Mansion)
(Jake enters the house and Jessica rushes in from the living room)
Jessica: Oh, honey I was so worried about you!
(Jessica hugs Jake)
Jake: I’m fine Mom.
Jessica: Where is Melanie? Is she OK?
Jake: She’s fine too.
Jessica: Where is she?
(William comes downstairs)
William: Jessica, listen to the kid, he said she’s fine.
(Jake notices the tension between Jessica and William)
Jake: I see that your little truce didn’t last long.
William: Your mother went behind my back and got your uncle to give her the manager spot at Riverside.
Jake: What? Mom, it’s a strip club.
Jessica: Not anymore.
William: See Jake, your mother has spend 419000 dollars to renovate the restaurant.
Jake: What?!
(Jessica turns to William)
Jessica: Why don’t you tell your son how close you’ve been getting to Marie Second?
(Jake glares at his father)

(Scene 4: Second Townhouse)
Marie: Jake didn’t immediately pinpoint Dad as your shooter.
Melanie: What? Why?
Marie: He wanted to see if you wanted him to or not. Dad got away because Jake stalled and said that it was an armed robbery.
Melanie: Well, that’s understandable. I never told him about Mom and Dad so he doesn’t know that I don’t care if Dad rots or not.
Marie: Jake panicked when you woke up and pinpointed him right away. He was worried that you were going to be mad.
Melanie: I have the best fiancé ever.
(Marie gives Melanie a face)
Melanie: So what’s new with you and your baby daddy?
Marie: Funny.
Melanie: Is there anything new?
Marie: Yes. William and I are working together.
Melanie: Again. This is how you got in this spot in the first place.
Marie: It’s different this time.
Melanie: No it’s not, and neither of you are fooling anyone by saying otherwise.
(Melanie shakes her head at Marie)

(Scene 5: Natalie’s Penthouse)
(Ann starts to leave and Clark stops her)
Clark: What else do you have in your hand?
(Ann stops and turns to Clark and holds up the apron)
Ann: This? This was in a box of Andrew Bard’s possessions that Natalie had. Weird that she’d have the belongings of the man that she murdered.
Clark: She was carrying out his final wishes. Those were supposed to go to Ron but he refused them.
Ann: An apron from the airlines?
Clark: If that was what was found in his apartment then yes.
Ann: Weird, well I don’t want it.
(Ann tosses it to Clark)
Ann: See you around detective.
(Ann leaves the penthouse and Clark tosses the apron in a trash can and tosses a lighter in after it, catching it on fire.)
Clark: Damn it Amanda, did you want to get caught?

(Scene 6: Francis Mansion)
Jake: Not this again.
William: Its not what your mother is painting it out to be.
Jake: Then what is it dad?
William: Marie is working for me. I hired her to be a consultant for the two restaurants. She’s pregnant, she doesn’t need to be on her feet for so long.
Jake: So who’s managing The Recovery Room?
William: Marie and Melanie.
Jake: Speaking of Melanie, I want to ask her to move into the mansion.
Jessica: Do you think that’s best with the custody battle coming up?
Jake: She’s my fiancé.
William: Parading women in and out of Charlene’s live is not going to look good to the courts.
Jake: Parading women?! We’re getting married. She’s going to be Charlene’s step-mother.
Jessica: Just wait until you’re married.
Jake: Ann is living with Ron.
William: And we’re going to use that against her in court.
Jake: I’m asking her to move in that’s final.
(Jake storms up the stairs and William shakes his head and walks into the den as Jessica runs her hands through her hair.)
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Terry
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It seems the custody battle is in full swing for Charlene but I just hope Jake wins custody of Charlene and why? Because let's face it Ann is unfit especially if she is going to be making decisions like marrying a slimeball like Ron Hampton and knowing the things Ron has done not just to Jake but to the rest of his own family then she deserves to lose her daughter, because at least with Melanie she would make a way better mother figure to Charlene than Ann ever could be

And Clark is making the same mistakes again, trying to protect Amanda who is the real killer of Andrew and that is what nearly cost Clark his job last time when Internal Affairs started investigating both he and Amanda's brother Terrance and if I.A. starts investigating them again then it wouldn't be too much longer before the whole Riverview P.D. is looked at for corruption

And Marie & Melanie's scenes I loved a whole lot
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Mylo
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Its only a matter of time before everything blows up in Clark's face!

Jake and Melanie are getting more and more serious. I wonder what's the story with the Second parents..
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