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Episode #160; OAD: 08/16/2013
Topic Started: Sep 18 2013, 09:27 AM (66 Views)
ebard
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Riverview
Episode #0160
OAD: 8/16/2013


(Scene 1: Riverside)
(Jessica storms into the bar and Ron’s already there working)
Jessica: You have an issue.
(Jessica slams her purse on the bar)
Ron: I know all about the issues that are my life, but what else would you like to heap onto the pile?
Jessica: Your mother is getting herself involved with Mark Second.
(Ron gives Jessica a shocked look)

(Scene 2: Riverview Police Station)
(Natalie’s in her cell when Larry storms into visit)
Larry: What the hell happened with the shrink?!
Natalie: What? Nothing? I mean, he wants to help. He asked to interview you and read up on Mom’s case.
Larry: No, he can’t! He can’t do that!
Natalie: What?! Dad! I need him to do these things to help me. To get me free!
Larry: I won’t allow it!
(Larry glares at Natalie)

(Scene 3: Riverview Memorial Hospital)
(Ann is walking down the hall as is Melanie, the two women see each other and stop)
Ann: What are you doing here?
(Melanie puts a hand over her head)
Melanie: I was just shot in the head, I was here for a check up, what are you doing here?
Ann: I did just give birth to a child.
Melanie: That was like 5 months ago.
Ann: 4 and I still need check-ups.
Melanie: Whatever. Listen, I talked to your fiancé and my sides still hurt from laughing so hard.
Ann: I’m glad that you find our offer so amusing.
Melanie: Offer? You don’t have a choice. You and Ron are broke and you have no one else to suck dry.
(Melanie glares at Ann)

(Scene 4: Riverside)
Ron: Mark Second?
Jessica: That’s right. Another Francis gets involved with another Second.
Ron: That’s her problem, not mine.
Jessica: Wow. You really are heartless, aren’t you?
Ron: Mark is dangerous, but Christine can handle her own. She was married to Charles Francis for decades.
Jessica: Listen, I knew your father. Mark makes Charles look like a teddy bear.
Ron: Then tell your husband, maybe he can talk to mommy dearest, cause I’m not.
(Ron takes his clipboard and goes into the office as Jessica shakes her head)

(Scene 5: Riverside Police Station)
Natalie: Dad, what is your problem!
Larry: If this psychiatrist starts snooping around in all of our lives it could ruin everything.
Natalie: What are you talking about?! It could save everything!
Larry: No, I’ve worked too hard keeping this a secret, I’m not letting some court appointed shrink digging it up.
Natalie: What are you talking about dad?
Larry: I’m not letting him read your mother’s file, and I’m not talking to him.
(Larry storms out of Natalie’s cell as Natalie is very confused by what just happened)

(Scene 6: Riverview Memorial Hospital)
Ann: Go to hell Melanie.
Melanie: Why did you think that Jake and I would allow you and your fiancé to hop onto our wedding plans? We’re not friends.
Ann: That was evident when you went straight for my sloppy seconds.
Melanie: You’re one to talk.
Ann: That’s right, you did sleep with Ron also. It’s so hard keeping all of your indiscretions straight.
Melanie: Ann, you slept with Ron when you were married to Jake. At least I was free to sleep with whoever I wanted to. Good luck with your wedding plans.
(Melanie leaves as Ann shakes her head and glares after her when someone comes up behind Ann.)
Man: When was I going to hear about these wedding plans little sis?
(Ann turns around and Brad is standing there and Ann glares at her brother)
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Terry
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Brad and Ann the siblings are reunited, I wonder if this will be a happy reunion or if it will be the opposite? But nevertheless since Brad is in Riverview and since he is a psychiatrist I wonder if this means that he will be working at Riverview Hospital as a psychiatrist on staff? If that is the case then I would love to see the hospital be featured more considering David works there and considering Brad I am sure is probably going to be working there

And what is this big secret that Larry doesn't want Brad or anyone else to find out? Is it really that bad of a secret? If it is then he must not want it to be revealed especially if he doesn't want to talk to Brad who is the key to saving Natalie right now, so he would rather his daughter end up in prison then?

And Jessica telling Ron about Christine and Mark, I figured she would and Ron can say that he doesn't care but it is clear he does
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Mylo
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Ann and Brad reunite!

Good snark in the Ann/Melanie scenes. I like their rivalry but I do find it a little funny how Melanie always gets ahead of herself. She isn't even married to Jake yet and she talks like she already has the money of a Francis.

Jessica and Ron are forming a very interesting relationship.

Larry does not whatever it is that he's keeping to come out, even though it could help his daughter. Must be a big and juicy secret..
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