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Episode #158; OAD: 08/14/2013
Topic Started: Sep 18 2013, 09:26 AM (85 Views)
ebard
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Riverview
Episode #0158
OAD: 8/14/2013


(Scene 1: Second Townhouse)
Ron: Melanie. I am here for you.
Melanie: For me?
Ron: Yes, I wanted to ask you a favor.
Melanie: Favor? From me.
Ron: Correct. It’s about our weddings.
Melanie: What about them?
Ron: Well, Ann and I don’t exactly have a lot of money.
Melanie: Ok?
Ron: So, we were wondering if you’d want to do a double wedding with us.
(Melanie bursts out laughing)

(Scene 2: Riverview Park)
(Christine is pushing a stroller with Charlene in it when Charlene throws a toy out of the stroller and Christine is struggling carrying the diaper bag and bending over to pick up the toy at the same time when Mark walks over and picks up the toy for Christine.)
Christine: Thank you.
Mark: No problem, looks like you have a lot going on there.
Christine: You have no idea.
Mark: I can’t wait for those days again.
Christine: Oh, going to be a grand father?
Mark: Yeah, my daughter’s about 5 months along.
Christine: Congratulations. Don’t tell anyone, but this is my great- grand daughter actually.
Mark: Oh wow, it must be really hard for a 41 year old to be a great-grandmother.
(Christine chuckles and smiles at Mark)

(Scene 3: Riverside Memorial Hospital)
Brad is played by Brandon Barash
(Natalie sits down on the couch across from Brad, the court ordered psychiatrist)
Brad: Ms. Fields, we are here because the courts want me to figure out if you’re mentally ill or not, is that correct?
Natalie: Yes.
Brad: Ok, so tell me, are you?
Natalie: I have DID and frankly right now, I’m terrified that my alter personality is going to emerge.
Brad: Why is your alter personality so bad?
Natalie: Her name is Nancy and she is who is believed to have killed Andrew Bard.
Brad: Are you worried that she’ll kill again?
Natalie: No, I’m worried that she’ll run away and never look back.
(Brad gives Natalie a curious look)

(Scene 4: Second Townhouse)
(Melanie notices that Ron isn’t laughing)
Melanie: Wait a minute, you’re not laughing. Are you actually serious about this? You really want to have a double wedding with Jake and I?
Ron: No, I don’t. Ann does.
Melanie: Why would Ann want that?
Ron: She wants a wedding really bad.
Melanie: Obviously.
Ron: Will you discuss it with Jake?
Melanie: No, because I already know the answer.
Ron: Melanie, please.
Melanie: Why do I get the feeling that you don’t give two shits about this wedding?
Ron: Because I don’t.
Melanie: Then why are you marrying her?
Ron: Because she deserves her child.
Melanie: You’re not that nice of a person, give it up. What’s in it for you?
(Ron gives Melanie an uneasy look)

(Scene 5: Riverview Park)
Christine: Are you always this charming?
Mark: Whenever there’s a good looking lady around I am.
Christine: You’re adorable, but I have to hurry back. This little ones grandmother is going to be a nervous wreck if I don’t have her home on time.
Mark: Well here, give me your phone.
(Christine digs around in her purse for her phone and gives it to Mark and Mark enters his number into her phone and returns it to her.)
Mark: Call me sometime and we can go on a date when we aren’t on a time limit.
Christine: Ok, I’ll do that.
(Christine smiles at Mark as she walks away and Mark smiles as well)

(Scene 6: Riverside Memorial Hospital)
Brad: Why would Nancy run away?
Natalie: I don’t know. She doesn’t like our father.
Brad: Do you know why?
Natalie: No, a lot about Nancy is a mystery.
Brad: What do you know about her?
Natalie: Just what I’ve heard from others. That she’s a stripper, that she allegedly murdered Andrew Bard.
Brad: Why would Nancy want Andrew Bard dead?
Natalie: I was staying in Riverview until Andrew Bard’s trial was over with. If Nancy killed Andrew Bard, I could leave town.
Brad: Why would Nancy want you to leave town?
Natalie: To get away from our father.
(Brad observes Natalie’s behavior)
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Terry
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So Brad, Ann's brother is a psychiatrist? If that is the case I wonder if he will be able to fix his sister Ann because I am sure that Ann must be off her rocker these days, I'm sorry that was a dig at Ann but in all seriousness Brad being the court-ordered psychiatrist is actually a great way to introduce him on to the canvas and his first scenes being with Natalie make sense but at the same time I wonder if Brad will give the court his analysis on the case because if he does then Brad is the very thing that could save Natalie from doing a prison term

And Mark meeting Christine, can I just say definite sparks flew here and I love it but at the same time I wonder if Christine will still feel the same once she finds out what Mark does for a living, that he's a mobster but also that he is the father of Melanie and Marie?

And Melanie I can only hope she gets through to Ron trying to talk him out of marrying Ann
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Mylo
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The chemistry is still there between Melanie and Ron. The foursome all have chemistry so it makes their story even more interesting.

The same could be said for Mark/Christine! He's smooth. Even wasted no time asking Christine for her number lol I also wonder how they are going to deal with everything stacked against them since their (unbeknownst to them right now) families are so close.

Ann's brother is in town and he's a doctor. Can't wait to learn more about Brad!
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